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The Power Foals and Hair Raiser

by Shadowmane PX-41

Chapter 10: The Power Foals, Back in Action!

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Author's Notes:

Sorry for the delay. I almost missed out writing again, since today I got MORTAL KOMBAT X.

If you want to try your might at MKX and see if you want to play with me, my PSN name is azerothian698472. I'll be waiting...

to kick your ass with D'Vorah, that is...

Enjoy the chapter!

Within seconds, all of the Power Foals ran into hiding spots around the room, so that they couldn't be seen by Spike. From there, they all peeped out of special little spots in their hiding points, so that they could see him, but he couldn't see them.

"Oh, it's Hide-and-Seek you want to play, is it?" Spike said, humouring the Power Foals as he began to make them believe that they'd vanished into thin-air. "Well, alright then..." he feigned wonder as he began looking for each one of the Power Foals. "Gee... I wonder wherever they all went?"

Each one of the Power Foals looked as Spike walked past their hiding spots. Glimmer was hidden underneath a blanket underneath Hair Raiser's bed, along with Shy, who was suckling on her hoof in boredom. Gale crawled out of her hiding spot with Aurora, then used her powers to create a small gust of wind that she could freely control. Doing this, she and Aurora flew into the air, and put their backs against the ceiling. Then, there was Lightspeed, who'd hidden herself quite well underneath Aurora's covers in her crib. Yet, the comfort of the soft covers almost made her forget about her game altogether. In fact, she almost fell asleep the more she wriggled around underneath the soft covers. Finally, there was Honest, who was roping in building blocks to create a makeshift bunker where she could avoid detection. The six of them had hidden themselves quite well, as Spike was beginning to struggle to find them.

"Spikey-Wikey wiww nevew see us coming, Shy. He tinks it's aww a game of Hide-and-Seek, when in weawity, we'we getting weady ta stop his diabowicaw pwot to ban cookies fow foaws wike us!" Glimmer whispered to Shy Hearted, who was getting a good look at Spike from the blanket that she'd made. "When we wooks undewneath dis bed, I'ww stwike fiwst. Den, Gawe and Auwowa wiww dwop down and zap him tagedew. Den, we'ww aww come out and stop his eviw pwan fow foaw domination!"

As if it were on cue, Spike looked underneath Hair Raiser's bed and saw a pink blanket with two lumps underneath. He said, "There you are..." before advancing in on the blanket.

Without another word, Glimmer's blanket suddenly turned into a wall. She used the wall to immediately push Spike out from under the bed and take him for surprise.

Spike found himself suddenly shot out from under the bed by the wall. His reaction was that of complete surprise as he rolled across the floor. He wasn't even given time to shake off the surprise, as he was suddenly zapped by a lightning bolt, and hit with a sudden volley of snowballs from the ceiling.

When Spike recovered from the ambush, he looked at Gale and Aurora, who were on their backs, giggling as Spike slowly got back up to his feet. He got up and watched them high-five with their hooves, before they used Gale's small wind to fly back into the air, giggling even more as they felt themselves fly skywards.

Spike was about to give chase, when he was suddenly ambushed by a golden lasso that came out of a small bunker made of blocks. He was hastily tied up at the legs, making him trip over and land on his face in surprise. He grumbled a little as he tried to get back up, but it all seemed in vain as he felt his legs were tightly bound by Honest's lasso. He looked up and saw Honest come out of her bunker, chuckling as she walked over to Spike and sat on his back.

"Hehe, nice twy, Spikeziwwa, but you'we not gonna keep us foaws fwom ouw cookies!" Honest said, laughing in merriment as she lightly pulled Spike's left ear. She then leapt off and untied him, before regrouping with the rest of the Power Foals.

Within seconds, all six of the foals advanced on Spike, surrounding him on all sides. They stopped when they were right next to him, making him begin to sweat and panic. Aurora then froze his legs on the spot, making him look at her suddenly.

"Spikeziwwa, youw pwot fow confiscating cookies aww went howwibwy wong. And now, you'we going back to Awcatwotz pwison," Aurora said, in her newly found foal tongue. The rest of her team could understand her, but Spike could not. "Now den, anyting you'd wike ta say befowe we take yoo away?"

"What's going on?" Spike said, unable to understand a single word that Aurora had imparted on him. "Why are you doing this to me, girls? I thought we were friends..."

"Awwight, Spikey, wet's get moving..." Gale said, using her pendant to create a small windstorm around Spike, lifting him into the air, where Honest tied him up again with her lasso. When Spike landed, Gale began shoving him towards the door, like many other heroes would do when escorting a subdued villain out to the authorities.

It wasn't long after that, that Shy Hearted suddenly stopped and felt the area around her flank. Something in her stomach had given way, and she was now beginning to use her diaper. The more moist her flank area had become, the more worried and scared she became. She began feeling more and more down in the dumps, grabbing the attention of the rest of her team in seconds.

"Shy? Wat's wong?" Glimmer asked, seeing the sorrow begin to show on Shy's face.

"Umm... giwws? I tink I went to da bathwoom in my diapew..." Shy said, blushing as she began to shed a small tear.

"Weww, den just have youw Mama change yoo and-" Gale then remembered that Fluttershy wasn't in the room, nor were any of the other Power Foals' mothers. "-Oh, dat's wight..."

"Giwws, hewp me! It's icky and sticky!" Shy Hearted said, her sorrow becoming more and more intense the longer her poop lingered in her used diaper.

The girls tried to help Shy out, but their efforts were all in vain as their hooves merely slid off of the costume that Shy was wearing. They were in a hopeless position, being foals that tried to change another foal. Even when they finally made it to Shy's diaper, it was far too pungent for them to even get close, as the smell wafted into their noses and made them cringe and recoil.

Finally, with her sorrow maximised, Shy Hearted burst into tears, streams of her tears leaking out of her eyes and trailing down her cheeks were what now replaced her once happy face. As she cried, she felt herself begin to change, to grow, to suddenly have her sorrow pitched much deeper than what it should usually be.

"Uh-oh..." the rest of the Power Foals said as they watched Shy Hearted continue to grow, bigger, and bigger, and bigger... Her height was almost the height of the door, which was roughly the size of two grown ponies.

When the change stopped, Shy Hearted was no longer the small, innocent, and playful little foal that was playing along with the rest of the group. Instead, a monstrously muscular pony with ripped spandex and tiny wings and hoof stumps stood in its' place. The diaper that it'd been wearing had been completely ripped to shreds with the transformation, and the pungent poop was now on the ground, where everyone could see it.

The beast ran towards the door, knocking Spike out of the way before it arrived at the locked door. Pounding its' hooves on the door, it viciously attacked the very thing that was keeping her from her parent. Finally, with one massive smash, the muscular Shy Hearted smashed the door off of its' hinges and ran out down one of the corridors.

The rest of the Power Foals peaked out of the door, along with Spike, who'd been freed from his lasso binds. The six of them then showed signs of worry to each other after they'd watched Shy Hearted run down another hallway, desperately trying to seek Fluttershy out.

"Well, now what do we do, girls?" Spike asked, looking at each one of them, hoping that one of the foals could come up with a plan on getting Shy Hearted back to the room.

"Aftew hew!" Aurora said, giving chase to Shy Hearted with no other prompt than her own words.

Within seconds, all of the foals ran out of the room. However, Spike watched them all go off, then groaned in desperation as he facepalmed and followed them. After all, they needed all the help they could get in subduing Shy's new form...


Meanwhile, Twilight was showing the girls around a large empty room that seemed to be devoid of anything other than the crystal columns. While it did seem rather tall, and had a certain echo that resonated with each hoofstep and breath uttered, Twilight knew that with some furnishings, some paint to make it seem more foal-friendly, and some caretakers to help out with the foals, that this room would be an ideal place to have a day-care in.

"I'll still never get used to the intense height of each different room..." Twilight said, craning her neck to look up at the ceiling above her and her friends. "But I believe that with the right supplies, and some kind ponies willing to handle foals on a daily basis, then this should be the perfect spot for the day-care."

"But just look at all these crystals, Twilight..." Rarity said, feeling some of the crystal columns that could be seen at each corner of the room. "It might take weeks to get all of them padded for the little ones..."

"Don't worry about that, Rarity. It'll all be a part of the furnishing process. We just need some trusty hooves on board to help get everything settled, have some ponies paint foal-friendly wall pictures, and fill out some applications for ponies willing to look after foals, then everything should be perfectly fine," Twilight said, putting a mental schedule in her mind for the preparations on her new day-care room. "I imagine that Glimmer and the others would love it..."

"Speaking of which, we should probably be getting back to them all by now..." Fluttershy said, thinking about how Spike was doing with all of the foals. Even though she believed that Shy Hearted was in good hands, something in her mind was telling her to be worried for Spike. "I know that foals aren't really his strong suit, let alone super-foals. Oh, the poor thing must be running rampant trying to take care of them all..."

"Yeah, let's get back to him before-" before Rainbow Dash could finish, she and the rest of the girls could hear a loud crashing noise resonate from the room's entrance.

"What in Equestria was that?" Twilight asked, dashing over to the entrance to find out what was wrong. As soon as she poked her head out of the door, she could see the cause of all of the noise that had just transpired. "Uhh... Fluttershy?"

"What is it, Twilight?" Fluttershy said nervously.

"What was Saddle Rager's power again?" Twilight asked in fear as an oversized Shy was charging towards her.

The girls all looked at the hulking monstrosity that was once Shy Hearted. It was large, had most of its' outfit ripped to pieces, had tiny wings and hoof stumps, nothing covering its' bottom, and was speeding towards them at a rapid pace with tears flowing out of its' eyes. It was about to collide with the girls when...

"SHY! BAD GIRL!" Fluttershy yelled at the top of her voice, getting Shy's new form to screech to a halt as it looked at Fluttershy, who looked like she was about to cry murder. "Is this any way to act in front of your mother and her friends?!" her voice struck into the oversized foal like tiny, yet sharp daggers.

The girls watched in awe as Fluttershy quickly subdued Shy's giant form with her commanding tone of voice. They knew that Fluttershy was very capable of handling other ponies, and mythical creatures who tried to cause pain or misery to her friends.

"You've been a very bad girl, Shy! A very bad girl!" Fluttershy's Stare came into play, getting the monstrous Shy Hearted to crouch down and cover her eyes with her hooves. As the foal began to cry, Fluttershy said, "Now calm down, and think about what you've done!" making Shy shrink back down into a tiny, terrified, and sobbing foal.

As Shy cried out the rest of her sorrow as her regular self, Fluttershy scooped her up in her hooves and gently put her against her chest, making her snuggle into Fluttershy's warm embrace rather quickly. "There, there, Shy. Now, if you could tell me what made you so angry, I'd be happy to make it all better..." Fluttershy said as she began to help Shy feel much better in her time of need.

"M-M-Mama... I used my diapee wen yoo weft us wid Spikey..." Shy explained as she sniffled out the rest of her tears. "Whewe wewe yoo, Mama? I was fwightened so much, dat I tuwned into a giant..."

"She also destroyed the doors that you locked, Twilight..." Spike said, as he and the rest of the foals caught up with Shy and Fluttershy, taking heavy breaths as he caught his breath at last. "And that, is why I never work with foals..." he said before collapsing on the ground in exhaustion.

Within seconds, all of the Power Foals that Spike had ran with moved towards their parents and leapt into their hooves. They all babbled lightly as each of them was cuddled by their individual mothers. With their parents back to them, the foals all felt much better. In the hooves of the Mane Six, each and every one of them felt safe, protected, shielded from any harm that might befall them in the future.

"Aww... Poor little foals..." Twilight said, putting Aurora on her back as the rest of the Mane Six put their foals on their backs. She felt sympathetic for Spike as she said, "They must've been through quite a lot with you, Spike. I'm sorry for leaving you in there alone, with no-one to protect them..."

"In future, we'd better take them all with us, Twilight," Pinkie Pie said, feeling just how shallow Lightspeed's breathing became the deeper she slumbered on her back. "I mean, Spikey's great at handling foals, but in future, we should take these cuties with us, since they've got all of our superpowers from those comics that he reads..."

"I'm sorry for all the trouble the foals caused you, Spike..." Twilight said as she put Spike onto her back right in front of Aurora. "If anything, the seven of you deserve some sleep. Then, when you wake up, you'll feel much happier..."


Later, all six of the Power Foals slowly awakened from their slumber, being covered by something soft, something warm, something... foalish. The six of them eventually woke up all of the way, to find that they were all in Aurora's crib, naked if it wasn't for the six new diapers that were secured around their flanks. As they felt the cushion-like garments around their flanks, they felt much more comfortable than before.

The six of them were then compelled to suck on their hooves, as if they desperately needed to soothe themselves further. It wasn't long before they all put their front hooves into their mouths and sucked away in a rhythmic, yet slow fashion. Whilst they moistened their hooves in doing so, they felt like they were returning to a state of bliss as they were in before.

Only a minute after they'd started to suckle on their hooves, the six foals were levitated out of the crib and put onto the backs of their respective parents. They barely even noticed that they were riding on the backs of their older selves until their hooves fell from their mouths and draped down the sides of the Mane Six.

"Thank you for all of your help, girls. Now, you should head home, where your foals can rest up for the days ahead of them..." Twilight said as she began to escort all of her friends out of the castle with their foals on their backs. "I've gotta get Aurora back to bed as well, so that she won't be worrying where I am once I pick Hair Raiser up from school."

Saying their goodbyes to Twilight, the Mane Six all went their separate ways home, where their foals could play once they woke up. They moved slowly, so as not to disturb the half-sleeping foals and wake them from their slumber. It wasn't long before the girls were all out of sight and making their ways to their homes.

Twilight walked back to Hair Raiser's room, with Aurora lightly bouncing on her back as she took each individual step towards the room for her children. She cared very much for Aurora, as well as Hair Raiser. And whilst she believed that Hair Raiser still needed some help in school, what with her oversized super-hair, she still needed to ensure that Aurora was completely devoid of sadness, boredom, and pain.

Twilight gently put Aurora back in her crib, wrapped her up in her blanket, covered her up with the covers, and put a pacifier in her mouth. As she watched her foal return to a state of sleep, Twilight leaned into the crib and lightly kissed Aurora on her forehead and whispered, "I promise, I will never, ever let anything happen to you... Aurora Sparkle, my youngest daughter..."

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