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A new pony comes to Ponyville and everypony is excited to meet him. The problem is, he's not interested in making friends. Why is such a nice pony so against having friends? The answer: he's in pain. Will the girl's help take the pain
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Tacitus has just moved to Ponyville and is trying to go on with his life. All he wants is to go on without being hurt anymore than he already has. But things change when he meets the residents of Ponyville, who see his sadness and are determined to help him. He doesn't want their help, but they won't give up easily. It's time Tacitus learned what real friendship was.

This is my first story, and it's the first part of a series I'm planning. Any and all suggestions and criticisms are welcome. Also, as a side note, Tacitus's cutie mark is the Eye of Horus, which I call the Eye of Horsus so that it fits in with the pony world. Anyway, I've rambled enough. Enjoy the story!

Sequel is here

Everyone
Complete
Slice of Life
Sad

22,529 words: Estimated 1 Hour, 31 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

5 Chapters:

  1. Welcome To Ponyville [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 24th, 2014
    7,798
  2. Six Strikes [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 24th, 2014
    5,953
  3. The Everfree Forest [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 25th, 2014
    3,073
  4. The Past Revealed [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 13th, 2014
    4,252
  5. Epilogue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 14th, 2014
    1,453
Published Jul 31st, 2014
Last Update Aug 14th, 2014

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