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An evil creature from the past awakens it's up to the mane six to stop it with help from a stranger
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What was once believed to be just another statue in the royal gardens turns out to be something much worse. Two brothers are brought from thousands of years in the past to a modern more peaceful Equestria than the divided one they lived in.

The younger brother Xath is a psychopathic killer with multiple personality's and the power to threaten even Celestia herself.

The elder named Kain is a soldier who is barely capable of basic human interaction and has a violent grudge to settle against his younger sibling.

When Xaths' insanity threatens hundreds of lives it falls to the Elements of Harmony, under the harsh tutelage of Kain, to stop him. But Kain is not an innocent party. Indeed in many ways he's a worse person than his brother. It soon becomes clear that Kain is in some ways just as dangerous to the elements as his brother.

Gilda comes to ponyville with the intent of restarting her friendship with Rainbow Dash but somehow gets dragged directly into the middle of these events. Now she has to desperately tread water caught between the less than benevolent Celestia and other more sinister forces.

I'll be adding at least five thousand words to this every Monday.

Humanized Ponies and OCs.

There will be a shipping subplot involving two characters who at this stage will go unnamed because I can't honestly believe I'm seriously pairing them.

Will be adult situations involving sex but it will be off screen and for the sake of plot and humor.

Rated M for violence. Nothing insanely gory but there is one scene that made me cringe to write.

The only reason the characters are humanized is for my convenience as a writer.

Mature
Cancelled
Romance
Dark
Gore

84,186 words: Estimated 5 Hours, 37 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

16 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1. Not a statue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 25th, 2012
    4,818
  2. Chapter 2. First impression [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 25th, 2012
    6,541
  3. Chapter 3. informal arrival [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 25th, 2012
    2,897
  4. Chapter 4. Training begins [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 25th, 2012
    5,464
  5. Chapter5. Training Continued [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 25th, 2012
    5,754
  6. Chapter 6: Actions have Consequences [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 25th, 2012
    6,614
  7. Chapter 7. Early [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 16th, 2012
    6,177
  8. Chapter 8. Early part II [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 23rd, 2012
    5,962
  9. Chapter 9. Lectures from a princess [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 8th, 2012
    5,243
  10. Chapter 10. Reactions [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 14th, 2012
    5,715
  11. Chapter 11. A bad freaking day [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 21st, 2012
    6,459
  12. Chapter 12. What it Means [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 27th, 2012
    5,636
  13. Chapter 13. Attack Dog. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 24th, 2012
    4,636
  14. Chapter 14. Pat on the Head [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 10th, 2012
    8,066
  15. Chapter 15. Short [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 26th, 2012
    4,039
  16. Not a new chapter [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 19th, 2012
    165
Published Apr 8th, 2012
Last Update Jun 19th, 2012
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