(My first fanfic.)
It has been three years since Tirek took the throne. Ponies have been left without magic, having to live in the world without their magic. Say for a select few who have sworn their loyalty to Tirek. As well as the griffonian empire and Minotaur tribes.
Now, with her friends either missing or captured, the former princess Twilight Sparkle has plans for enacting a spell long forgotten to summon a creature never seen in Equestria. A beast thought to be the most dangerous creature in existence. She is putting all of her faith into this spell to stop Tirek and to rescue her friends. Nothing could go wrong... right?
((I thought the description could use an update. So... yeah. Anywho, if you guys and gals could be so kind, I'd like some feedback on the story. What you thing and how I could make it all the more better(And its totally not something for me to get a good ego stroking. promise). I love reading your comments and your feedback, be they good or bad. Plus it lets me know someone is reading.))
(Big thank you for the new cover art. I can't recall your name, but I want to say thank you for your generosity. Rarity would be proud.)
25 Chapters:
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Chpt. 1: Not what was expected (Redo) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 20th, 2015
9,566
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Chpt. 2: Ghosts of the Past [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 12th, 2014
3,860
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Chpt. 3: Catching Up [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 4th, 2014
6,845
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Chpt. 4: Devils [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 10th, 2014
6,318
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Chpt. 5: Truths [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Dec 15th, 2014
7,273
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Chpt. 6: Lets Make a Deal [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 24th, 2015
7,654
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Chpt. 7: The Seige of the Crystal Empire [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 5th, 2015
7,348
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Chpt. 8: A Nightmarish Life [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 26th, 2015
6,281
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Chpt. 9: Arrival [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 3rd, 2015
6,650
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Chpt. 10: Two Steps Forward, One Step Back [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 4th, 2015
7,436
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Chpt. 11: The Plan [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 13th, 2015
7,470
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Chpt. 12: Not So Sweet Dreams [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 23rd, 2015
6,180
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Chpt. 13: Fear [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2015
6,631
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Chpt. 14: Final Day of Freedom [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 16th, 2015
9,448
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Chpt. 15: The Descent [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 19th, 2015
6,938
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Chpt. 16: They Came from the Land Down Under [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2015
7,730
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Chpt. 17: A Day in the Hole [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 2nd, 2015
6,820
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Chpt. 18: Murphy's Law [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 6th, 2015
7,895
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Chpt. 19: Slay the Beast... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 30th, 2015
9,313
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Chpt. 20: ... Rescue the Princess [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 19th, 2016
7,379
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Chpt. 21: Wild Wild East [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 22nd, 2016
9,600
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Chpt. 22: Popping Her Cherry [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 31st, 2016
9,433
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Chpt. 23: Trouble Comes a'Knockin' [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jun 10th, 2016
8,473
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Chpt. 24: En Garde [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Dec 5th, 2016
9,730
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Chpt. 25: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 1st, 2017
13,096