Login

My Little Pony: The Elements of Heroes

by The13thDoctor

Chapter 8: Canterlot

Previous Chapter Next Chapter

Author's Notes:

Ok, quick note on this chapter (Since this story is an exact copy of the one in fanfiction.net). Some of Ryan's abilities will be removed, e.g. Healing Factor, teleportation, super speed and spider powers because it wasn't the portal that altered his genes or something like that. It was his ring that keeps him in a fresh state for the ring to recognize him as its chosen wielder, just so you guys know that I'm not completely overpowering Ryan here. His only abilities in the end are Super Strength, his abilities in the ring (e.g. Light Construct and stuff like that) and his skills of spinning the axe. About Ray, my only focus here is Ryan, so the others are not really focused that much including their back story and powers and something like that . Sorry, this was an old story and I did not consider rewriting this. Hope you enjoy!

Chapter VIII: Canterlot

The train halted from a stop. The Mane 6, me and Ray exited and took a walk.

"Everyone, welcome to Canterlot!" Twilight said to us, it was amazing… the buildings, the ponies, everything! Every pony in here are wearing expensive clothes and everything seem so fancy.

"Holy Jesus, this place is so fucking fancy." I said. As we walked in Canterlot, many ponies were looking at us, confused, shocked and disgusted. I heard footsteps behind us and as we turned around, I saw a 4 feet unicorn stallion. He has white fur, his mane is like slicked half, he's wearing a tuxedo, has a mustache, he also has a monocle and has 3 crowns for a cutie mark.

"Good afternoon, good gentlecolts! My name is Mr. Fancy Pants Say, are you those human that I've been hearing so much?" He asked.

"Why, yes. Yes, we are. We have come here to visit Canterlot to admire its beauty. My name is Ryan and this good man is Ray." I said in the most gentleman manner I have ever expressed. Then another unicorn trotted towards us, she has an almost-white pink fur and pink mane, and has 3 spades for a cutie mark.

"Why hello there, Ms.- .?" I reached her hoof and kissed it.

"My name is Fleur De Lis, Nice to meet you Ryan and Ray." She said, flattered

"It is nice to meet you both!" we said at the same time.

"You must come with us; the Wonderbolts are performing right now and are about to race!" Fancy Pants invited us. Rainbow heard what he said and flew near us.

"OH MY GOSH… THE WONDERBOLTS ARE HERE?! EEEEEEEE I SO WANNA WATCH THEM!" Rainbow sounded like fan girl… because she is….

"Why of course, you can join us if you want." He said. Rainbow exploded and flew sky high.

"Hey, Rarity. Can you go with me to my favorite donut shop?" Spike asked

"Oh, I'm so sorry Spike. But I want to watch the Wonderbolts with Ryan and the others." Rarity said. Spike then gave me a killer stare, and it somehow made the atmosphere tense.

"Hey, Spike. I'll join ya', besides, I haven't eaten breakfast yet." Ray said to him.

"Me too!" Pinkie said

"It's decided then; Pinkie, Ray and Spike will go to the donut shop while Ryan, Rarity, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy will join Fancy Pants watch the Wonderbolts. And I also have to talk to the princesses." Twilight said.

"I have to get some supplies for mah brother in this city. Gotta dash!" Applejack said. We then departed.

Ray's POV

Walking with Pinkie and Spike, 1:30 PM

"Hey Spike, what's with you being angry at Ryan?" I asked. He looked at me and said

"It's because… I have a crush on Rarity and she likes her rather than me!" There was fury and sadness in his voice, and I understand him.

"If he ever kisses Rarity again… I will kill him!" He said in anger and fury.

"Look, my man. Ryan will never kiss Rarity, I can assure you that. He also don't want to mate with animals, that's against our law. Trust me, man."

I also couldn't tell him that he already kissed Rarity on the train a while ago.

"Hmph…" Spike pouted

"Hey, you like Rarity right? But you're a dragon and she's a pony, what makes you like her that much?"

"Because she's the most beautiful, prettiest, gorgeous pony I have ever seen in my entire life… and I would do anything to make her fall in love with me." She said in a romantic voice.

"Ehehehe…. Right…" I said

"Here we are!" Spike said pointing to the shop, we entered and it smelled good inside. We went to the counter and saw another stallion with brown messed mane and tail, light brown fur and a pink sprinkled donut for a cutie mark.

"Hello there! My name is Joe and welcome to my donut shop!" He said.

"Hey there, Joe! Give me the usual with extra sprinkles, please." Spike said sitting on a stool at the counter.

"Coming right up, Spike!" he said and came back with a plate of donut with sprinkles and a hot chocolate. I sat right next to him and Joe looked at me surprised.

"Oh, hey! It's the human every pony was talking about!" He said. I smiled.

"Yeah, that's what everyone says. Can I have one of your best glazed donuts, please?" I requested.

"You said it! Here, our best pink glazed sprinkled donut." He said.

"Thanks! Also, an Iced coffee, please."

"Comin' right up, sir!" He said then came back with the coffee.

"Oooohhh! Pink donut! I knew you like licking my—"Pinkie said and I spat my coffee on Spike.

"Oh shit, sorry Spike!" I apologized, taking a napkin and drying him.

"It's okay." He said

"Jesus Christ, Pinkie! What were you thinking about?!" I said angrily

"Hihihihi! Sorry!"

I facepalmed, I wonder how Ryan's doing with the others?

Ryan's POV

The Royal Stadium, 2:00 PM

I sat between Fluttershy and Fancy Pants at the stadium watching the Wonderbolts getting ready for the big race. I looked around and saw countless ponies below us since we are in the highest section of the stadium. Rainbow flew up high like the usual fan girl she is. And still, all ponies looked at me confused. The Wonderbolts prepared themselves.

"Mr. Wilson, what place do you come from?" Fancy Pants asked.

"Well, my good sir. I come from Earth! It is the place where humans like me live."

"Do you have any friends?" He asked

"Of course I have! Why would I not?"

"What about me, deary?" Rarity said to me with puppy eyes.

"You too, Rarity. Why would I forget you even the others?" I said brushing her mane. The starter pistol was fired and the Wonderbolts flew as fast as they can. Rainbow was at the edge of her seat cheering the one called Spitfire of the Wonderbolts. And yet they were as fast as the fucking Flash! Jesus!

After the race ended, everyone clapped and Rainbow Dash jumped in excitement like the fan girl she is because the first place was claimed by Spitfire. Fluttershy looked at me shyly.

"'Shy? Is everything okay?" I said

"Oh! Uhhh… Y-yes… Ryan? There's something I've always wanting to say to you." She said

"Sure, tell me everything." I said.

"Ever since I met you, you made me feel safe every time I go near you. And when you sang in stage, you looked at me and winked at me, that made my heart beat faster than ever. Whenever I talk to you, my mind goes blank and butterflies are in my stomach. *sigh* Ryan… I love you." She confessed and kissed me, somehow the kiss felt good that before… It made me heart beat fast too. We broke apart; I couldn't believe what I'm doing right now. She grabbed my hand and placed it on her chest and said:

"It beats fast isn't it?" She said, it made me blush and sweat. I nodded to her and also said

"'Shy, I… also love you. I knew that there is something special about you that I noticed when we first met." I smiled and we kissed again.

"Ahem. Perhaps, you two need a room." Fancy Pants said.

"Oh shit! Sorry, about that." We heard hoofsteps behind us and saw Twilight, she said:

"The princesses would like to meet you, Ryan. I came here to get you."

"Oh well, see you later, Mr. Fancy Pants and Fleur." I shook Fancy Pants' hoof and Fleur came over me and hugged me and then she placed a hoof on my private part and licked my neck.

"AH! WHAT THE HELL!?" I shouted.

"Oh my, I am terribly sorry, Ryan. Sometimes the mares around here are having a hard time to control their lust around males. I got harassed by one…" he said

"I feel you, man. Anyway, I have to get going. Good bye!" I waved as we left.

Ray's Point of View

3:00 PM, Canterlot Donut Shop

"HOLY FUCKING SHIT, I DON'T KNOW WHAT IS IN THOSE DONUTS BUT IT SURE AS HELL IS GOOD!" I jumped around like freaking Spider-Man on LSD.

"I KNOW RIGHT?!" Pinkie said to me. I flipped and jumped and flipped and jumped until I saw Ryan, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy and Twilight enter the door.

"Princess Celestia and Luna wants to meet both of you." She said.

"OKAY! SEE YA LATER JOE!HEHEHHAHAHHIHIHIHHUEHUHEUHEUH!" I was still energetic from that donut we ate earlier.

"What's with him?" Ryan asked Joe.

"He ate too much glazed donuts." He replied. We left the shop and went to the castle. We entered the gates and I must say, the castle grounds is beautiful! We entered the castle being guarded by two still guards, she nodded at the two guards and they let us in. The insides were impressive; the tainted glass must've represent the history of Pony Ville. We walked for a while and we finally arrived at the throne room.

"You ready for this, dude?" Ryan said to me.

"Let's go for it." I said. We then walked in the throne, pushing two doors. We saw the two princesses sitting on their throne.

"Welcome, humans." The big white alicorn said to me.

"Here we go…" I said, embracing the unexpected…

Ryan's POV

The Castle Throne Room, 3:30 PM

We approached the two princesses on the expensive-looking velvet carpet. I could tell that me and Ray were nervous about this, we stopped and bowed down. I mean, who wouldn't bow down to a royalty?

"No need to bow down, Ryan." The white princess said, she has a rainbow-sparkling mane and tail, a gold crest on her chest and she is like a foot tall than me and she has a cutie mark of a sun on her flank. On her left was a shorter princess, she has a darker blue fur, blue sparkly mane and tail, a blue crest with a moon on her chest and a Crescent moon as a cutie mark.

"It's a pleasure to finally meet you, Mr. Wilson and Ray." Princess Luna said.

"Please, call me Ryan." I said

"I am Princess Celestia, ruler of Equestria and I power the sun to bring sunshine and daylight. And this is my sister, Luna. She raises the moon to bring night to Equestria." Celestia introduced themselves.

Luna trotted towards me and observed me like I was a foreign man on another planet.

"Thou art strange. But nevertheless cute and handsome" she said to me in like Old English

"Why, I thank thee for thy compliment, Princess." I said too in Old English.

"Holy shit dude, you know Old English?" Ray whispered.

"Knowledge." I said smiling. But then I remembered, maybe the princesses can help me and tell me why I got teleported.

"Hey, Princess Celestia. Can I ask what caused me to teleport here to Equestria?" I asked

"Hmmm… I guess, it is because of this." She pointed to my wristband.

"Why? Why did it teleport me here?"

"That, I do not know, my dear. But did Ray wear a wristband?"

"No, all I know is the government said that… I'm just no-one and I do not have family and friends. I told them it was a lie and the next thing I know I'm falling from the skies."

"Hmmm… This is an ancient artifact… It came from another world." She said.

"The wristband also teleported you here, Ray. It saw your sorrow and deep depression and it decided to make you some company."

"Also, how would you explain these strange superpowers I've been having lately? The healing factor, the teleportation, the super speed, the web?" I said.

"It has come to my attention that the mysterious portal that sent you here must have altered you genes and DNA. Thus, granting you supernatural abilities." Celestia explained

"Well, that explains pretty much everything." I shouted

"This is freaking dope, dude! We have powers and stuff!" Ray praised me

"The portal seemed to have granted you additional powers, like super strength." She said

"Oh shit! Now, this is what I call Christmas!" Ray said

"I know right?" I shouted.

"If wear the wristband again, the two of you will be granted added abilities." She said to us. I wore the wristband again but this time it felt good, I was surrounded by black aura and the power surged through me.

"AAARRRGGGHH!" I shouted. After that, I stood up and looked at my hands, they were producing black electricity.

"This is so neat! I finally get to have powers! My life long dream achieved! "I said.

"That's not the only power the wristband gave you." She said to us, I focused on the energy of the wristband and my arm suddenly turned to a big blade.

"Alright! I'm starting to kinda like this wristband! Hey Ray, how-…. Ray? Where'd you go?" I said looking everywhere, I then saw a black hawk landing on my shoulder.

"DUDE, I'M A BIRD… I'M A MOTHER FUCKING BIRD! I CAN SHAPESHIFT!" he said,

"That's what I'm talking about!" I gave him a bro-fist.

"Ray, you have another power to focus. You can generate a black flame, hotter than the core of the sun." Celestia said to Ray

"This is sooooo fuckin' awesome." Ray said in awe.

"Wow, Ryan. That's wonderful!" Fluttershy said in a quiet voice.

"I'll admit, that was pretty awesome and cool." Rainbow Dash said

"WOW! YOU'RE POWERS ARE SO PARTY-MATERIAL!" Pinkie said.

Fluttershy trotted towards me and I turned back to normal, I kneeled down and hugged her.

"You do know… that I still love you, Fluttershy. Right? Never forget that." I said

"I won't, Ryan." She said to me

"Group hug!" Rarity shouted and we all hugged together, me and Ray hugged them and they purred like cats. Ponies aren't supposed to purr, only cats. Jesus….

"How sweet to look all of you getting along. Luna, It's almost time." Celestia said to Luna, she nodded.

"Princess Celestia, thank you for helping us." I reached for her hooves and kissed it. I looked up to see her giving me the awkward face

"Oh… uhhh, it was nothing… Really… Y-you better go to your own rooms." She said.

"Awkwaaard." Ray said to me.

"Ok everybody, go to your own rooms. No sleeping with Ryan or Ray." Twilight said.

"AWWWW Why?" Pinkie said.

"Twilight, it's okay. As long as they have a good reason to go in my room."

"YAY! I CAN DEFINITELY DRINK RYAN'S MILK FROM HIS-… " I cut Pinkie off

"That's not a valid reason, Pinkie." I said, she made a cute pout. Celestia commanded the guards to escort us to our rooms. After escorting the Mane 6, I was the last. The guards took off without saying one word. I entered my room and what I saw was amazing. I had like a king sized bed, the room is white and when I checked the bathroom, the tub is fucking golden! Also, golden toilet! Holy SHIT!

I removed my polo and shoes and wore my t-shirt and removed my bracelet and kept in inside my bag. I grabbed a book and my glasses so I can read. Somehow, I have the feeling of someone watching me…

Ray's POV (a short one)

His room, 6:00 PM

I went out the balcony and stood there for a minute, the castle was amazing and beautiful at night. I looked to my left and saw Luna there. She saw me and I waved, she waved back. I was getting kind of bored and decided to take a tour of Canterlot, I morphed into a hawk and explored. The wind felt good on my wings…But I then remembered what the General said about me as a loner and no families… it had to be a lie, right? But then it hit me, I was created in a test tube… I was believed that I had families but no… I was wrong. I AM A LONER…the only friends I have is Ryan…My bro. I let out a single tear from my eyes… It has to be a lie…

Back to Ryan's POV

His room, 6:20 PM

I was reading a book called World War Z, and I have to say this is a great book. And the movie they made was awesome too. I was half way through the book when suddenly, I heard a knock through the door.

"Who is it?" I said.

"It's me, Ryan… Fluttershy."

I got out of bed and opened the door to see Fluttershy standing there,

"Uhhh… Ryan? Can I sleep with you, tonight?"

"Why?" I asked.

"I'm having a lot of nightmares lately and I'm feeling lonely…" she said

"Well, come in." I said. I went back in bed with 'Shy and continued my book.

"Uhhhh… Ryan? Do you…l-l-love me?" she asked.

"I told you before, I do love you."

"What if someone wants you and kidnaps you? Then you rutt them?"

"Well, if that is possible. I will tell you that my love for you is like the fire burning in my heart and it will never be extinguished. And If that happens, do not think that I did that on my own will, okay?" I said to her, holding her chin up to me.

"Okay, Ryan… I trust you." She then kissed me… more passionate and it felt good on my lips… Warm…

"Ryan… please… rutt me now." She pleaded. This time, my heart is beating… I am in love with her.

She's on top of me; I massaged her thighs then rubbed her marehood. She moaned in my mouth, I removed my shirt and pants and continued kissing her.

"I never thought how… ah! Soft your skin is, Ryan…" she said.

She then used her hooves to remove my boxers to reveal my erected manhood. She then used her tongue to like my shaft. I have to say, she is like experienced or something. She was now deep-throating me, she didn't gag because ponies have large mouths. We switched to a 69 position, she was sucking my dick while I played and licked her marehood.

"Ah! Ryan… more. Please, ah!" She pleaded more.

I licked it more and more. Fluttershy stood up and positioned herself; she aimed her marehood to my beating dick.

"Are you ready?" I said, holding both her flanks.

"O-okay, but be gentle. It's my first time." She said to me.

"It's my first time too." I lowered Fluttershy and my manhood entered her marehood… It was a strange feeling… more good than when I masturbated back on Earth.

"Oh, Ryan. I love you so much!" She cried out to me.

"I… love you too, 'Shy!" Then she moved up and down, then the movement became faster.

"Ohhh! Ryan, faster! RUTT ME FASTER! HARDER! DEEPER!" she shouted. Holy shit, she demanded me. Guess, never judge a book by its cover right?

We then changed to doggy style and rutted her faster than ever.

"F-F-F-Fluttershy… I'm going to c-c-cum" I started.

"DO IT! NOW, FILL ME WITH THE MILK OF YOUR FOALMAKER! NOOOW!" She shouted in a quiet voice. Jesus H. Christ, wow…

Then there it was our climax. Fluttershy milked me dry of my hot seed. She collapsed in my chest with my dick still inside her.

"Oh, Jesus… that was amazing, 'Shy…" I said panting…

"You… are so amazing… Ryan… I love you."

"I love you too." Then she slept. A few minutes had passed and she was fast asleep. I carried her to her room and kissed her on the forehead. I left and went back to my room. I then washed myself from the juices. After that, I put on my clothes back and wore the wristband, wondering what more powers that this bracelet will give me. But then, something strange is happening. The wristband began vibrating and surrounded by black aura, it levitated and slipped from my wrist. The next thing I knew was

*BOOM!*

The explosion knocked me back and crashed into the wall.

"Ahh… What the hell?! Who are—Mmph!" I was cut off by a pony with black fur, white mane and with red streaks on it. She has silver eyes and one of them are being covered by the mane and she has a red star and a dot with spikes for a Cutie Mark.

"Hello there… My LOVER."

Next Chapter: The Blackest Night Rises Estimated time remaining: 4 Hours, 33 Minutes
Return to Story Description
My Little Pony: The Elements of Heroes

Mature Rated Fiction

This story has been marked as having adult content. Please click below to confirm you are of legal age to view adult material in your area.

Confirm
Back to Safety

Login

Facebook
Login with
Facebook:
FiMFetch