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My Little Pony: The Elements of Heroes

by The13thDoctor

Chapter 10: Love Hurts (Bonus Chapter)

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Author's Notes:

Quicky note. This is not connected to the story whatsoever, this is set on some kind of parallel universe. Just so you know... this was since 2013. I improved myself on the other stories so far.

Bonus Chapter: Love Hurts

(I'll include Ryan here, WITH FULL POWER!)

*During the events of Fluttershy gets beebeeped

"*Random beeping with moaning sounds* DISCORD FASTER!" Fluttershy demanded, then Discord moved his hips faster and faster

"Oh dear Fluttershy, your marehood sure feels good!" Discord said with his tongue out

"AHH!" Then Fluttershy reached her climax and went back to her colorful form. As she opened her eyes: Her jaw dropped, seeing Discord's long shaft inside her marehood. Shocked, she said

"OH… MY…"

"Fluttershy, I'm not done yet." Then again, he casted a spell on her which caused her to go back into her black and white form.

Meanwhile…

"Hey, Ray! Have you seen 'Shy?" I asked

"Ryan, I thought she already told you that she took a walk outside?" He answered

"Ohh…" I thanked Ray. I grabbed my ring and went outside to look for her. I went to the garden first, but she wasn't there. I went to the throne room and asked Celestia.

"Princess, have you seen Fluttershy? I can't seem to find her."

"Hm? Oh, last time I saw her, she walked in the castle hedge maze."

"Really? Thanks, Princess!" I bowed and exited the throne room. And then a really bad feeling came into my gut… A REALLY BAD FEELING THAT SOMETHING BAD IS GOING TO HAPPEN. I ignored the feeling and went outside to the castle hedge maze. As I walked, I saw Twilight with a bunch of fillies. I went to her and greeted her.

"Good afternoon, Ryan! Have you seen Fluttershy? She's late and she has to take these little fillies for a tour of these statues. I've been here for like 20 minutes and she hasn't come yet."

"That's why I've been trying to find her. The Princess said that she last saw Fluttershy walking inside the maze."

"The maze?! Oh my, she could get lost there!"

"Come on, let's go find her."

"What about these fillies?"

I pondered on the situation, then I got a bright idea.

"RAY! COME DOWN HERE FOR A SEC!" I called out, and then I saw a black hawk flying out the open window and land on the ground. Then an aura covered the bird and vanished revealing Ray standing there.

"Sup, bro? What's up?" He said.

"I need you to babysit these fillies while we find Fluttershy inside the maze."

"I don't know man, I'm not good at babysitting."

"Just do it, I think Fluttershy may be in trouble right now. LET'S GO!" then me and Twilight ran inside the hedge maze.

Meanwhile, inside the hedge maze

"COME ON DISCORD! IS THAT WHAT YOUR LITTLE PENIS GOT?! HARDER! DEEPER! FASTEER!" She demanded even more.

"OHH FLUTTERSHY! IT FEELS SO TIGHT!" Discord said in pleasure, he moved his hips even more and more faster.

"YES IT IS! NOW COME ON!"

Back to Ryan and Twilight

We entered the maze, trying to find Fluttershy but to no avail. As we were trying to find her, I felt a strange feeling in my gut again, but this time… It hurts.

"BLEAUUUGHH!" Then suddenly, I vomited blood everywhere… Twilight stopped and turned to look at me. Her eyes widened and her jaw dropped, she trotted towards me, patting in the back saying:

"Ryan! Oh my Celestia… Are you okay?"

"BLEAUUGGHH! *cough* I don't know…" I looked at my ring and it was glowing red…

"Yes… I'm… HURGGGH! Alright… Let's continue." I said. I stood up and continued walking."

"No! You have to rest, you might be sick!" She said

"nO! I'm fInE! NoW lEt'S gO!" I said in a distorted voice, Twilight backed up… She gulped and nodded, and then we continued to walk.

Meanwhile, at the statues outside the maze, Ray's POV

"Hey! Don't touch that. NO! Stay here. Yo, I told you not to eat those!" I said having difficulty babysitting them. I tried to calm them down but to no avail. I stood up and saw Princess Celestia trotting towards me.

"It seems you have trouble babysitting those fillies there, Ray." She said while giggling

"Well, Ryan and Twilight went to look for Fluttershy and left me with them. And I don't know how to babysit and now look, it's like kids on chaos happening right here." I said rubbing my face.

"*giggle* Well, let me help you. Ahem, fillies and foals, please gather around and be calm." She ordered when suddenly, everyone formed in an assembly and calmed down. My jaw almost dropped to the floor, I asked how did she do that and she said.

"You need to be firm with your word or else everyone will not take you seriously." She explained

"Oh… well… that's great, Princess! Thanks!" I said, she nodded and trotted away. I then faced the fillies and said.

"Okay… WHO WANTS SOME CANDY?!"

Ryan's POV, at the hedge maze

I continued vomiting blood but somehow, I'm not losing any. As we walked the maze trying to find Fluttershy, my head began to ache.

"ARRGGH! My head! IT HURTS!" I said while holding my head.

"Oh no… Ryan, we need to go back now." Twilight said

"NO! I'm fine… Let's continue…" I said.

My body… it feels hot, as if like I'm being dipped in lava… And this feeling I have right now… It's so strong… So strong that my heart is pumping all my blood out my mouth, expelling it in a violent manner. I continued to walk and walk… Hallucinations begin to appear, unexplainable but scary…

"Shhh… Ryan, do you hear that?" Twilight said to me, stopping as she is trying to listen the noise.

"Sounds like moaning…" She said

"FLUTTERSHY! I shouted, ramming into the bushes… And yet what I saw was… unimaginable…

"Oh… Are you the human that recently appeared in Equestria? Why, hello! My name is Discord, what is yours?" a creatures with assorted body parts said to me. I saw…. Fluttershy… Discord… having… SEX?

"No… nonononononononono…." Then a red aura engulfed me… I vomited a ridiculously amount of blood,

"Ryan? Are you okay?" Twilight said to me, Fluttershy returned to her colorful state, seeing me and Discord fucking her shocked her.

"Ryan… I'm so sorry… Discord hypnotized me and I don't know what happened next!" She explained. The ground began to tremble,

"FlUtTeRsHy… I uNdErStAnD… aNd I fOrGiVe YoU… but please… step away and forgive me for what I am going tO doooo RAAAGGGHH!" I shouted in a distorted voice. Then I began reciting an oath

"With blood and rage of crimson red,

Ripped from a corpse so freshly dead.

Together with our hellish hate,

We'll burn you all—that is your FATE!"

Then the aura began transforming me into a Red Lantern… a DEADLY ONE

My shoulder began growing spiky shoulder pads, then I began growing some horns on my head, teeth began growing and sharpening, nail sharpening, tongue elongating… and I became what they call… THE DEVIL….

"YOU DARE INTERFERE WITH OUR RELATIONSHIP?! I WILL KILL YOU!" I then charged towards him punching him as hard as I can, knocking back.

"HAHAHAH! YOU ARE WEAK, DISCORD!" I teleported into a nearby pole.

"You think you can defeat me? Ha! I am the God of Cha—" I launched myself at him, shouting while vomiting more blood, cutting him off and pinning him to the ground.

"YOU SHUT THE FUCK UP!" I shouted in distorted voice, punching him several times into the ground.

"THIS ONE IS FOR BRINGING CHAOS INTO EQUESTRIA *BOOM!*" I punched him hard

"THIS ONE IS FOR ALMOST DESTROYING EQUESTRIA! *BOOM!*" And again

"THIS ONE IS FOR HYPNOTIZING FLUTTERSHY! *BOOM!*" and again, vomiting more blood.

The fourth time was different. I flew up high in the sky and concentrated the light of rage in to my hands, and then powerful energy was stored in my hand.

"AND FINALLY… THIS ONE'S FOR HAVING INTERCOURSE WITH HER AND MAKING ME ANGRY!" I dived as fast as I can, almost as the speed of light. And when I hit him…

*BOOM!*

An extremely large explosion almost obliterated the maze. Luckily, no one was harmed.

I opened my eyes; my fist was still inside his face, killing him. I slowly removed my hand, covered in his blood and brains. I was exhausted, like almost all of my energy was consumed. I stood up, kneeled and passed out.

"Shhh… He's waking up." A voice said

I woke up, opening my eyes only to see the white ceiling of my room. I tried to move but I can't, I feel paralyzed. I then saw the Mane 6 and Ray standing beside me.

"Ugghh… What happened?" I asked. Then suddenly, Fluttershy hugged me tightly which caused pain in the area where she hugged me.

"Oww.. Fluttershy, you're hurting me." I said

"Oh… sorry… Ryan…" She said looking down.

"Dude, you cannot believe what happened to you!" Ray shouted.

"Why? What happened?"

Then, Ray explained to me everything. The expelling of my blood, the search for Fluttershy, their intercourse with Discord and my transformation into The Devil.

"Holy shit… I did that? Wow…" I said to them. Fluttershy looked at me, crying and sobbing

"Ryan… thanks for saving me… If it wasn't for you… I would've been pregnant by him…" She said.

"Wait… did he-?" Then I was cut off by Celestia.

"No, he didn't." She said.

"Thank God… Wait, is Discord dead?" I asked.

"Well, after you passed out, your ring began to shine white light and began healing Discord ,resurrecting him back to life."

"Oh thank God… I thought that I was gonna stain my hands now." I sighed

"Well, we all know the power that lies in that ring. It seemed to channel your emotions into the ring, transforming you into that… thing." Celestia said.

"Well, thank God… Wait… why can't I move?" I asked

"The ring used up all your energy and left you paralyzed for a while."

"Ryan… I'm so sorry…" Fluttershy apologized.

"'Shy, you did nothing wrong. Discord just hypnotized you into having intercourse with him, he just controlled you."

"But how can you trust me again?" she said.

"Fluttershy… Kiss me." I requested, she leaned in closer and kissed me.

"No… not yet. I love you Fluttershy…"

"I love you too, Fluttershy." She then hugged be softly.

"*sniff* *sniff* You… are the most cutest couple I have ever seen…" Rarity said. I looked at Celestia and said

"Hey, Princess… Can I talk to Discord?" I asked, she nodded. And then Discord came in the room.

"I cannot believe how strong you are, human…" He said to me.

"Call me Ryan, Discord. You're lucky that my ring gave you a second chance to live. You fucking prick." I said

"And I forgive you." I forgave him. This sudden action caused everyone to gasp.

"WHAT?! Why would you forgive him? HE ALMOST MADE FLUTTERSHY PREGNANT AND HE MATED WITH HER!" Rainbow Dash shouted in anger and Celestia stopped her.

"Calm down, Rainbow Dash. There must be a reason why Ryan forgave Discord." She said to her.

"I forgave you because after I passed out, I knew about your past as if I was there. You had a partner once, but she cheated on you. And now you felt lonely and the sadness that you felt took over you, turning you into a God of Chaos or something like that. I understand why you did this. It's because you didn't think twice about FUCKING SOMEONE ELSE'S MARE FRIEND! You never asked if she's in a relationship with another, and that's a dumb move. And also, you're partner's boyfriend? He never asked if she has a partner, HE MADE THE SAME MISTAKE YOU DID. And she never wanted to mate with him, HE JUST HYPNOTIZED HER, JUST LIKE YOU DID. A coincidence, eh? And I will give you a second chance for that. So, you're off the hook." I said, Discord let out a tear said,

"Thank you… Ryan… I will never do the same mistake again." He vowed, I smiled at him and said.

"Now go, before I rip you into shreds." I said angrily, Discord shivered, scared from what I said.

"Nahh just kidding." I laughed, and then everyone followed.

It was the next morning, I can finally move again, so I went out the balcony and saw a big crater.

"That's where you killed Discord, man" Ray said, surprising me.

"AH! Dude, stop scaring me like that!" I said. Ray laughed.

"Dude, I cannot believe how powerful you are. You're just like BOOM! Red aura surrounded you and you became like the DEVIL!" He praised me.

"And I still cannot believe that you forgave Discord." He said to me

"Well, I can't hate him forever. I'm not that guy, I'm just teaching him a lesson he will never forget."

"Well, okay. I understand. Hey, breakfast is ready, you wanna join?" He asked.

"Later…" I said.

"Okay, then." He then went back inside.

Today was the craziest day of my life. I cannot believe how angry I am at Discord for mating with Fluttershy. And yet, a lesson must be learned today. A lesson still yet to be discovered but has to be learned. My name is Ryan Wilson… Signing out.

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