After witnessing Luna's banishment and return, a mysterious pony takes it upon himself to show Luna that her work at night truly is appreciated.
Trying to overcome his millenniums-worth of social-ineptitude, the stallion fights to stop the Night Princess' re-emerging envy before it's too late. All while attempting to avoid Celestia, due to her hidden misconception that he is the reason her sister became Nightmare Moon.
The Prequestrian Dialect magic language used in the story was created by me.
A translation guide of it can be found here.
(Note: Prologues 1-5 do not include the main MLP cast, they are intended to introduce the OC's so the reader will better understand them and their actions throughout the story.
Also, yes I do realize I have more than 10 characters shown on the list, that is because I'm going to include dadgum near everypony in this fic.)
16 Chapters:
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Prologue 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 27th, 2011
5,020
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Prologue 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 3rd, 2011
6,983
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Prologue 3 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 2nd, 2012
5,699
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Prologue 4 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 7th, 2012
5,055
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Prologue 5 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 11th, 2012
7,778
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Chapter 6: Nightmare Returned [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 17th, 2012
5,462
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Chapter 7: Deprivation Realized [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 19th, 2012
4,094
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Chapter 8: Shopping Spree [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 21st, 2012
4,355
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Chapter 9: Detective Twilight [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 23rd, 2012
5,166
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Chapter 10: The Meeting [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2012
5,600
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Chapter 11: Kindness [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 29th, 2012
6,083
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Chapter 12: Public bias [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 31st, 2012
5,412
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Chapter 13: Salons and Fetlocks [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 5th, 2012
6,892
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Chapter 14: To meet a Princess [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 6th, 2012
4,862
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Chapter 15: A Royal Friendship [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 2nd, 2012
6,286
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Chapter 16: Forced Relocation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 28th, 2013
7,333