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Discord Whooves Takes It Too Far

by flutterbat1234

Chapter 1: were it all begins

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were it all begins

One day in ponyville discord whooves was walking in a circle and thinking at the same time. "Blast it" he grunted. Then just as he was about to repeat himself he saw derpy hooves coming in his direction. He threw a rock and it hit her in the head and she passed out. He was just thinking of an idea to make her stop bothering him. So he carried her to his house and dragged her down to the basement. He tied her up and put her on a torture table. Suddenly she woke up at the sound of a loud clank. She felt pain in her forehead and tried to rub her forehead with her hoof. She yanked her hoof up but it did not move and now her hoof hurt. She saw a figure in the darkness of the room. It was the doctor. He was all gray for some reason and the only thing that had color was his hourglass cutie mark and his eyes. "Whats going on, where am I" she said. "Your in a basement you idiotic buffoon" he replied and smiled. She did not need 20/20 vision to see she was restrained to a table. The doctor had a bucket of hot nails sitting next to him on a table. On the table were other torture tools, hammer, knife, syringe, and a set of brass hooves. there were other tools but the list was to long to name all of them. "What are you going to do to me" she said scared. "I'm going to end you". "WHAT"!!! She said surprised "why would you do that". "That is simple" he said " to make you quit bothering me so much".

Author's Note:

Coming out with the next chapter soon

torture time

discord whooves was holding the bucket of nails and was holding one in his other hoof. It was white hot and he put the bucket down and picked up a hammer off the table. "what are you going to do to me" derpy said the gray pony struggled to get out of her restraints but the knot was too tight and she stayed were she was. "I'm going to murder you" he said came closer and started rubbing her chin softly. "very VERY VERY slowly miss hooves" he said quietly. he then ran over to the table and ran back with a nail in hoof and said "this is the last thing I'm going to do to you, but for now I'll just have to deal with it". quickly he dashed over to the table and tried to choose what to do first. "hmmmmm" he said as he hovered his hoof around the table and picked up the brass hooves and put them on and said "BEATING TIME". he walked over to derpy, clanking the brass hooves clinking and clanking on the floor as he walked towards derpy. he got to her and she was thrashing around. he started to punch her rapidly, hurting even more because of the brass hooves, until she had a black eye and a bloody nose. he stopped and went to the table and took the brass hooves of and grabbed the knife and slowly walked towards her again. he started to stare into her black eye and regular eye and said "CARVING TIME". he started to carve the skin of he legs "AHHHHHHHH" she screamed and he kept going on about doing what he was doing.

Author's Note:

Got the next chapter out now it took me about an hour to make

torture time (cont)

Discord whooves was just getting finished when derpy passed out from all the pain. about an hour later she woke up and discord whooves was eating something red. "what?" he said "I'm eating some of the skin i cut off your leg, your not bad". he got finished eating the scraped off skin he got the syringe off the table and stuck it in her arm and sucked blood out of her arm. when he was done with the syringe she was even more gray than usual and he started sucking the blood out of the syringe and put the syringe down and picked up the hammer.

the final chapter

Discord whooves picked up the nail and hammer and went to derpy and held the nail to her head. "goodbye miss hooves" he said and she said "what are you talking about". he bashed the hammer on the nail on her head and her eyes closed. she was never seen around ponyville again and around a month somepony noticed that she was not there and that pony was carrot top. discord whooves was not seen for a month either. they went to his house and saw the most disgusting thing ever seen. the half decayed body of derpy hooves. discord whooves was nowhere to be seen. meanwhile, in canterlot, discord whooves was sitting in his room in the peace and quiet saying "peace and quiet, just what the doctor ordered'. THE END

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