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The Evil That Is Fanfic Maker

by Distorted Flare

Chapter 1: what have I created


what have I created

Author's Note:

Please enjoy this for what it is, really shitty story made by doing a multiple choice questionnaire on a website that helps you make your own fanfic. It is dreadful

My name is Clarisse. I was all alone, wondering around on my own. My parents turned out to be black supremacists and I am white, so I was all alone on the streets. As I wondered down the forbidding streets, I found a leaflet on the floor. "Come to Ponyville! It is the best. You will find loads of new friends and understanding people. Maybe you'll even be crowned Queen!"

Oh, I thought to myself, I'd love to be Queen! So I set out to Ponyville!

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I was very nervous. I had never gone to Ponyville and I wondered how they would treat me there.

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I arrived in Ponyville and waited for a taxi to bring me to my new housing. As I was waiting for a taxi, I saw I think a mysterious figure hiding in the shadows.

It was as if he was looking at me!

I of course ran towards him and said, "What do you wnat?"

"For you to die!" the mysterious figure said and took out a knife and with a flash it came towards me.


I feared I was going to die. And as I was about to yell, and braced myself for the wound to appear on my side. Nothing happened.

I looked up and I stared straight into her beautiful eyes. They were so pretty and round and I delved right into them. Like soaking in a comfortable batch . Her hair looked like the softest of velvet and encapsulated her face perfectly.

I had completely forgotten the assailant. All I could think of was her.

She looked at me with a smile as she brought the assailant down to his knees. "Looks like I was right on time."

"Who was that?" I asked.

"It must have been one of Discord's lackeys" she said.

"Discord!" I gasped, "I thought Discord was defeated!"

"So did we... so did we." said she.


"But who are you then? OMG... you're not..." I gasped in asphyxiation.

"It is true," she, "I am no one else but Twilight Sparkle.

I had dreamed to meet Twilight Sparkle at some point in my lifetime. But it always was a distant dream. One that when you wake up, all you remember is Twilight Sparkle's dreamy eyes and wonderful complexion. It was such a dream that I never thought could become real! But here she was, right before me.

"I could never dream of meeting you," I said dreamily.

Twilight Sparkle grinned sheepishly, "Well, I had never thought of meeting such a great person like yourself."

I blushed.

"Hey," She said, "seeing as you're involved already, would you like to join me and the others to defeat Discord for good?"

"that sounds great! When do I start?"

"now!" said Twilight Sparkle and he led me towards the others. And there we started planning to defeat Discord!

So Twilight Sparkle got onto her Ferrari. The others followed on their scooters but were quite far behind.

Twilight Sparkle knew she had to go faster and faster like the speed of sound. So She raced down streets and around corners, skiding furiously around pedestrians and cops.

"No time for rules!" she called out as she passed.

"I have to take my full responsibilities of life!" she said.

Suddenly up ahead she saw some bad guys!

So she did a massive wheely backflip over them, punching them in the face as she was above them.

"Eat my fist!" She yelled as she knocked them out.

She speed on wards past fields and towns and cities and castles and other landscape.

Then she saw the road sign to where she had to go, and so she went. She whacked some more bad guys out with a sideways 360 spin, before leaping off the bike. Later, when the others catches up, they continued their journey.

Now, how to find him? We know he has a building, but theirs so many!"

Twilight Sparkle said: "I have worked it out. Remember the secret note? Its a code to tell us the address! Look, see I solved it.

The solution was very clever, and it all made sense.

"Wow, I could have never worked that out, well done"

"Yes, well done indeed"

So they went to the base.

As they entered, it was ominously and creepily abandoned.

"Come on" said Twilight Sparkle

..and then they went on their way!

"Lets take the ventalation shaft!"

"Thats a good plan, so we can sneak to the roof undetected"

So they got into the ventalation shaft.

They traveled upto the roof, ver the ducks, thus avoiding the security systems because they are smart.

We are here, said Twilight Sparkle crawling out the duck, and putting her shirt on.

"So you have come" said a voice booming from the sky

A helicopter appeared above them.

Discord laughed at them

"Ha Ha Ha Ha"

"I could gun you all down from here, but I would rather do this...personal style."

He leaped down and landed at the far side of the rooftop

"Ready?" he said, still laughing.

. Twilight Sparkle removed her shirt and flexed her abs."Yes. I am ready. "

With that they leaped at eachother, metaphorical guns blazzing.

"I kill you dead"

Discord head butted Twilight Sparkle in the nose

Twilight Sparkle fell backwards in pain punching a few times before crashing to the ground.

"Ha Ha Ha Ha" laughed Discord

"You could never have defeated me, so why did you even try?"

"I had too, for all that is good and just in the world."

"Well now you will die. Goodbye."

Discord leaned over Twilight Sparkle holding a large rock.

"Quick Twilight Sparkle use this!" said Clarisse ,chucking a nearby scopius doll towards Twilight Sparkle.

Twilight Sparkle grabbed it and chucked it towards Discord hard, knocking him backwards....off the edge of the skyscraper!

"Goodbye, Discord have a nice fall!"

"ARrrrrgggg”

"We are safe now, he fell to certain doom."

Spike and got out from the cornor where they were cuddling. "Thank you, you saved us all"

"Dont mention it."

So they left the tower and went home. They lived happily ever after and had lots of kids.

The End

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