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During the Great War, a pegasi city made from a hurricane was sent to destroy Equestria's enemies. However, it disappeared, never to return...until now.
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Surprise is a young pegasus mare eking out a modest existence as a third-rate Enclave soldier in the Primum Mobile Military Base, a remote weather outpost on the edge of the cloud cover. Life in the Equestrian Wasteland below is a constant fight for survival, but above the clouds, the worst thing Surprise has to deal with are the hallucinations caused by her schizophrenia.

However, when the base discovers a hurricane is headed towards Enclave airspace, Surprise is among those sent into action to try and intercept it. As Surprise quickly learns, though, the impending tempest is no ordinary storm. Rather, it is a militarized pegasus city from before the Great War, possessing enough prewar wonders and horrors to make whoever gains control of it the most powerful pony in the sky...if the city doesn't completely destroy the aerial nation of the Enclave.

Update: Recently O. Hinds, the esteemed editor for Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons, was amazing enough to read what currently exists of my story. Here's what he had to say about it, which he has given me permission to share:

“While at times Storm Chasers seems to me an odd story in a way that I cannot seem to put my hoof on, this is only a different quality, not an inferior one. I have found the plot and characters to be interesting, and the mechanical quality of the prose is quite impressive, particularly given Chaotic Dreams's lack of an editor; in Chapter 2 (the latest at this message's time of writing), I noticed only a few errors, and, while it has been much longer since I've read the first chapter, I do not recall anything particularly bad in that, nor did I see frequent errors in the skim I undertook just now. Oh, and the illustrations are pretty good.”

Cover art by DoomSp0rk.

Logo by TheOmegaRidley.

Surprise by Zubias.

Hurricane Megaspire by Nukechaser24.

Illustrations by me.

Teen
Cancelled
Adventure
Dark
Gore

54,759 words: Estimated 3 Hours, 40 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

3 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 24th, 2015
    17,124
  2. Chapter 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 6th, 2014
    18,912
  3. Chapter 3 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 24th, 2014
    18,723
Published Apr 5th, 2014
Last Update Aug 24th, 2014

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