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Terror in Equestria 6: The Great War

by StormLuna

Chapter 16: The Return of Evil

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While Colgate slept peacefully in her black tower in Ponyville strange things were happening where she had tested her nuke spell. A great dome formed in the arctic. Inside this dome magical energies caused a new crystal tower along with many, many houses to form. Shortly after that a great white vortex opened up above the new city. Out of this vortex emerged every creature that had ever been banished to the void.

The first two to fall out of the vortex were King Sombra and Queen Chrysalis. As they hit the ground they screamed in pain. "OWW!" screamed Sombra. Very soon he saw the changeling Queen, Princess Cadence and many, many other ponies around him and the last to emerge was the bumblebee which Twilight tested her banishing spell on first.

"WE'RE FREE!" shouted Sombra

Queen Chrysalis replied, "I know! What I would like to know is how we were freed. We certainly weren't freed the same way that LaurFa was. This had to be from something that tore a hole in the void."

Behind Chrysalis was Princess Cadence. She asked, "Um, Queen Chrysalis, I know we have had our differences in the past but since we were all sent to the void by Twilight, do you think we could be allies?"

Chrysalis looked up at the pink Alicorn and replied, "Under one condition. You must swear complete and absolute loyalty to myself and King Sombra."

Cadence, with a determined look on her face replied, "Consider it done. We were all betrayed by Twilight. I think it is time we get revenge on her and take over Equestria."

Sombra interrupted, "And how the hay are we supposed to do that? These ponies that came out with us are not soldier material. We need to find some soldiers. How, I don't know."

Chrysalis smiled and replied, "Leave this up to me. I still remember the loyalty spell that Twilight would cast on ponies. I also remember the invisibility spell. I can make myself invisible, go to Ponyville, turn the soldiers there against Twilight, bring them back here and train them for an offensive to take back what is rightfully ours."

Sombra and the newly loyal Cadence had unsure looks on their faces but knew that Chrysalis would do what she wanted.

Chrysalis smiled and said, "Don't be such worry warts you two. I'll be fine. See you later."

Chrysalis then took off to the air and exited the protective dome. It was a snowy day in the arctic but the winds are calm so Chrysalis had no problems flying. Two hours later she exited the arctic and landed in the northernmost part of the Everfree Forest for a snack. She was very hungry given that it had been ages and ages since she had a bite to eat, but something didn't seem right to her.

She said to herself, "Hmmm., something doesn't seem right here. Shouldn't there be a purple force field surrounding this area?"

She began to wonder if something had happened to Twilight and began to think that Celestia had returned to power. She however still knew that she would have a major enemy she would have to avoid. Once she finished her meal she flew south over the forest towards Ponyville.

In Ponyville Colgate was out at the base working with her soldiers when something didn't seem right to Green Toxin, her changeling colonel. He asked, "Colgate, is it just me or does something seem horribly wrong?"

Colgate replied, "Oh I'm sure things are just fine." She paused for a minute and asked, "What, are you still being a worry wart over that nuke spell I tested in the arctic?"

Before he could say anything he saw a larger changeling in the sky. He began to panic. While he never met her he knew that the one that changelings are supposed to bow to had returned. Colgate was wondering why he was panicking but then looked off to the north and saw the changeling queen fly over her tower and ultimately land in front of her.

Colgate looked at her and said, "Wait a minute, what the hay are you doing here? I thought you were permanently banished to the void."

Chrysalis laughed, "Well something tore a hole in the void and released us. It even caused the Crystal Empire to reform."

Green Toxin shouted, "You know what Colgate, I told you that your nuke spell would do something bad!"

Chrysalis looked at Colgate and asked, "Colgate? I don't remember you being part of Twilight's forces."

Colgate replied, "Twilight was a wimp. She's gone for good and I'm in charge now." Colgate paused for a minute and then replied, "Oh, and you need to address me as Supreme Commander Colgate until I know whether we are friend or foe."

Chrysalis had a nervous look on her face and asked, "What happened to Twilight? Did you kill her?"

Colgate replied, "No, I did not kill her. She was unmade by Goddess Brevity Thrash."

Chrysalis had heard of Brevity when she was very young. She got a terrified look on her face and asked, "Brevity Thrash? You mean as in the creator goddess that is yellow and has a pink mane and tail?"

Colgate replied, "Yep, she's the one!"

One thing that Colgate did not notice was that more and more changelings were gathering around the queen. They seemed to be bound to her in a way. Some of them were even looking at her like she was their mother. Even some of the dark Alicorn drones felt a sense of loyalty to Chrysalis, despite never meeting her before. Suddenly Green Toxin, who was angered over Colgate's recklessness shouted, "Cover her in ooze boys!"

The changelings covered Colgate in ooze. While Colgate was screaming and shouting at them, Chrysalis laughed as her and the changelings and dark Alicorns loyal to her sped off to the north. Applejack heard the commotion over at the base. She ran over and asked, "What the hay? Colgate, what are you doing covered in ooze? Is this a training exercise?"

Colgate shouted, "Free me from this stuff damn it."

Applejack released a calm beam of energy, melting away the ooze. Colgate looked at her and said, "Applejack, Green Toxin was right, my nuke test tore a hole in the void." Colgate looked down and continued, "What have I done?"

Applejack replied, "Well Commander, what's done is done. All we can do is continue on with the forces we have." Applejack paused for a minute and asked, "Wait a minute. The ones who stayed are loyal to you and you know the duplication spell. Why don't you just duplicate them?"

Colgate smiled and replied, "That's right, we do. I think we need to gather everypony else together and have a meeting. This changes the plans somewhat."

While Applejack and Colgate headed to Sugarcube Corner to round up the rest of their friends Chrysalis and her army flew northward. Five hours later Chrysalis and her army entered the domed empire. Sombra looked up and was amazed by what he saw. As soon as they landed Sombra looked at the dark Alicorns and gasped, "What? You guys can fly now?"

The dark Alicorn soldiers, just like the changelings, knew that Sombra was somepony important despite never meeting him. Lieutenant Dark Crystal, the only dark Alicorn officer to defect asked, "Sir, I know we have never met but you seem like somepony very important to me, someone whom I should serve under."

Sombra had an evil grin on his face. He realized that their chances of taking Equestria were much higher now. He replied, "I am King Sombra, king of the dark unicorns. Many millennia ago your ancestors served under me."

Dark Crystal said, "Well then I shall also serve you my liege." He paused for a minute and then asked, "My king, where are your wings?"

Chrysalis interrupted, "Don't worry about that for now. I will make sure he has wings soon enough."

Sombra looked around and saw many unicorns and some earth ponies. He said, "Well I don't know what the hay we are going to do with all these new ponies. We don't have the food to feed them."

Cadence walked up in front of the new army and asked, "Where did these ponies even come from anyway?"

Chrysalis replied, "Cadence, I have overheard them talking about how Twilight destroyed their home city of Marentreal and killed many of their family members."

Sombra asked, "Speaking of Twilight, did you encounter her?"

Chrysalis laughed, "No, Equestria is now ruled by this pony who identifies herself as Supreme Commander Colgate. I am guessing Equestria is ruled by the military now."

Cadence looked shocked. She said, "Wait a minute, Colgate? She was the one who wrote a pain free root canal spell for my aunt Celestia."

Chrysalis shook her head and asked, "Who cares what she did for your precious aunt?" She paused and then asked, "Cadence, was there ever a library here? One that might aid me in writing a spell to give Sombra wings?"

Cadence replied, "There was a vast library on the fourth floor of the crystal tower. Hopefully they reformed when the rest of the empire returned."

Chrysalis nodded and then headed up to the library. She realized that Sombra would be useless if he remains a unicorn. She figured that if she could study the same way Twilight did, that the world would be her's for the taking.

Author's Notes:

Colgate's Nuke spell---- "The atoms must be split so I can send my enemies into a pit. The explosion shall be big so my enemies will squeal like a pig. The time has come to make my enemies numb. The big fire shall be great, it shall destroy all the hate."

Colgate's dark Alicorns

General Dark Night
Colonel Black Mist
Major Frigid Wind
Captain Black Ice
Lieutenant Dark Crystal

Changelings

General Lightning Storm
Colonel Green Toxin
Major Deadly Cloud
Captain Green Storm
Lieutenant Southern Haze

NOTE: Since the changelings and dark Alicorns that Colgate duplicated for Scootaloo to take to the Equine Empire, the officers will have the same names since duplicates are EXACT duplicates.

Lyra's Grand Prince
Grand Prince Silver Star (DEAD)

Lyra's dark Alicorns

General Black Rocks
Colonel Stone Gray
Major Rock Crusher
Captain Steel Seas
Lieutenant Gray Mist

Changelings

General Green Eyes
Colonel Blue Streak
Major Green Death
Captain Fly Wings
Lieutenant Black Haze

Lemon Hearts' Grand Prince
Crescent Moon (DEAD)

dark Alicorns

General Dark Skies
Colonel Steel Armor
Major Iron Blades
Captain Dark Mane
Lieutenant Black Lightning

changelings

General Green Skies
Colonel Stinging Ooze
Major Green Death
Captain Burning Haze
Lieutenant Green Cloud

Luna's dark Alicorns

General Black Night
Colonel Dark Rocks
Major Black Seas
Captain Gravel Crusher
Lieutenant Night Sky

Changelings
General Green Waters
Colonel Choking Mist
Major Dim Sun
Captain Dark Rage
Lieutenant Steel Wrath

Brevity's officers
General Green Star
Colonel Stargazer
Lt. Colonel Moonrise
Major Starry Skies
Captain Moonlight
Lieutenant Soaring Skies

Invisibility----"Whether it be one or a bunch of ones, nopony needs to see so that we don't have to flee, invisibility is the treat of not having to retreat."

Visibility---"The unseen shall now be seen, with their friends being present, hiding only shows resent, those who have disappeared shall now appear."

Duplication---"From one to two, two to four and so much more, when one is simple mere, more and more shall appear."

Banish to void--- "You have committed treason and that is not in season, you are a threat to me and I simply can not let that be, I can no longer be annoyed so you shall be cast into the void."

Loyalty spell---"From another to me, that is where your allegiance will now be, you thought your old commander loved you like pie when all they wanted was for you to die. With me all shall be great, there shall be no hate."

Giving drones a mind of their own---"those without a mind are in a bind, no longer shall they just be, but they will still be loyal to me, for officers they are now but they don't ask how."

Unbanish---"The one who has been banished has done their time, they are now forgiven for their crime, their time has come, now they need to contribute some, it is Equestria that they must serve or into the spiral of the void they shall curve."

Transform unicorn to Alicorn--- "The unicorn who has no wings is bound to the ground, they can not really get around, their smarts are great yet without flight they will be late, with these wings they will be great and they shall never have a bad fate."

Transform multiple unicorns to Alicorns--- "The unicorns who have no wings are bound to the ground, they can not really get around, their smarts are great yet without flight they will be late, with these wings they will be great and they shall never have a bad fate."

Transform Pegasus to Alicorn---"The one who can fly likes to fly free desires the powers that allow the unicorn to be, he/she wishes so much to levitate and create, rather than berate, for the winged one now has magic, without that it would be tragic."

Transform Earth Pony to Alicorn---"The pony without magic or flight is in a bind, for they feel like they have fallen behind, they work themselves to death, even to their very last breath, for now with magic and wings, great things shall be what life brings."

Increase size of pony---"The small one wishes they were tall so that they won't have to crawl, with height their future is bright and everything will be alright, for the small one is small no more, with height their happiness shall be galore."

Mature pony--"The innocent pony is unsure of who she wants to be, that may be cute but it is not what is good for me, she needs to mature if she is to be strong for without maturity she won't last for long, the naive one shall be so no more, for her maturity will carry her into lore."

Strengthen Armor---"The one without armor does not stand a chance, so it is what we must enhance, the unarmed one will likely receive death, with armor he shall continue to draw breath, without armor he will be torn to shreds like a rag but with armor victory is in the bag."

Activate Jade Alicorn---"The jade Alicorn will help me see all, without it I might miss a brawl, while the distances are great, I can see all the hate, wisdom is what comes along with the eye so that overthrowing me nopony will try."

Hurricane spell--- "The nice weather must come to an end, for without a storm the enemy will not bend, the wind shall be strong and my enemies won't last for long, a hurricane is a must so the tyrants will sink and go bust."

Fixing spell--- "The city was devastated by a storm, which is not the norm, their suffering is great yet we can not allow normalcy to be late, the city must be restored to the way it was before so they can pay taxes like they did before.

COLGATE'S SPELLS

Unlock---"The door is locked, but from me my information is blocked, a lot of learning I have to do, but with this locked I won't have a clue, now the door is open for me and infinite knowledge for me shall now be."

Lock---"Right now the door is not locked, from others the information is not blocked, the others must not be allowed to learn, for this is not theirs to earn, the door is now closed for all but me because infinite knowledge is not free."

Shatter Armor---"Our foes' armor is great, that is something I hate, with their armor they are strong, but them having armor is just plain wrong, now their armor is gone and it is time for them to say bye as they are struck by energy and die."

Return Blue sky---"The sky is purple which is ok for some, but it just makes me numb, for I miss the way it used to be, blue is beautiful to me, the normal sky shall be back and everything will return on track."

Drain pony---"The large pony is too big for me, for smaller the pony shall be, the size and knowledge will become mine, but the negative qualities is where I draw the line, for what must grow is my power, so that I may remain in the tower."

Change eye blue---"The green eye is not for me, for blue is what it shall be, the evil shall be banished as the good can not vanish, what shall return will be an eye of blue as it is the perfect hue."

Freeze time---"Tick tock, tick tock, look at the racing clock, what is short is time and being late is a crime, we must finish on top so it is time I must stop, with time froze, it is my enemies I shall bulldoze."

Unfreeze time---"Look at the clock, it is stuck in place, with this there can be no pace, everything is still but that does not fit the bill, for now the clock shall again run so everypony can have fun."

Time bubble---"A bubble is what we need, so from frozen time we can be freed, in this bubble we can move fast, while everything else is stuck in the past, it is frozen time which through we must pass so we will never be late to class."

Undo time bubble---"In the bubble time continues to run, but now the time outside runs and allows fun, the bubble must burst so we can quench our thirst, from the bubble we are now free and everything we can clearly see."

Release Brevity Thrash--- "She was banished long ago, but her power she will not forego, it is revenge she wants, it is her sister she shall taunt, for Brevity Thrash shall return once more and be more than just long lost lore."

PINKIE'S SPELL

"The changeling's power is good, but not great, they can fire ooze but not enough to make their foes lose, for them to be great, they must fire bolts of hate, the energy shall be strong so their enemies won't last for long."

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