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hero that never was

by Ahrazell

Chapter 1: falling though... water?!


falling though... water?!

My life was a good life before all this crap. A nice home, great parents and had a lot of amazing friends. Then came the day I was going to have my 14th birthday party, the day after my birthday.  That is where it happened...

"Lance, hurry up! We have to leave now if we want to get to the park in time!" Yelled my dad

"You know dad? I think I'll walk to day." I said

My dad had the look that said I better be just walking unless I want to die. As I started down the path to the local park, my mind started to wonder and then I noticed that I missed the turn to get to the park when I was pushed by a figure behind me. "I am sorry but you need to go back." Said the cloaked figure.

Next thing I knew I was about to hit the cement when I fell though it. I fell though what seemed like, water? I could breath and saw bubbles and stars every where. Then I felt different. I saw white shards break away from me as I continue down. Then came the pain. Oh the pain was unbearable! I was surrounded by shadows that were pulsing a inky substance. I tried to scream in pain then, the shodows stopped moving around me and the pain stopped. Then the shadows started to enter me. I blacked out.

When I awoke I coughed up and was soaking in the inky substance. Then I looked around to see a town in the distance and thought that I could find out where I am. Then I looked at my self after tripping on my own .... FOUR HOOVES!? I saw that I, Lance the human, was a pony! I really needed questions answered then.

I did notice that I was a, I believe, a alicorn. I had wings but they were.....odd? They were and still are made of metal but out of instinct used magic to power the wings and they glowed an dark red. I had a blue coat and silver eyes(I looked in a pond near by) and white and  dark purple mane. I could not wrap my mind around it. I when to the town and to my surprise saw ponys walking around every where. I tried to tell them my problem but they did not listen. They took me to a party and that is where it happened.

"Hi there I'm pinkie pie!" stated a hipper pink pony "you are new here huh? Oooo I just love new people! Not when they are mean but I can tell you are not mean! Hey I know who you will like, fallow me!" the pink pony grabbed my hove and and dragged me to a orange colored pony.

"Well, howdy pinkie! How are you doing? Who is this if ah may ask?" said the orange pony

"I'm okie, dokie, lokie! Ooo ooo ooo, this is Lance!" how did she know my name I thought

"How yah doing partner? The names Apple Jack but you can call me AJ if yah wish." said AJ with a slight blush that I did not catch

"Umm, I'm good I guess." I said with a bush brighter that the sun. Is love in first sight even possible? I think so. I thought

"Well I will go down stairs for a while to make CUPCAKES!" burst in pinkie pie  

After pinkie left, I was at peace with AJ. I forgot my worries and almost forgot that I was even human. All I knew is that I loved this mare and I did not want any harm to come to her or her friends. Then a stallion with a gun and a sword came and bashed down the door. " Get down and I may think about not killing every single one of you, damn!" he said looking at AJ "that chick is soo coming with me, Looks like I will have to kill the rest of you." he said while shooting a filly in the head with out thought.

"NO! You will go, you will not harm any one else, and you will not touch Apple Jack in any way!" I said

"well if I can't touch her..." Bam. god.... he shot her. He shot AJ!

"Stop now or I will deal with you my self!"

"ooo so scary. Says who?"

"says Dragolancerot dai Magick, next shadow god and demon of shadows now YOU WILL DIE!" I said scaring my inner self and not knowing what I am saying.

The inky substance started to pour out of me and I made it into weapons and attacked him with them ranging from swords to bows to wips to chain guns. I went super sain on him and then was struck down by him swiping his sword at me. As his sword glowed I got an idea. I put magic into my wings and made the shadow substance into wing-blades and  attacked him at the speed that made a double rainboom look like a snail. god.....I ripped out his guts in front of kids, innocent kids.

When I was done every one backed away from me those that did not scream at me. I looked at a mirror and saw what they saw. the monster that stared back did not look like me. I was black with red at my hooves and red dragon eyes. I had red hair with a blue patch at the end near my eye. And, I was leaking out that damn substance.

I looked over where AJ was shot and did not find AJ. Then, pinkie pie came out from down stairs with a batch of cupcakes and said in a seemly mocking tone "CUPCAKES EVERY PONY! Now, where could AJ be, I heard noise. OO oo, lance you look different and taster you want to have a cupcake?"

"Uh..... ok?" I could have sworn that she said something else. I took a bite and was welcomed to a flavor that was rather, different? "I have to go see your ruler, now."

"You mean the princesses? Okie dokie!" said the pink pony. Then I went to the castle with pinkie and went straight to the princesses. They looked like they were shocked to see me.

"OK princesses, two things , one one of your subjects was murdered and two, I am a human and I was wondering if you could send me back?"

"You don't know, does thou?" Said the lunar princess

"Know what?"

"You were in a coma for 14 years. You are nota a "human" you are equestrian." Said the celestial princess.

"What, no...no that can't..... That can't be!"

"It is. You were 7 years old when we were playing in a he fields to keep your demon in check. You were attacked by a demon hunter and got hit in the head. It put you in a coma and now we know it also took your memorys. Pinkie what are you...no!"

I heard giggling then a  pain in my chest. I saw a bade though me and heard pinkie say the words I can never forget. "So Lance, how did Apple Jack taste?" And that demon of a pony giggled at my face "ahw man, you are a demon so I can't use you in cupcakes but at least you can not stop me in between reality's." I fell and had the same feeling and effect when I came to equestria only no pain. Then I landed on something.

"What is a demon doing on the portal?" Said a pony in armor, or with me half asleep is what it looked like

"Well, it does not seem bad and it does look like it was hit by.... pinkie struck again huh?" said the pony

All I could do was nod at what he said I was so weak. " Well then, I will defiantly help you now. I'm Gage and you are?"

"Lance. Lancerot if you want my full name." I somehow said "I don't know if I have the energy to get up so here" I shot a ball of energy at Gage " it will let you summon me so for now, I will be laying here until I have the energy to travel again. goodnight or day, I don't know the time."

Now I wait to be summoned. I have nothing else to live for right now but I can not die so I wait for him.

My savor and friend Gage.........
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