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The move to Manhattan seemed like a good idea at the time, but between long work hours and several arguments, Jack and Rarity's relationship is beginning to wear down. But can their last hope really lie in an elevator?
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The move to Manhattan seemed like a good idea at the time. Rarity had several high profile clients to pursue, while Jack could set up her own business in the city and expand her family's reach. But between the long, grueling work hours, the tedious days ticking on, the pair have had less and less time for each other. And when they do, it usually isn't good.

Their relationship is on the edge of breaking down, both parties mutually unhappy and unfulfilled with their lives. So, in this delicate time, can a simple elevator really offer the key to their happiness?

(Written for my good friend and general all around bro-tier guy, Merc the Jerk. Check his stuff out, 'cause he can seriously write this humanized stuff a lot better than I can.)

Teen
Complete
Romance
Slice of Life
Sad

5,524 words: Estimated 23 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. When One Door Closes [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 11th, 2014
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Published Mar 12th, 2014

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