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Every pony in Equestria is born with something that makes them special. One was born to be a fighter
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NOTE: I wrote this prior to the episode "Luna Eclipsed". However, her non-shouting voice can be easily explained by saying "That's her public voice, not the Black Ops quietness" voice"

Kurt Foalington was the middle child of a rather successful family in Canterlot. In a peaceful society, he was the proverbial black sheep. He loved the fray, and most ponies with power didn't like having a threat to their otherwise peaceful society.

Things get really messy when he figures out that society had set up a cleverly-designed prison, and he wanted to meet a young filly.

Then it gets even messier when his younger brother goes missing.

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An alternate world where society isn't perfect, and it's not the only one in general. Events are otherwise the same in the show.

OC-centered, with canon cast appearing at points, so I guess that's something for those of you who foolishly exclusively turn your interest towards everything that, for all you know, gets the canon completely wrong.

[Yeah, I'm a bit of a bitter guy towards people who dismiss entire fics just because it has an OC in there somewhere.]

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54,763 words: Estimated 3 Hours, 40 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

6 Chapters:

  1. Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 6th, 2011
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  2. Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 6th, 2011
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  3. Part 3 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 7th, 2011
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  4. Part 4 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 7th, 2011
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  5. Part 5 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 7th, 2011
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  6. Part 6 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 7th, 2011
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Published Nov 6th, 2011
Last Update Nov 7th, 2011

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