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Based upon Celestia's comment from the original story, What if the first human Rainbow Dash met after being transported to the human world wasn't a MLP loving brony, but a cruel human being?
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The idea for this darker spinoff of MLD was based on Celestia's comment from the original story: "When I realized where you ended up, I expected the worst. I figured you to be ruined, tainted and tarnished from this world's cruelty."

Through an accident of circumstance Rainbow Dash is transported to another world. However, her first encounter with a human isn't a loving brony, but a cruel sadistic human who sees her only as a chance for a big payday.

Since the subject matter is darker and writing about filly abuse isn't my thing Rainbow gets transported as is with her memories intact. No cute little filly here.

Teen
Complete
Sad
Dark

20,705 words: Estimated 1 Hour, 23 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

6 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: The heartless man [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 30th, 2018
    3,159
  2. Chapter 2: Sometimes we just need to be shown a little kindness. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 30th, 2018
    5,814
  3. Chapter 3: Because I promised. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 1st, 2019
    2,545
  4. Chapter 4: Just in time. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 1st, 2019
    2,404
  5. Chapter 5: Don't give up, Rainbow Dash [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 30th, 2018
    2,970
  6. Final chapter: Lesson learned/Returning home. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 1st, 2019
    3,813
Published Feb 20th, 2014
Last Update Mar 5th, 2014

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