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The Misadventures of Sudoku

by Axie_Spot

First published

a mare named Sudoku explores equestria and gets random adventures.

//The other ponys i mentioned will be added later on.
//also, i'm not sure if this is supposed to be a fanfic as this is my 1st one :/
This is a story of a mare called 'Sudoku' who get's pushed around alot, and random surprises and things happen to her on her journey to explore The World of Equestria, or maybe she doesn't..

Axie Spot - (My O.C)
Sudoku - (Another O.C i made up at school while deciding to make this fanfic)

Chapter 1 : Sudoko goes to ponyville

So it starts off with a pony named 'Sudoku' and she's a mare, which goes to ponyville certainly. One day a pony shouted "SUDOKU!" and Sudoku replied "WHAT!?" but the pony didn't reply, she was actually playing sudoku herself. Sudoku continued trotting and trotting, and then she tripped over a rock when a pony just passed her. Sudoku said "Why did you just trip me!?" then Sudoku charged at the pony and knocked him flying. "Don't try and fight me, pal." said Sudoku while looking at the injured pony. "S-s-s-sorry.." replied the pony. Sudoko passes him and kicks him with both of her back hoofs, then dashs away. Sudoku then found this pink building called 'Sugarcube Corner' and trotted in. Sudoku spots alot of ponys and a pink one. Sudoku then trots over to the pink pony. "Hello there! May I take your order!?" Sudoku quickly put her hoofs against her ears. "Beeowch! Do you really have to shout that loud?" the Pink Pony replied "Why not?" And then Sudoku sighed. "I'm new okay? and i hate loud noises.. so don't do it again" And then the Pink Pony introduced herself. "My name is Pinkie Pie by the way, call me Pink if you wanted to, and i'm sorry.." Sudoku Looked away "I've heard another sorry lately.. wanna know what i did? Kicked his teeth in pal.. Would you like that?" Pinkie Pie was excited "Ooo! Ooo! Kicking teeth in! sounds cool!" Sudoku put her hoofs over her ears again "Oh for Celestia's Sake, you really tick me off, you don't even know what kicking teeth in is? well.. it hurts, care to test?" Pinkie Pie slowly trotted back with a Worried face "Oh no.. no no.. no thank you.." Sudoku chuckles back "Well good, now can you show me around here?" Pinkie Pie stopped trotting and wasn't worried, she smiled. "Okie Dokie Lokie!" Pinkie pie opens a steel, metal door..

Chapter 2 : The Escape

"Go on in, i'll follow you." said Pinkie Pie. Sudoku trotted though the door but Pinkie Pie didn't follow, instead she slammed the door shut. Sudoku dashed back to the door and started banging on it "I knew this was a trap! Let me out!" Shouted Sudoku, but Pinkie Pie ignored her. Sudoku turned around and slowly trotted down the wooden, cranky steps leading into the gloomy darkness. Some faint screams were heard, and some breathing to, she wasn't fooled this time. Sudoku was worried what was down there "Hello!?" Shouted Sudoku, waiting for an answer. "H-h-h-ello.. t-th-there.." Replied in the darkness. "What happened down here? any idea?" Sudoku said in disgust. "W-w-well.. P--pink-ie.. P-pie.. T-turns.. a-a-and.. t-to-tor--tures.. u-us.." the darkness replied. "She tortured you!? oh my, i knew there was something suspecious about her.. prehaps i can help you" Sudoku replied in worry. she began trotting around, looking for a light source. "No light eh? so it's just all dark down here.." said Sudoku. suddenly a voice came out of no where "I know w-where some light is.." Sudoku turns around, trying to find out who it is. "Where are you!? and who? this is getting crazy.." Sudoku said in worry. "I-in the corner, the left one.. i can see you h-here.. and Pinkie Pie didn't torture me because of a reason, well i hid anyway in a caved in thing here but we can escape that way!" replied the thing in the corner. Sudoku turns around "I don't see you.. could you come to me please?" the thing from the corner stood up, and tapped Sudoku's head. "I'm here, it's nice to meet another pony that isn't hurt.. hehe.." Sodoku replies "Nice to meet you to, we need to get out of here.. and my name is Sudoku and i'm a mare, what about you?" the pony says back in joy "My name is Axie, yes it's a wierd name.. and i'm a Filly!" Axie trots over to the cave she hid in and points "this was where i hid otherwise i would've been killed.. because that's what she does, kill fillys, make colts and mares bleed out to death, i don't know how i found out but.. it's useful info." Sudoku is surprised that even a filly knows more than she does "Wow, impressive.. maybe me and you could hang out, but that's no laughing matter just now! we need to find a way out of here." Axie can hear Pinkie Pie open the steel door "Quickly, get in here." whispers Axie to Sudoku. "Yeah, gotcha." Sudoku whispers back. Axie fitted into the corner of the cave and Sudoku fitted on the other corner, then quickly and quietly closed up the cave. "Now where could that little filly gone.. i wonder!" Pinkie Pie turns on the lights and finds out that the filly isn't there. "Alright, Who hid her? or let her go!?" Shouted Pinkie Pie in rage. Sudoku accidently budges and Pinkie Pie heard a little rock crash. "Oh i see you now!" Pinkie Pie dashs over to the rock and then removes it, spotting the filly and the mare both in there. Axie trys to dash out but Pinkie Pie grabs her. "no! let me go now!" Shouted Axie in sadness. "Your coming with me you little squirt, thinking you can escape me eh? well your out of damn luck!" Sudoku manages to get out of the caved rock and charges at Pinkie Pie, banging her against a wall. "Thinking YOU can try and hurt my friends? Well to bad because you ain't!" Sudoku Slaps Pinkie Pie around the face. "H-h-h--" The pony died on the floor, Sudoku noticed that it looked like a purple pony with red wine dyed hair. "Oh i'm so scared.. Well i'm not!" Pinkie Pie kicks Sudoku away, while still holding Axie tight. Sudoku quickly gets back up and quickly grabs Axie and trys to pull her away from Pinkie Pie. "You Hand her to ME!" Exclaimed Sudoku. "No, to me!" Exclaimed Pinkie Pie. "L-let m-m-me g-go!" Shouted Axie while she's barely conscious. Pinkie Pie gives up and let's go, making Axie Hit the floor and making her unconscious. "Well look, you knocked her out, You really are such, A BAD MARE! hahahaha!" Pinkie Pie said in anger, and chuckling. "Well you did it, and thanks to you i'm getting out of here with this filly, you really are an Evil Pony, by murdering!" Sudoku Shouted.
Sudoku then tryed to run out of the basement, but then breaks a stair, making them both hit the floor again. "Oh yeah i forgot that, hehe!" Chuckled Pinkie Pie. Sudoku just ignored Pinkie Pie and climbed up with 1 hoof while the other is holding Axie. she successifly get's up and jumps past the broken step. then through the steel door. "Hey Pinkie Pie!" Shouted Sodoku. "What is it?" Replied Pinkie Pie. "Have a taste of your own medicine!" Sodoku slams the door shut, then jumps past the counter and out of sugarcube corner while still holding Axie..

Chapter 3 : The Worry

Sudoku Is worried after what to do with Axie. "Let's take you home little fella" Sudoku Trys to remember where her house is in Ponyville, Sudoku continues trotting and another pony bumped into her "Oh my. sorry if i got into your way, i need to get home to mix some oats and hay" a zebra looking pony said. "It's fine, and nice to meet another one of you ponys who actually talk to me!" Replied Sudoku. "It's very nice of you to, oh no, i have to go!" and the zebra looking pony dashed off. Sudoku looked on the floor and found out that the zebra pony has dropped some of his things. Sudoku took the bag and then continued trotting and then another pony bumped into her. "Well Excuse Me! look where your going next time!" Exclaimed a rainbow mane and tailed pony with a blue body. "I'm sick and tired of ponys doing that, I need to get home NOW! so move will ya?" Replied Sudoku. "Rainbow Dash! Hurry up or we'll be late!" shouted a pony that looked like she had a hat on. "You got it Applejack!" Rainbow Dash flyed to Applejack and then they trotted away. "Huh.. well Rainbow Dash and Applejack sound like strange names.." Sudoku thought to herself. She continued trotting but then, a filly got in her way. "Excuse me miss but, why is there a filly on your back?" The filly said nothing else but then Screamed loudly. "Ow! Don't ev-- Oh me mother.." Sudoku spotted alot of ponys crowding her, some with unarmed weapons. "So your trying to murder a filly eh!?" Shouted a pony. "You murderer!" Shouted another. "Ponys go to hell for that!" Sudoku couldn't take the shouting anymore, and then fell down to the floor, and Axie to...

Chapter 4 : The Prison (part 1)

Sudoku was having a bad dream, she was thinking that she was going to get murdered, but she woke up quick enough before it got worse. Sudoku thought she was in a torture chamber, but she wasn't, Instead she was in a prison cell all by her own "And what have i ever done wrong?" thought Sudoku, she got up from a bed and looked out of the cell window, spotting a medical room. "That must be where Axie is.." Sudoku thought again to herself. "Hey, Guard." Sudoku said, but the Guard didn't listen. "Yoohoo.." Sudoku began waving but the guard still didn't come. "Oi, Guard!" Shouted Sudoku, the guard heard her and trotted over to her cell. Sudoku asked."Why am i in here?" The guard replied. "Because you tryed to murder a filly, you've been sentenced for 10 years for doing so." Sudoku Exclaimed. "What!? 10 years? your joking aren't you?" the guard chuckled, then whispers "Listen, i know who you are ok? So don't push me to far and maybe i can help to get you out, did you ever notice when Pinkie Pie trapped you in the basement?" Sudoku was Excited. "Y-yes i do, i was just trying to help to save the filly, but i got dragged here.." The Guard and Sudoku frowned, and the guard replied "I know you were Pal, you did some fine and mighty work trying to pass her, i was hiding under the stairs because she got me down there, but then i found out that the best hiding spot would be hiding under the stairs" Then Sudoku was confused a little "Hmm.. strange, how did you get out? i'm guessing you climbed out with me after when i fell.." Then a bell started to ring, then the guard was reminded "Well, it's the Fitness training activity today, everyone's gonna get released.. I'll try and get you to your little filly friend ok? i need to check if he's fine first.." All of the cells opened except Sudoku's one, He watched as the Guard walked into the medical room. "I really want to meet that cute little filly so called Axie again.. and that brings some memories.. That Guard must've excaped whenever i did.." Sudoku thought, again. The Guard was trotting back over to Sudoku's Cell "Well, he's there.. but not awake just yet, may i say that when he was unconsious for some time now.. possibly been a day or to, but i don't know if he's alright though." The Guard Explained, then opened up Sudoku's Cell. Then she asked "Do you think i should go in to check?" and The Guard replied "If you want to, i'll just be on guard incase they won't let you" Sudoku nodded then Slowly Trotted to the Medical Room, jingling with excitement...

Chapter 5 : The Prison (part 2)

Sudoku spots 2 Doctor ponys, one testing out potions and the other one trying to figure out what's wrong with Axie. "Hey there, Any idea when he's back alive again?" One of the guards replied "Yes, he's uncons- Guards! It's the pony who was trying to murder this little filly! Help! help!" But the other guard didn't care, he looked as if he was deaf. Alot of guards rushed in, 5 on one side and 5 on the other. "Woh, calm down will you? I wasn't trying to murder her, i was trying to figure out what's wrong." The Doctor replied "Then how did she get unconsious then? go on, answer that you dumb meenie.." Sudoku was about to charge at the Doctor for calling him a meenie, but she didn't. "Because i found her injured, got a problem you stupid Doc.?" The Doctor shouted thoroughly "GET OUT! NO PONY CALLS ME NAMES!" Sudoku was just about to fall to the floor but 2 guards dragged her out, then Sudoku Blacked Out.. 10 minutes later he woke up, finding out she's back in her cell again. "Well, damn.. seems like Axie can only save me this time.." Sudoku thought. Shortly after The friendly Guard opened up Sudoku's Cell and put a TV on the other bed. "Go ahead Buddy, you shouldn't be in here.. you done nothing wrong because i saw how she became unconsious" Sudoku smiled at the guard and hugged him "Thanks umm.. i don't know your name.." The Guard Replies "I havn't told you? well it's Shoop" The Guard left the cell and closed it, then Sudoku looked at the TV and listened. "We've heard reports that a Mare with a yellow coloured body had attempted to murder a little filly with a green mane and tail, She has been sent for prison for 10 years on this occasion" "This'll make me so unpopular and.. and.. forget this, i can't live if I'm gonna get swarmed by ponys even though i didn't even try.. this is bad.. very bad.." thought Sudoku, she turned off the TV, and went to bed..

Chapter 6 : The Prison (part 3)

Sudoku woke up again after a bad dream, thinking that she would be killed after what she didn't do, Sudoku turned on the TV and began watching some old classic videos, until The Guard came back up. "I've got good news for you pal, your filly friend has woken up! isn't that good or what?" Sodoku was excited, then replied "scrap Good, say Godly! i missed him so damn much.." The Guard opened the cell "Go ahead, talk with her.. i won't take it on you to bad though if you get caught" The Guard trotted over to the medical room and Sudoku followed, then a prisoner pony said "Hey who's this wierdo?" another prisoner pony said "careful, she looks damn right deadly, so i would leave her alone if i were you" Sudoku trotted into the Medical Room, looking at Axie. "Hey you! Leave her alone you murdering scum!" the Docter said to Sudoku, and she replied "Since when did i murder then? now you answer that for me.." and so the Doctor sighed and said it once again "You tryed to murder a filly, she was unconsious on the back of you.. so don't try me miney" Axie butted in and said "Hey hey hey! what's with the murdering sentence?" Sudoku quickly replied "Everyone thinks that i was trying to murder you Axie.." and so the Docter Exclaimed "No, you clearly were trying to murder her!" Sudoku was about to fall to the ground, but Axie said to the Docter "listen to me miney, i was in a torture room, i woke up in there.. and then somepony threw Sudoku down there with us, we managed to find eachother and such, and so the pony was trying to torture me, and luckily my great pal Sudoku saved me before it got worse.. Sudoku you care to continue?" Sudoku was happy. "yes, of course, my hoofs slipped and you banged your head against the wall, made you unconsious didn't it?" The Doctor butted in just like Axie did. "B-but this couldn't have happened.. do you even know who the pony was?" Axie was the first to say. "We both didn't see who it was, but we managed to escape quickly.." and Sudoku joined in. "Exactly, otherwise i was bumping into ponys just trying to figure out what happened to you Axie" the Doctor butted in "And i've been so confused with all of this, Axie.. I agree with you, it is not Sudoku's Fault at all, I'll let everypony and guard know about this right away.. and so you'll be let free from this Prison, I also agree you didn't do anything now.." Sudoku turned to the Guard and smiled, then turned back. then Sudoku said to the Doctor "Thanks, me and Axie will try and stay out of danger from now on." The Doctor Smiled and then began helped the other Doctor with experiments. Sudoku took Axie and layed her on Sudoku's Back, then asked the guard. "Could you lead me to the exit please sir?" The Guard Smiled. "Of course i will Sudoku!" The Guard began to lead the way to the Exit, and when Sudoku got there, she opened the doors and felt the fresh air..

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