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Twilight Summons Up a Pounding

by Gold4tune

Chapter 7: Interlude: Fluttermac

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Fluttershy and Big Macintosh walked calmly down the street next to each other. The pegasus was still firmly pressed up against the farmer’s side, still slightly frightened from her old tormentors appearance.

Big Macintosh tucked Fluttershy’s head under his chin as he tenderly nuzzled her, trying to convey an air of protectiveness and safety. The last vestiges of his anger were slowly dissipating, his heart slowing down to a steady beat. When he saw his marefriend cowering he was a step away from kicking the ever living crap out of the bullies, but then Asmodeus had stepped in and diffused the situation in a much better way.

Big Mac bit his lip at the thought of the demon. Earlier that day Granny Smith had called him in from the fields to explain what he was, and what he was doing with his sister. His first instinct was to go all ‘overprotective brother’ on the archdemon, but Granny Smith had swiftly scolded him out of that course of action.

The rational side of his mind had swiftly kicked in after that, and he realized that what his sister did in the bedroom was not any of his business. And he couldn’t deny how much happier Applejack had been the last few days, it was good seeing her out of her funk, and as a brother, seeing her happy was all he really wanted.

The two ponies soon passed out of the town proper, heading down the path to Fluttershy’s cottage. The sounds of the night pervaded their ears, the songs of the night birds, the chirps of the crickets, and the creaks of the trees around them. Big Macintosh took a deep breath, the sweet scent of the mare next to him mingled with the crisp scent of the outdoors. He loved that combination, it always brought a smile to his face.

He felt Fluttershy shift slightly next to him, burrowing her head deeper into his chin.

“Thank you Big Macintosh,” she said softly, “for taking me out to dinner,” her gentle voice filling the night around them.

“Not a problem Miss Fluttershy, its always a privilege to see you happy,” the farmer replied, his deep voice sending small vibrations through the mare.

“I like seeing you too…” the mare replied, a blush suddenly creeping onto her cheeks.

Big Macintosh smiled as he felt the mare press closer against him, hiding her crimson cheeks in his fur.

“I’m sorry for letting those stallions get to you,” he said softly. Inwardly cursing himself for letting his marefriend get accosted like that.

“Oh umm, its okay,” Fluttershy replied, “they weren’t able to do anything before you and Asmodeus came back.”

Big Macintosh nodded as the bridge near Fluttershy’s house came into view. Their hooves clacked across it, and soon enough they had arrived at Fluttershy’s front door. Stepping onto her front step, Fluttershy opened her door and turned around to face the farmer.

“Thank you again, for dinner,” she said softly.

“T’was my pleasure,” the farmer replied with a nod of his head.

The pegasus suddenly darted forward and planted a quick kiss on Big Macintosh’s lips. It was little more than a peck, a ghosting of her presence, but it was sufficient to bring a roaring blush to both their faces. They both took a few steps backwards, Fluttershy doing her best to hide completely behind her mane, and Big Macintosh suddenly finding the ground very interesting.

It took a few moments, but Big Macintosh finally said,

“Well, good night Fluttershy.”

“Good night,” the pegasus said in a voice barely above a whisper.

With a polite nod, Big Macintosh turned around, but jsut as he was about to leave, FLuttershy’s voice rang out once again from behind him.

“You can come in for tea.. if you want to.”

Big Macintosh turned his head, and as soon as his eyes made contact with Fluttershy’s the pegasus let out an adorable “eep!” and tried her best to turn invisible. The farmer turned back around and gave his marefriend a gentle smile,

“I’d love to Fluttershy.”

The smile that spread across te mare’s face was the single hoofedly most beautiful thing that Big Macintosh had seen that night. Giving her a tender nuzzle as he passed, Big Macintosh stepped into the cottage.

The interior of the cottage bespoke its coziness, and while at first the sight of the animals running around was strange to the farmer, he had soon become accustomed to it. ANd the animals themselves had seemed to have reached an agreement with each other tha Big Macintosh was a welcome addition to their community. Seeing Fluttershy happy was something that all of them could get behind. Even Angel, Fluttershy;s notoriously protective pet had done so, and the two males had reached an understanding with the other.

“You can sit on the couch while you wait,” Fluttershy said as she made her way to the kitchen, “it will be a few minutes.”

The farmer nodded and seated himself on the couch, his large frame taking up a fair portion of it. He leaned his head back against the wall and closed his eyes has he waited for his marefriend to reappear.

His short rest was quickly disturbed though, as a small tune began to emanate from deeper in the house, Big Macintosh instinctually turned his head to hear it better. It was a simple tune, with no words, perhaps there was but Big Mac couldn’t make them out. He could hear his marefriends’ beautiful voice though, emanating the happy tune through the cottage.

A small smile crept onto Big Mac’s face as he listened to it. Heaving a deep sigh Big Macintosh finally had answered a question he had been asking himself for a long time.

He loved this mare.

Every quirk, nuance, and tendency this mare had, he loved.

A single tear traced its way down his cheek as his mind raced with this realization. Sure the two had been dating for a while now, but neither of them had said they loved the other before. They had both admitted that they had a crush on the other before they started dating, but once again, neither of them knew if it could really turn into love.

So they gave dating a shot, introducing each other to theother;s lives. Sneaking dinner’s lunches, and getaways when their respective schedules allowed them to. It was.. nice. The two seemed to just.. work Sure there were small fights, but both of them were so peaceful that they barely escalated to anything harmful.

` And here they were, 6 months later, still going strong.

A soft clinking broke the farmer’s rumination as Fluttershy reappeared in her living room, a tray of tea balanced on her back.

“Oh I’m sorry, i didn’t mean to wake you,” Fluttershy said worriedly.

Big Mac shook his head,

“No need to apologize, I wasn’t sleeping.”

“Oh, okay,” Fluttershy replied as she set the tray down of the coffee table in front of the couch. Her every move just made Big Mac’s heart leap, she seemed so delicate, and he wanted to do nothing else but curl around her and protect her from the world. But he knew that there was some fire under her, after all this was the mare that had stared down a dragon.

“Fluttershy,” Big Mac said softly, “can you come sit here, theres.. something I have ta tell you.

“Oh, ummm.. ok.” the pegasus replied as she sat on the couch next to the farmer.

The farmer took a deep breath, and looked Fluttershy straight in the eye,

“Fluttershy,” the stallion said, a small amount of emotion creeping into his usual stoic voice. The mare in question was looking at the stallion with a look of both fright and confusion as she heard the farmer’s tone.

“These past few months, have been perfect. And, I think I….” his voice trailed off as tears began to form in Fluttershy’s eyes, “And, I know, that.. I love you Fluttershy.”

For a few seconds, a few agonizing seconds, there was complete silence in the room, even the animals in the walls knew enough to not ruin this moment. And then a single sob escaped from Fluttershy.

With speed that Rainbow would be impressed with, Fluttershy shot forwards and pulled the farmer into a crushing hug. She sobbed into his shoulder as she held onto him in a death grip.

“Is. th..this a dream?” she asked in between sobs.

Big Macintosh wrapped his hooves around the shaking mare and nestled his face into her mane,

“No, this. this is not a dream.”

A fresh wave of sobs racked Fluttershy’s body as the farmer’s fur grew wet with her tears.

“Is something wrong?” Big Mac asked, worried about the answer.

He could feel the mare shake her head against his shoulder. She pulled back, and Big Macintosh could see a beaming smile shining through her bloodshot eyes,

“No… I.. love you too.”

The silence in the room was once again deafening, before Big Mac leaned forward and pressed his lips against hers.

Fluttershy eeped, but did not pull away. The duo’s lips intertwined in an ancient dance as Fluttershy's wings began to rise behind her, fluttering slightly as the kiss grew more and more passionate.

The farmer leaned forward, slowly but surely pressing Fluttershy deeper into the couch. The pegasus whimpered as she found herself on her back, the bulk of the farmer settling on top of her. For a brief moment she waited for panic to set in, but a few tense moments later there was nothing. Fluttershy visibly relaxed as she realized her worries were in vain, how could she possibly be afraid of this?

Their kiss was not as wild as the ones Asmodeus tended to give out, but nonetheless, it was perfect.

“Big Mac,” Fluttershy said softly, “we can umm… go to my bedroom if you want,” her blush was so intense it was two steps from acquiring sentience.

The farmer leaned back and looked at the mare with wide eyes, an unspoken question passed between them. Fluttershy suddenly found the farmer’s chest very interesting as she nodded slightly. Big Mac felt the excitement welling up inside him, he was going to get laid tonight! Contrary to what many ponies believed, he and Fluttershy had not consummated their relationship yet, neither of them had worked up the courage to bring up the topic to the other. But now, that bridge had been crossed.

Big Mac got off the couch and carefully swept Fluttershy onto his back, who let out a quiet eep as she wrapped her hooves around his bulky neck. But soon enough she giggled softly,

“Giddy up!”

Big Mac chuckled, and started walking up the stairs towards the mare’s bedroom. But as soon as he made it to the second story he paused and look over his shoulder,

“Errm, Fluttershy? which way?”

The pegasus let out a small giggle and pointed towards the right.

Smiling sheepishly, the farmer followed Fluttershy’s directions and moments later opened the door to the bedroom. The room itself was simple, reflecting the mare’s lifestyle. A few pictures were scattered around on shelves, some of her as a filly, her family, etc. The bed wasn’t the largest, but it was more than enough.

Walking over to the bedside, Bic Mac waited patiently as Fluttershy dismounted him, oofing slightly as she hit the mattress. Big Macintosh turned to see the most amazing thing he had seen in his entire life,.

Fluttershy was spread on the bed on her back, her hind legs spread to show her delicate flower. Even now, a small trickle of her nectar was escaping. Her forelegs were held shyly to her chest. Her face was half hidden by her mane, but the blush on her face was still easily observed. Her wings were spread out on the bed, stiff in arousal.

The bed creaked slightly as Big Macintosh got up onto it, coming to rest over Fluttershy’s form. The pegasus meekly smiled up at him as she wrapped her hooves around his neck and pulled him down to her. With a smile, the bulky farmer settled his weight onto her once again.

Big Macintosh made a move to wrap his hooves around her, but Fluttershy stopped his hooves with her own. She looked embarrassedly into the farmer’s chest as she guided his hooves down her side, until they were directly over her plot.

Hesitantly, Big Macintosh lightly squeezed the mare’s flanks, Fluttershy letting out an adorable little eep as he did so. Seeing no adverse reaction, the farmer squeezed once again, harder this time.

Now, Big Macintosh would never say this in such a blunt way, but by Celestia Fluttershy’s plot was amazing. It was soft, bubbly, and perfectly squeezable. It molded around his hooves as he pressed into the supple flesh.

The pegasus let out cute little maons as she felt her flank being fondled. She wrapped her hooves around Big Mac in an attempt to pull more of his weight onto her. The two of them joined lips once again. It was soft, slow, and gentle, the two of them simply savoring the taste of the other.

But soon enough her curiosity got the best of her and she began exploring the farmer's body with her hooves. He was deliciously muscular, the thick bands of muscles clenching and unclenching as she roamed over them. The sheer power in his limbs was staggering, but yet he was being nothing but gentle with her.

"Big Macintosh," Fluttershy whimpered.

The farmer drew back and looked down on the Pegasus. Her face had a distinctly red tone to it, whether from blush or arousal or a combination of the two Big Mac had no idea.

"Yes?" he asked.

Fluttershy lightly pushed at his shoulders.

"Umm.... Get on your back. If you want to that is."

Big Mac raised an eyebrow, but complied with his marefriend's desire. He rolled off of her, landing on his side with a soft thump.

Fluttershy immediately, and with surprising assertiveness, dove on top of the farmer. She started nibbling on his ears, and Big Mac's breath hitched in his throat as his sensitive flesh was toyed with.

"Rarity told me to do this when we first umm… had sex,” the mare's voice turned into a squeak as she said those last two words.

Big Mac’s brow furrowed in confusion, but his unspoken question was answered soon enough as the mare began to slink downwards. She trailed love bites and suckles all along his neck, and her pace didn’t slow in the slightest as she reached his barrel, if anything it increased.

Fluttershy let out a quiet eep as the farmer’s member suddenly came into view. It was only halfway out of its sheath, but its length was already something some stallions would be envious of. It was thick, and pulsing with the stallion’s need. A heavy musk was already starting to rise from it, the scent was already causing Fluttershy’s nethers to drip more profusely.

She leaned forward and planted a small kiss on the flared head, causing Big Mac to grunt in reaction. Fluttershy giggles and reached a hoof forwards. She gently grabbed it in her hooves and began to idly stroke it, watching in awe as more and more of it emerged from its hiding place.

Already a trail of precum was leaking from the tip. It trickled down the stallion’s member until it ran into the pegasus’ hoof where it was smeared over the rest of the cock to act as lubrication. Gradually, the cock was covered in a light sheen of juices, and its scent was positively maddening. Fluttershy’s stroking increased as time went on, her blue eyes open in awe as her hoof went up and down.

Big Mac was squirming slightly on the bed, the feeling of the mare’s hoof was amazing. Her touch was delicate, and years of caring for animals had left her with alot of experience with using her hooves. The sense of pleasure wasn’t overwhelming nor titanic, it was merely a soft trickle. But with that it was teasing, and Big Mac started to shift on the bed, silently begging for more.

“Oh my,” she said softly as the cock was finally at its full length, “its so big.”

It looked delicious.

Big Mac suddenly froze as he felt a tongue press against the bottom of his member. His entire body clenched as he felt it drags its way upwards, leaving a trail of saliva in its wake. It soon reached the head of the cock ,but immediately went down for more.

Over and over Fluttershy licked the cock in front of her, much like she would do a lollipop. The heady taste of precum was flooding her mouth, and she was eager for more. Her licks gradually became suckles and kisses as she made her way up, little suckling noises escaping from her mouth.

Her entire body was screaming at her for more, a request she happily agreed to. Fluttershy lifted herself slightly so she could bring her mouth to the flared head, where a pool of precum was waiting for her. She eagerly extended her tongue a lapped it up, relishing in the feeling of the stallion squirming underneath her.

Her tongue danced to and fro across the head of the cock, drawing out more precum from the tip. Big Mac, for his part, was groaning loudly. In his entire life he had never felt anything so amazing as what this mare was doing to him right now. His cock was on fire, every inch of was demanding a hole to fill.

He looked down at Fluttershy, who was giving him a demure smile in return. She seemd to be in control of herself, but keeping her composure, especially with the fire that was beginning to burn between her legs, was one of the hardest things she had ever done. The pegasus ahd no idea waht was coming over her, shoulder should be worried, or nervous, or scared, or something at the current situation, but that was not the case, all she wanted was more.

Fluttershy did her best at a sultry grin as she once again licked up teh side of Big Mac’s cock, her eyes never leaving him as she did so.

“Do you like this?” Fluttershy asked as she gave him another lick, her voice low.

“Eeyup,” Big Mac groaned out.

The arousal flooding his veins at the moment was staggering. Never in a million years did he think he could have possibly been this horny. Lonely nights in his room with a magazine held nothing to what this mare was doing to him right now.

Fluttershy gave him a small smile, and then opened her mouth wide. Big Mac watched in disbelief as the mare drew closer to the head of his cock. With a final lick of her lips, Fluttershy lunged forward and took the first few inches of the farmers cock into her mouth.

The feeling was indescribable, the mare’s mouth was nothing short of perfect. Big Mac could feel Fluttershy’s lips around his shaft, and her tongue was still licking him inside her mouth. The farmer instinctually arched his back, trying to conquer more of the mare’s mouth with his hungry cock.

Fluttershy giggled as she moved one of her hooves to hold the stallion down, her other swiftly moved to the titanic length of cock not in her mouth. She shifted slightly on the bed, bringing her mouth more in line with the Big Mac’s member.

With a final, shuddering breath, Fluttershy began to move downwards. Slowly, ever so slowly, the massive member piercing her lips began to disappear into her. She could feel Big Mac’s heartbeat through the cock, surprisingly slow and steady in light to the current situation. Her mouth was spread wide, and lips stretched taught as she ran her tongue over the length of cock in her mouth.

Big Mac was currently straining not to thrust up into the warm mouth enveloping him. The sensation of Fluttershy’s demure mouth struggling to contain his member was nothing short of pure ecstasy. Her cheeks were bellowed out with the sheer size of what exactly she was taking into her mouth.

The heat and wetness that was slowly wrapping around his cock was addictive, and Big Mac could only squirm on the bed in response. Eventually, Fluttershy had swallowed all she could, only being able to take about half the farmer’s impressive length into her mouth. She started to bob up and down as sucking noises began to emanate from her mouth in tandem with groans from Big Mac’s.

Her mouth felt like a vice it was so tight around his cock, and the friction of her sucking was quickly beginning to churn the cum in his balls. Her tongue seemed to have a mind of its own, darting to and fro so fast that it felt like it was everywhere at once. Little dribbles of saliva dripped down Big Mac’s cock, covering it further in a sheen of sex.

Up and down and up and down the mare went. The suction in her mouth was literally milking the cum from the stallion’s balls. Her mane was dancing to and fro, framing her face in a pink halo.

While not the most beautiful sight that Big Mac had ever seen, it was surely the sexiest.

The farmer was writhing on the bed now, the sheer amount of pleasure assailing him was unbelievable.

Without warning, Big Mac felt his orgasm hit him. Fluttershy was the first to notice the results though.

The head flared in her mouth, filling up every crevice that wasn’t already filled with cock. And then cum started blasting against the back of her throat, The amount of the first shot of the hot, thick fluid was staggering, so much so that it felt like the stallion was shooting it out like a firehouse.

Fluttershy quickly found herself needing to swallow before even the first shot was over. The salty taste of the cum flooded her senses, until her entire world turned into the sensation of it filling her mouth.

Big Mac instinctually moved his hooves to the back of Fluttershy’s head, holding he to his aching member as his semen erupted out of him. Great pulses of pure orgasmic energy cascaded through his entire body. Every inch of his being was crying out in pure and utter joy.

Over and over Fluttershy swallowed, until her belly felt like it was going to burst with the sheer amount of cum forced into it.

Eventually, the deluge died down, and Big Macintosh was left a panting, quivering wreck, he felt as if he just tried to harvest an entire orchard by himself.

Fluttershy crawled back up on top of him, bringing her face to his. She gave him a small smile and then brought her lips to his in a gentle kiss. Big Mac could still taste traces of his own seed on the mare, it wasn’t the most pleasant thing he ever tasted, but he was sure as Tartarus going to show his appreciation.

“What was that Fluttershy?” he asked as the kiss broke, “not that I’m complaining.”

The pegasus suddenly blushed,

“Oh, ummm.. well. Rarity said that doing that will make the stallion last longer for when…” her voice trailed off as the blush on her doubled in intensity.

Big Mac pulled the mare into a deep hug.

“Thank you Fluttershy, for that. I’ll return the favor someday.”

“That would be nice,” Fluttershy mumbled into his shoulder.

Big Mac cleared his throat,

“So… how do you want to do this?”

Fluttershy glanced up at him, meeting his eyes for only a second before her blush returned with a vengeance as she buried her face into his chest.

Big Mac opened his mouth t say something, but the pegasus on top of him suddenly rolled to her side, dragging him with her so their positions were now reversed.

“Like this… If thats okay with you,” the mare said softly.

Big Mac smiled and leaned down, giving her a gentle kiss as he shifted to a more comfortable position.

Fluttershy let out an eep as she felt the head of the farmer’s cock brush against her inner thigh, scant inches from her dripping core. She looked down her chest and looked down in between them.

Big Mac’s cock, thoroughly covered in a mixture of saliva and semen, was hovering over her dripping snatch, almost like a predator poised to strike. No… Fluttershy quickly corrected herself, it was nothing like that.

Fluttershy took a deep breath and wrapped her hooves around Big Mac.

“I’m ready,” she said simply.

The farmer nodded and reached a hoof down, carefully placing the head of his member at the mare’s entrance. Big Mac could feel the heat emanating from Fluttershy’s core, the moisture dripping from it. Her nether lips seemed to be kissing his rod, silently begging him to do his ancient duty.

“Slowly,” Fluttershy said in a voice barely above a whisper.

“Eeyup,” Big Mac responded.

And then with a deep breath, he pushed forward.

Big Mac could feel the mare’s nether lips spread around his lower head, a flood o warmth and juices immediately covered his cock. Both ponies gasped as the first sensations hit them. To Big Mac, even with only the head of his cock in, Fluttershy was crushingly tight. He could feel her inner walls rippling around him, doing their best to suck him in farther. To Fluttershy, Big Mac was huge. She could feel her tunnel beginning to stretch around the massive member inside her.

With a groan, Big Mac pushed forward once again, and another few inches of his cock slid inside the mare. He could feel Fluttershy shuddering under him as she was forced to spread around him, but thankfully he saw no indications of pain. Fluttershy wrapped her legs around him tighter, holding him in a death grip as he speared her.

Again Big Macintosh eased forward, slipping more and more of his cock into the mare beneath him.

Fluttershy’s entire body was stretched taught, the feeling of being stretched to such an extent was orgasmic. The member was already so deep within her she could feel the stallion’s heartbeat reverberating through her entire body, and there was still a sizeable length to go. Big Mac started rocking back and forth, slowly slipping his cock in and out of the mare. Every time he thrust forward he pushed a little more of his cock into the pegasus.

Fluttershy was letting out the most adorable mews and eeps as she was slowly fucked by the stallion. Every inch of her soul seemed to be screaming for more. She suddenly let out a low keening moan as the head of Big Mac’s cock hit a particularly sensitive spot inside her.

Eventually, after an excruciatingly pleasurable penetration Big Mac hilted inside Fluttershy, his balls pressing into the mare below him. Both of the ponies roze, and for a few minutes they just savored the sensation of their joining. Their lips seemed to gravitate towards each other as they both tried to share their ecstasy with their lover.

This time though, Fluttershy slipped her tongue into Big Mac’s mouth, the lust inside her giving her a confidence booster. The farmer welcomed the mare’s tongue with relish, and his tongue swiftly shot forward to meet the other.

Groaning into the kiss, Big Macintosh pulled his cock out, a veritable flood of Fluttershy’s nectar covered his cock and dripped to the bed below. The mare moaned at the crushing feeling of emptiness that suddenly appeared. She bucked her hips upward, doing her best to draw Big Mac’s glorious cock back inside her.

The farmer happily obliged her, and thrust forward until he was completely hilted inside her once again. He could feel her tunnel stretching willingly around him, rippling wildly as Fluttershy moaned out her contentment.

“Ohh… Big Mac..” Fluttershy said softly as the farmer began to thrust in and out in a slow and steady rhythm.

A soft thump thump thump signified Big Mac’s balls impacting Fluttershy’s flank. The mare herself was bouncing with every thrust. The squelching from their combined sexes was playing a glorious harmony to the moans they were sharing into the others mouth.

Their hooves began to caress the other, roaming up and down in their quest to map out the other body. Big Mac, unsurprisingly, focused on Fluttershy’s plot. Even a gentlecolt like himself couldn’t resist its allure. Fluttershy, for her part, couldn’t resist the farmer’s muscular sides. Years of Applebucking had given him a physique that many mares had dreams about, and she was taking full advantage of it.

Their pace wasn’t intense no record breaking, but it was perfect. The two of them savored the feeling of the other, the sheer passion in their lovemaking was something poets could write epics about. It wasn’t long before each of them had small trails of tears coming from their eyes.

This slow pace went of for an incalculable amount of time, neither of them felt the need to keep track. They eventually reached their respective orgasms together, holding each other tight as spams of pleasure rocked their bodies.

Big Mac hilted himself fully in Fluttershy as ropes of semen splattered against Fluttershy’s inner walls. His earlier orgasm did little to diminisg the volume of cum in this one, as he rapidly filled up the mare’s womb to the brim. And before long it was being forced out the mare’s tunnel around his cock, spilling to the sheets below.

Fluttershy let out a low continuous “eeeeeppppp” as she came around Big Macintosh’s cock. She could feel her inner walls clamping down on the rod spreading them as the waves of pleasure cascaded over her. Her soul and body screamed in joy as she felt herself being pumped full of her lover’s cum. The warmth of the gooey liquid spread through her entire body, a wave of relaxation followed in its wake.

Soon enough, their orgasms dies down and left two exhausted ponies in their wake.

Big Macintosh rolled of Fluttershy, hitting the bed next to her with a thump. The pegasus immediately turned to her side and cuddled up against the farmer, mewling in her happiness. Big Mac looked down at the mare, and the smile on her face told him all he needed to know. With a subtle motion he pulled some, surprisingly, dry blankets over them.

He turned on his side to be face to face with Fluttershy and pulled her close to him. Chests touching, they shared one more kiss goodnight before snuggling into each other as much as possible.

“I love you,” Fluttershy said softly.

“I love you too,” Big Macintosh replied.

Author's Notes:

Alright, both Interludes done! I know this one wasn't as intense as the other clop scenes in the story, but I'm proud of it. And if you didn't like this mushy clop, there will be some more of the other stuff later so please don't get to annoyed.

Either way, I have a few questions I want to ask you readers, so if you have time to answer any or all of them I would greatly appreciate it. First of all, on a scale form 1 to 10, how much of a Gary Stu is Asmodeus? If you think he is one, do you still like him? and do you think it impacts the story in a negative way? Secondly, are you reading this for the story? clop? or both? And lastly, what clop scene, in your opinion, was the best?

I'm just curious to know what is going on in your head as I'm really curious. As I said before, I thrive on comments so please do leave some. Next chapter should be up sometime next week, maybe by the weekend if I can arrange my schedule so I have the time.

Gold4tune out

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