Mistress Do Well: Submission
by milesprower06

The Offer

“Hey there, Twilight. About time you got here.” Applejack greeted the alicorn as she stepped inside the sparsely populated bar. It was a Friday night, and they wanted to have these drinks together before the more lively crowds started to arrive.

“Sorry I'm late, I was finishing up a book report,” Twilight explained her tardiness as she walked up to the table where Applejack, Pinkie, and Rainbow were seated, each enjoying a drink.

“That's alright, Fluttershy's running a bit behind too,” Applejack told her. As soon as Twilight was seated, a waiter was there ready to take her order.

“What can I get for you, ma'am?” he asked, ready with a quill and order pad.

“A non-alcoholic apple cider for me, thanks.”

With a quick jot on the pad, the waiter was off to the bar. He returned two minutes later with a mug of cider.

“There she is,” Rainbow said, motioning towards the door, where Fluttershy had just come in. Rainbow waved to get her attention.

“Oooh, what a pretty necklace, Fluttershy!” Pinkie exclaimed. As she got closer to the table the others noticed that she did indeed have a brilliant white gold heart pendant necklace on. Fluttershy gave a sheepish smile.

“Thanks, Pinkie.”

The waiter came and took Fluttershy's drink order. Once all five of them had either new drinks or refills, the conversations began. It was mostly lighthearted talk, with Fluttershy looking around occasionally, checking to see if anypony was eying her. When it got darker, and the rowdier crowds began to file in for a night of partying, they started to wrap things up, but not before Applejack got up.

“Well, before we put an end to this little get-together, I just wanted to do something. A toast, to Rainbow. The pony who brought us all back together. A pony whose undying loyalty and love is more than we deserve.”

With those words, AJ raised her glass, followed by the other three, each giving Rainbow a smile. She gave an awkward smile back, and downed the last half of her drink all at once before putting her glass on the table, giving a short hiccup.

“Well, gang. This place is getting rather lively, what do you say we head out for the night?” Rainbow asked.

“Yeah, sounds good to me, the music is making it hard to hear.” Twilight agreed. They went out to the front of the bar, where the sun was setting in the sky, shared a few hugs, and everypony went their separate ways, with Pinkie of course heading back inside to party it up with the rest of the bar patrons.

“Hey, Rainbow, I'm gonna swing by Quills and Sofas and pick up some more quills before they close. Meet you back at the library?”

“Yeah, sure thing, Twi.”

Rainbow gave the alicorn a peck on the cheek, and turned towards the library, while Twilight galloped to Quills and Sofas, to try and get there before they closed for the night.

Fluttershy wanted to kick herself for her naivety, as she got ready for bed, about a half-hour after leaving the bar.

It had taken a lot of courage to wear her necklace out in public, so ideally she wanted to find her secret admirer as a reward for that courage. But of course, it was only one hour in a bar. As she stood in front of her dresser mirror, she admitted to herself the real reason she wanted to find them tonight; deep down, she wanted it to be one of-

Knock knock knock.

Opal's ears perked up at the sound coming from the front door downstairs. Wondering who would be visiting her at this hour, she left her room, went downstairs, and opened the door to greet them.

Applejack met her with a gentle, nervous smile.

“Evenin' Fluttershy. Hope I'm not here too late. I... I just wanted to come over, since I saw you got the necklace I sent ya.”

Fluttershy's heart skipped a beat, as Applejack's cheeks began to blush red.

“Applejack? You... You sent...?”

“I... I didn't say anything at the bar, because I know how ya are, and I didn't want to embarrass you or nothin'. But the truth is, I've had feelings for you for quite awhile, sugarcube. Even before you asked Rarity out all that time ago. When you did, I decided to respect it, and kept my distance. When all that insanity happened last year, I figured you wouldn't want to get that close to anypony ever again. But when Rainbow brought us all back home, and I saw how close she and Twilight were getting, I just... I had to take a chance. That's why I sent ya that necklace anonymously. I was afraid of what your reaction would be. Then when I saw you wear it tonight, I figured you were looking for your secret admirer.”

“It was Rainbow's idea,” Fluttershy said, giving a small smile.

“Well, I'm here, if you'll have me.”

The next few seconds seemed like hours. Then Fluttershy burst forward, throwing her front legs around Applejack, hugging her tight, on the verge of tears.

“I... I was so afraid that it... It would be someone I wasn't sure I could love. I'm so glad it was you. Thank you so much, Applejack...”

Applejack smiled, relieved as she returned the hug.

“I love you, Fluttershy.”

They stood there in the front door, holding each other for several moments. Afterward, Fluttershy broke the hug and took a step back.

“Would... Would you like to come in?”

Applejack nodded with a smile, stepping inside. She took a seat on the couch while Fluttershy quickly ,made some tea, and brought it out. She gave a cup to Applejack, and sat down next to her with her own cup. Taking a sip, Fluttershy cleared her throat.

“Listen, AJ. Before we get too far down the road, I have to say something, so it doesn't derail everything if I save it for later.”

Applejack listened intently, as Fluttershy ran her hoof around the rim of her teacup.

“That whole mess a year ago... I want you to know it hasn't changed... What I like. I just wanted you to know that... That I still like BDSM...”

Applejack took a drink of her tea, wondering how to reply.

“I'd say that's just fine, sugarcube. If it's still part of who you are, you shouldn't deny yourself.”

This answer gave Fluttershy a smile, and a warm feeling in her stomach.

“So... So that means that you wouldn't mind...?”

“Well, it depends. I mean, sure, I can be the marefriend who ties you up every now and then. But make no mistake, sweetheart; I am still very ashamed of what we participated in down there. Not even in a role play, will I ever hit you or hurt you in any way.”

“Thanks, Applejack. I wouldn't want to take it that far anyway. Not after what happened.”

She finished her tea before continuing.

“Would... Would you like to stay with me tonight?”

Her new marefriend gave a warm smile.

“If you want me to, hun.”

The pegasus gave a soft nod, and proceeded to get up from the couch, leaving her teacup on the coffee table. The farmer followed suite, and got up and followed her to the stairs. Shutting off the lights, they went up to her room, where Fluttershy opened the door, trying her best to look like she wasn't on pins and needles.

AJ noticed it almost right away, but Fluttershy tried anyway to get over to the bed and subtly take the coil of rope that had been laying on her comforter and slip it under the far side of the bed.

“Were you gonna do a little playin' tonight?” Applejack asked her, as Fluttershy froze, half-bent over the bed in her attempt to slip the rope out of sight. She came back up, cheeks beet red.

“Well... I... Yeah.”

“Do you still want to?” Applejack asked plainly.

Fluttershy was a bit taken aback at Applejack's lack of surprise in her first question, and her followup. Maybe she was half-expecting to see something like that when she had been asked if she would want to role play.

She nodded sheepishly, bringing the rope back up to the bed. Applejack walked over to the bed and hopped up. She took the rope expertly in her tail, and uncoiled it.

“Alright, give me your hooves, darlin'.”

Still blushing like mad, Fluttershy offered the workhorse her two front hooves. Applejack draped the first length of rope over the pegasus' stretched out hooves, going under and coming back around 5 times before knotting it off, securely binding her front legs together. As there was quite a bit of length remaining, she brought the rest down to her midsection, quickly throwing it around her wings, and tying them down.

“And there we go. I don't think you'll be going anywhere tonight.”

Fluttershy was shaking with anticipation, and AJ noticed this quickly.

“Ya alright, hun? Need me to loosen anything?”

Fluttershy quickly shook her head.

“No, no, it's not that. I just don't want to move too fast, that's all. Do you think maybe we could, well, just cuddle tonight?”

It was then that Applejack admitted to herself that Fluttershy looked pretty cute tied up like that. Well, realistically speaking, she was cute in anything. She smiled and nodded at the request.

“Hun, I don't want to rush you into anything. Of course. That's more than I was honestly expecting tonight.”

With that, Applejack helped guide Fluttershy down into a laying position on the bed, her back to her. Then, having her properly situated, she went to go turn off the light, then returned to the bed, covering them both with the comforter, and wrapping her front hooves around the bound Pegasus, snuggling into her.

Twilight came trotting into the library just as the sun disappeared below the horizon. She set her bag of new quills down on her desk before heading upstairs.

“Rainbow, I'm back!” She announced.

She ascended the stairs, and when she laid eyes on the bed, she wasn't sure if she was dreaming or not.

There sat Rainbow, nervously looking at her, ears flat against her head. Directly in front of her, on the bed, was the bondage equipment that she had used on her the night before. The bridle, bit, wing belt, spreader bar, and strap-on. These items alone would not have concerned the alicorn, were it not for the item currently around Rainbow's neck.

It was the collar from the day she was rescued. 'BITCH' was prominently engraved on the tag.

“Rainbow? What...?”

“I.... I thought we could switch it up tonight.” Rainbow said, her voice soft and submissive.

Twilight stared, not quite sure how to react. So many thoughts were colliding in the middle of her brain.

“After... After everything that's happened, you expect me to-”

“I did it for you.” Rainbow interrupted plainly.

“Yeah, but...”

Rainbow had her there. They had never explicitly agreed that this would be one-sided. Still, part of Twilight hoped that she was dreaming.

“Twilight, please?”

Twilight closed her eyes, and swallowed. She couldn't deny her. It wouldn't be fair.

“No safe word. Just ask me to stop. Turn around.” Twilight said, opening her eyes and walking towards the bed. Rainbow did as she was told and turned towards the head of the bed, facing the wall.

Twilight's horn lit up as she magically took hold of all the straps and restraints. First up was the belt for the wings, which she promptly fastened tightly before she got a chance to get excited. Once that was done, she fit the bridle on, opting to not include the bit.

She noticed Rainbow started to shiver a little.

“Are you alright?” Twilight asked softly, getting a nod in return.

“I'm fine, keep going.”

As she tried to imagine why in Equestria Rainbow was asking her to do this, she was also trying to keep her own dreadful memories at the farthest corner of her mind. When she took hold of the spreader bar, she couldn't hold them back any longer, as she remembered how she had tried to treat Dash with some kindness in the basement, before Rarity came down and took control. With a shudder of her own, she took a deep breath and gently got the bar in between her legs and got the leather straps at each end securely fastened. She heard her wings strain against the leather as she got the last item for herself, the strap-on. She forced her reluctance to the back of her mind, and got it securely fastened. With that done, she climbed up on the bed.

The moment Twilight's weight began to settle on Rainbow, and she felt the tip of the strap-on poke at her, something in her mind screamed at her.

No.

“Stop,” she gasped. “Please stop.”

Twilight immediately pushed off of Rainbow, her horn lighting up, and within half a second, all of Rainbow's restraints were removed, and placed at the side of the bed.

“Are you alright?” Twilight immediately asked.

Rainbow remained on the bed, in her presenting position, shivering.

“Rainbow...?”

With a sharp intake of breath, the pegasus began to quietly weep.

“I'm sorry, Rainbow. Are you okay?”

“It's not you... It's me.” Rainbow whimpered.

“What do you mean?”

“I want this. I know... I know I want this. I trust you. I know I do. And...”

Rainbow took a deep breath, trying unsuccessfully to get her tears under control.

“I need this. Applejack's toast tonight really hurt inside. My mind has been tormenting me at night. I've been feeling more and more guilty the past couple weeks, and a dream last night was the tipping point. I got the Cloak of the New Moon about a month after I left. Trixie sold it to me. Once I was anonymous, I worried less about being recognized, so I had more time to think about other things. I did an awful lot of crying when I was out there, alone. I lied to myself that all of it was because of what you all did to me, but no. Now that I look back, and now that my mind has been looking at things a bit differently...” Rainbow paused, once again taking a deep breath.

“I was angry at myself. Angry over what a terrible friend I had become. I had wronged all of you, and part of me still feels that even though you all overreacted, that I still haven't been punished for the things I did. The truth is, I was the first one to no longer be worthy of my Element of Harmony.”

Twilight took several moments to process what Rainbow was telling her.

"You still feel guilty that you weren't loyal, even though we overreacted?”

"That pony you punished in the basement... That was the Rainbow with the disastrous ego. By the time I was broken, your project had completely fallen apart. I was so wrong, I didn't care about anypony but myself. I know Rarity went too far... but I still have to be punished. Somepony has to hold me accountable for what I did."

Twilight gulped, ready to attempt the idea that had just come to mind.

“Are you absolutely sure?” she asked her marefriend. Rainbow slowly nodded.

"Alright then, I'll hold you accountable.”

Rainbow turned to look at her, tears pricking her eyelids.

“Wait right there.”

With that, Twilight left the bedroom and trotted down the stairs. Rainbow could hear her open the basement door, but nothing beyond that. Her curiosity was peaked as her heart continued to ache, wondering what her marefriend had in mind.

Twilight descended the stairs to the basement, and went over to a chest near the back wall. Her heart pounded as she magically unlocked it and opened the lid.

That had been the major flaw in the plan a year ago. The egotistical shell around Rainbow convinced her that she had done no wrong. By the time that shell had been broken, the ponies who were still interested in helping her had become too afraid of Rarity's sadism. If she had been wandering Equestria all this time, thinking she was still at fault...

At last, Twilight could do this the right way, on her terms, free from the influence of others who may have other goals. The fact that she wanted this meant that she could do this out of love, in a matter of minutes, and not days.

Even though Rainbow was sure, Twilight wasn't, but she was willing to give this a try. She knew all too well how guilt could eat away at you, and the last thing she wanted was for her marefriend to still feel guilty about the things that happened over a year ago, and if this could help melt those feelings away, she was willing to give it a shot.

Rainbow sniffled, as she was nearly shivering with anticipation. The next five minutes stretched out considerably, but then she heard the basement door open, and hoofsteps slowly come up the stairs.

"T-twi?" Rainbow asked, and then her eyes widened, as her marefriend slowly came into view above the stairs.

The first thing she saw was the hat. Then the masked face and eyes. Then the cape.

"You've been a disloyal pony, Rainbow Dash, and now you'll pay for it,” Twilight began. She was fully clad in her Mare Do Well costume, her voice was only muffled by the mask, and not magically altered like it was down in the basement.

“You still have your safe word, but you won't use it, because you know you deserve to be punished for the way you treated us. You can ask me to stop if you absolutely have to, but I urge you to accept your punishment tonight. You'll feel less guilty about the way you treated me, Scootaloo, Fluttershy, and the others..."

Dash gulps and nods. "I... I do need to be punished, by somepony I trust, who knows where to draw the line..."

"Then don't speak again unless spoken to," Twilight ordered, revealing a strap from under her cape, and giving Dash's right flank a hard whip, getting a yelp out of the pegasus. She went over to the windowsill, where Rainbow's Candle of Silence sat. That had been quite clever of her for using such an enchantment. But the minute the magic limiter came off, Twilight knew what it was. Now it was going to be used against her. She lit her horn, and the flame sparked to life. With that step done, she turned back to Rainbow.

"Here's what's going to happen. You're going to tell me how you wronged one of your best friends, and I'm going to administer the proper punishment. You will count each one as they come, and then we'll move on to the next one. Understood?”

Rainbow nodded, shifting her weight, and presenting her rear again.

“Begin.”

“I forgot to feed Fluttershy's animals while she was away. *crack* Ah! One... *crack* Two... *crack* Three... *crack* Four... *crack* Five!”

There came a pause in the lashes.

“And what happened?”

“Her animals ran away. *crack* Yahh! One! *crack* Two... *crack* Three! *crack* Four! *crack* Five...”

Dash was gritting her teeth by now, fighting against the pain.

“Next.”

“I... I started ignoring Pinkie's party invitations when they came for me in the mail. *crack* One! *crack* Two! *crack* Three! *crack* Four! *crack* Five!!!”

She was at 15 now, and those hadn't been as bad, having steeled herself first, preparing for the strikes.

“And what happened?”

“I... I forgot her birthday party!”

Rainbow once again tensed up, and wondered what was going on when nothing came. Her ears twitched, and Twilight waited, letting Rainbow shiver in anticipation.

*crack*

“Fffff- One! *crack* Two!! *crack* Three! *crack* Four!! *crack* F-five!!!”

Tears were now pricking her eyes, and her flanks began to show the red lash marks.

“Next.”

Rainbow sniffled, trying her best to stop the tears from coming any farther before replying.

“I didn't set the correct weather pattern above Sweet Apple Acres when I was in a hurry! *crack* Ahhhahhh!!! One! *crack* Two!! *crack* Three!! *crack* F-f-four!!! *crack* Fiiiiiiive!!!”

The tears were flowing. She was crying now.

“And what happened?” Twilight asked, seemingly unfazed by her marefriend's quaking rear legs, her-beet-red behind, nor the tears and whimpers coming from up front.

“O-o-other pegasi had to pick up my slack, and correct the weather. Part of her south field got too much heat and got sp-spoiled. *crack* Onnnnne! *crack* T-t-two!! *crack* Th-three!!! *crack* Ow ow ow, four!!! *crack* Fiiiive!!!”

Absolutely bawling by this point, Rainbow couldn't remain in her presenting position, and fell to her back knees. For a split second, she fought through the burning on her flanks, and realized that she had not even come close to using her safe word. She couldn't believe it, this was working.

“Next.”

Taking a deep breath and steadying herself, she brought the last major offense she could think of to her mind.

“I... I abandoned a very close friend after sh-she rescued me and a friend from an overzealous, sadistic punishment. She admitted her love for me, and... And I ran away...” Rainbow cried.

Expecting more strikes, she instead heard the strap hit the ground, and felt weight added to the bed.

Twilight pushed Rainbow all the way down to the bed, onto her stomach, and rolled her over, crawling over her and sitting on her chest.

“And what happened?”

“I... I...”

Rainbow could no longer form words, the guilt washing over her in full force now as her shoulders heaved as her waterworks continued.

When Rainbow managed to open her tear-filled eyes, Twilight removed the hat and mask, and looked down at her with a stern, but loving gaze.

“I did a lot of things to myself out of guilt. Harmful things. You should have told me. I would have understood. I would have gone with you, if you had let me. But you left me here with nothing but an angry rejection. I watched as our friends left one by one. I waited day after day of hearing nothing from the search parties. I drowned my guilt in alcohol. I had constant nightmares that you killed yourself, or you came back here, still as broken as the day you left. Did you love me all along, and it just took you a year to admit it to yourself?”

Rainbow swallowed, and nodded, sniffling.

“I'm so sorry. P-p-please forgive me.”

Twilight slid forward one more time, her marehood right in Rainbow's face.

“Prove it. Prove to me you're sorry, and that you're ready to make up for the year you left me here.”

Rainbow, sniffling, tears running down her face, licked her lips before leaning her head up and diving in to Twilight's marehood, eager to meet her mistress' challenge.

A flame sparked in Twilight's nether region. She breathed in deeply, as pleasure began to flow through her veins. She expected Rainbow to speed up, but she didn't. Seconds turned to minutes as Rainbow slowly and expertly used her tongue to please her.

“Mmmm, yeah, that's it. Apologize. Apologize until you swallow my forgiveness.”

Using her magic, Twilight gave Rainbow a few light taps on her rear with the crop, which had not seen any use yet. Rainbow gasped, but didn't break her contact with Twilight's sex. As Twilight began to lightly thrust towards Rainbow's licking, the pegasus opened her mouth a bit wider and began to suck lightly, causing the alicorn to gasp out loud. That was one of her weak spots.

The increasing pressure in her stomach rose to a peak, and Twilight was initially disappointed in herself as Rainbow drank down the juices that her marehood gave her. But the pressure didn't die down too far or too long, as Rainbow didn't stop. The slow, steady ministrations of her tongue soon pushed Twilight higher than her first climax, and sure enough, a minute later, she came again with a short scream as the pressure once again release.

Twilight was breathing heavily now, and still, Rainbow didn't pause in the slightest. She looked up at her mistress with tear-filled eyes, as she didn't even offer anything as simple as a moan of pleasure as she worked.

Her mouth's maneuvers now came stronger, as it took considerably more effort to push Twilight even higher. She glanced behind her, at Rainbow's moist, unattended snatch. For a moment, she considered returning the favor with the egg vibrator, but then decided against it. This was supposed to be a punishment, after all. Her sucks became more vigorous, her tongue went deeper and reached farther.

Her breathing came faster, and she moaned in lust with every breath. Sensing the edge, her horn glowed brightly, and she magically gave Rainbow's flank one last swat, screaming as she pushed Rainbow's head into the pillow with her groin, as she spilled into her mouth for a third and final time.

Rainbow drank in all that Twilight offered, her tears finally drying up. After sustaining her mistress' orgasm for another minute, she finally ran dry, and hung over her head, her front hooves leaning on the headboard, mane almost falling into her eyes, as she gasped for breath.

“Good... Good girl...” Twilight said, catching her breath. She pushed off the headboard and slid down off of Rainbow, checking her flanks, which were beginning to bruise considerably. She also noticed Rainbow's wanting marehood. Her horn lit up, and Rainbow immediately objected.

“Mistress, please don't.” Rainbow said softly, averting her gaze, knowing Twilight was about to fire up a healing spell. “Punishment doesn't do much good unless you give it time to sink in.”

Twilight was unsure, but figured that Rainbow had a point. The healing spell would be just as effective in the morning. With a smile, she scooted back up next to Rainbow, grabbing the hat from beside her on the bed, and put it on the pegasus' head.

“That, and I don't think just one spanking's gonna teach you your lesson. No doubt there will be more down the road.”

Using her magic, Twilight wrapped the cape of her costume around the two of them, and brought the blankets up and over them. Still wincing a little, Rainbow never the less accepted her mistress' embrace, and let sleep take her.