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Chapter 14: love, sweat, and... cider?

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love, sweat, and... cider?

Madness, all that surrounded him. Madness. Consuming all thought until all that remained was fear and hatred. This is the world that Atomic Vortex. He tried to deal with Discord to save his mother's life but ended up his slave, and she dying from a different cause seconds after she was cured of the life threatening disease by a mad pony with a knife. He served under him for years as his personal hitpony, killing those who opposed the madness or stood up against him. Now after eons of servitude the curse was lifted, the veil cast away, his mind restored. And all because of a demon turned traitor to his species, who bred with an alicorn princes and birthed a son to oppose the madness. He was sane because of Naga.

He awoke with a start, he leapt from the bed he was in, or tried to. He found his arms and legs restrained by leather straps. Looking across the room he saw a dark figure in a chair slouched against the wall. "Look who's awake, so sleep well?" a familiar voice asked. "Who are you?" Atom said with as much power as he could but found it very painful. Looking down he saw a large stab wound on his chest. Suddenly he remembered, "You'r Naga, son of Luna. You almost killed me... thank you." The black alicorn walked over and leaned over him an eyebrow raised, "What for?" he asked. "Freeing me from Discord's power. I am my own stallion again even if you kill me I know I die myself, not that demon Zephyr. No offence." Naga looked ah him a few seconds longer and laughed, "Wow, so you realy aren't that dumb shit of an assassin. Good cause one, he was a prick. And two, I didn't feel like killing you now." A knock at the door interrupted them. "Naga it's your turn to change Silver's diaper so get your flank out here." a feminine voice said.

"One second sweetheart I'm finishing up with the assassin," He turned and formed a blade in his hoof and in a quick motion slashed twice. Atom closed his eyes and waited for the pain, instead he felt the restraints fall away. As he sat up the room became illuminated and after letting his eyes adjust he found himself in a library on a surgical table. He swung off it as it disappeared into black smoke and was met face to face with a pleading Naga. "Please tell me you can change a diaper."

After helping Naga change a rather playful foal into a new diaper he set off to town with Naga in the lead. "So you'r from about my time so let me catch you up to speed, we won the chaos war, we are in a time of peace but hostilities with the griffin nation are strained, and food has never tasted better." he finished with a smile as they walked steadily into town. Atom shook his head and looked at him "Whu..?" Naga rolled his eyes "Ok other than a few new cities not much has changed save some technological advancements and not all of the magical variety." Atom nodded in understanding. It was at this time that his stomach decided to growl scaring a nearby yellow pegasus into a bush. "Um perchance we could get something to eat?" Naga looked at him worriedly "As long as your ready."

Atom realized Naga's fear as soon as they stepped hoof into the bakery. "GUUUUUUUUU! A new pony! I'vegottogoprepairthewelcomepartyit'llbereadysoonseeyoulaterby!" Atom blinked and the pink pony who had just been standing in front of him disappeared. A brown earth pony with an hourglass cutie mark walked past and said "Don't blink." before walking out. Atom looked over at Naga and asked "But, what, how, who, cookie?" Naga placed a hoof on his shoulder "Don't think about it, Pinky cant be rationalized by any standard other that 'that's just Pinky'." He looked at him and with a confused face continued to order one of the best pastries in his life, but for some reason Naga wouldn't let him order a cupcake. He questioned him but all he got was "You don't want to know, you really don't"

Afterwards the headed out for a drink, being chopped up into tiny peaces and getting stabbed with a scythe were sufficient reason to grab a drink. Naga led him to a bar on the edge of town, the name read "Apple trough". They went inside and sat at a table in the corner of the dimly lit bar and ordered two ciders. A huge red pony set the mugs in front of them and walked away with a "Eup". The cider was frothing at the top and smelled so strong that it made Atom cough. Naga pushed his to Atoms side and called over the waiter to order a glass of soda. "Cant drink, last time I got drunk I nearly blew Equestria to hell, literally." Atom laughed "Pussy" and downed the cider in one gulp. "No substance known to pony can get me drunk." He boasted. "Lets test that," an orange colored mare said as she walked up to them and handed Naga his soda.

Atom readily accepted never being able to resist a challenge, when he was young his mother called him the element of determination. And so the mare led him to a table at the center of the bar and an elderly pony tossed her a dark bottle of liquid that she caught and set on the table along with two shot glasses. "I'll go first." She said and pored a glass of a clear reflective liquid into the glass. he downed it with vigor and slammed the glass onto the table. Your turn. They repeated this presses until they were both heavily intoxicated. As Applejack, as she was called by the red stallion server, lifted the glass to her face she instead found herself falling backward. Atom ran up to her and attempted to catch her but ended up falling with her. She landed on top of him and they both began to laugh. It was at this time that the pair noticed that everypony else had left after a few hours of watching them down shot after shot. He blushed violently when he noticed the way he was positioned above her and instantly threw himself off. He scooted back as Applejack noticed too and be began to blush with a slight smile. At this Atom heard a small 'whoosh' and found his wings outstretched involuntarily. He panicked at the sight but soon found himself face to face with a bright orange mare, "Hmm I'll take this as a complement then?" She said before delving in for a kiss. Her mouth tasted of liquor but to Atom it was bliss. They locked lips and kissed deeply niether wanting to break away, a familiar feeling began to rise in his loins and soon he noticed a strange sent lifting off of the mare before him.

They broke at last a strand of saliva trailing between them, their eyes locked and for a glorious moment they felt the others soul. They gazed upon the others naked essence and they knew instantly what the other wanted. Each-other. By now Atom had become fully erect and was as red as the apples on Applejack's flank. She slowly slid up his body grinding her hips against his. He responded slipping his hooves down her flank and massaging her firm cheeks. Slowly she positioned herself above him, however Atom took control and flipped her onto her back. Slowly he teased her slit circling it sliding up and down. She moaned with pleasure looking up at him with pleading eyes she said, "Don't tease." And with that he thrust into her, as a small trickle of blood went down her legs she moaned even louder, he did to. He started to thrust and eventually worked up a pace. They clashed together like fire and ice, their finish could be heard by pony's on the moon. Afterwards they left and stumbled to Apple's house where they fell asleep intertwined, sweaty and in love.

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