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Challenge

Challenge

by Gabby127


Chapters


  • Where?
  • Rainbow Time
  • Race
  • Cheater
  • Interveiw
  • Where?

    Where are we Luna? How should I know? What's that Luna? How should I know? No not that that how should I- it's a-a-a it's a town!!! Really Luna? really Gabby! The two ponies had been walking in a unknown forest, and had now ended up in ponyvil. Look at that one said Gabby pointing a dark purple hoof at a rainbow haired pony. The pony bolted across the sky driving a strong breeze by near by ponies. That does seem like a good one, but let's see said Luna pulling a scanner from her coat pocket. Well...! Said Gabby impatiently. Luna started reading the info that had pop up on the rainbow pony.

    - name,Rainbow Dash

    - cuity mark, lightning bolt with a cloud

    - typ- Hey... Wait but my cuity mark is a lightning bolt! It was true Gabbys cuity mark was a black lightning bolt and a silver cloud

    So as I was saying - avr. Speed 97 mph. Nice said Gabby

    - title, fastest pony In Equestria
    Perfect said Gabby.

    Rainbow Time

    Gabby starter to walk up to Rainbow Dash. WhenRainbow Dash noticed her she said hey your talking too the one and only fastest pony in equestrian. Ya.. So your Rainbow dash right? Said Gabby. The one and only! Said Rainbow dash looking at the Dark purple pegases. Ok then you'll race me. Said Gabby. Shur that is if your good with loseing. How about we race now because you got me without anything to do, and are you going to take off your hat?Said rainbow dash NO! said Gabby and Luna together. HEY TWI, wana com see me race?! shur Rainbow.

    The two pegisi got in there starting places. Then Twilight said " Get ready Get set GO!" and the were both off like lightning. Rainbow started in first but Gabby was closing in fast. And soon Gabby was in first quickly getting ahead of Rainbow. And just as fast as it had started the race was over with Gabbt winning and leaving Rainbow Dash confused.And for some reason Gabby was always wearing a hat.

    Race

    After the last race Rainbow Dash was frustrated. She was sapost to win. What had happend? Gabby was no bigger than her, Gabby was a pegases like her, and Gabbys wings were no stronger than her own. Was it the hat? No, that would be silly. Even their cuity marks were the same, but differnt colors. How about a nother race Gabby! said Rainbow Dash. Ok. Umm Gabby before you start the race, theres something kinda important I need to tell you. said Luna. If its only Kinda important than I think it can wait tell the end of the race Luna. said Gabby. But- Luna was cut off by Twilight yelling 'GO!' and the two ponys raceing off. Luna was going too warn Gabby that the string that held her hat had broken, but it was too it the hat was already coming off too reveal a shining purple horn. Every pony gasped, well every pony but Luna, of course she knew. Suddenly Twilight yelled "shes been cheating!" "NO SHE HASENT" screemed Luna, burning through Twilight with her eyes. Gabby landed on the ground trying too hide behind a tree like Fluttershy. Now Twilight,said Luna levitating the hat off the ground. Try to levitate this hat Gabby was wearing off. said Luna levitating the hat over Twilights horn. Easy said Twilight. She tryed to magicly take the hat off, but nothing happend. The hat is magic proof said Luna. Its like that so Gabby cant cheat no matter what she dose. Twilight shook off the hat looking impressed. Rainbow Dash had flown off back too her cloud house the moment she found out that Gabby was an alicorn. It was all just too embaresing. Alicorns bodys grow faster than normal ponys, so Gabby was younger than her. Gabby was most likely to be as old as applebloom, no wunder Gabby was acting so much like a filly! She was one! That was too much for Rainbow Dash. She couldnt go back to Ponyvil, not yet at least.

    Cheater

    Rainbow Dash finally went back to Ponyvil. Gabby was still hiding, with Luna tring to bring her out. How about just one more race, without your hat. said Rainbow Dash. Then ill have Twilight use magic on me. said Rainbow again. Sounds good. said Gabby. Ok then, Ready, set, GO!!! yelled Twilight. And with that the tow ponys raced off again. Gabby started in the lead, but Rainbow was closeing in fast. Gabby saw that Rainbow Dash was now right next to her. Gabby looked at Rainbow with a smile. Then sudenly Gabby yelped as if she were in pain as Rainbow moved shook Rainbow Dash a little. Gabby fell from the sky flaping her wings here and there to slow the fall. Rainbow looked at her but keept going. She wanted to win.When Rainbow came to a stop at the end of the race. Everypony looked at her in shoock. Gabby was laying under a tree with Luna helping her up. Luna knew what had happened, but she also knew that it was partly Rainbows falt because she had asked for a race with Gabby without her hat. Luna had cracked one of Gabbys wings so that she couldn't move it, but she was fine. Luna was now healing the wing and unnesasaraly raped the wing so that Gabby looked badly hurt.

    I think I can help! Said Twilight.

    No,... I think I got it said Luna.

    Are you shur, said Twilight because I learned a spell last week that-

    Twilight was cut off by Luna saying " yes Twilight, I'm shur.

    ok then said Twilight walking away.

    Rainbow Dash had flown back home feeling like everypony had turned on her. She never even touched Gabby. She didn't go back to ponyvil until the next day. She felt better but it didnt feel right coming back.

    Gabby was still warring the rap on her wing. She couldn't fly very high because she still had very little feeling in her wing. Rainbow felt bad. When ever she walked by the ponies just looked at her. She just couldn't come back yet so she flew back to her house. She wasnt going to go back until Gabbys wing healed. Gabby had cheated and, she knew it.

    Interveiw

    In the mourning pegases reporters showed up at Gabby and Lunas make shift house in the sky. They all wanted to know everything about the two and what had happened in the race.

    (camra snap) well I'm ten years old said Gabby

    And I'm Gabbys gardian (camra snap) that's like a parent , but I'm not her mom.

    Reporter 1: So Gabby, what do you think of Rainbow Dash?

    I'm not shur... It I had to say ( camra snap) I gees I like her. Said Gabby

    Reporter (camra snap) 2: Do you think you could do the sonic rainboom Gabby?

    The what??? The sonic Rainboom Gabby. Ooooo said Gabby. That? Sonic Rainboom only a Rainbow colored pegases can do those. But watch this!!! The pegases took off the coulds started to form a point in front of her. Then BOOM, all of the sudden brown, black, purple, and silver wove together like a neat flowing basket. Everypony saw it. Even Rainbow Dash. This was too much she decided to stay at Couldsdail until Gabby left.

    THE END


    Yay!!! I'm done with my first fanfic!!!!

    BO-YA


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