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portal 3: interdemensional portal device

by rainbow_shy

Chapter 6: chapter 6: the wonderful forest

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Authors note: I was writing under the influence of C418s' music, here is a link to his bandcamp blog http://c418.bandcamp.com/album/72-minutes-of-fame. if you do not know who C418 is, and you play minecraft... then you do not pay attention. that is all.


p.s. - this is not a complete chapter, so if it sucks... just deal with it, untill it is finished(oh, and if you were about to say something like "why would you post a chapter if it is not finished". The reason why i do that is so that you guys/girls can see it while it is un-finished, and see if you can have any criticism about it)










Atlas and P-body were on the run from an insane pony that was the color of the repulsion gel back at home. Atlas and P-body have encountered many things... but not as beautiful as this. They were now in the Everfree forest, and today was there lucky day, for the forest was calm and quite, with every animal having positive vibes all around, even the predators were acting happy and cheerful and not eating each other. It was truly an amazing sight. All the plants, animals, tree's, all were in a calm or energetic state. the graceful noise of all the butterfly's flying around the two strange robots, the stomping of a manticore, heading towards the two robots to "snuggle" with them, and the sight of the firefly's at night. It was a day to remember.

[listen to this, it REALLY puts on a good mood for this scene, and also kinda better explains the next part]



It was getting dark, and the two robots have not seen the repulsion gel colored animal at all ever since they entered this forest. The forest was an amazing sight at night. The ambient noise that started in the forest was amazing. P-body had just discovered something super secret about himself about a few weeks ago, he found out that he had a-what was called-mp3 player, and he had only a few things on it, one "song", was called... alive, and it really fitted this scene... so he played it. Atlas was amazed at the sound P-body made when he played the song. the song amplified throughout the forest, attracting small critters, and also big critters... even an ursa major and ursa minor came to listen to the masterpiece.

[P-body POV]


Everything was perfect. The setting, music, the love all around. Today, was the day. The day that I was going to tell Atlas about, my feelings for him. I am not sure if he has already found out, but, I do not think he has. But, if he is ever going to find out, today is the day he is. I decided to tell him after my "song" has stopped playing. So we just sat there, looking at the sky, and all the small to large animals around us. It was truly amazing. The glistening tree's, the floating flowers, the ambient noise's, the beautiful animals... this... this forest-as my data base calls it-was truly the most magical thing i have ever seen.

I heard a noise, a noise that none of the animals can make... then, I saw a blue orb shooting past my head, then a blue, oval like platform... I recognized it immediately, so did Atlas. Then, Chell came out of the portal, so did some other magnificently colored animals. One was colored like the propulsion gel at home. another, was the color of the walls at home. then, one color me and Atlas did not recognize at all. THEN, another animal that was colored like the walls at home, except this one was bigger. Another animal, was the color of one of Atlas's portal's... I think it was purple.then, another one colored like one of moms' core's.

They all just stood there, there jaw bones dropped. Then, we saw that one animal, the animal that chased us both. We tried to run, but then we got caught in some type of magical aura. We both could not move one single bit.


[stop music, if you want to, but most recommended]

[third person]



Atlas and P-body were caught in Celestias' telekinetic force. Celestia was dragging them towards the group. the two robots were terrified, for they did not know what was going on, nor did they know what was going to happen. Then, celestia put the two down, in the middle of the group. Chell was staring at them, so was the other ponies. Chell was the first to break the cursed silence. "Why... why are you two here? And who is this 'mom' you two were talking about?"

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