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A Derpy/Raindrops erotic romance story attempt.
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I stated "attempt" since I am bad with writing emotions due to a few syndromes as stated.

Anyhow, romance is my favorite genre to read. And this is about my best try at it. I know it lacks scenes, and is kinda oddly paced at times, but if you can overlook said flaws and the misplaced scenes and "notes", then please do give it a read.

And for those wondering: I went the "lesser mental disability" with Derpy. Or at least tried... I was aiming for a "rather clever, but has hard to formulate properly at times" and added "occasional stuttering". Also worth mentioning: This was made like, 8+ months ago or so. There two where my favorite ship back then for some reason, partially imagined them as Raindrops seeing past her visual defect and stuff like that. I know a line that sparked this whole thing was "My eyes might be crossed, but I can see clearly" or somewhere among those lines.

Anyhow, it's a clopfic with an attempt at humor and romance. I think I tried to hard at several parts, but whatever. Read if you want semi-silly shipping with sexual content and attempt at funny bits in it.

Oh, and lastly, this was actually supposed to be a flash game, or well, the story based on one. But due to several things, one of them being that we lost the lead, and only artist, it kinda plummeted down from there.

Mature
Incomplete
Romance
Slice of Life
Sex

7,207 words: Estimated 29 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. Chapter 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 11th, 2012
    7,207
Published Mar 12th, 2012
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