Login

PonyVania-The Darkness of Equestria

by Renegade Thunder

Chapter 3: Chapter-3 The Beginning

Previous Chapter
Chapter-3 The Beginning

The two guard ponies were investigating the everfree forest for the crying, but they heard nothing.

The two guards’ were unicorns, so they could used their magic to see where they were going through the everfree forest.

One guard was a male, his coat was white like snow, his eyes were a hazel colour, and his mane and tail were a blue with a tint of a lighter blue, and the other guard was a female pony; her coat was ice grey, her eyes were blue and her mane and tail was red.

The colour of their armour was gold; they had Celestia’s cutie mark on their chest plates, their armour covered their chest to their flank, for a perfect protection to the front to back, their helmet were made to be suited for a unicorn.

“If this is a joke, then this isn't funny,” the male guard said, in an annoyed voice.

“Put a can in it, will you,” said the female guard looking at the male unicorn, “we’re here because there was screams coming from the everfree forest. As it’s our duty to protect not only the Princesses, but also to protect the civilians from any danger as well, like their own stupidity,” Said the female guard, like she was in charge of the search.

The two guards kept looking in the forest; they ventured deeper, but heard nothing, “This is a waste, there’s nothing hear, no screams, and nopony but ourselves,” the male guard said, wanting to go back to the castle and report to the commander.

“I think your right, let’s get back to the castle and give our report to the commander, and hope she’s in a good mood,” said the female guard, agreeing to the male guard.

The two guards turned around to walk back to the castle, until they heard the screams; they stopped in a sudden second, and looked back, but only saw darkness, they then looked at each other, and turn to find where the screams came from.

“Where did that scream come from?” the male guard asked.

“You're asking me?” replied the female guard.

The guard’s then took a slow step forward to find whoever screamed...if they could find that somepony.

“HELLO...who...who goes there,” said the male guard, in a worried tone.

“Really, who goes there,” she said to her partner, looking at him with an annoyed face, she then turned to whoever was listening.

“WHAT THIS IDOIT MEANS IS WHERE YOU ARE, AND DO YOU NEED ANY ASSIETS!” the female guard shouted, thinking that somepony is in danger.

Suddenly another scream followed by crying came from behind them, “Over there,” the male guard whispered.

They both followed the crying even deeper into the forest. “I can hear the crying getting stronger.”

The two guard slowed down near the source of the crying, they moved some leaves out of their view, and saw what looked like a little filly huddled  up into herself, and was crying in a corner near some rocks.

The female guard looked at the little filly, “It's ok, we're not going to hurt you,” she said, trying to comfort the little filly.

The female guard got closer to the shaded filly, but the filly soon got up on all of her fours, and walked up to the guard in a very creepily way.

“LOOK OUT”! The male guard shouted, pulling his partner away.

The creepy little filly was still casted in shadow, as she suddenly grew, reaching the height of Celestia. The two guards looked up at the sudden tall filly that was no longer a filly, but just like what was in the legends.

“The Dark Mare...” the female guard said, recognizing who she was.

The female guards eyes widened, as she looked into the soulless eyes of The Dark Mare, it was like the guard turned into ice for staring too long.

The Dark Mare then lets out a sudden horrid roar at the two guards, “Buck this, we don’t get paid that much for this shit,” the male guard said, running away, while using his magic to grab the frozen unicorn.

“SNAP OUT OF IT!” Shouted the male guard to his partner, the female unicorn then shock off her fear and said, “RIGHT, I’M BACK IN THE GAME.”

The male guard placed his partner on all four of her hooves, while he was running, “just like in training at the academy,” the male guard said in a cocky tone.

“We need to get back to the castle, but we also need to slow her down,” the female guard hinted, as she was coming up with a plan.

“Right, what do you have in mind”? He asked ready to listen to what his partner’s strategy was going to be.

“We both stop, you create a shield to protect us, and i use the fire spell to strike the target,” said the female guard.

Her partner looked at her and said, “is there another idea, you know, one that is less up close and personal, and more of strike from a long range.”

The female guard looked at him with an angry stare, “look, we don’t have a lot of options right now, and that’s the only plan I’ve got at the moment.”

The two guards then followed the strategy to the letter; they both stopped at the same time, and then turned around to face The Dark Mare, the male guard used his shield casting spell to form an orb around him and his partner, while the female guard used her fire spell.

She aimed her horn straight at The Dark Mare, her horns magic glowed red, as the power was charging to the full max.

The Dark Mare then got in range for the female unicorn to strike; a fire ball came out of the unicorn’s horn, and hitted The Dark Mare directly in the centre of her chest, knocking her out on the ground.

“Come on! Let’s get back to the castle and report this to the commander,” the male guard said, as he broke the shield, and was ready to run back to the castle.

“No, let's finish her off, right here....right now,” the female guard said turning her head, and giving her partner a cocky look.

“What, have you gone mad, we’ve got a chance to get out of the everfree forest...ALIVE!” The male guard hinted, while looking at his partner.

“Fine, you run off like a little filly, while I’ll finish her off all by myself then,” the female unicorn said, walking up to finish the job.

Her partner didn’t run away, as he just stood there watching his partner about to take a life for the first time.

Suddenly, The Dark Mare opened her soulless eyes, and grabbed the female guard by the neck using only her mane. “What a brave little pony, wanting to finish the job and hold the glory all for herself”.

“LET HER GO YOU BITCH!” The male guard shouted, as he was running at The Dark Mare.

The male guard used a fire ball spell, just like what his partner was using, but The Dark Mare didn’t move one inch, as it looked like she was dodging the fire balls being cast at her.

“WHAT THE FUCK, WHY AREN'T ANY OF MY SPELLS HITTING YOU!” The male guard grunted in an angry tone.

“Ah, ha, ha, you fool, don’t you get it, you’re not that powerful than this little beautiful pony,” said The Dark Mare licking his partner behind her ear, while making her blush.

“SAVE YOURSELF!” The female shouted, requesting him to return back to the castle and give the report to their commander and the princesses.

He looked at his partners eyes and shouted, “NEVER! I’M NOT GOING TO LEAVE YOU HERE WITH THAT BITCH!” He then jumped at The Dark Mare for a closer shot, as his horn was charging up with power.

Suddenly, The Dark Mare strikes the unicorn with in a quick flash, launching him back down on to the ground.

He stood up; as blood was dripping down from the top of his shoulder and on the right side of his face. The chest plate armour was broken, and his helmet had a huge crack on the right side to where he was bleeding.

“How is this possible?” The unicorn thought to himself, looking at his armour thinking would never be broken.

“GO! GET OUT OF THE EVERFREE FOREST!” The female guard shouted, trying to get him to survive, and fight another day.

He looked into his partner’s eyes, as he didn’t want to leave her with The Dark Mare; she looked deeper into his eyes, and said, “ONE MUST DIE, AND THE OTHER MUST SURVIVE THE TELL WHAT HAD HAPPENED!”

He looked at her for one last second, and then turned to run back to the castle, to give his report to his commander and the two princesses.

“Well we can’t have that now...can’t we,” said The Dark Mare tapping her hoof on the ground.

Spikes suddenly came out of the ground, and launched large sharp thorns at the unicorn; he looked back, and quickly cast a fire shield that protect himself, while he was running back to the castle.

“Well, now that we are finally alone together, just you and I, but there is one thing out of place,” The Dark mare said, looking at her hostage.

“We can’t do it with you all in that armor of yours,” The Dark Mare said with a seductive grin on her face.

The female guard tried to cast some spells to get herself free from the grip around her neck, but failed as The Dark Mare used her mane, and snapped the unicorn’s horn off, the female guard screamed in agony, as sharp pains were shooting through her brain.

“Oh I’m sorry, were you using this, AH, HA, HA!” The Dark Mare, laughed, as she was waving bits of her horn in front of her face.

She suddenly used her mane to break apart the unicorns armour, exposing the ice grey unicorn’s wet little pussy, her eyes widened, as she realised what The Dark Mare wanted.

“Oh my, you are all ready wet before i got started,” The Dark Mare said, glaring at the unicorn’s pussy.

She then leaned in to kiss the outside of her wetness, and started licking her clit. The unicorn let out a faint moan, as she was trying her hardest to resist the urge of enjoying the pleasure.

Her legs were twitching, as drips of her pussy juice was sliding down her legs, causing her to spread even more open for The Dark Mare to enjoy.

Millions of things were rushing through her mind as she was trying to resist, “HOLY FUCKING CELESTIA, WHY AM I GETTING OFF ON THIS?” The unicorn questioned herself in her mind, as she was suddenly starting to enjoy it.

Sweat drops were dripping down the side of her face, as The Dark Mare pushed her muzzle even further into the unicorn’s pussy, the unicorn then let’s out a loud moan as she could no longer hold it inside.

Sparks and blood were coming out of her horn as she was about to cum. “I’M...I’M CUMMING!” The unicorn shouted in relieves, as she squirted all over The Dark Mare’s face.

“Well, that was enjoyable, what was your thoughts on that my little pony?” The Dark Mare asked to the grey unicorn.

She turned around a said, “YOU’RE TURN, BITCH!” She then suddenly jumped on top of The Dark Mare and kissed her soaked face.

The unicorn used her magic...or what was left of her horn, and form a double headed dildo and placed it hard into their pussies; they both let out a loud orgasm as they were enjoying the moments of the pleasure.

“OH FUCK, ME FUCK ME HARDER, PULL MY BRAINS OUT, AND MIND FUCK ME WITH YOUR MAGIC!” The Dark Mare shouted, as she wanted more.

The unicorn then suddenly had an urge just to let it all out. “OH FUCK CELESTIA AND HER STUPID BITCH OF HER SISTER!” She shouted with pleasure building up to the max.

The Dark Mare looked, and she puts on a grin, as she was getting fucked by the unicorn, “so will you serve me as my pet and guard, “The Dark Mare said, trying to turn one of the royal guards of Celestia.

“YES...YES, I'M ALL YOURS!” The unicorn shouted in delight.

Back at the castle; the unicorn; Shake’sphere was telling his horror story about the legend the changelings.

“And that ladies and gentlecolts is how she became not just a changeling, but also the queen of all changelings,” Shake’sphere said ending his story.

Everypony stared at him in fear...again, but they all shook it off, and tap their hooves on the ground to applause the story telling pony.

“Thank you, kindly again for telling us yet another amazing story that we will all remember,” Princess Celestia said, thanking the unicorn, and then looking her sister with a concerned face.

Suddenly screams came from the crowd of ponies, as a sudden herd of ponies moved out of a way of this unicorn that had investigated the forest.

On the left side of his arm up to his shoulder was covered in his blood, his armour was broken with cracks all over the side of his chest plates, his helmet had a big crack on the right side from where The Dark Mare attacked him, and all over his armour had scratches, for when he was running back to the castle.

Commander Hurricane turned and stared at what was left of her search party that she’d had sent out to investigate. “Guard report!” Commander Hurricane commanded to the wounded unicorn.

“We search the forest, at first there were no signs of the screaming, but when we were going to return to the castle to give our report to you, we suddenly heard a scream followed by some crying,” the unicorn then stopped for a breather, as he was losing too much blood.

Commander Hurricane punch the unicorn in the arm to where he was bleeding, she kept her hoof there and said, “please continue,” while looking into the unicorns eyes, as she requested him to carry on.

“We followed the crying to this little filly that was in a corner by some rocks, we went to her to see if there was something wrong with this little filly, but the things turned for the worst in a second,” said the unicorn pausing for one more time.

Commander Hurricane grabbed a pint of cider with her other hoof, and said to the unicorn, “Here, drink this down, you’ll fill better.”

The unicorn used his magic to grab the pint, and drank it down, “Now tell me what else happened”? Commander Hurricane asked.

“When the little filly came out of the shadows she suddenly grew up to the size of Celestia,” Princess Celestia raised an eyebrow as she was listening to what the unicorn was talking about.

“Her mane and tail was like a dark sapphire blue, nothing i had seen before, her coat was black, black as the night sky, and her were teeth like daggers.”

Princess Celestia started to recognise the story the guard was telling to Commander Hurricane, that it was the same story that Shake’sphere was telling three years ago.

Celestia turned to her sister and said, “Luna, i want you to raise the moon, and end this celebration,” Luna looked at her sister for a second, then flew up to raise the moon, Celestia then looked at Thunder Blade, to get her attention.

“I want you to go down there, and escort the ponies back to their homes,” Thunder Blade then saluted, and flew down to the crowd of ponies, and started to escort them out of the castle.

“Guard, you did well, you will be rewarded to your new station, but now you’ll need some rest,” Celestia said, praising the unicorn.

The guard then thought to himself, “To what cause, i left my partner behind.”

“LOOK OUT!” a guard shouted, pointing his hoof at a boulder that was falling out of the sky.

All the civilian ponies looked at the falling boulder, some moved out of the way, but other was frozen as they were watching it fall from the sky.

The bolder landed and crushed three ponies, Commander Hurricane looked at the blood stained boulder, and shouted to the watch tower guard, “ALL RIGHT, WHO THREW TOM!”

The tower guard replied to the Commander with a confused voice, “I think it was from the everfree forest sir.”

Commander Hurricane looked deep into his eyes and said, “I DIDN'T SAY WHERE DID TOM CAME FROM, I SAID WHO THREW THAT DAMN ROCK!”

The guard looked back and saw more, boulders falling from the sky, he then quickly turns and shouted to everypony, “INCOMING!”

Everypony panicked, as giant rocks fell from out of the sky and killed a few ponies, Commander Hurricane stood there, without moving a muscle and thought to herself, “really, that it, just rocks, they at least could of made the rocks burn with fire or something.”

A guard then look and saw some of the giant boulders on fire, “Commander, we’ve got burning rocks,” the tower guard said, informing his commander.

Commander Hurricanes face then turned to a frown and said to herself, “great, now somepony can read minds.”

Thunder Blade escorted the rest of the civilian ponies into the royal panic room, “EVERYPONY, IN HERE, YOU TWO PRINCESSES AS WELL,” Thunder Blade commanded.

She then looked at the wounded unicorn and asked, “Can you still fight?”

The male unicorn looked at the Pegasus and said, “What type of question is that, of course i can still fight, i may have lost a lot of blood, but i can still cast spells.”

Thunder Blade nodded at the unicorn, and then reported to Commander Hurricane, “mother, reporting for active duty, what do you need me to do?”

Commander Hurricane looked at her daughter and said, “what I’ve want you to do is, sneak behind the enemies lines, and take out those mortars, and take the two rookies with you as well.”

Thunder Blade salutes to the Commander and went to go up to the two rookie guards, until she was stopped by Commander Hurricane one more time.

“listen, i want you and those two rookies to come back alive...you understand, because if i hear you died out there, I WILL PERSONALLY FIND YOUR BODY, AND THROW YOU INTO THE RAINBOW FACTORY!” Commander Hurricane said, telling her to be safe...in her own way.

Thunder Blade then caught the two rookie’s attention and said, “Listen up, you two rooks are coming with me, and i don’t want to hear any bitching, just come with me.”

She then flew into the sky, dodging a few burning boulders on the way up, the rookie’s looked at each other, and thought, “is she crazy, or just insane?”

The rookies then decided to fly up to catch up with their commanding officer, Thunder Blade look back, as she saw the two rooks trying to catch up. She then slowed her speed down, “listen, don’t think, JUST DO IT!” Thunder blade shouted, at the two rookies, teaching them not to waste time.

Thunder Blade looked down at the everfree forest, and saw where the boulders were coming from, she instructed the two rookies to split up; one goes to the left, and the other goes to the right, while she continues down the centre.

She flew low, almost touching the leaves of the trees, she then flew behind a bush, and saw who were launching the boulders, but couldn’t believe what she was seeing.

“What the fuck...skeletons, but how are they still living?” she thought to herself, as she still couldn't believe.

Thunder Blade watched, as she saw some of the skeleton use their magic to levitate some of the boulders and place them in a flammable fuel, then set it on fire once it was in the slingshot.

She slowly sneaked up to one of the skeletons and pulled its head off, killing it completely, as a glowing light came out of its body and flew up in the air; she then kicked the fuel onto the slingshot and settled it on fire.

She turned and saw, she was now surrounded by the skeletons, “hmph, there’s a reason why they call me Thunder Blade,” she said, flying straight in front of the skeletons in a sudden flash as she decapitated them.

“Bravo, my little pony,” said a voice coming out from the dark.

“Who are you?” asked Thunder Blade, as she turned around to whoever was in the dark.

Suddenly The Dark Mare, came out from the darkness, Thunder Blade stood there, looking into the soulless eyes of the pony, “what do you want?” Thunder Blade asked, as she didn’t care that the legends were true or not.

“What i want, well i want the castle, an army of ponies, which are still living, and Celestia’s head on a spike,” The Dark Mare smirked, as she was asking what she wanted.

Thunder Blade’s face didn’t change when she heard what The Dark Mare wanted, “well good luck with that, because one, you’ll have to go through me, and two you will have to face a lot of guards on the way,” Thunder Blade said, believing in the strength of the guards.

“Go through you? Well, that sound like fun,” The Dark Mare said.

The two rookies sneaked in the bushes, and thought to use the element of surprise, and attack The Dark Mare, while she was talking to their commanding officer.

The rookies then got into their positions, ready to attack The Dark Mare; they both looked at each other, and then nodded, signalling to attack.

They suddenly flew out from the bushes, grabbing The Dark Mare by the neck, and pulling her down, giving Thunder Blade the chance to attack.

Thunder Blade charged her attack and flew straight into The Dark Mare, but she pulled the rookies off from her neck and grabbed Thunder Blade by her neck with her mane.

“Nice try, but too slow my dear,” The Dark Mare said, choking the Pegasus.

Thunder Blade then kicked The Dark Mare in the face, coursing her to drop Thunder Blade; she landed on all four of her hooves, and turned to the rookies and said, “LETS GET BACK TO THE CASTLE!”

The two rookies and Thunder Blade extended their wings and started to fly high up in the sky, to where The Dark Mare couldn't reach.

The Dark Mare enrage, as screamed at the Pegasus’s as they were flying away, she suddenly slammed her hoof on the ground causing spikes to come out from the ground, and launch sharp thorns at the Pegasus’s.

Thunder Blade looked back, as she saw sharp metal looking thorns being shot straight at them, she turned and commanded the two rookies to fly in a base of action.

One flew to the left while the other flew to the right, dodging the sharp thorn, Thunder Blade kept her distance while flying higher into the sky, testing the thorns range.

They shot past her ears like they were arrows, causing Thunder Blade to fly off balance, the two rookies turned, and went to help their commanding officer, but Thunder Blade told them to keep flying back to the castle.

Thunder Blade flew low into the trees, where the thorns only hitted the tree branches, some of them missed the branches and went straight through the leaves, almost hitting Thunder Blade.

Suddenly spikes started to pop out from the ground like daisies, and bloom sharp thorns, but didn’t shoot them at her; they just grew, not giving the Pegasus any breathing room.

She used her flying dodging techniques to bypass through the thorns, but didn’t do much as the spikes continued on growing rapidly out from the ground.

In a sudden flash her exit to the castle was blocked, as the spikes grew too quickly, Thunder Blade tried to find another way out, but was stopped by more of the spikes; she was like a bird trapped in a cage...no way out.

The Dark Mare then appeared behind her, “well now, how are you going to get out of this one?” she asked, getting Thunder Blade’s attention.

Thunder Blade turned and was ready to attack The Dark Mare, she spread her wings and lowered her head a little, putting herself in an attack stance.

The Dark Mare stood there with an evil grin on her face, and magically appeared a blade in her mane, the blade was dark coloured just like her coat, making it hard to see where the blade was.

“Let’s have this duel, shall we,” The Dark Mare said, putting on an even more evil grin.

Thunder Blade locks her eyes on the blade, watching to where it may go; she looked carefully, as the blade looked really sharp, and could cut through anything, even her armour...even the spikes that were blocking the exit.

Thunder Blade then puts on a sly grin, “well, aren’t you going to kill me? Or are you just going to stand there looking ugly,” she said, taunting The Dark Mare.

The Dark Mare then growled with frustration and launched an attack, swinging the blade around, Thunder Blade tried to dodge the attack that were being launched at her.

But failed, as the blade slice the side of Thunder’s cheek, and then came down slicing off the side of her shoulder pad.

Blood drip down the left side of her cheek and the right side of her arm, The Dark Mare then lets out  an evil laugh as she was about to slice the Pegasus in half, until Thunder quickly moved out of the way.

The Dark Mare slammed the Blade down, making hole in the spikes, “thanks for lending a hoof bitch,” Thunder Blade said, kicking The Dark Mare in the face...again, knocker her back, and giving herself the time to escape.

She squeezed through the spikes and ran back to the castle; The Dark Mare got up from the ground and grunted too herself, “next time, you will not be so lucky.”

Thunder Blade got to the front of the castle, but was stopped by the guards, as they were uneasy from the attack, “WHO GOES THERE!”

Thunder Blade stood her ground and moved past the guard’s spears, and said in a frustrated tone, “it’s me, you numb skulls.”

She then walked into the castle and went up to Commander Hurricane, which was shouting her head off at the two rookies.

Thunder Blade stood calmly, and said, “Waiting for your order’s mother.”

Commander Hurricane turned and looked at her daughter with a disappointed face, “where did you go?” she asked, in a clear darkened tone.

Thunder Blade looked at her mother, and said in a sarcastic tone, “what...no hug, after I’ve just stopped the flying burning boulders.”

“NO, AFTER THAT...WHEN YOU WERE DODGING THE SHARP METAL LOOKING THORNS, WHERE DID YOU GO?” Commander Hurricane asked, questioning the Pegasus.

Thunder Blade then sat on the ground, and used her wings to count how many things she had done, “well first, the rookies and I were dodging the sharp thorns, and second, i decided to fly low into the everfree forest to dodge them, and then third, got trapped and had to fight my own way out.”

Commander Hurricane looked at her with a, “not amused face,” when Thunder Blade told her story.

Celestia walked up to the Pegasus and looked, as her armour was broken, “who did that to you?” Celestia asked, in curiosity.

Thunder Blade pulled herself up from the floor and said, “When i dodged the metal looking thorns, and was trapped like a bird in a cage, The Dark Mare suddenly appeared behind me. She got me pretty good, as her attack was quite quick.”

Celestia turned and thought to herself, “So the legends are true, and now two ponies survived, and saw this mare.”

Suddenly Luna burst through the doors, and shouted in horror, catching everypony attention, “SISTER, COME QUICK!” Celestia didn’t hesitate, nor asked the questioned what was going on.

Commander Hurricane and Thunder Blade followed Princess Celestia, into a secret room, which was behind there thrones.

They entered, and Celestia’s face soon turned to a shocked look, as she stared at the statue of Discord...it was cracking.

The cracks in the statue glowed red, and was pulsing with power, as he was braking out of the stone prison.

Celestia walked up to a random spot on the floor, she then pressed a button, and the floor suddenly opened, they watch, as the machinery came out from the floor, but saw that the elements of harmony were missing.

Celestia and Luna stood in shock, “how is this possible, where did are they?” Luna asked, as she couldn't understand how they could have gone missing.

Celestia looked away for a minute, but turned and looked at Thunder Blade, and recognized how brave and strong she was, as she stood herself up against the impossible odds.

She walked up to the Pegasus and said, “You will no longer work as a guard,” Thunder Blade looked at Celestia thinking she had done something wrong, “i am promoting you to rank of a warrior...a warden,” Celestia said, giving the Pegasus her new rank.

Thunder Blade looked at her with curiosity, “thank you, dear Princess, but i have to ask, why have you gave me the promotion?” she asked.

Celestia stood straight and replied with a calm voice, “You stood your own at the impossible odds, and survived the everfree forest from The Dark Mare, so i think you are perfect for the job that you will be doing soon.”

Celestia then walked into her study, but stop and turned to the Pegasus, “get some rest, because for the next day, your journey will begin,” Celestia then turned and walked into her study and closed her doors.

Return to Story Description
PonyVania-The Darkness of Equestria

Mature Rated Fiction

This story has been marked as having adult content. Please click below to confirm you are of legal age to view adult material in your area.

Confirm
Back to Safety

Login

Facebook
Login with
Facebook:
FiMFetch