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PonyVania-The Darkness of Equestria

by Renegade Thunder

Chapter 1: Chapter-1

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Chapter-1

The day was calm, peaceful, like any other day, the birds were singing in the sky and everypony was happy knowing that the evil discord was gone. The two brave princesses, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna stood up against the evil abomination and used the elements of harmony to turn him into stone.

On the day of his banishment everypony celebrated to dusk ‘til dawn, they would first get up early in the morning and go the coronation where Princess Celestia would raise the sun and start the celebration.

At the starting of the celebration everypony would play games, like chess, hide and seek, and even play, pin the tail on the pony.

After that, ponies would then go to the theatre and watch a play; the story was about the two princesses bravely going deep into the everfree forest to find the elements of harmony. The play had humours part, like the time when Celestia trolled Luna a lot; saying that she had life forms in her hair, or when Luna puts up fake banana signs straight near poison joke plants. The story was educational for the young one, teaching them not to be separated by their selfishness that would end their friendship.

The play showed dramatic scene, showing the disagreement of the two princesses, but soon they realizes that they were trick by the evil discord trying to separate their love and friendship.

After the play was finished, and it was in the middle of the day, everypony then started the big feast were they would sit down and joke about something to make their friends laugh, while others ponies would talk about fashion and what could be improved about it.

Other ponies would talk about ghost stories like curses, bat ponies, changelings, and even the everfree forest.

One pony got up from the table, this pony was a unicorn. His coat was brown and his mane was black. His cutie mark was a script, an inkpot and a quill-the unicorn introduced himself.

“Welcome all of you ponies, my name is Shake’sphere the play writer. We are all here to celebrate the banishment of the evil abomination, Discord,” said the unicorn in a poetry voice like he was a star in the theatre.

“I have a story for all of you, but this story is even for the two princesses as well,” said Shake’sphere.

“This story is about the curse of a nightmare, where once there was one pony that sacrificed herself to save the one she loved.”

“The colt thought that she was truly dead therefore his love for her was shattered, but there was still love living inside her,” the unicorn said with a sudden hope in his voice.

“Her love for him was so strong it brought her back from the abyss, so she could see her beloved once again, but when she saw him, she could not believe what she was seeing. He was with another mare,” Shake’sphere said with sudden tone of darkness in his voice.

“Her heart was shattered in half and tears were running down the side of her face, but soon after, the tears turned into blood, and the sadness turned into hate. The mare that returned from the abyss to see her beloved colt had died inside of her. She then started to change,” said the unicorn with a mysterious tone.

“Her once lovely coat and mane shined with sapphire had now turned into something horrid and dark, like all the nightmares she had in a dream soon turned into reality. Her once beautiful diamond eyes had now turned into soulless, black eyes filled with blood and death. Her teeth sharpened like daggers ready to taste the blood of her love, she then opens her soulless eyes and let out horrid laugh that everypony heard for miles.”

“Her beloved colt saw that she was alive, at first when he saw her, he was happy, but when she came out from the shadows, his face dropped in a sudden shocking second.”

“He stared and gazed at the new form of his once beloved mare, she doubled in size, her eyes glowed with evil and darkness, blood was dripping down the side of her face, and it looked like she was crying. She once spoke in a soft gently voice, but now her voice echoes with death,” said the unicorn in a darken tone.

“No, what has happened to you?” asked the colt looking at what was once his girlfriend.

“The Mare of Darkness suddenly sends a spike though the colt’s chest piercing his heart, without hesitation.”

“His eyes widened as he looked down at his chest and saw that a dark spike on the left side of his chest, blood was gushing out slowly from the wound.”

“The colt’s new girlfriend screamed in fear, tears was running down the side her face as she was staring at the spike in her boyfriend’s chest.”

“The Mare of Darkness turned her gaze at the little pony that was screaming. She slowly walks up to the little mare, and grabs the little pony by the neck using her dark mane.”

The colt returned his gaze at The Dark Mare and said, “NO! Don’t hurt her.”

“The colt took one step forward but fell on the ground by the loss of too much blood.”

“My, what beautiful little pony you are,” said The Dark Mare.

“She then learns in to kiss the little pony on the lips; the mare’s eyes widened and blushed as she was being kissed on the lip by another mare.”

“And the taste, like sweet roses,” said The Dark Mare.

“Suddenly a spike went into the pony’s vagina and came out of her mouth; the mare had tears coming out of her eyes, and blood coming out of her mouth, and vagina.”

“She tried to scream but all she could do was nothing, The Dark Mare then placed a sharp blade across the mare’s stomach, and sliced open spewing out her intestines all over the ground, and the all over herself, The Dark Mare enjoyed the blood as it was spewing all over her.”

“NO, NO, NO!” the colt shouted, with sadness as he saw his girlfriend die straight in front of him.

“She then used her dark mane to grab the dead mare by the legs and the arms and pulled, splitting the mare in half.”

“Her bones cracked like a twigs, more blood spewed out of the mare’s body, then throwing her dead carcass aside.”

The unicorn stopped for a sudden minute as he used his magic to levitate a pint of cider from the table and drank it down in a quick second.

“Sorry for that lady and gentlecolts i needed a drink after that horrific part in the story,” said the unicorn getting another drink from the table, and drinking it down fast; he then tried to getting his thought back to the story.

“The Dark Mare was covered in his girlfriend's blood; she slowly walks up to her EX-boyfriend that was dying on the ground with a broken heart, and the loss of blood.”

“This is all you’re doing,” said The Dark Mare as she walks away into the everfree forest.

“The colt vision drifted into darkness as his life was slipping away; his last word faintly came of his mouth.”

“Forgive me, my love.”

“Then the colt closed his eyes and died on the ground from the loss of blood, but also from a broken heart for the mare who once sacrificed herself for him.”

“Thank you ladies and gentlecolts for listening to my story but beware as this story was once a true story,” said the unicorn.

“As for The Dark Mare, nopony knows what has happened to her, but legends say that when you venture deep into the everfree forest you could still hear her crying, and many ponies have never returned from the everfree forest because of the crying.”

The unicorn then ended his story, but every pony was looking at him in fear, even the two princesses as they realised that their castle was right near the everfree forest. Princesses Celestia and Luna then shock off the fear.

“Well that was an interesting story dear Shake’sphere” said princess Celestia.

“Sister, if we are going to move our castle, let us move it somewhere away from the everfree forest,” said Luna with a little tint of fear in her voice.

Celestia looked at her sister, “don’t worry, i won’t let anything hurt dear sister,” Celestia said in a promising voice.

It was getting near to the end the celebration of Discords banishment, and there was one more thing that had to be done to end the coronation. Luna had to raise the moon to symbolize that everypony was free from the chaos of Discord.

Luna raised the moon and reveals the stars in the night sky, the stars lit up like flawless diamonds and the moons gaze was bright and beautiful.

At the end of the celebration a fireworks display was shot into the night sky by unicorns, the two sister stood next to each other, Celestia looked at Luna and said, “let’s hope this peace can last forever.” the two alicorns then continued looking at the firework display till it was over.

Next Chapter: Chapter-2 Three years later Estimated time remaining: 32 Minutes

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