First, I should just point out that this is a rather rough draft of a story, and in the near future, it will not be completed.
It is likely my most "grim" stories I've done, and also seemingly written in a more odd style. I didn't write it all alone thou, I had some help with about half of it. (seriously, it goes to rather unpleasant parts, at least imo. It's not just a regular "stab, stab" torture. Don't read if squeamish.)
But anyhow, it's basically a story about how Rarity is "gathering material" for her designs.
I can say it suffers from being more OOC (then normally I mean, usually stay close to "in character" even when doing ooc things) then my other works. Partially by not solely being written by me I guess.
It's more sloppy due to not being finished, but like said before: If you wana read about ponies being tortured, then have fun. If not, find something better to read. (I mean it literally actually xP It's not more then ~2-3 out of 5 imo)