It all start that one day at the flight camp in the pegaseses city. The city was Cloudsdale, probably name as such for the fact its all made up of clouds, big fluffy white ones. This is because pegaseses can walk on clouds and they’re all probably white ones because white is superior. Plus, you always see white fluffy clouds on a good day, so they were nice and cheery! But this flight camp, the clouds there were patchy see they needed to have the foals learn how to fly before they got their cutie mark on their butt, or flank, as some fancier sciencey ponies call it. Like the ones that lived in the unicorn city canterlot

There were many, many foals at this camp because of how large Cloudsdale was, you could even call it a metropolis. But most of these foals aren’t important at all, even though they knew how to fly. But if you look over there youll see a really klutzy yellow pony. In fact she would probably be better off with the name ditzy then her on classmate. She even found a way to trip over the clouds and clouds are nothing but air. But her name wasn’t ditzy, it was fluttershy.  

She also had this one friend who thought she was totally awesome and she was! This filly’s name was Rainbow dash and she didn’t realize it yet but she was 20 precent cooler then anypony else! She even had this awesome Rainbow mane unlike anyone else had ever seen. It was totally awesome and made her the best pony ever. And best of all fluttershy was lucky enough to have her as a friend, though its not clear why a dolt like her could earn that honor.

But it was probably good for that yellow pony that she had Rainbow dash because you see this yellow pony fluttershy had a lot of bullies. They were mean colts that were into sports and stuff. They were the jocks of the school and jocks like to pick on the quiet ones and stuff. And oh fluttershy was really quiet.

But this one day after fluttershy was being extra ditzy Rainbow dash defended her, she challenged those dumb dumbs to an epic race. Of course there was no adult supervision so little fluttershy ended up holding this little flag in her mouth to signal when they were going to start this race. But fluttershy didn’t have this real great balance and no pon saw her after the cooler ponies took off from the starting line, all their eyes were on that Rainbow mane and stunning butt. Rainbow dash had a really attractive butt even as a filly you see.

And soon that but became even more awesome! Her butt started leaking this Rainbow stuff! but this freaked Rainbow dash out and she started spiraling out of control, just zooming down to earth. Though its actually called equestria since they’re ponies. But it was bad that Rainbow dash was spiraling out of controol even though she left behind this really cool trail. Cuz Rainbow couldn’t fly strait now, she got wind in eyes and everything was a big fat blur. And soon she crashed.

that was when the other ponies reallized that fluttshy was missing, they couldn’t find her. They wondered if she was died like Rainbow dash did but then they realized they probably would of heard her screaming because she’s a little cry baby and then they all forgot about her becuase Rainbow dash was so much cooler and they were all grieving from loosing her.

But fluttershy didn’t care about Rainbow dashie’s death. She was flung her legs around crazy like,she was still falling she forgot how to work her wings.  butt the smell of dashie’s blood saved her, see dragons like blood and fluttershy was falling near this place called the everfree forest. There was this great big dragon that live there he came rumbling out sniffing his huge nostrils. He thought he smelled a meal when he smelled Rainbow dash’s blood. And that was lucky for the yellow filly! This big red dragon gave cushion to her fall! Without that dragon there would’ve been two deaths that day and no one would of cared…

But sea fluttershy was still a cry baby and ran off deep into this scary scary forest. She got very lost, she never learn about this place in school. Also fluttershy did break her wings both of them in her fall. One of them only clung on by a thread. The pain also lead to a lot of her confusion. And then she came across this clear little bubbling brook and this small field of floors! They were pink like her mane and she like them very much. She laid down for a nap among them even and when she woke up she had three of them on her butt and she couldn’t brush them off. She got her cutie mark! She was so excite she started pracning around the clearing like a real pony. But then she remembered about her wings and she tripped over this rock in her way. She fell over and landed on her side. It really hurt her and she ended up screaming in pain. She just kept screaming and screaming. She screamed her throat horse and she scared all the animals of. This is cause she landed on her wing, the one that was only hanging on by a thread. When she got up, her hoofs were very shaky, she saw her sides covered in a red substance. She didnt know what blood was though. She looked down and saw a mess of yellow feathers. They were also coated in the red stuff. Looking back at her side she realized her wing was missing. Somehow when she fell she tore her wing off! This realization caused fluttershy to feint.

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