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Gateway of the Eyes (First Draft)

by Drakalian

Chapter 6

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Chapter 6

I looked at her as she (once again) produced a bottle seemingly out of nowhere. Fluttershy and Twilight seemed a little uncomfortable with this idea, while AJ and Dash were all for it. Rarity, however, seemed to be nonchalant about the whole thing.

“I-I don’t know, I mean h-he did just recover from a traumatic experience.” Said Fluttershy, hiding behind her mane a little.

“Yea, and we don’t know if he knows enough about himself to play anyways” included Twilight, though she still looked like she wanted me to play anyways.

“I’ll play.” I said, surprising both mares. I looked at them with a small smile on my face. “Well, it sounds like it would be fun, and if it is just with you girls, then I feel comfortable enough to do a game like this. Also, when I got my name, I was able to remember bits and pieces of my old life, so I think I’m still eligible to play then.” After giving them my reasoning behind it all, Fluttershy and Twilight seemed to be content with it.

“Alright, so who wants to go first then?” asked Twilight. We all looked at each other, waiting for one of us to speak first.

“Alright, I’ll go first if none of you girls will go.” Said Rainbow, spinning the bottle. The bottle spun around for a good amount of time before it finally landed on…

Me. I sighed at this, but was determined to give it my best performance. ‘W-well, truth, I guess.’“ I said, wondering what she might ask me to say. Rainbow Dash thought about it for a moment, and then asked, “Have you had a marefriend before?”

I looked at the other girls for an explanation, and Twilight said, “She means did you have a special somepony before?” Now, I knew what she meant by that, cause I was starting to get the hang of their grammar changes, saying things like somepony instead of someone. I hung my head sadly and said, “Well, no, I have never had one before, or at least one that I can remember. I-I don’t even think I have had my first kiss.”

“Oh, you poor dear! I’m sure that there is somepony that is waiting for you.” Said Rarity. I smiled at her. I knew that if I were going to continue to pursue for a romantic relationship, it would have to be with a pony, since I was obviously the only human here.

“Thanks Rarity, I’m sure I will find the right woman…or mare in this case…it just has been very hard for me. Who knows, maybe I’ll get fireworks with my first kiss like they do in those romance novels.” I said, chuckling at my own joke to help me cheer up. This made the girls giggle as well, with Rarity nodding in agreement to what I said. I assumed that she was into romance novels, and it seemed that I was right.

“I don’t feel like spinning the bottle, yet. Is it ok for me to skip this one?” I asked nervously.

“Ok! Just make sure that you do the next one whenever it comes up!” Said Pinkie, grabbing the bottle and spinning it. After a few moments, the bottle somehow, landed back onto me.

Oh you have got to be kidding me!’ I thought to myself. I decided to go with a dare, since I have already gone for a truth, and wanted to mix it up a little.

“It might be the blood loss, but I think I’m gonna go for dare” The other girls looked at me like I was crazy, with Dash looking slightly impressed.

“Yay! Ok, I dare you too…” Pinkie paused to think, (or for dramatic effect) “Eat your ‘Welcome to Ponyville’ cupcake!”

I looked at her with a raised eyebrow ‘Really?’ “O…k?” I said slowly. She produced the cupcake (Again, seemingly out of nowhere) and passed it to me. I took it in my hand and looked at it. “Well, bottoms up.” I said as I put the pastry treat into my mouth and took a bite.

As soon as the frosting hit my mouth, I could taste all of the amazing flavors of the treat. In all honesty, no words could describe how sweet the cupcake was. “This is amazing, Pinkie! If you sold this you would make a lot of money.”

She giggled at the complement. “Well, I already sell pastry treats at Sugarcube Corner with the Cakes, so you are welcome to come by and visit anytime you want to.” I nodded in appreciation, quickly finishing the cupcake. Once I was done, I took the bottle and spun it again. After a while, it landed on Rainbow Dash.

“Alright! I’ll pick dare!” she said. I thought for a few minutes before I could think of a good one, but unfortunately, the only one that I could think of didn’t sound that good to begin with, but seeing as I had no choice, I decided to go for it.

“I dare you to not use your wings for the rest of the night.” Apparently, I was wrong, thinking that it was a bad dare. As soon as I said this, her face went to a look of complete shock.

“Oh, good one, Drakie!” said Pinkie, giggling. I just raised an eyebrow, thinking, ‘Drakie?

“What?” Dash said, not fully comprehending the dare. “I will get you back for this just wait.” She said, glaring at me. I just chuckled at her misfortune, telling her that it’s her turn on the bottle now.

Rainbow took the bottle and once again spun it, and it landed on Twilight.

“Well, I’ll go with truth, since I don’t feel up to a dare yet, especially one from you, Dash.” She said.

“Oh, your no fun!” Pouted Dash. She paused to think up something to ask the unicorn librarian. “Ok, then. Do you…clop?”

I gave a questioning look at Dash, not understanding what it means to clop. AJ noticed this and leaned in towards me.

“It’s slang for masturbation.” She whispered. I blushed at that, and pulled slightly on the front of my hat, which made AJ giggle at my embarrassment. Twilight, however, seemed to look even worse then me, a bigger blush on her face then the one on mine.

“W-w-well, I-I…”

“You’re stalling, that means you do clop!” Said Dash, a triumphed look on her face. Pinkie giggled, why, I don’t even know.

Twilight finally gave in. “Ok, I do clop.” She said, looking at the ground in shame.

I decided to step in at that moment. “Hey, there is no shame in…clopping…it’s natural to have those feelings, even I clop” They all looked at me with surprised looks on their faces again. “W-well, when you are alone like I have been, you need to do something to find…um…‘release’.”

Twilight looked at me in relief, happy that she wasn’t weird or anything like that. “Thanks Drak, I needed that.” I nodded to her and gestured at the bottle.

“Your turn now, Twi.” I said. She blushed again and then took the bottle, spinning it.

After a while, it landed onto Rarity. “Well, seeing as how I don’t feel like doing anything unladylike yet, I think I’ll stay with truth.” She said, flicking her mane back slightly.

Twilight was quiet for a few moments before speaking up. “Do you own any ‘Playmare’ magazines?”

Rarity looked shocked, like Twilight had just cursed at her. “What!? Do you girls really think that a mare of such high standards as myself would drop so low as to read a pornographic article?” she said, with much bumptious in her voice.

“Yes, we do, now tell us!” said AJ, clearly enjoying herself. Rarity glared at her, before giving a small nod, confirming that she indeed owned this ‘Playmare’ that they were talking about.

“Oh, could I borrow it for a while?” Asked Pinkie. We all looked at her and she said, “What? It’s good reading material.” Without another word, Rarity took the bottle and spun it, landing on AJ after a few moments.

AJ grinned at finally getting her turn. “Well, since ah’m always telling the truth, ah think ah’ll go with dare.” Rarity thought about her dare for a while, clearly wanting to get some revenge for the comment AJ made earlier. Finally, she spoke.

“I dare you to give us your sexiest moan.” Said Rarity, a grin on her face. AJ face was now a much deeper shade of orange then her coat.

“Y-you want me to do what, partner?” AJ asked, clearly surprised that it came from Rarity, of all ponies.

“You heard her AJ! Give us all you got!” Said Dash, clearly getting into this. AJ sighed in defeat, and began to take a few deep breaths. All of the girls leaned in a little, holding their breaths in anticipation. Even I leaned in slightly, curious as to what it might sound like.

AJ finally exhaled, letting out the sexiest moan that I have ever heard. It started out low, and only got slightly higher in tone, but it was long and drawn out. Also, the voice behind it all was, arousing, to say the least. AJ’s moan was surprisingly long as well, lasting for a good ten seconds before she slowly stopped. My eyes were wide open with surprise, and a little… arousal (ok, it was a lot of arousal, but whatever).

“Wowie! That was the best one yet!” Exclaimed Pinkie, who jumped in the air unusually high for some reason. I then realized that I was staring at AJ, and I quickly looked down, lowering my hat over my eyes, and giving off the brightest blush on my face. Unfortunately for me, it did not go unnoticed.

“Looky here, looks like somepony enjoyed your little show, AJ.” Dash said, a grin spreading across her face. I just blushed even more deeply then before. Both Pinkie and Dash laughed at my expression. AJ smiled at me in a seductive look.

“You enjoy that, sugarcube?” she said softly, leaning in slightly towards me. I was getting even more embarrassed when suddenly Fluttershy spoke up.

“AJ stop that, you’re embarrassing him.” She said, in a quiet tone. AJ smiled sheepishly.

“Ah’m sorry, partner, ah was jus’ teasing with ya’ll is all.” She said. I looked back at her, knowing she was telling the truth, and smiled. At that point, I decided to have some fun of my own.

“It’s ok, AJ. Beside, maybe later on tonight I could make you moan like that some more.” I said, winking at her slyly. This time, it was AJ who was blushing like crazy. Apparently, my comment caught everypony off guard, and they all stared at me. Rainbow and Pinkie began to laugh at the comeback comment that I said.

“Nice one, Drak!” said Rainbow, giving me a big grin. “I didn’t know that you had a playful side to you too.”

I shrugged, wincing as I moved my bad shoulder too much again. “I do, it just takes me a while to get comfortable with showing it.” I looked at AJ, who was still blushing. “Your turn, AJ.”

“Oh! Er…r-right.” She said, still flustered about my comment, she took the bottle and spun it, continuing the game.

After a while, it landed onto Fluttershy, who once again gave a small “squeak!”

“Umm, t-truth, I guess.” She said, hiding behind her mane.

“Hmm, lets see here…” said the country mare, tapping a hoof to her chin in thought. “Who do you love?” The question got an “oh” from Pinkie and another small “squeak” from Fluttershy.

The yellow Pegasus gave off the biggest blush of the night so far, and then looked down onto the floor, mumbling something. “What was that sugarcube?” Said AJ, all of them leaning in, including me. Fluttershy spoke up a little more, and this time we were able to hear from her, “I-I don’t know if it is love, but I don’t know if it isn’t either”

“Well, come on, Flutters, tell us!” Demanded Dash, clearly annoyed that she hasn’t said who it was yet.

Finally, she spoke. It was very quiet, however, and almost no pony could hear her. Well, except for me.

My eyes opened wide with surprise and in the heat of the moment, I just blurted it out. “You like m-me?!” I said. As soon as I said that, all of the other girls glanced at me in surprise, and then looked at Fluttershy for confirmation. Fluttershy was quiet for a while, and then she again spoke, but slightly louder then before, so that everypony could hear her.

“W-w-well, l-like I s-said, I don’t k-know if it I-is l-l-l-love, but I s-saw something w-when we l-looked into each o-others-e-eyes, a-and I felt something but I don’t know what it is please-don’t-hate-me!” she said, finishing her sentence in a quick burst of sudden energy.

This shocked me, once again, on many different levels. First, I was in a world full of talking ponies. However, we have already gone over this so I don’t feel disgusted by having a pony fall for me. Second, I never had a girlfriend, or marefriend before, so I didn’t know what to do in this kind of situation, so I did what I thought I should do: speak my mind.

“Fluttershy, I’m actually honored that you think you like me like that, but, well, why me?” I asked. Fluttershy looked at me, but turned away quickly before she spoke.

“W-well, I just f-felt something, and I just saw so much k-kindness coming from your eyes, I know it doesn’t make much sense, but-”

“Actually, I do understand.” I said, interrupting her. She looked at me with confusion and surprise on her face.

“Y-you do?”

I nodded. “Well, I normally don’t look people…er…ponies, in the eyes, because to me, it is a very personal thing to do. The reason being is because where I come from, some people think that the eyes are a gateway to the soul of the person, and are able to see the true feelings of the person. I normal don’t believe in these kinds of superstitions, but when I do look someone, or in this case, somepony in the eyes, I can somehow feel what they are feeling at the time. Of course, this is just my opinion, and I could be completely wrong, but so far it has been true.” I said, trying to comfort her. It seemed to work, for I was able to get a smile out of her. Then, she leaned into me and nuzzled me a little, getting a blush out of me and a giggle out of the rest of the mares in the room.

“T-thanks, Drak. T-that made me feel a lot better now. I’ll let you know when I get my feelings settled, I-if that’s all right with you?”

I nodded, slowly brushing her mane with my hand, making her hum with pleasure. “For you, Flutters, you can take all the time in the world.” This, of course, made Fluttershy blush and made the other girls ‘aw’ in delight (with the exception of Dash, who was looking bored at the whole affair).

“W-well, sugarcube, it’s your turn now.” Said, AJ. I looked at her and noticed that while she was happy, she looked to be thinking hard about something. Maybe she was upset, I didn’t know, but before I could ask her if she was ok, Fluttershy took the bottle and spun it. As the bottle spun, I carefully wrapped an arm around Fluttershy. She blushed when my arm made contact with her coat, but nevertheless, she leaned into my embrace. Eventually, the bottle stopped, pointing once again at Twilight.

“Ok, Fluttershy, I choose truth.” She said with a smile on her face as she looked upon us holding each other. All I did was tug on my hat in slight embarrassment as Fluttershy thought of what to ask her.

“Um, w-what would you h-have been if you weren’t a librarian, um, if that is alright?” Fluttershy said. Twilight thought how to answer the question for a few moments, until she spoke.

“Well, I’ve always wanted to be a scientist before, so I guess I would have been that, but I’m still glad that I was chosen as Celestia’s student, otherwise I would have never met you girls.” Everypony smiled at that. I on the other hand was wondering who this Celestia was.

“Hey, Twi?” I asked. She looked to me, though I still didn’t make eye contact yet, not being comfortable enough for it. “Who is Celestia?”

“Oh, I forgot to tell you. She and her sister, Luna, are the princesses of Equestria, which is the land that we are in.” She said in a matter of fact voice.

I blinked as I processed this new information. “Does that mean I should bow to you?” I said, in a joking manner. Twilight giggled at this and shook her head. “No you don’t, I’m just her student, that’s all.” She said. She then spun the bottle once again, and once again it landed onto Rainbow Dash.

“I think I’ll go for truth, since I don’t trust what will happen if I go for a dare.” Said the cyan mare, glaring at me. I just smiled and nodded to her.

“Hmm…” thought Twilight. “Oh, I know! Have you ever thought of doing ‘it’ with a mare?” Rainbow gave the purple unicorn a confused look. “Do what, Twi?” asked Dash.

“You know, make, uh, love to another mare?”

At this point, everypony was staring at Dash, waiting for her response. Dash was blushing so hard, even her face seemed like it would burst.

“W-w-w-well…” stammered the cyan mare. “I guess…you could say…that I have thought about it…but of course I have never done it before.” She said, stammering till the end. Before anypony could say anything else, Dash took the bottle again and spun it.

After what felt like forever, it once again, landed on me.

“You know what, I’m feeling lucky. I’m going to go with dare again.” I said, a smug look on my face. To my surprise, however, Dash began to rub her hooves together in a maniacal fashion, giggling to herself.

“Excellent…” she said, while giggling. Before I could say anything to quell my fear, however, Dash is already making her dare.

“I dare you to kiss Fluttershy, on the lips, for 30 seconds!”

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