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Gateway of the Eyes (First Draft)

by Drakalian

Chapter 24

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Chapter 24

I opened the door to our room, and I noticed that Trixie wasn’t in the room. I thought that I might have gotten here first, but then I could hear running water, and I thought that she might be washing up. I then remembered that I forgot to wash up myself at the library, so I decided to go and see if she was going to finish up soon so that I could wash myself up.

I knocked on the door and shouted, “Hey, Trixie, you gonna be done soon?”

“No, I just got in.” I heard from inside.

“Well, did you have fun with Luna while I was on my ‘punishment’?”

“Yup, Luna even gave me a few tips on some of the magic that we will be learning, as well as a few…other interesting tips.”

“Um, ok. I’m glad that you had fun.”

“Same here, though it was hard with some of the other ponies staring at me.” (I shivered upon hearing this, but I quickly calmed myself down.)

“Well, why were they staring at you, surely they all can’t hate you for something that you were already forgiven for.”

There was silence at the other end, and then I heard Trixie say, “Um, if you don’t mind, Drak, could you come in here please, so that I could talk to you easier.”

I was quiet for a moment, and then shrugging, I opened the door and entered, and then closed it behind me. The bathroom was quite roomy, and it even had two separate tubs, one for a bath, while one was for the shower. The shower one was the one that was currently occupied, and I could just see Trixie’s form through the slightly opaque glass. She seemed to be currently sitting down, just staring up, letting the water flow down her mane. The thought of her in there, with her coat and mane all wet, was kind of arousing, but I kept myself together for the moment, and said, “Ok Trixie, I’m in here, now what?”

I saw her silhouette shift slightly, and then the glass panel slides away, letting the azure unicorn stick her head out, her mane dripping with water, the sight of it making me blush. Unfortunately, Trixie saw my blushing, and she giggled, saying, “Does the sight of the Great and Powerful Trixie all wet…excite you?”

“Um…maybe?” I said, causing her to giggle again. We were quiet for a few moments, neither of us sure on what to say, and then I cleared my throat and asked, “So, why do you want me in here?”

Trixie was quiet for a few seconds, and then, hesitantly, she asked, “Um, I was, well…I was wondering, if you don’t mind, that is, if you could…um…come in the shower with me?”

I was quiet for few seconds, and then I said, “You know that will involve me taking my clothing of, right?” she nodded, and then said, “I’m well aware, and the others told me as to why you humans wear clothing all the time, and it was rather…interesting, to say the least.”

I was quiet for a few more seconds, and then I said, “Um, can I ask you why you want me in there with you?”

“Well, I just really want to…see what you look like without all your clothing. So, will my hero please do this one thing for me please.” She said, suddenly getting some confidence in her voice, and she began to give me the puppy eyes treatment.

Damn, why do they always do that, it makes it so hard to say no to some of these things that they ask me to do. Then again I’m not really complaining about the things that they do ask me to do, so…whatever.’ “Ok, just, give me a sec.” I said, taking my top part off first. She was quiet the entire time I was undressing, staring at my body as I stripped it out of my clothing. After a few seconds, all I had left was my boxers on, and I hesitated for a second, before I thought to myself, ‘Well, she is going to see it all sooner or later, might as well be sooner rather then later.’ And with that, I took my boxers off as well. So there I was, exposed to her, with her staring intently at my body, though I could see her eyes paying the most attention to my crotch. After a few seconds of her staring, I cleared my throat to get her attention and said, “Well, mind making some room for me in there, please.”

Trixie blushed when I spoke, seeming to realize what was going to happen in the next few seconds, and said, “Oh, r-right. C-c-come in.” With that, she moved to the side a little, and I entered the shower with her still in it.

The hot water rain over my cooling body as I stepped in, letting the heat sink into my skin. I took a glance at Trixie and saw her entire form soaked in the water, her coat clinging to her skin and outlining her body nicely. I could feel my arousal increase as I stared at her slender, yet curvy form, my member starting to rise up. Apparently, Trixie noticed this, and she blushed a little more, saying, “Am I really that attractive to you?”

I quickly nodded, saying, “Of course you are, Trixie, you just look so…beautiful.”

She blushed some more and looked away slightly, saying, “Well, I appreciate that you did this for me, I really wanted to…see what you look like.” I nodded my understanding, and then as I started to wash myself, I asked her, “So, what was the deal with all of the other ponies staring at you?”

She looked back to me and sighed at this and said, “Well, most of the ponies know about what happened to me when I first came to Ponyville, and they didn’t want to see my shows anymore. I actually had to get a job at a rock farm to earn some bits, which surprisingly was the farm that Pinkie’s family owns.”

“I didn’t know she came from a farm.” I said, raising an eyebrow in curiosity.

“I didn’t either, but then again, it makes sense that she moved from there since she was most likely bored by the whole deal.” She said, a small smile on her face. I noticed at this point that she was apparently starting to breath a bit deeply, though I didn’t pay any attention to it.

“So, was that why you came back to Ponyville after your second…incident?” I asked her, curious as to her reasoning.

Trixie nodded. “Yes, Ponyville was my last resort as you can call it, I guess. However, the only ponies there that would even talk to me were Fluttershy and Zecora, a zebra that lives in the Everfree Forest, and she could understand what it was like to be shunned by others, though they did become more friendly to her later on. I was actually coming back from her place when the Manticore attacked me, and I would have died too, but then you came along, and…well, you know the rest.” We became quiet for a few seconds, unsure as to what to say to the other, and then I smelled something. It was very faint, but I could still smell it, and it smelled…enticing to say the least.

“Hey, you smell that?” I asked her. The unicorn froze upon hearing me say that, and quickly said, “Uh, I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

I looked at her with a raised eyebrow, and then, I noticed something that I didn’t see before. I saw that her legs were crossed in front of her, blocking the view from her neither regions. Though I already saw her cover herself when I first got into the shower, this time I saw that she had a foreleg behind her hind legs, and it was moving every so slightly. I then put one and one together, and said, in a confused voice, “Um, are…are you…”

She was silent for a moment, a confused look on her face as well, and then she looked down to were I was staring at, and as soon as she saw what I saw, she began to blush even harder, and she stopped her movement, saying, “Um, that, I wasn’t…doing that…uh…I was…well…”

She went silent for a few moments, looking down to the floor, before she said, “Ok, I was clopping while I was watching you, but I can’t help it, you are just so…enticing, I don’t know how else to put it. It just…it just makes me all warm and fuzzy inside, like there’s this fire that only you can quench.” She began to slowly rub herself again, and as she rubbed herself, she spread her rear legs slightly, just barely giving me a view of her lower lips. I began to get a little excited myself, and I could feel my manhood reacting to the sight of her rubbing herself, getting harder and longer. I began to get an urge to touch myself as well, but I decided to hold back for the moment, even though it was very difficult, with Trixie clopping right in front of me. We were silent for a moment, and then, after a good minute of her clopping in front of me, she said, “Um, Drak. If it is all right with you, I would like us to…you know…make love right now, if that’s ok. I’ll understand if you don’t want to, I mean, who would want to have sex with Trixie, the pony that has made so many mistakes, that turned a whole town into slaves, just for some petty revenge, and-”

I quickly stopped her by gently placing a hand on her mouth, getting her to stop her rambling. I went down to one knee and looked straight into her lavender eyes, seeing the confusion as to what I was doing. I was quiet for a second, my hand on her mouth, while my other hand stroked her wet mane to calm her down.

“Trixie, it would be an honor to make love with you, for I feel for the pony that I’m staring at right now, and I love her as much as any one of my herd mates. I don’t hate you just because you made a few mistakes, everypony makes mistakes, no pony is perfect, even the Princesses, hell, even me, and I prefer it like that, for if everypony was perfect, then the world would be a very boring place to be.” I said, causing me to chuckle slightly, which also caused Trixie to giggle under my hand. Thinking that she was going to listen to me now, I removed my hand from her mouth and cupped her cheek instead. I noticed that the entire time I was talking to her, she kept on rubbing herself a little more, spreading her legs out farther, making it easier to see her hoof just parting her marehood as she pleasured herself. “So, if it makes you feel any better, I am just as nervous as you are right now, just as I am nervous of all of my times with each of you, for each one of you girls is special to me, and I am always scared that I would do something wrong and…well, the thought of me messing up something of this emotional caliber, it just makes me shiver with fright. The only question that I will ask you is this: do you really want to do it right now?”

Trixie was quiet for another few seconds, just staring back into my emerald eyes, and then, softly, she spoke.

“In all honesty, I would love to make love to you. The only experience that I had was with my hoof, as well as a few…toys, but I am hoping that you can show me how you really feel about me, even though I already know how you feel, this would…I just…um…argh, just bucking kiss me already!”

And with that, she suddenly lunged forward, placing her lips right on mine, her body crushing my cock in between us. We were soon kissing with an equal amount of emotion, out lips flowing off of one another, our tongues in each other’s mouth. My hands went around her back, and I began to search for her wings. For some reason, I couldn’t find any, and I was confused for a second, and then I remembered that she was a unicorn, and I thought to myself, ‘Hmm, forgot about that. Well, this is my first time with a horned pony, besides Luna. Might as well try a few of those tricks that I still need to do then.’ I continued to caress her back, just rubbing it in small circles, and I brought my right hand down to her plot, giving it a squeeze. She broke contact with my lips, gasping as she felt the unexpected grab from my hand, before she gave me a lewd smile, saying, “So, you want a piece of the Great and Powerful Plot?”

“You have no idea.” I said, giving her a grin before I placed my other hand right on her cutie mark, which is a crescent moon and wand, and began to apply pressure to it, making her moan. I smiled at the expression that she made, and then I began to kiss her nose, bringing my kisses up across her face, until I reached her ears. Once I reached them, I gently blew across them, getting a little gasp from her in the process. I could feel her squirming in my grip, and with another grin, I began to gently nibble on the tip of one of her ears.

She gasped at the feeling, and I could feel her body go rigid with the pleasure that was coursing through her, making me smile a little more. I then decided to fully concentrate at the job at hand, and began to continue to nibble her ears, making her squirm some more under the intense pleasure. As I was nibbling her ears, I could feel her slowly gyrating her marehood on the underside of my shaft, making me moan a little as well. We continued this for a few more minutes, both of us just enticing the other to continue what they were doing, me playing with her rump in one hand, while my other hand was caressing her cutie mark, and I continued to nibble and tease her ear tips, while she just moaned in pleasure, only able to grind her marehood on my shaft, going faster as the pleasure intensified. After a while, I felt her shift slightly as she got off of my lap. I was confused for a second, and then I saw her turn around, raising her plot into the air, giving it an enticing shake similar to the one that Lotus gave me, and said, “The Great and Powerful Trixie demands that you eat her Great and Powerful Pussy.”

I smiled at her, before I raised her plot up in the air a little more, getting her rear legs over my shoulder. I looked at her pussy, which was already swollen with desire, and without any hesitation, I began to give it long hard licks, getting a taste that was enticing, making me eager for more. As I licked her, she groaned some more, saying, “Yes, Trixie loves that. Keep licking Trixie just like that, it makes her feel so good.” I smiled and did as she told me to, kissing her lower lips as I continued to lick her petals, making her give silent moans of delight. After a while, I began to flick her clit with my tongue a little, causing her to gasp in surprise and pleasure. I then felt a strange sensation go across my dick, and when I paused to look down, I noticed that Trixie was currently licking my cock, getting it wet with more then just the water from the shower. She apparently noticed that I stopped her treatment of her marehood, and so she stopped licking my cock, pumping it with a hoof, and with an annoyed stare, she said, “Keep licking my cunt, human.”

“Of course, my Great and Powerful Trixie.” I said, giving her a little smile. I went back to her pussy and began to continue my treatment on it, while the entire time the unicorn would keep a constant pressure on my cock with her slow pumping, giving it long, hard licks all along the entire length of it. It felt so nice, her tongue just getting at all of the right spots while I kept on licking her, and then I could feel her start to engulf my cock slowly, causing me to moan into her pussy at the feeling of it, which in turn made her moan as well, vibrating my cock. I continued to lick her cunt and give little sucks on her clit, making her moan even more, making my cock vibrate with pleasure. Soon, I began to loose it, and to speed things up, I decided to place my tongue inside of her, rubbing the inside of her pussy, making her cries of pleasure go louder. As my tongue began to piston her love cavern, she began to slowly suck me, bobbing her head at a steady pace, making me groan at the treatment that I was getting. I realized that I would soon blow my load, but before I could do anything, Trixie suddenly deep throated me, making my cock get strangled by the muscles in her throat. As soon as I felt it, I couldn’t hold myself any longer, and I removed my mouth from her pussy, giving a sharp gasp as I blew my load inside her throat. As soon as I was coming, she began to drink it up, her throat muscles constricting and relaxing around my cock as she drank my cum, making me even more aroused, and making me want the azure unicorn even more. After a good few more seconds of spurts, I slowed down to a trickle, and then finally stopped, and she began to clean my cock off. After a few more minutes of her tongue licking around my shaft, she finally pulled my manhood out, a smug look on her face.

“What, you came already? Trixie expected more from you, human.” She said, wiping a bit of cum from her face.

I gave her an equally smug smile and said, “Well, in that case, let’s see how fast you come.” And before she could say anything, I quickly replaced my mouth on her lower lips and thrust my tongue deep inside her. She gasped as she felt my tongue wiggling in her marehood, and then she moaned as she began to give a slow hoof job on my dick, keeping it erect, and then she said, “You…y-you w-w-w-will have t-t-to…d-do b-b-better t-then that, h-human.”

Oh, don’t worry, I am going to do much better than this.’ I thought to myself. I continued to move my tongue deep inside her pussy, still making her moan, and then I brought my right hand to her stomach, and slowly began to caress it, making her moan some more, before I brought it down to her teats. I gently rubbed and pinched the nipples, making her give small gasps of pleasure as my tongue continued to piston her pussy. After a good while of this, I brought my hand further south of her body, and I began to play with her clit, gently rubbing it between my fingers, making her give a very sharp gasp.

“T-T-Trixie…c-c-can…t-t-t-take…m-m-more…h-human.” She said, desperately trying to hold herself together, making me smirk a little. I decided that enough was enough, and I brought my free hand up to her forehead, and I began to gently pump her horn, giving it a sight squeeze every time I was at the tip of it. It turns out that she was unable to hold onto herself any more after that, and she gave a loud cry of pleasure as she came, filling my mouth with her sweet, delicious nectar. I began to greedily drink it down as she sighed in relief, the feeling of her afterglow making her light headed. After a good few minutes, we both had enough energy to move onto the next step.

“Well, now comes the real fun.” Said Trixie, a hint of nervousness in her voice. I smiled, and gave her plot a small comforting kiss, since her crotch was still in my face at the moment, and said; “You may choose the position if you like to.”

“Ok, just…move my hind legs off of your shoulders, please.” I did as she asked me to, and then she slid her body forward, kneeling on the shower floor, her chest and face lying on the ground, her plot once again in the air, her marehood still swollen with anticipation. I smiled as I slid to her, getting into position, the tip of my dick just grazing her swollen lips, making us both moan in anticipation. I began to slowly slip it inside of her, her pussy slowly taking every inch of my cock until I hilted her, my hips up against her plot. I groaned in satisfaction, and then noticed that Trixie had an uncomfortable look to her, and worried, I said, “You ok, Trixie?”

She was quiet for a second, and then she said, “Y-yea, you’re j-just…a b-bit thicker then the t-toys that I used.” I raised an eyebrow, and said, “Well, just tell me when to move.” She nodded, and as she slowly adjusted to my size, I began to massage her cutie marks, making her moan a little more, getting her used to the feeling of my cock buried deep inside her. After about thirty seconds, she nodded, and I began to slowly pump her marehood, making us both moan as we began our love making session. I slowly rocked my hips back and forth, my cock getting straggled by her pussy, and I kept a close eye on her, making sure that she was enjoying it as much as I was. Thankfully, she was, and she began to moan even louder as I increased my speed. I kept on thrusting inside of her, my hips making a wet smacking sound as they constantly came into contact with her plot. As I pumped her pussy, I would use my hands that were on her cutie marks to help me with the thrusts, making my manhood go even deeper into her, the tip of my dick just piercing her cervix. As I kept up with my thrusts, she would back up into me, making me go just a little deeper when I enter her, making us both gasp with delight. We were both in a new kind of high as we continued to buck each other, making us cry out with the pleasure that we were receiving. We both moaned as the feeling in our neither regions began to build up, and I knew that it was only a matter of time before one of us would blow.

“Keep doing that, keep bucking Trixie’s Great and Powerful Pussy, Trixie loves her pussy getting rammed with your dick.” Said the azure unicorn, her mind blank with the pleasure that she was feeling. For some reason, the way that she talked just made me more excited, wanting her more, and I began to buck her even faster now, my hips making her move slightly forward every time I came into contact with her ass, making us shiver with delight. I noticed that I was getting close, and this time, wanting both of us to finish at the same time, I brought one of my hands forward, and began to pump her horn as fast as I could, making her give a sudden cry of pleasure as she came. Her juices flowed all over my cock, and I grunted as I began to thrust into her as fast as possible, wanting to get myself off right now. After a few more short, swift thrusts, I finally ejected my semen deep into her womb, mixing it with her own juices. We panted for a while, letting the water from the shower grip over our tired bodies. The water from the shower had already lost its heat, but we were too tired to notice, as well as too tired to care. All I could do was slowly move myself inside of her, just breathing deeply in the afterglow. I could tell just by looking at her that Trixie was feeling the same emotions that I was at the time as well, and loving every moment of it.

I slowly pulled myself out, and once I left her marehood, the mixture of our cum started to slowly flow out of her pussy, dripping onto the shower floor before it got carried away by the water and into the drain. Once I was out, she quickly turned to face me, and embraced me in a tight hug. I was a bit surprised at first, but I quickly recovered from my initial shock and hugged her back. I was confused for a second, and then I could hear her crying onto my shoulder, and worried, I pulled us apart a little to look at her face, and asked, “What’s wrong, Trixie, I thought you said that you wanted to do this?”

She was quiet for a moment, sniffling a little, and then she said, “I’m j-just so…happy that we did it. It was…t-the m-most…incredible experience ever, and I’m just so g-glad that…you w-were…the one that I g-got to…s-share it with.”

I smiled at her, and then gave her a kiss on the lips, which she just as quickly responded. We stayed there for a good while, both of us enjoying the simple touches of our lips on one another, and then I separated them, and said, “Well, after all of that incredible sex, I feel really tired right now. Would you like to head off to bed right now?”

Trixie smiled at me, and said, “I would love to, Drak, but we should first finish up on our washing.”

I nodded my agreement, and we both began to wash each other off. After a good few minutes, we both exited the shower and dried ourselves off. Once we were dry, I went to place my boxers on, but Trixie stopped me, and said, “Um, if it’s all right with you, can you just…keep your clothing off for the night, please?”

I was curious as to why she wanted me to do that, but nevertheless, I nodded, and together, we both headed back into the bedroom, with me carrying my clothing with me instead.

I placed my clothing next to the bed, so that I wouldn’t forget about it tomorrow and Trixie jumped onto the bed, swaying her hips from side to side, making my manhood get hard again, though I was too tired for another session, and I could tell that Trixie was too tired for anther one as well. I smiled at her, and got into the bed and under the covers with her. Once comfortable, I felt her snuggle up next to me, both of us facing each other, and then, surprisingly, I felt her hoof reach for my dick, and she quickly placed it back into her marehood, making us both moan a little at the feeling.

I gave a small, tired smile at her, and said, “You know, you could have just asked.”

Trixie gave a tired giggled at this, and said, “I know, but I’m too tired to ask right now.”

I nodded, understanding her completely, for I was just as tired as she was right now. I just held onto her tightly, and then, she gently placed her lips onto my own, leaving it there, and soon, I could hear her snoring as she fell asleep. I smiled, closed my eyes, and began to fall asleep along with her, my lips not at once leaving her own lips as we both relaxed under the gaze of Luna’s moon.

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