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Gateway of the Eyes (First Draft)

by Drakalian

Chapter 14

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Chapter 14

I looked at the field with a discerning eye, making sure that it was up to the task of a sparing match, while at the same time making sure that there weren’t many ponies here that would make it a problem for me. From what I was able to tell, it looked pretty darn good. There was a barracks nearby, which I assumed that some of the guards would sleep there. To one side of the field there were some training dummies, for practice purposes I assumed. Next to them, the field became big and open and it seemed big enough for the type of sparing we were about to do. Another surprising thing was that there seemed to be some sort of magical shield around the training grounds, and it appeared to keep the weather outside, keeping it warm inside so that the guards could train in good conditions. One thing, though, was that we weren’t alone.

There were lots of guards all over the place, however, they were so spread out that it didn’t really affect me that much. I noticed that some of them were stopping in their training to take a look at us as well as Shining. I assumed that they didn’t see him that often, so they were probably excited to see him as well.

“Well, you think that this is going to be a problem for you with all of the guards here?” asked Shining, obviously concerned that I might start panicking. I simply smiled and shook my head, saying, “This should be fine by me, the question is, are you going to be ok when I beat you in front of all of these guards?”

Shining grinned at me, getting the jib, and said, “We will see who is getting beaten today, won’t we?”

I just smiled; preparing my mind and body for the match that was about to commence. I took my hoodie off, feeling comfortable enough to go on without it while also not wanting to get it ruined again. We walked to the opposite sides of the field, and once we got there, Celestia came out to the middle of the field, and began to state the rules of the match.

“The rules of this sparing match are simple. There will be no weapons, it will be hoof to hoof…or hoof to hand…combat only. There will be no magic, since Drakalian here can’t use any magic. Try to avoid doing anything too dangerous, and whatever you do, don’t hurt yourselves too badly. The last thing I want is to bring one of you two or both of you to the hospital. Do both of the contestants understand these rules?”

We both nodded in response. Celestia looked at both of us, trying to see if she forgot anything. When it was clear that she didn’t she backed up to the edge of the field and said, “You may start when you are ready.”

I got into a cat stance and prepared myself for the match ahead. I saw Shining do something similar as well with the exception that he was on four legs instead of two. I decided to let him go first, seeing as I probably had the edge in defending myself (though by the looks of his cutie mark, it might be difficult for me to break his defense as well).

Like I suspected, Shining made his move first. He started by running at me at high speed, before jumping up in the air and coming down on me, both of his fore hooves heading straight towards my face. I swiftly stepped to the side, and as he passed me, I grabbed his closest fore hoof with both of my hands. Using his own momentum against him, I spun him around in a 180 and released my grip, sending him flying away from me as fast as he came at me. He recovered quickly though; tucking himself into a roll as he hit the ground, rolling a few times before he fluidly righted himself back up. Once back on his hooves, he began to charge back at me, though not with as much speed as before. Once he got in front of me, he pivoted on his forelegs and bucked at me, aiming for my chest. I blocked with my arms then before he could recover from his buck, I aimed a crescent kick for his face. He blocked me easily by lifting one of his front hooves up, and before I could react, using his other hoof, landing a hit on the inside of my knee, making me buckle under the impact. As I fell, I was able to bring my arm up and elbow him along the back, causing him to fall with me. We both lay there on the ground for a second before we got ourselves back up. Once we were up, we started to stare at each other, analyzing the damage that we just did to the other.

It went on like this for a good few more minutes, each of us trading blow after blow, counter after counter, hit after hit. While Shining gave the majority of the blows, I was able to sneak in some hits on him as well.

After a while, we stood in front of each other, panting from the exertion that we made our bodies go through. I knew that if I didn’t finish this soon, I would lose the match, and therefore, the challenge. For some reason, I didn’t like the idea of becoming Dash’s slave for a whole day. The injuries were beginning to accumulate, making it harder to go on. The knee that he first hit was starting to ache, causing me to limp slightly, for he was able to hit it a few more times during our bouts. I also had a few bruises and scratches on my arms, back, and chest from when I landed on a rock or pebble the wrong way. Shining was in a better condition then I was, though he still sported some bruising that shone through his white coat. He also had the forming of a black eye that I gave him when he least expected it, and it was beginning to swell.

As I stared at Shining, I could see that he was getting tired himself, though not as nearly as tired as me. As I began to contemplate my next move, Shining suddenly reared on his hind legs, aiming his forelegs for my chest again. As he lunged forward legs first, I ducked under him and, putting as much energy into my hand as I could, aiming a fist straight back for his chest. As I was throwing the punch, though, something strange seemed to happen. It was so brief that I could have sworn that it was a trick of the eye, but I knew that it had to be real.

My hand began to create a soft red glow.

As soon as it made contact with Shining’s chest, he let out a large “OOF! The punch sent him flying for a good twenty-five feet before he landed on his side. I stood there, shocked with what just happened, before a wave of nausea came over me, and I sagged to the ground, clutching my stomach in pain.

Instantly, Fluttershy was next to me, a hoof around me, trying to hold me up. “Drak! You ok?”

I was about to answer, but then another wave of nausea came, and without another warning, I threw up on the ground in front of me, this morning’s breakfast meal exfiltrating my mouth and landing on the ground. I threw up for a good ten seconds before I was able to calm myself down enough to take a few deep breathes. Fluttershy was there by my side, comforting me, and by that time AJ and Luna were there too, with the rest of the girls coming to check on me, while Celestia and Cadence went to check on Shining. As I looked up at them, I noticed that Shining was able to get up without much difficulty, though as they were walking towards me, I did see him limp slightly, seeming to favor his right foreleg more then his left.

“Drak are you ok? Did you just use magic?” Said Twilight, excitement and worry on her face. I then noticed that Rarity apparently fainted, I assume from my puke more then anything else. As I looked upon the mares, I began to feel tired, and I slowly sank to the ground, thankfully avoiding the pile of puke.

“Drak, stay with us, come on!” shouted Luna, desperation in her voice.

“Com’on, sugarcube, don’t fall asleep on us now!” said AJ, with the same amount of worry in her voice as well.

As my eyes closed, the last thing that I saw was all of the girls looking down at me, with Shining just coming into view.

The last thing that I heard was, “Get a doctor!” from Celestia, before my ears turned themselves off.

Finally, the last thought that I had was ‘Well, so much for not going to the hospital.’ Before I completely blacked out.


I woke up to the sound of constant beeping, and the feeling of a soft bed under me. I groaned as I tried to get up, but as I sat up, a wave of pain spread from my head and all over my body. I then felt somepony’s hoof gently force me back down onto my bed, saying, “I’d advise against getting up anytime soon. Right now, your body needs to rest.”

I groaned as I opened my eyes and saw Shining next to me, a cast around his left foreleg. I tired to speak, but all that came out was a soft wheeze. Shining hoofed me a glass of water, saying, “Drink some water, your body needs the liquid right now.” I gratefully took the water from him and began to greedily gulp it down, not realizing how thirsty I really was. As I drank the water, I notice that Shining’s horn was glowing; I assumed that he was contacting the others to come down and see me. I could feel my energy slowly coming back to me as I drank the water. I also noticed that the pain was starting to recede, lessening to a dull throb. As the pain faded, I also noticed that I wasn’t wearing any of my clothes. Fortunately, I did have a thin blanket over me, but it did seem a bit inadequate for me.

“How do you feel?” asked Shining, concern on his face. I took a few deep breaths before I answered him.

“Tired, slight pain, and very, very thirsty.” I said, my mouth still feeling dry. Shining hoofed me another glass of water, which I again happily accepted. I felt that I had enough energy to sit up properly this time, and I was able to do so without much pain. That was when I noticed that there were several more glasses on the counter next to me. I guess they knew that I would be thirsty once I woke up.

“Yup, that’s what happens when you overexert on magic, it can have any number of effects on you, from dehydration to nausea. Fortunately, you came out lucky, or so it seems.”

I blinked at him in confusion. “D-did, you say that…I…I u-used…”

“Magic? Yes, that is exactly what I am saying.”

Before I could ask him any more questions, the door to the room burst open, and in walked Celestia, Cadence, and a very worried Luna.

“Drakalian!” cried Luna, practically tackling me back onto the bed, giving me a death hug. I gasped in pain as she hugged me, which brought her attention back to me, and she quickly released her hold on me, but still kept her hooves around me, a worried expression on her face. I smiled at her. I then realized that there were dried tears on her face, with new ones threatening to come out. I quickly tried to soothe her by gently placing a hand on the side of her face, caressing her cheeks gently.

“Sshh, it’s ok, Luna, I’m fine as you can see.” I said, trying to make her feel better. It seemed to do the trick, but I was still able to see a look of sadness on her face. Suddenly, a thought popped into my head. “W-what’s the day t-today?”

Luna looked at me and said, “Sunday. Today’s Sunday.”

I was quiet as I let the information sink in. ‘Ok, so we got here on Thursday, and we sparred on Friday, which means I was out for…t-two days…

I let the realization of it sink in, and when I looked at Luna, I could tell that she knew that I knew. I quickly brought her into a hug and she just as quickly responded. We just sat there, hugging each other, afraid that if one of us lets go, the other one we begin to fade into nothingness.

We stayed like that for what felt like hours, until Celestia cleared her throat to get our attention. We slowly released each other from our hug, but Luna still kept a hoof around me, nuzzling her face into my shoulder, while I kept brushing her mane.

“So, Drakalian. How were you able to use magic? I thought you told me that humans weren’t able to use magic in the first place.”

I gave a one-shoulder shrug, since my other shoulder was occupied at the moment, and said, “Honestly, I have no idea. I have some theories, but nothing certain yet.” The Sun Princess nodded, understanding my confusion, I assumed. “If it’s all right with you, I really don’t feel like talking about it, for I still feel pretty tired.”

Once again, she nodded, saying, “I understand. This usually happens when first timers use a higher-class spell without any proper training. We can talk about this in the morning. As for now, you should get some sleep. Lulu, we need to go and lower the sun right now, I promise that you can visit him after we are done. I also need to talk to you about…certain things…”

I raised an eyebrow at this, curious at what those certain things might be. Whatever it was, it caused Luna to blush a lot. Nevertheless, she did what her sister said to do, but not without first giving me a quick kiss on the cheek, to which I responded in kind. Once they left the room, I was alone with just Cadence and Shining Armor.

I looked at the two; all three of us were quiet, unsure as to what to say, until I finally broke the silence. Chuckling, I said, “Well, I think that you won the match, Shining, since I used magic…somehow…” This caused Shining to chuckle a little.

“Well, I’m just lucky that it wasn’t that strong of a spell, otherwise I would have more then a broken leg from it.” He said, gesturing to his leg that was in a sling.

I chuckled a little at this as well, saying, “Yea…sorry about that.”

Shining just waved off the apology with his good hoof, saying, “It’s not that big of a deal. Besides, I’ve had much worse injuries when I was training some of the new recruits. Why, I remember one time that I was teaching some of them how to properly buck an opponent that is charging them. Well, one of the targets was loose, so when the recruit went to buck it, it went sailing right towards me. I believed it gave me a few broken ribs as well as two broken legs.”

I raised another eyebrow at this, somewhat surprised. “That must have been painful.”

“Trust me, it was so much more painful then the one that I got now.” He said, chuckling some more.

I then realized that my other marefriends, as well as my other friends, were nowhere to be seen. “Hey, where are Fluttershy, AJ, and the rest? I would have expected to seen them once they heard that I was awake.”

“Well, Celestia said that they had to get back to Ponyville, though it was pretty hard to get them to leave you by yourself, especially Fluttershy. That poor mare had a death grip on you the whole time that you were out, silently crying for you. We practically had to pry her off of your bed just to get her to follow the others.” The news made me feel bad for putting them through such pain, especially Fluttershy, of all ponies. I made a mental note to apologize to them once I got back to Ponyville.

The whole time, Cadence was quiet, patiently waiting for Shining to finish, before she cleared her throat to get my attention. “Well, now that you’re out of the danger zone, as it were, I was wondering, if you would still be up to asking those questions that you wanted me to answer for you?”

I was silent for a few moments before I realized what she was talking about. Once I did, I blushed saying, “W-well as l-long as it’s n-not a problem…”

Cadence smiled and nodded, saying, “Trust me, its no problem at all.” I nodded at this, and then I notice that Shining was going to leave the room to give us some privacy, before I stopped him, saying, “Wait, Shining, if it’s all right with you, can you stay here with me as well?”

Shining looked at me, a curious look on his face. “Really? Cause usually, when somepony asks these questions to my wife, they prefer to do it in privacy.”

I shook my head, saying, “Well, I’m not like most others, in case you haven’t noticed.” This brought a chuckle from Shining, as well as a giggle from Cadence. Shining went back to his spot next to his wife and sat down, waiting for me to ask my questions.

I was silent for a few moments, trying to figure out how to ask the question, before I decided to just say it out loud. “W-well, I w-was w-wondering…w-what are the…um…what’s the…best way to…’satisfy’…a mare?” I said, getting progressively quieter as I spoke. I was embarrassed by my question, even if it is with good intentions. Cadence, however, was smiling the whole time I was saying my question.

Once I finished my question, she spoke. “Well, it differs for each race, so to start with, we will start with the Pegasus pony. Now, they have certain spots on their wings that can act as erogenous zones, and if rubbed that right way, is a good place to start an intimate moment with your special somepony. Now, the Unicorn pony’s horn is a very sensitive part of the body, and it has to be in order to correctly use the spells that are needed to perform. This also means that it is very sensitive to pleasure, much like that of a stallion’s penis, and has been known to be used as such when two mares get together. Next, the Earth pony, which have very sensitive hooves, since they are always working with the earth, so they need to have sensitive hooves as the unicorns need to have sensitive horns. A good way to begin foreplay with them is to begin a good hoof massage, and since I have heard that you were hired to be a masseur at the local spa, then it shouldn’t be a problem. Finally, we have the Alicorns, and since they have all of the properties of the others, the same things that would help stimulate any other race will also affect them. Oh, and all of the ponies are sensitive where they get their cutie marks, which is another way to begin foreplay with your special somepony.”

“Don’t forget about the ears, Cadence.” Said Shining in between chuckles.

“Oh, of course, thanks Shiny. The ears of the pony, especially right behind them, on the tip of them, or at the base, is also another way to get your special somepony into the ‘intimate’ mode. So, with that all said, any questions?”

I was shocked that Cadence could talk about such intimate things with ease. Shining was still silently chuckling the whole time that his wife talked, most likely from the expression on my face. As I processed the words, a few things suddenly came to mind. One thing that I remembered was the day that I massaged Lotus, and how she melted when I was massaging her hooves. It definitely explained a lot about her reaction to it. I then finally notice that Shining was chuckling before using his good hoof to close my mouth that had opened up during Cadence’s little speech. I shook my head, and I could feel a blush forming on my face as I spoke.

“I-I-I t-t-t-think that I’m g-g-g-good n-now, t-thank y-y-you.” I said, practically tripping on my own words. Shining Armor chuckled at this, while Cadence giggled slightly.

“Hey, if it makes you feel any better, you seem to be taking this much better then other ponies that have came up to me with similar problems.” Said Cadence. I just sat there, the blush still evident on my cheeks. After a few moments of quietness, I was able to gain enough composure to get my mind back to the present.

“W-well, I g-guess I just wasn’t expecting such…uh…openness to the whole thing.” I said. I looked at Shining, who was still laughing silently at my expression, and said, “I can see why other ponies normally don’t want you to be here when she explains this stuff to them, Shining.”

Shining stopped his laughing, grinning sheepishly, before he cleared his throat, saying, “Well, if that is all, then me and Cadence do need to be going, for we have quiet a lot of stuff to do right now.”

“Ok, Shiny. See you later, Drak. Hopefully you’ll be better when we see you again.”

“Yup, in more ways then one.” Shining chuckled, before getting a glare from his wife, making him grin sheepishly again. Without another word, they both left the room, leaving me all alone to relax for a while, that is, until Luna came back in.

As Luna walked in, she closed the door behind her, and then quickly got onto the bed and laid next to me, embracing me in a big hug. I was quick to reply, hugging her back with equal affection. As we hugged, I could hear Luna crying silently onto my shoulder, so I tried to comfort her, saying, “Hey, it’s ok now, I’m awake, there’re no major injuries to me, and now I can even use magic. If anything, things turned out for the better.”

Luna released her grip on me slightly to look me in the eyes, saying, “That may be true, but you worried all of us to death, especially poor Fluttershy.”

“I know, and I promise that I will apologize to them once I get back to Ponyville.”

“You mean, once we get back to Ponyville.”

I raised any eyebrow at this, saying, “But what about your duties as a princess?”

“Celestia deemed that this was important to be one of my new duties. She told me that it was now my job along with Twilight to help you hone your magical abilities, so that things like this won’t happen again.”

I was quiet for a second, and then I smiled, giving a quick kiss on her nose, causing her to blush slightly. “I think that it’s a marvelous idea, as Rarity would put it.” That caused us both to chuckle slightly, before we both became quiet, simply staring into the other’s eyes, holding each other the whole time. Finally, after what felt like ages, Luna spoke.

“I…I think I’m ready now.” Her statement confused me, before I realized what she was saying, and once I did, both of my eyebrows went up in surprise. “Are you sure? I don’t want you to do this without being completely ready.”

She nodded, saying, “Since the sparing match between you and Shining, I’ve been giving it a lot of thought, and now I’m certain that you are the one.” She took a deep breath, as if preparing herself for something. Finally, she said, in her old accent, “Drakalian, will thou do thy honors of being our first in thy makings of love?”

I was quiet for a second, contemplating the situation. Finally I said, in her own accent as well, “Twill by thy own honor if thou’st would allow us to be thy first in thy makings of love.”

Luna smiled at me, and I smiled back. We slowly brought our lips together and once they connected, our tongues began to clash with each other, sometimes in her mouth, other times in my mouth. As we kissed, we slowly leaned back onto the bed; our lips never left the other’s lips for a second. We part our lips for a second to get a breather, and she quickly got under the covers with me, before we began to kiss again with renewed vigor. As we lie there on our sides, I could feel her slowly grinding her hips on my leg, getting my leg wet with her arousal. I could feel her hoof rubbing my chest before descending lower onto my stomach. Finally, she reached my manhood, which was already hard from her just dry humping me, and began to stroke it on the underside of it, causing me to moan into the kiss. I remembered a few minutes ago what Candence said about pleasuring a mare, so I decided to try and use some of those techniques right now. I got up on my elbow, and with my free hand, began to caress her closest wing, causing her to moan into our kiss as well. I kept looking for the erogenous zones that Candence mentioned, and after a little more rubbing, my fingers felt a small bump on her wing right between the base of her wing and the first wing joint. As soon as I brushed up against it, Luna broke our kiss suddenly and groaned loudly in pleasure. I smiled, glad that I was doing well so far, and I quickly positioned myself so that I was over her, my hand still rubbing against her wing’s g-spot. Luna kept on groaning and sighing in pleasure, her hoof still on my rock hard cock, rubbing it even faster now. As I pleasured her wing, I gently lay myself on top of her, being careful not to put too much pressure on her. I begin to kiss her along her neck; bringing out more moans of pleasure from her. I brought my free hand to her other wing and I began to rub on that wing’s g-spot. Next, I moved my other hand that was massaging her first wing, and slowly moved it onto her stomach, rubbing it in slow circles. Luna groaned at the treatment, bringing her free hoof around my neck and caressing my back. After a few more minutes, I brought my hand lower onto her and eventually reached her teats. The size of them was obviously larger then Fluttershy’s, but if they were the same size, then so would their teat size. I grasped as much of her teat as I could, rubbing her nipples in between the lengths of my fingers, causing more moans of encouragement from her. As I rubbed them, she brought her other hoof that was around me down to my crotch, and then with both of her hooves on my shaft, she began to give me her hoof job. As she continued to jerk my length, I began to sigh with content, and then I brought my fingers even lower, towards her marehood. As soon as I touched it, I felt a shiver go down her spine, and I smiled as I kept kissing her neck, pleased at how well I was doing. I slowly began to rub the outer lips of her pussy, before I slowly entered my middle finger into her.

The effect was immediate. Her eyes opened wide, and she gave a sharp gasp of surprise, as the pleasure seemed to rock her very body. I smiled once again as I began to jilt her in a rhythmic fashion, making her give a small gasp every time my finger hilted inside of her. After a few seconds, I placed my pointer finger into her as well, causing more gasps of excitement. While I was finger fucking her, she kept on working on my dick, jerking it faster and faster. I could tell that she was at the brink, and I had one more idea on how to get her to climax. I hilted my fingers into her, brought my thumb, and ever so gently, pressed it onto her clit and rubbed small circles around it.

This caused Luna’s back to arch in pleasure, nearly hitting me in the groin with her rear hooves as she stopped her hoof job on me, a loud sharp wail came from her, which also caused me to pull my head back slightly. I felt her juices flood all over my fingers and hand as I twitched inside her every so often to keep her orgasm going for as long as I could. After about thirty seconds, her climax slowly receded, and she began to relax again, panting deeply. I slowly pulled my fingers out of her pussy, causing a slight moan to come out of Luna, and out of curiosity, I brought my fingers to my mouth, and gave it a little lick. The taste, while not unpleasant, was certainly new, and the only way that I could describe it, would be saying that it was liquid moonlight.

Luna panted from the release of her first orgasm, before saying, “T-t-that…that was…w-wow…”

I smiled, giving her a kiss on the cheek, saying, “I’m glad you enjoyed it.”

Luna then realized that she didn’t get to finish me off yet. “W-w-wait…w-what about…you?” I smiled at her, and said, “I can wait, just as long as you’re happy, then I’m happy.”

“S-still, I…I think I’m…r-ready now.”

I looked at her, and even though we just went through with this, I was still worried for her. “Are you sure that your ready f-”

Before I could finish, she quickly pushed me off of her and made me lie on my back, throwing the thin blanket off of us, my erection exposed to the world now. Luna then got up from her position and, with her rear facing me; she began to rub her marehood onto the tip of my cock, causing pleasure to emit from the both of us. “The question is, my love, are you ready for me?” she said seductively, looking back at me with half lidded eyes, a sly grin on her face, her wings partially open, making her look like the Night Goddess that she truly is. I smiled back, and gently placed my hands on her flanks, rubbing her cutie marks slowly, causing her to moan again.

“I heard that the first time for the female is a bit painful, so just take your time with this, ok?” She nodded at me, and then slowly, she began to sink my manhood into her own marehood. I gave a sharp gasp; her entrance was so tight around my shaft that it took all I had just to not go off on the spot. As soon as the head was inside her, I felt a barrier blocking the rest of the way, and Luna gave off a slight whimper of pain once I touched it.

“Just relax, I’ll try to help you through it.” I told her, massaging her cutie marks some more. It seemed to do the job, for she visibly relaxed under my ministrations, saying, “Just…just let me do it…ok?”

Before I could say anything, she suddenly slammed her hips right towards my own, ripping through her hymen and hilting me all in one go. Luna gave off a gasp of pain and I could see tears coming out of her eyes. I felt horrible that I couldn’t do anything about it, so I just kept on massaging her flank and cutie marks, trying to ease her through the pain. After a few minutes, I could see that the pain had left her, and she began to breath deeply in anticipation.

“You feeling better now?” I asked her, and she nodded, saying, “Y-you’re s-so…big inside…me.” I smiled, still massaging her flanks, saying, “You just move when you’re ready, ok?”

Once again, she nodded, and slowly, she moved her hips up on my throbbing shaft, until just the tip was inside her, before she slowly sank it back down, bringing out a long moan from the both of us. She kept on rising and lowering herself on me at a glacial pace, and while I was eager to go faster, I held myself back, content on letting her set the tempo for now. Luna moaned as she continued to hump my cock, and she began to move slightly faster. After a few more minutes, she felt good enough to go at a reasonably fast tempo, starting to bounce on top of my cock, panting every time I hilted her. Meanwhile, I was just massaging her flanks and cutie marks, trying to give her the best possible treatment that I could. She moaned her gratitude; bounce harder on my dick as a sign of appreciation. She began to lean back onto me, and as she did, I brought my hands from her hips to her shoulders, helping her with the bouncing. We stayed like that for a few more minutes, and then suddenly, she stopped, laying her back on my chest, her wings splayed to the side, panting hard.
“Tired?” I asked her, and she nodded, still panting. “Would you like me to continue?” Again, she nodded. I brought my hands around her; one hand on her chest while the other one was lying on her teats. Luna began to moan again as I rubbed her teats once again, and then I began to thrust into her in earnest. She began to moan and gasp with pleasure as I got into a fast rhythm, plunging my cock deep inside her. I could have sworn that every time that I hilted her, the tip of my manhood was just piercing her cervix. As Luna moaned into my ear, I could feel the tell tale sign of my first orgasm beginning to build up, and said, “L-Luna…I’m…I’m…”

“Please, do it…inside! I want to…feel your…warm, wet seed…fill me up!” She shouted. Her dirty talk was all that I needed to finish, and with one last thrust, I plunged deep into her love cavern and exploded my seed inside of her, filling her up and having some of it overflow her pussy and onto my own dick. As I came, so did Luna, screaming in pleasure as her juices flowed all over my dick and onto the bed. We stayed there, panting, trying to catch our breath from the amazing orgasm that we just had. After about five minutes, Luna was calm enough to lift her head slightly and kiss me on the lips, which I responded in kind.

As we broke our kiss, Luna said, “T-thank you…this was…the…b-best experience thou hath ever had.”

I smiled, saying, “I’m just glad that I was the one that you choose.”

I pulled myself out of her marehood, and as I did so, she moaned, causing me to get aroused again. Once my cock was out, Luna noticed that I was still hard, and said, “If you’re up for it…we can try…something else…please?”

I looked at her, for I was still hard and I didn’t really feel like stopping quite yet. “What do you have in mind?”

“Well, I’ve heard that other couples…sometime do it…in their…tail hole…”

I looked at her, an eyebrow raised at this, saying, “You want to try anal?”

Luna blushed at this before she nodded, confirming my answer. I thought about it for a second, before I said, “Well, I’m not so sure about it…” However, Luna began to give me the puppy eyes treatment, and it was slowly working. I kept on trying to say something, but the words just died in my throat. Eventually, I chuckled, saying, “All right, but let’s do it in a different position, ok?”

Luna cocked her head at me, saying, “What position do you have in-oh!”

As she was talking, I was able to roll her off of me and lay her right next to me, with her back still pressed against my chest. I lifted her leg up, and began to rub the tip of my dick onto the entrance of her tail hole. She moaned in anticipation, saying, “P-please, just…p-put it in!”

I smirked at this, kissing her on the cheek, saying, “Can you tell me how bad you want it?”

“How about I show you instead?” Before I could react, she quickly brought both of her hooves to my manhood and, with great precision, brought it into her ass. Both Luna and I gave a sharp gasp as I entered her rear, me marveling at the new type of tightness that I was experiencing, while she found pleasure in being filled up in a new sort of way. We stayed there for a couple of seconds, just enjoying each other’s presence, before Luna began to attempt to hump my crotch. I smiled, and whispered into her ear, saying, “Just let me do the work.” She nodded, and I began to pump her ass in earnest, both of us moaning at the new experience that we were getting. Thanks to the juices from her orgasm, I was able to pump her rear with ease; the tightness of her plot hole was that of a different dimension to her pussy, the muscles would clamp on me as I pumped her, giving me a constant pressure as I speared my cock deep within her. Luna was gasping every time I moved in, and sighing every time I exited her, loving every moment of it. After a few more pumps, I noticed that I was getting close to the edge, while Luna had yet to reach her build up. To bring her closer to the brink, I put an arm over her stomach, and placed a hand on top of her marehood, rubbing her outer lips with my fingers while my thumb worked on her clit. This seemed to work, but she was still not close enough to her brink, and I didn’t know how long I could hold myself in, for I didn’t want to climax until she did as well. I then remembered what Candence said about unicorns and Alicorns, so with my hand that was holding her leg up, I carefully placed it down and then brought it up to her forehead, and began to pump her horn as fast as I could.

This seemed to do the trick, and she began to cry out in pleasure. The pumping of her horn, as well as the rubbing of her clit and pussy, and the constant pounding of her ass, was too much for her to handle. After a few seconds, I felt her tail hole contract harshly onto my dick, nearly cutting off the blood flow to it. Luna gave off a loud cry of pleasure, and then her juices began to once again overflow her marehood, getting it all over my hand and onto the bed once again. With her orgasm, I was finally able to let myself go, pumping smaller amounts of cum into her ass, which in turn made her orgasm last even longer, the seed from my cock filling her up. We just stayed in that position, seemingly frozen, just riding both of our climaxes out, breathing deeply in our afterglow, neither of us saying a word, for there were no words necessary that could be said to describe the feeling of what we felt at that moment.

Slowly, I took my now limp cock out of her ass, and as soon as I did, the seed began to flow out and onto the bed. Luna quickly turned around in the bed to face me, saying, “Thank, you, Drakalian. I know that I made the right decision by choosing you to be my first.”

I smiled, saying, ”And I’m glad that I was your first as well.”

We both looked into the other’s eyes, nothing but love and content shone in either of our eyes. Eventually, we began to grow tired, and as we cuddled, Luna nuzzled her head underneath my chin, being careful with her horn. Slowly, we closed our eyes, both of us simply enjoying the sensation of the other’s embrace, as we once again, fell asleep in the caresses of the one that we loved with all of our heart.

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