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Gateway of the Eyes (First Draft)

by Drakalian

Chapter 10

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Chapter 10

After what felt like hours, but was more likely a few minutes, we finally made it to Sweet Apple Acres. There was a nice house and barn, as well as tons and tons of apple trees. The number of trees boggled my mind, and I could just imagine what it would be like to see all of these trees in full bloom. As Applebloom and I got to the house door, I was finally able to stop and take a well-needed breather.

“Geez, Mister. You sure need help with your runnin’.” She said, not even winded in the slightest.

Must be her young age. Oh well, I was never a runner in the first place anyways.’ “Well, I was never into much of the outdoorsy kind of stuff. The most physical thing that I enjoyed to do with my life was karate.” At this, Applebloom’s eyes went wide-eyed.

“You do karate too, Mister? Wow! Rainbow tried to teach me how to do that, but I never really got the hang of it.” Now upon hearing this, my interest peaked.

Note to self: ask Rainbow Dash about her knowing karate.’ “Well, that’s interesting. So, were do you think Applejack would be right-” Before I could say anything else, though, I felt something wet and hard hit me square in the back. Luckily, it didn’t hit any of my wounds, so it didn’t hurt so much. I turned around to see who the offender was, and there I saw AJ, along with a big red stallion hiding behind a little snow bank. The stallion seemed to be calm about the whole thing, while AJ had another snowball in her hoof like the one that she threw at me, a smile on her face. Both ponies seemed to be wearing a scarf around their necks, most likely to keep them warm. I smiled, knowing were this was heading, and turned to face Applebloom. ”Hey, Applebloom?”

“Yes, Mister?” she said, a look of excitement on her face. She seemed to know what was going to happen in a few seconds.

“First off, just call me Drakalian, or Drak. Second…” I looked back at AJ and the stallion for a second before I shouted the finally part of my sentence.

BATTLE POSITIONS!

Immediately, Applebloom and I both launched our selves towards the closest snow bank that we could find, and not a moment too soon, for a hail of snowballs soon were being chucked at us nonstop. We were able to get a few of our own shots out at them, but we were getting severely bogged down.

“Well, we seemed to be in a little situation here. So, any plans?” I asked the yellow filly, who was crouching behind the snow bank that we were currently residing in. She was quiet for a few moments, and then suddenly, her eyes got wide, and I could have sworn I saw a light bulb get turned on over her head.

“Just one, Drak. An’ we better hope it works.” She said, a nervous but excited look on her face. She motioned me to bend down a little and when I complied, she whispered her idea into my ear. Now it was my turn for my eyes to go wide with surprise.

“Are you crazy?” I said to the filly. She just smiled sheepishly and said, “You got any better ideas?”

Admittedly, I didn’t so I just shrugged and started to make the biggest snowball that I could.

Meanwhile, at the other snow bank, both AJ and the red stallion had ceased fire for a short time.

“Well, brother. Think that we gave them enough?” asked AJ, looking at the stallion.

“Nope” he said.

“Well, let’s finish them off then.”

Suddenly, a huge snowball came sailing over the snow bank that they were hiding behind, but fortunately for them, it landed right behind them with a wet ‘Plop!’

“Is that ya’ll got, partner?” shouted AJ over the snow bank. I just grinned there, a large pile of snowballs in my arms.

Just wait, AJ, cause we got a surprise for you.’ “Now, AB!”

As soon as I shouted, AJ and the red stallion looked over to were the large snowball had landed. It shook for a few moments, and then suddenly, out popped Applebloom’s head, along with the rest of her, coming out of the snowball.

“Ambush!” she shouted, taking pieces of the snowball and throwing them at AJ and the stallion, while I came from hiding and began to pelt them with snowball after snowball. We kept throwing them for a good minute or so until we heard AJ shouting, “Alright, alright, ya’ll win, now cease fire!”

I stopped throwing the snowballs and signaled Applebloom to do the same. I walked up towards them as soon as the coast was clear of any snowballs.

“Well, it was a valiant effort, but in the end, you just weren’t able to beat the Drakalian Applebloom duo!” I said, Applebloom and I giving each other a high-five.

AJ was quiet for a moment, and then she just burst out laughing. “Well, ah guess that’s true then, sugarcube. Also, ah’m glad that you brought AB home for us from school.”

I shrugged, my shoulder not hurting so much as to cause me to wince anymore. “Hey, it wasn’t a problem; I enjoyed walking her home, though she can run pretty darn fast.” I said. AJ just laughed at this, and then she gestured towards the big red stallion.

“Drak, this here’s mah brother Big Macintosh, though we call him Big Mac. Brother, this here’s Drakalian, the human that we met, and also, uh…my new herd mate.” Big Mac put a hoof up, and I took it, giving it a welcome shake. The whole time, I could see him eyeing me up, seeing what kind of character I was. This of course just made me a bit nervous, so I tried to start some conversation with him.

“So, Big Mac, is it?”

“Eeyup.”

“Well, you seem to be a pretty nice fellow.”

“Eeyup”

“Don’t say much unless necessary, huh?”

“Eeyup”

I chuckled at this, which caused him to give a small smile as well. Finally, I asked the question that was on my mind.

“S-so, um…y-you don’t mind it that I’m d-dating your sister now, right?”

He was quiet for a few seconds, and then, he slowly nodded. “Just make sure tha’ ya’ll treat her with respect, and ah’ll have no quarrels with you, understand.”

“Sir yes sir.” I said, giving him a salute as well. Big Mac raises his eyebrow at this, and then just snorts with laughter.

“You picked a mighty fine one, sis. You should be proud.”

“Trust me, ah already am.” Said AJ, who walked up to me and gave me a quick kiss on the lips, to which I responded in kind.

“Well, how about we all go in and eat some dinner, I’m starving.” I said, taking a step towards the door. As soon as I placed my leg down though, it gave way under me and I gave a quick cry in pain as I fell. Luckily, AJ was next to me in a flash, quickly catching me with her back. As I leaned against her for support, she quickly asked, “Are you ok, sugarcube?”

I looked at her with a small but weak smile. “I think so, I just rolled my ankle is all.” I told them. “Well, come on, dinner isn’t going to eat itself.”

And with that, the four of us, with me leaning on AJ for support, headed back towards their house to have an Apple family dinner.


A few hours later, I was in AJ’s room, sitting on her bed, trying to massage my muscle in my ankle, but so far it has been to no avail. AJ insisted that I go to her room to wait for her while they were cleaning up the kitchen. I tried to insist that I at least do something, but they were persistent.

I heard hoof steps coming closer to the door, and then the door opened, welcoming AJ into the room.

She placed her hat onto one of the hooks in her room. “Hey, sugarcube, you all right?” she asked, concern on her face as she watched me try to massage my ankle.

“Kind of. My ankle is still killing me. Normally, when I do this for someone-”

“Somepony.” Said Pinkie Pie, from out of nowhere, before disappearing on us.

I blinked, and then, ignoring the strangeness of it, continued with my train of thought. “O…k…somepony, it’s much easier, then just doing it on yourself.” AJ nodded at this.

“Well, we do have a spa here, so maybe you can go there tomorrow, I know that Rarity and Fluttershy go there once a week, and I think that they will be there tomorrow as well.” She said. I nodded at this. We were quiet for a few awkward moments before I decided to break the silence.

“So…” I said, giving up on massaging my ankle. “Uh, what should we do now?”

“Well, sugarcube, we could go to bed right now, since that is what everypony else is doing right now” She said. “Or, we could…you know…” For some reason, this caused AJ to blush slightly. I was quiet for a few moments, giving a curious look at her, before I asked, “Well, what do you have on your mind?”

“W-well, ah was just wondering, if, well…you remember last night, the comment that you said to me before.”

“Yes what about…oh” I said, finally getting the picture.

AJ was blushing even more now; she slowly walked up to me and sat down on her bed next to me. “Y-you know, before ah left, when you were in the bathroom, Fluttershy talked to me. She said that she was very sorry that ah didn’t get to be your first kiss, even when ah assured her that ah was over it. That mare, however, can be insistent when she wants to be. Anyways, she said that…well…”

AJ became quiet at this, unable to say exactly what Fluttershy told her. I, however, was curious about what it was, so I asked, “W-what did she say?”

AJ was silent for a while, not making eye contact with me. Finally she said, “W-well, she said t-t-that w-we c-could, um, do it, if y-you want to.” Now once again, this shocked me. Fluttershy told AJ that she could be my first, because she felt guilty of taking my first kiss from me. I was quiet for a long time, neither of us willing to say anything to the other. Finally, I tried to speak in order to break the awful silence.

“S-so, a-are you a virgin, t-too?” I asked, to which she just shook her head.

“T-that’s what ah don’t get. Fluttershy is a virgin, but she insisted that ah should be your first.” That got me thinking of a few reason of why Fluttershy wanted AJ to be my first, but the only one that I could think of was the one that AJ already told me: she was simply feeling guilty about it.

“I-is she ok with this?” I asked her.

AJ nodded, and then suddenly smiled, apparently remembering something. “Ah actually met her before she got back to her cottage. When ah asked her again if she was sure, she had the biggest smile on her face and said she was more then sure. You want to know why?”

“Uh, w-why is that?” I said, fearing were this was heading.

At this point, I finally noticed that AJ’s hoof was on my leg and moving slowly upwards towards my crotch. “She said that she was happy enough that she got her first kiss with you, as well as…” she leans in, and whispers, “…giving her first blowjob to you as well.”

Oh boy…

Now, my manhood was getting harder each second that passed, and I was also getting more nervous as well. “Um, AJ…are…are you ok with this?”

AJ stopped her hoof and looked at me for a second, saying, “Of course ah am, sugarcube. Why, are you…are you regretting doing this with us?” At this point, she began to have a mournful face and tears were starting to show. “Y-you’d rather have a human partner, wouldn’t y-” I didn’t even let her finish the sentence, and immediately placed my lips on top of hers. As soon as I did that, her eyes widened in surprise, and then slowly closed, returning the kiss with passion, making her tears instantly vanish. Our lips rolled off of one another, like synchronized swimmers, each of us knowing what the other is going to do. Then our lips opened, allowing our tongues entry into each other’s mouths. As we kissed, I brought AJ into a tight hug, and with her left hoof, she put it around my good shoulder. As we kissed and embraced, we hugged tighter and tighter, never wanting to let the other go.

After a few minutes of making out, I slowly pulled back, though I did with regret, for I really wanted to continue it and never stop. However, I still had my piece to say to calm our minds of this situation.

“Applejack, listen to me. I don’t give a damn if you’re a human or a pony. I love both you and Fluttershy for the way you are, not the way you look. I rarely look in the eyes of others not only for the reason that I gave to Fluttershy yesterday, but also because I need to be comfortable with the person, or in this case pony, that I know. Otherwise I can only give a glance before feeling the need to look away. Right now, the ones that I trust the most are you and Fluttershy. You two are the world to me right now, and the best part of all is that I can look both of you in the eyes, for when I do, I see love and passion for me and for all of your friends. I see a hard working mare that will do anything to protect the ones that they love. And I’m glad that you have chosen me out of all the stallions in this world to be with. So, if all you want is to make love with me tonight, then by all means, I will do my best to fulfill your fantasy.” As I spoke, I looked straight in her eyes, and she stared back at mine as well. We were quiet for a few moments, neither of us wanting to break this moment, until I had to say something to snap us out of it. “The only thing that I ask of you is that you help me along, for like I said before, it is my first time. So, do you think that you are up to the task?”

AJ looked straight in my eyes for a few seconds, before she could recover enough to respond. “Ah will do my best, sugarcube. Ah promise, that you will love every second of this.” As the words left her lips, I couldn’t take the separation any more and immediately reunited our longing lips back together, starting our session from were we left off.

As we kissed, AJ slowly leaned into me, making us tip into her bed, with her still on top of me. We stayed there for about ten minutes, simply making out with each other, my erection getting harder the further we went. Finally, she broke the kiss, and with her free hoof, brought it down gently on the bump in my shorts. I groaned slightly as I felt her hoof over the fabric of the shorts as she began to slowly rub against it. I brought my hand down, and without another word, took off my shorts and boxers, my hoodie already off a while ago.

AJ began to rub the length of my cock with eager intent, making me moan even more. She smiled at my expression, and then she turned herself around, so that her face was next to my crotch and her hips were next to my head.

“Let’s see if ah can do as good a job as Fluttershy can, huh sugarcube?” she said in a seductive voice, brushing softly on my erection. I just simply nodded, and without another word, she just engulfs my entire cock with one fell swoop. The pleasure was incredible, to say the least. As soon as she had my entire manhood in her mouth, she began to bob her head up and down, going slowly at first though, just enough for me to keep myself together, but still enough to enjoy myself. I thought that it couldn’t have gotten any better, when suddenly; she stopped bobbing, took the whole thing into her mouth, and sucked. HARD.

My eyes widened in surprise at this, the feeling so incredible that I nearly came right then and there, but somehow I was able to hold onto myself, willing myself to keep going. I could feel her throat literally constricting my cock, strangling the life out of it. All I could do was put my right hand on her head and brush her mane, moaning the whole time. As she serviced my dick, I brought my right hand further and further along her back, until I reached her flank. Once I brushed her cutie mark, she suddenly moaned loudly, vibrating my cock inside her mouth.

The cutie mark must be a pleasure point then.’ I thought to myself. So I continued to rub on her cutie marks, putting pressure were it was needed. I traced the apples on her flank, first with one finger, then two, then three, each finger tracing an apple. As I traced them, she continued to moan louder and louder, her tongue rubbing against my member. After a minute or so of this, I decided to step up my own game; I took her flank with both of my hands, lifted it up high into the air, and placed her on my chest. In this position, I got a good view of AJ’s marehood. To me, the view was amazing; her pussy was a light pink color that was puffy and very, very wet with arousal. Bracing myself, I gave it a tentative lick.

The effect was immediate; she gave a moan as she once again began to bob her head on my cock, still applying a sucking pressure on it. As I licked her, I got a hint of apple in the flavor of her juices. Eager for more, I pushed on, giving her long, hard licks along her outer walls, making AJ moan with delight. I kept on searching for the little ‘clit’ that all of the romance novels mentioned about. And finally, my tongue managed to slightly graze over a swollen, round button of some kind. As I touched it, it sent a shiver down her spine, and another vibration through my cock.

We kept on working on each other like this for some time, with me alternating between sucking her clit and licking her outer walls of her pussy, with her either sucking my cock or bobbing along its length at a now vigorous pace. Finally, feeling myself starting to lose it, I began to pick up the pace, and I sucked on her clit with everything that I had, and then I put the tip of my tongue inside of her.

AJ shrieked in ecstasy and I felt her marehood clench tightly on my tongue as she came, juices flooding everywhere and getting on my face and in my mouth. During her orgasm, she clenched tightly on my rod and sucked it like there was no tomorrow. This was my last straw, and unable to hold it back any longer, I let myself go and burst after burst of semen came spewing forward and into her mouth. I could feel her gulping each load as it came, and I would be lying if I said that it didn’t feel so arousing. We stayed in that position for about five minutes, before we had enough strength to finally calm ourselves down from our epic high, but we both knew that we were far from over.

She slowly took my cock out of her mouth with an audible popping sound, before slowly turning around to face me, the sexiest smile on her face. “Ya’ll ready for the main event, sugarcube?” she whispered seductively. Too nervous for words, I just simply nodded. AJ noticed my nervousness and gave me a quick kiss on the lips. I could feel the very tip of my rod getting wet with the arousal that was coming out of her marehood. She slowly lowers her hips over it and brushed the tip of my shaft with her lower lips, making us both moan in pleasure. “Don’t’ worry about a thing, partner. Just let me handle the first part.” Once again I nodded, too nervous for words still. Slowly, her lips took hold of the tip of my shaft, making us both groan. AJ slowly took every single inch of my dick into her pussy, and soon bottomed out inside it. My mind was literally blown, the pleasure just radiating all around my cock was so intense that it took even more effort to not blow my load then it did when AJ was sucking me. Slowly, she placed her hooves onto my chest, being careful of the wounds, and said, “Now, let the real fun begin.”

She carefully lifted her hips off of my lap, until only the tip remained inside, and then in a sudden movement, thrust her hips back down, making a loud “Smack!” sound as our hips connected. I gave off a sharp gasp of pleasure as AJ started to lift herself off again and bring it down with the same results as before. She started off slowly, just using her own weight to bring herself down on me. As we progressed, however, she began to move faster and faster, bouncing up and down on my throbbing shaft. I could feel her marehood clench my member in a rhythmic fashion, tightening as she lifted herself off of me, and relaxing as she came down on me again. Soon, I placed my hands on either side of her flank and began to thrust my hips in sync with her thrusting, both of us moaning as AJ rode me like a champ. As I was thrusting, my hands slowly massaged her cutie marks, making her moan even more. Soon, I could feel the pressure start to build up in me again, and I knew that I wouldn’t be able to hold it in for long.

“A-AJ. I’m…I’m…”

“Inside! Please, I want you to come inside of me!” She practically screamed. I quickly brought her head towards me and we began to kiss, our tongues once again flowing through each other’s mouth. We began to thrust wildly into each other at a rapid pace, not caring about rhythm anymore, just caring for release.

Finally, after a few, almost painfully pleasuring minutes. We both found release. AJ screamed into my mouth as we both clamped down on the others lips, my cock getting strangled this time by her pussy. Her juices overflowed and covered my cock as I ejected my cream into her awaiting womb. We lied there for what felt like hours, but in reality was a few minutes, just holding each other in a tight hug and kiss. I was still moving slightly in and out of her marehood, just riding out my orgasm as she rode out hers. After a few more spurts, I finally came to a stop, and just massaged her flanks slowly, our lips separated as both of us breathed heavily while we just basked in the afterglow.

“Wow…just…wow.” Was all I could say. AJ smiled at me and gave me a quick kiss on the cheek, saying, “Glad you enjoyed the ride, sugarcube.”

I was about to pull out of her, when AJ stopped me. “Wait, partner, just…leave it in there…please?”

I smiled at her and gave her another kiss. “Of course, love.”

AJ smiled when I called her love, and said, “I’m glad that ah was your first, Drak. An’ ah hope that we can do this a lot more often in the future.”

I just smiled at her and said, “I hope so too, Applejack, I love you.”

“An’ ah love you, Drakalian”

She slowly lowered her head back onto mine, and we began to kiss again, but with not as much enthusiasm as before, just kissing and cuddling each other, our tongues lazily rubbing against the other. As we kissed, I was able to get the blanket over the both of us, to help keep us warm in the cold night. Slowly, still kissing, we fell asleep in each other’s embrace.

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