When star-crossed Comet tries to settle down in Ponyville, he finds it more difficult than expected.
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After establishing himself in Ponyville, Comet's friends come to a disturbing realization. This is his story in showing everyone in Ponyville that anyone can change for the better, even someone who's got their head in the clouds.
Cancelled
Adventure
Romance
Slice of Life
Sex
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16 Chapters:
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Prologue - Comet's Family *Revised* [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 7th, 2012
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Chapter 1 - Comet's Shower [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 7th, 2012
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Chapter 2 - Comet's New Friends [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 11th, 2012
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Chapter 3 - Comet's First Day [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 16th, 2011
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Chapter 4 - Comet's House [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 17th, 2011
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Chapter 5 - Comet's Talent [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 17th, 2011
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Chapter 6 - Comet's Visit From Cloudsdale [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 11th, 2012
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Chapter 7 - Comet's Day of Discord [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 20th, 2011
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Chapter 8 - Comet's Big Upgrade [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 20th, 2011
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Chapter 9 - Comet's Confusion [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 20th, 2011
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Chapter 10 - Comet's Assistant [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 23rd, 2011
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Chapter 11 - Comet's Conundrum [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 24th, 2011
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Chapter 12 - Comet's Family Reunion [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 2nd, 2011
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Chapter 13 - Comet's Relatives [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 28th, 2012
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Chapter 14 - Comet's Kite [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 28th, 2012
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A Note of Apology and Things [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 29th, 2012
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