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Pinkie Pie goes to examine a new mental hospital in Canterlot. Everything looks fine... that is, until she meets a patient who begs to differ. A sequel of sorts to "The Mentally Unstable Wing of Ponyville Hospital" by TwistedSkittles.
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One year ago, Pinkie Pie made a terrible discovery about Ponyville's Hospital. In its basement, anypony who was deemed 'mentally unwell' by the staff were locked up, beaten, and basically ensured to never see the outside world again. And for knowing too much, Pinkie soon joined these patients. However, thanks to the efforts of her friends and an enigmatic brown Earth pony, she and the other victims of the "Mentally Unstable Wing" were released to rejoin society.

Now, Princess Celestia has offered Pinkie an opportunity to further help this medical field. Massive reforms had gone through the mental health profession following the discovery of these heinous actions in peaceful Ponyville, and Celestia wants Pinkie, as one of the survivors who are still a) available and b) mentally suitable/unscarred enough for the job. A new asylum has opened in Canterlot, hoping to cure the surprisingly many ponies whose mental issues are too great for normal psychiatry to fix, and Celestia wants Pinkie to go through and review the place to ensure that what happened to her and her new friends doesn't happen here.

At first, all seems satisfactory. But then she takes a step into the part of the building where they kept the... dangerous patients. Not dangerous to themselves... dangerous to others. There, she meets a strange stallion. The guards call him "The Canterlot Ripper". The doctors call him "Soup Kitchen". He... he calls himself Straight Razor. And he has a second opinion on how things are run around here.

Made as a sequel to an interesting fic called The Mentally Unstable Wing of Ponyville Hospital by TwistedSkittles.

My Little Ponies and all related characters belong to Hasbro. Mind Twist is an OC of TwistedSkittles from her stories. Straight Razor is my OC from here.

Cover art by myself.

(10/7: Changed Sad tag to Comedy. With how many jokes I put in this, I figured it would be more fitting.)

Note: This version is cancelled. HOWEVER, I'm planning on doing a reboot of it, one that is a standalone instead of a sequel.

Teen
Cancelled
Comedy
Tragedy
Dark
Gore

4,547 words: Estimated 19 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

3 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: Just Another Day in the Asylum... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 4th, 2013
    1,150
  2. Inspection Day Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 6th, 2013
    1,109
  3. Inspection Day Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 8th, 2013
    2,288
Published Oct 5th, 2013
Last Update Oct 8th, 2013

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