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A colt displaced by a disbility must over come and see his dreams through with the help of his dad
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This is the story of a young Pegasus pony named Leon, how to follow your dreams, and love those that made them come true, even in times when we think none can.

There will be surprises, twists you see and don't see coming.

This is my first fan fiction based on MLP and hope its at least enjoyable to read. Please note that this was meant to be one entire story, I broke it into chapters for posting, some were broken up better then others. But none of these were meant to stand 100% on their own.

This is part 1 of 2, I would upload it all in one shot but I didn't want to over whelm the readers to much and part two is still being written. The change in perspective near the end is intentional not a grammar error, it will make a lot more since when part 2 is finished. Still polishing this, I just started writing the story today.

Please let me know what you think, anything helps make it better. I would love to work this into a really good story.

will be adding in artwork as soon as I can make some for this to make it less of a text wall.

Everyone
Incomplete
Slice of Life
Tragedy
Sad

1,682 words: Estimated 7 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. Part 1- To Dream [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 24th, 2012
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Published Feb 29th, 2012
Last Update Mar 24th, 2012

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