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Left With A Kiss

by Comet Burst

Chapter 10: Wanton (mature) and Ataraxia (teen)

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WARNING: EXTREMELY SENSUAL/BORDERLINE EXPLICIT SCENES AHEAD! DO NOT READ UNTIL THE PAGE BREAK IF YOU ARE UNCOMFORTABLE WITH THIS!

Wanton: the complete and total negligence of reasonable limitations


There have been some funny stallions in my lifetime, mostly those with strange fetishes. Some liked me biting them, some wanted me to call them by pet names the whole time and a few even wanted me to drink their blood as we did it. Thankfully, I never did the latter, but I tried to oblige all of their fantasies. The doctor, however, was definitely up there on my list of oddballs, especially after what happened when I invited him to join. I could see it in his eyes that he was having the mental war of a lifetime, arguing to either rut me silly or to maintain his professionalism. His hesitation only fueled my lust, since I liked the shy ones. They always were so cute as they desperately tried not toend it too early.

"Doc," I moaned as Glimmer gasped. "Don't make me wait."

I looked back to see him gulp hard, his eyes twitching as I left nothing to imagination. His hooves shook pretty hard as he took his first step, his morals starting to fail. I knew I had him at that point, but I still had to be cautious. One slip of the tongue or a misplaced gasp and he would run from me like I was the plague. I turned back to Glimmer and planted a soft kiss on her forehead, allowing the doctor his privacy. I kissed her again, this time on the bridge of her nose and she sighed before gasping sharply. I glanced up to see Plush working her magic on Glimmer's body, feeling a cold shiver run down my spine as I remembered her doing the same to me. Forcing myself to look back at Glimmer, I smiled to her as she stared up at me with her gorgeous eyes.

"Thank you. For everything," I whispered as I closed my eyes and, for the first time since we had met, kissed her. The instant they met, Glimmer squealed into my mouth and I felt her body shake. I kept my lips on hers and parted them just enough to allow my fangs and tongue to meet hers, her lipstick tasting like fresh strawberries. The intoxicating taste drowned out my thoughts until her own tongue met mine, making me gasp this time. I opened my eyes, expecting her to be like I was; eyes closed and pretending that some hunky stallion was standing over her. To my surprise, her eyes were wide open and staring at me. I removed my lips and she panted slightly, seemingly out of breath.

"Don't stop, Viola," she squeaked to me. Her hoof raised up and touched my cheek, sending shivers down my spine. "Please."

I stared at her, my expression blank as she silently pleaded at me with her wide eyes. Fleeting thoughts raced around my head, each one just as strange as the last. Glimmer was my best friend and the only pony I ever felt I could truly trust, yet I expected her to never agree to this. She had never seemed interested in mares nor expressed any curiosity in them, but she didn't look uncomfortable with the two of us kissing her, me on her lips and Plush on the spot right below her belly. Plus, it was her idea to try this again with Plush to, in Glimmer's words, make amends.

Time didn't allow me the luxury of thinking too much further on the subject, however, as a set of hooves came down on my back. I gasped as they did, totally forgetting there was a needy and shy stallion in the room, and I felt the weight lessen. Immediately, sirens went off in my head. I had startled the doctor and needed to stop him from leaving before it was too late. Thinking fast, I shoved my lips back onto Glimmer's and pushed my rump backwards, colliding with his rear legs. I could feel him twitch as I did so and I did my best seductive moan into Glimmer's mouth as she did the same to me, her tongue coming out to play. The doctor stopped his retreat and kept his hooves on my back, leaving me to wait and see if my gambit would work.

"This is wrong," he mumbled. "I-I shouldn't be doing this."

Breaking my kiss, fear filled my chest as I turned to him, retaining my best seductive smile. His senses were catching up to him which, unless stopped, would bring this crashing down on top of me. All he had to do was think of why this was a bad idea and I would never get my foal. Flicking my tail, I wrapped it around his leg and slowly gyrated my rump against him. He twitched again and I risked trying to talk him into it again. "Don't you tease me and not deliver," I said. "That's just not fair."

I admit, using guilt as a tactic was not one of my best moments, but I was desperate at this point.

"N-no!" he stammered. "This isn't right! I can't have a f-f-foal with you. We're not even dating, much less married!"

"Shhh," I cooed. "We can if you grant me my greatest wish."

"B-b-but, I'm the professional here! This goes against everything I've trained to do!"

"Don't all great geniuses test their experiments on themselves?" I asked, hoping to catch him in his own logic. Behind me, I could hear Plush making some very kinky slurping sounds, which was instantly tainted when that night popped back into my head.

"T-those are different!" he shouted.

"You need to test if I can get pregnant and I want a smart and handsome stallion to give me my foal. Besides," I said, leaning closer to him. "How else can I say thank you for all you've done for me?"

His arguments cut off as I stared into his platinum eyes, his jaw moving up and down as he tried to think. Inside, I was on the verge of cheering. I had almost successfully talked a reluctant sire back from the edge. There was just a few more steps he and I needed to take before he would be rutting me silly. Leaning in further, I kept staring at him with my best seductive look and he began to lean in closer. I decided to take a page out of Glimmer's book as my expression went from sexy to sad. "Please don't make me wait again," I whispered. "I spent seven years trying to have a foal and I believe this will work."

His pupils shrunk and I could see the reluctance melt like sugar in the rain. He pressed his forehead to mine. "If I do this," he whispered back, "I want you and the foal to come live with me."

I smiled and let him lean in to kiss me. It was as if some fire had lit inside him since he was much more forceful than I was expecting. I had to admit, though, I rather liked it. "Deal," I said as I returned to Glimmer, whose eyes were shining. I leaned in with the sexiest grin I could muster and kissed her once more, feeling the doctor position himself behind me. Everything became a blur once he started to move, but he was one of the best I had ever felt.

Eventually, we all began to switch positions, but the doctor stayed rooted in me. His constant motions made time seem to melt away and every time he stopped to breathe or come down from his high, I ached for more. Glimmer and Plush were all too happy to join us, making comments about how good it must feel and interacting with us in their own ways. Glimmer preferred to be more around my lips, staring into my eyes while the doctor worked, making me feel way too excited for this. Plush seemed to be more interested where me and him were joined, her tongue dancing about like a fleet-footed breezie. I admit, though I was not one for having other mares around while I worked with a stallion, there was something to having my best friend and my first with us.

Pretty soon, the doctor was gasping for air as he held onto my flank, clearly fighting off the urge to let loose. I felt myself on the verge as well, my legs weak from all the pleasure. My tail was wrapped around his leg, squeezing it with what little strength I had left. Plush lay in front of me, biting on her one hoof as the other worked on her special area while Glimmer stood near the doctor, whispering encouragement to him as her hoof ran along my spine.

"Oh, doesn't she look so cute like this?" she murmured, just loud enough for all of us to hear. "Don't you just love the way she moans when you push a little more?"

As if to test her words, the doctor shoved a little harder into me and I gave out a loud moan, egging him on. Plush moved her hoof a little faster and Glimmer gasped at that.

"Wow. I've never heard another stallion make her moan like that," she cooed.

"Gah, I... I can't..." the doctor said, his leg starting to twitch in my tail. He moved even faster and I gasped as I felt a tendril begin to brush right where my button was. I glanced back to see Glimmer smiling at me with the look she gave the patrons at the bar. From under her messy blonde mane, I could see her horn glowing.

"Don't worry. Tell me the spell and when to cast it," she said, turning to him.

I looked back forward at Plush who, to my surprise, was watching me with watery eyes. She had no idea what was going on, but even I could see the jealousy in her look. When we had spent our night together, I had stayed silent for most of it, acting like a plank of wood for the most part. A twinge shot through my chest as another wave of pleasure rolled over me.

"P-Plush," I moaned.

As if to answer me, she leaned forward and placed her hooves on the tile, staring into my eyes. Tears were already making their way down her cheeks. "Y-Yes, Viola?"

I moaned even louder as the doctor started to grunt, my peak approaching rapidly. Still, I managed not to break eye contact with her and forced myself up to a partial standing position. "Come here," I whispered.

Plush scooted up to me and planted one of the best kisses I had ever received on my lips. Spurred on by her actions, I pushed with my head and toppled her backwards. She lay flat on her back, stunned by what I did, and I gulped hard as I looked down. She was exactly as I remembered her and, without thinking, I dove in. Plush shrieked as my tongue met her, but her hoof instantly came down and pressed my mouth closer. My tongue moved around, licking every place I could and I felt her twitch multiple times.

"B-B-Buck!" the doctor shouted as he pushed all the way in, poking at a spot few stallions ever made it to. The force alone drove me deeper into Plush and she screamed, splashing all over my mouth.

Within an instant, a lot of things happened at once. I felt Glimmer's magic course through me, making every part of my body tingle. A heartbeat later, I felt the doctor start to unload into me and Plush's taste hit my tongue. With all the my senses going at once, Glimmer decided right then to flick her tendril over my button. While the doctor and Plush were loud, I screamed at the top of my lungs into Plush. My body went rigid as I clamped down on the doctor while Plush shook from my voice. The sheer amount of pleasure I was in made my mind go blank and my legs give out.

The high never seemed to end as I kept screaming, clamping my eyes shut. My tongue would occasionally brush up against Plush, who shook even harder, and I eventually felt something dripping down my rear legs. I kept my tail wrapped around the doctor's leg, squeezing it like a vice. He wrapped his hooves around my belly and hugged me closer as he kept grunting, burying his face into my back. Needing to breathe, I pulled my head back and looked up at the ceiling while his snout dig into my shoulders.

My scream lessened into an extremely loud moan as the pleasure began to wane. My mind began to feel more than just the overwhelming ecstasy and soon my mind begin to slip. Fatigue washed over me and my vision went black, but I felt something different just before I passed out. Even with the doctor still in me, I felt something move farther in, as if it had finally been released.


Ataraxia: a state of freedom from emotional disturbance and anxiety; tranquility

"Mommy, mommy!" came a little voice. I turned around from the pages before me and searched the room before I saw my daughter come running up to me, a broad smile on her face.

"What is it, sweetie?" I asked, her infectious smile getting to me.

"Look at what Daddy got me!" she squealed, turning to show me a set of saddlebags. They were black with the flaps only visible due to the bright five-pointed star shining on them.

"Oh wow!" I said. "New saddlebags for school?"

"Uh huh!" she replied. "And they got my cutie mark on them!"

"Oh my. Did you give Daddy a big hug for that?"

"Uh huh!"

"Well, go give him another one. He really loves you if he did that."

Without another word, the little filly went tearing off back across the room, her little bat wings fluttering. I chuckled at that before turning back to my pages, reviewing what I had wrote. It was brief, but it made its point.

Dear Mom and Dad,

I'm sorry it's been so long since I have seen you. How are you doing?

I know mere words won't fix what happened between us, but I want to at least try to make amends. I've spent the last thirteen years living in the city, trying to have a foal like I always wanted. After about seven years of failed attempts, I think you may want to see the fruits of my labor. The picture attached is of my baby girl and your granddaughter, Silver Star. She is a spunky little thing and has her father's eyes. I'm also married, just so you know.

I really miss you both. Days go by where all I can do is think about what I did to you and how much of a monster I am, but I hope to see you both again one day. I try to do what you did to me and be a good parent, mom, but it really hurts to know you're not here to see little Star and help me raise her. Same to you, dad.

Please write me back.

Love,

Violet Heart

I peered over it again, dread building up in my chest as I placed it into the envelope next to the quill on the table. The picture was already in there, but I wanted to make sure neither the letter or the photo got bent. Handling it like a precious artifact, I licked the seal and pressed it closed. Tomorrow, it would make its way to what I assumed was the psuedo-address of the colony and I heaved a deep breath.

"Still nervous?" came a deep voice. Glancing back, I saw a familiar mass of platinum mane and a smile.

"Yeah, wouldn't you be writing a letter to your parents if you hadn't seen them for years?" I asked, placing a kiss on his smile.

"Are you kidding? I thought my father would decapitate me after I told him I was marrying you and that you were pregnant."

"For Star's sake, I'm glad he didn't."

We both laughed as he placed his head on the crook of my neck, looking down at the letter. Past that sat a couple large stacks of papers covered in text and red ink.

"The editor giving you a workout?" he asked.

"I don't think I've ever had a pony be this rough to me," I said with a sigh.

"It's all part of writing a masterpiece, sweetheart."

"Yeah, so I can be some famous writer while you wait for the test results of your pregnancy procedure to come back."

"Hey, if the medical board accepts the procedure, it will be presented before the princesses before becoming an approved medical practice."

I sighed heavily at that. "I don't think having an orgy for one infertile mare to have a foal will get very far past them."

"Oh ha ha ha. How about a deranged and suicidal mare who never had a stable relationship writing critically acclaimed romance novels?"

"Sorry, but I'm acting under my doctor's orders. He said writing would help deal with my mental problems, so it's too bad if I become famous for following his advice."

He laughed at that, nuzzling me more. "Still got that sass, huh?"

"Don't act like it doesn't turn you on."

I glanced over to him and smiled as I batted my eyes. His grin was all I needed to see.

"You'd better be ready once Star is asleep," he said.

"Don't worry. I can always have your other two favorite mares come by to aid us," I replied with a smirk.

"Ah yes. How are they doing?"

"Okay, as far as I can tell. They've been living together for a few months now, so I think it's official."

"Well, we should have them over some time. You always do talk about having a sibling for Star."

I laughed as I reached over to the drawer underneath the table surface. Inside, a gleaming gold tube rolled to my hoof and I pulled it out, twisting it slightly to reveal the deep red lipstick inside. I puckered as I applied it and once I was satisfied, I leaned back and placed a long and seductive kiss on his neck. It didn't show up to well against his scarlet coat, but that was a good thing when we were around Star.

That's how I always ended our conversations, signed my books or said goodbye.

I always left them with a kiss.

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