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Five Score, Divided by Four - [MatureVersion]

by TwistedSpectrum

Chapter 9: 9) Prima Nocta

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Dave's Perspective

“So... how you enjoying being a pony?” I smile and turn my head to look at Evan, who just looks back at me and raises his eyebrows.

We left the farm about 10 minutes ago and had settled into a nice steady walking trot as we entered the thick woods behind the farm. Most of the journey would be through this sparse forest, which was good as it was almost always deserted. Anyways, neither of us had really said anything since we left the farm so I tried to get the conversation started with that question.

Evan responds without breaking his pace “Uh, that’s kind of a loaded question isn't it?”

“Oh? Why would you say that?” I smile innocently, I was trying to get Evan in a better mood. I mean, I'm going to be stuck with him all day, might as well get him smiling if I could.

Evan tilts his head slightly. I think he wanted to shrug his shoulders, but you really can't do that while you’re using your shoulders to walk. “Oh come on Dash, you said how am I enjoying being a pony. That implies that the action is something enjoyable.”

I look over at Evan, his words seemed bitter but he said them with a slight smile on his face. It was a start. “Oh, so sorry Grand Master-Professor of the English Language: Dr. Evan Smith. Let me rephrase, please describe the average summation of your positive and negative feelings that your neural limbic system have felt ever since you became an equine. If possible please give standard deviations for all your values and list off the statistical p-value.”

Evan chuckles lightly “Smartass.”

I stick out my tongue “Dumbass!!”

“Nerd.”

“Moron!!”

“Mare.”

“Work horse!!”

Evan laughs “Taking lessons from my sister are you?”

I smile at him “Hey, don't play with fire unless you wanna get burned.”

Evan smiles and shakes his head “Oh you think you're so good at this game?”

I hasten my trotting pace and walk past Evan “I am immune to your insults. Unlike you and Jack, I am perfectly at home in this body. You can't bring me down.”

Evan replies “Oh is that so?”

“Come at my Big Red. Give me your best shot.”

Evan clears his throat. “Oh please, you're a horse with a rainbow face.”

I groan, “Evan, that was such a bad attempt, that you actually made this entire conversation awkward.”

Evan also stops walking and throws his front hooves in the air. “I said you have a equine body and a feminine face! I'm making fun of your loss of masculinity and humanity!”

I continue laughing “Telling me I have an equine body and a feminine face is like telling a girl she has a very womanly body. I'm pretty sure that's a compliment.”

Evan waves one hoof at me “Oh come on! You've gotta be upset about some part of this transformation thing! You're a mare! Hell, once you go in heat you will want nothing else but to get rutted! That's degrading!”

I smile and trot towards Evan. I slow my pace and move around him while sliding my tail under his chin “Oh? Who's to say I'm not looking forward to getting laid? Hmmm? Who’s to say I’m not looking forward to being in heat?”

Evan tenses up and blushes at the feel of my tail on his face, “Uh, Dash...” Evan swallows hard “...are you in heat right now?”

I turn back to face him and shake my mane slightly “No. No, I am not.”

Upon hearing this Evan frowns. I grin ear to ear, “Ah ha! Caught you! You were actually disappointed to learn I wasn't in heat! You want to fuck me! You actually want to have sex with me! Evan, I am disgusted by your suggestion!!”

Evan blushes and looks away “Oh shut up.”

I smile “Hehe, just kidding!”

Evan blinks “Kidding? About what?”

I hop from my left hooves to my right, and then back again. Bouncing back and forth in place like a little school filly. I am enjoying myself here “Oh Evan, I was kidding, I'm not at all disgusted by your suggestion! Lust is natural!” Evan bites his lip and shakes his head at the ground. I continue speaking “And I also was kidding about not being in heat right now...”

Evan's ears shoot up and he lifts his head “Wait, what?!”

I giggle “God Evan, it's adorable how eager you are to know about this.”

Evan rolls his eyes “Oh shut it Rainbow. Are you or are you not?”

I shrug my shoulders “Well, to be honest I have no fucking idea. I'm not terribly familiar with how these things are supposed to feel. I don't think I am? Maybe?”

Evan half smiles “Well, it should be easy enough. Are you... horny?”

“Unbelievably so” I respond instantly. That much I did know, being alone around Evan was like turning on the water works under the tail. I was getting so wet back there I was unsure if I might have pissed myself.

Evan bites his lip. “Oh. Well then, yeah you're probably in heat. Outside of season mares usually have next to no sex drive. If you feel something you're probably in season.”

I smile back “Oh, well then good to know. So, how long does this last?”

“Well, with horses on Earth it's usually just a few days.” Evan shifted his weight uneasily.

I step towards Evan “Oh, well then.... We don't have much time, do we Evan?” My grin grows wider.

Evan's hoof stops in midair and his face is frozen “Umm... what?”

I bend my neck down and glance between his legs, my eyes grow wide with what I see. “Holy shit Evan. Pretty sure you heard me correctly and you know what I’m implying. I mean, your cock is fucking huge, you’re obviously erect.”

Evan's eyes go wide and he moves to cover himself “Jesus! What the hell dude, quit looking at my junk! What are you, gay?”

I laugh, then smile coyly at the embarrassed stallion in front of me “Oh come on Evan, stop playing stupid. Why can’t I take a peak? You're horny, I'm horny. You're male, I'm female... This seems about right, doesn't it?”

Evan swallows the lump in his throat but says nothing; I continue “So, you know, pretty sure I can look at it considering pretty soon I'm probably going to do more with it than just looking...” I could hardly believe what I was saying. When I woke up this morning I didn't think I would be flirting with Evan, let alone trying to talk him into fucking me. God damn these hormones and my throbbing sex; it was hard to think straight without thoughts of penetration clouding my mind every few seconds. I close my eyes and try to will them away, to no avail.

Evan speaks up “Uh, are you okay dude?”

I lick my lips at all the thoughts that float across my mind. Hundreds of random thoughts and urges, each one more desirable than the last. I open my eyes back up and look at Evan “I’m fine Evan, I’m fine. Just getting hard to think through this heat. Pretty sure we’re going to have to do it. Soon.”

Evan's face showed a mixture of confusing and excitement “Dude... you're not really suggesting that we actually have sex when we get to your place... Um, are you?”

I laugh to myself, poor Evan was torn between disgust and lust. I guess so was I, but it was clear the 'disgust' side was losing ground fast. I mean, I was a mare right? Might as well act the part. “Oh no, no Evan. I'm not suggesting we go to my apartment and fuck.” I smile and reach a hoof to brush the hair out of Evan's eyes “No. I'm suggesting we do it right here.”

Evan's eyes go even wider. “Dude! But, but, we're outside in the middle of the woods! And right now?! But, but dude--”

I put a hoof to his muzzle to cut him off “You know, to make this less weird, you should probably stop calling me dude. For both of our sanity's sake, you're really going to want to just call me Rainbow Dash during this.”

Evan trembles slightly “Dash, you're not seriously suggesting we actually fuck right here, right now. We're outdoors...”

I lean forward and touch his muzzle to mine “We're ponies. Better here than indoors, we might break some furniture if we tried this in my apartment.”

Evan whimpers “But, I'm not attracted to horses... and you’re not attracted to guys!”

I start to nip at his ears with my teeth “Well good thing I'm not a horse, I'm a pony. And secondly, yeah, I'm not totally attracted to guys. But this body sure as hell is, and besides, I really want to know what this feels like. Would be fun to see what it’s like to be fucked as a girl.”

Evan raised an eyebrow, “So even though you're not attracted to guys, you're still willing to be on the receiving end of a cock? I mean, I won't complain but—”

I roll my eyes, “This girl is just throwing herself to you and offering a wild ride, and you're trying to get her to reconsider? And besides, I don't need to be attracted to cocks to enjoy this. I won't even see yours, just mount me. I'll just stand here and enjoy the feeling. No homo.” I don't know if it was the heat or something else, but I didn't even care for subtly anymore. I needed him inside of me. And why was he assuming I wasn't interested in cock? I wasn't interested as a human, but even since I became a mare I think that changed.

My mind was made up, now I just had to convince Evan. I pull back from Evan and do a slow spin in front of him to show off my full body. Finally, I come to a stop with my backside towards him and my tail waving in front of his face. After a few flicks I move my tail as high as it goes and raise my butt in the air, giving Evan a full view of everything below.

I look back and see Evan tremble in place as he looks down at the mare displaying herself in front on him. I don't know how he was able to resist this long. I knew I was positively dripping back there right now. The sheer smell and sight before his eyes...

Evan continues to tremble and he takes a small step closer to me. I keep my tail raised and I wave it back and forth a few times, hoping to convince Evan to take me. The seconds tick by and he’s still just standing there, so I let out a small moan and speak up once more, “Come on big boy, don't keep me waiting...”

Evan takes another small step forward, his nose practically touching my folds at this point. He opens his mouth to speak but finds it hard to form words properly with every nerve in his being telling him to just start fucking. “Dash... I can’t... I grew up... around... horses... this is too weird...”

I almost feel pity for him, he is in a really awkward spot here. But yeah, almost feel pity, in reality I didn't feel any. Sorry Evan, but this is happening. I am going to get fucked here, my mind is already made up. I have no intention in letting you get away until you do your proper stallion duty. Hmm, why hasn’t he mounted me yet? Am I missing a step?

“Mustn't... fuck... pony...” Evan mumbles, but remains fixed in place breathing in my smell.

I imagine myself in Evan’s shoes and feel a pang of jealousy. God damn, my past self would have done just about anything to be in his shoes. But why hasn’t he jumped me yet? I had to be missing a step, some sort of signal he is subconsciously waiting for. What the hell was it? I lifted the tail, I'm perfectly wet, I raised my butt--

“Must... resist...” Evan continues, his will right at the breaking point.

Oh! I remember now! I can't believe I forgot this part. That's like the most important thing a mare can do to signal a stallion. Now let's see, what muscle is that? Hmm, let's see maybe if I squeeze this...

*wink*

I didn't even have time to register that I did it correctly because I was distracted by the bestial roar of lust from Evan as my winking display shatters any resistance he had left. Next thing I know he rears up on two legs, grabs my back with his front hooves, and thrusts his lower body forward.

“Whoa Evan, welcome to the party pal---OH SWEET CELESTIA!” My mind snaps in half as I feel my throbbing sex get speared by Evan's member. I expected a gentle insertion, like I had done with my fingers last night, but this was not at all like that. This wasn't a gentle prodding or simple wave of pleasure like when Jack licked me. This was on a totally different level, he was so huge it felt like I was getting stabbed by fucking log.

Evan tries to say something but all that comes out are groans as he struggles to get himself deeper into me while balancing on two hooves. I feel my pleasure turn to pain, which turns back into pleasure. Then, out of the blue, Evan gives one more deep thrust and breaks through something to double the depth of his insertion. Spots of pain clouded my vision and I cry out in a loud whimper telling Evan to stop. Something was wrong, this hurt too much.

Mercifully, Evan hears me and pulls back a little and slows his pace. “Hey Rainbow Dash, you okay?” Evan is concerned, but he is still slowly thrusting a few inches back and forth into me. His eyes are closed and he is enjoying the temporary tease.

I catch my breath “God damn Evan, I think you broke through into my intestine or something. God damn...”

Evan laughs and starts picking up his pace “Awww... little girl just had her cherry popped. That's adorable.” Pleased to hear that the source of my pain was nothing serious, Evan grins and started fucking me in earnest once more. I just stand there as I feel him go deeper and deeper with every thrust. After each thrust I thought he was in as far as he could go, but then a second later he goes even further.

At least the pain was mostly gone, but that meant I could actually focus on feeling of something sliding in and out of me. Oh god this was unsettling, the cock of one of my best friends is inside of me. I am getting fucked. Why the hell did this seem like a good idea? Who's idea was this!? As his thrusts got more forceful I found it hard to stay standing with him slamming into me like this. I was going to fall over if I didn’t do something. I gulp as I realize in order to stay standing I was going to have to move against him. I start ramming myself backwards just as he pushes into me. It helped keep me stable, and I guess it also had the side effect of making his thrusts go deeper still.

“Oh god Dash, this is the best sex I've ever had. Can’t believe this was your idea! This is, oh my god... you’re so fucking tight!”

Unbelievably, he is still penetrating further with each thrust, it felt like an entire arm was moving in and out of me right now. God damn how fucking long is he? Or hell, for that matter, how deep am I?

“Okay, that’s enough of the tip, I think I’m ready now. Hold on Dash, here comes the rest!!”

I feel him pull out a few inches and pause for a moment. What the hell did he mean 'the rest?' How much more could he possibly have to--

THRUST

My vision fades to white and I shatter the night sky with a girl's scream. What I thought was deep before was apparently just the first bit of what he had. With that last thrust he seems to have more than doubled his depth. I could now feel his cock penetrating me practically up to my rib cage. He was pulling back and thrusting well over a foot completely inside of me. I could feel every inch of him slide inside me, then pull out, and then all rammed back in. Over and over, foot after foot of horse cock filling me.

Evan increases his pace, he wasn't going to last much longer “Dash, holy fucking shit... Dash... We can't let you change back. You gotta stay like this... You gotta keep this body...”

Slightly disturbed by the way he put that, I raise my ears and try to turn around to ask what he was talking about. However, I soon realize I am unable to do that, I literally couldn’t move. My entire body was pretty much paralyzed from the sheer sensation of feeling Evan's cock slide through the length of half of my body.

Evan continues “You have to keep this body. You gotta stay like this, forever. You're the best damn lay I have ever had, this is perfect! I want to always have you like this...”

I try to respond with a witty reply, but again, the sheer sensation of being fucked this thoroughly makes it impossible to move or think properly. I open my lips and try to speak but all that comes out is panting noises and a small whinny. I wanted to laugh at the fact that I made that noise, but my train of thought was derailed by the fact that Evan was reducing the depth of his thrusts. Soon he pulled almost all the way out and I felt incredibly empty. I felt like I was missing something that I needed, it was almost as if someone cut off one of my legs. What was he doing? Why was he leaving me? I needed him inside of me!

I take a step back and lean into him, trying to keep him inside of me. Evan protests “I’m gonna cum soon Dash, I'm pulling out...”

“NO!” Oh hey, I found my words again. “Don't you fucking dare, dude. Cum inside me, you have to!”

Evan was nearly all the way out at this point, but he kept the tip in. He starts thrusting lightly just a few inches at a time, unsure of what to do and where to finish. His face was starting to twist on itself as he fought the urge to cum for just a few more seconds so he would have time to figure this out. “Are you sure Dash? Why do you... want it... inside?” Evan bit his lip hard, he wasn't going to last much longer.

I grin back at him, saying my lines in between his thrusts “So many times, I wanted to, cum in, Rainbow Dash. Gotta let, it happen, for me. For my past self. Please...”

Evan didn't really follow my logic, but if his mare wanted it inside, who was he to deny her? Evan leans forward and gives me a somewhat deeper thrust, then he pulls back a little and gives one final massive thrust all the way in.

I gasp out in shock as Evan manages to fully hilt himself in me. I feel his balls twitch against my rump and the entire length of his cock spasms wildly inside me. Evan lies on my back and chomps down on my ear as I feel his tip flare inside me. A moment later and I feel the end of his cock explode as ribbons of warm, thick fluid start to fill the inside of my body. My mouth drops open and I involuntary moan as I feel the fluid fill up crevices inside me that I didn't even know I had.

Time slows down and I take a deep breath when I realize the pulse of fluid stopped, only to be surprised to feel the cock twitch again and unload another load. And then another. And then another. And---ah fuck, it was too much, my legs start to buckle under me as I finally orgasm. My knees give in as I feel my pussy squeeze Evan's member in a vice like grip and start milking it for every drop it had. Evan gives out another guttural moan and the final waves of pleasure from my orgasm make me lose consciousness and I fall to the ground with Evan still on my back.

~~~~~~

I come to a few moments later when I feel Evan slowly pull his legs away and start to remove his softening member out from inside me. I feel the entire length slowly slide out of me, followed by a sickening plop noise announcing it’s departure. I grit my teeth as Evan rolls off me, landing on his side and breathing heavily. As for me, I lie there fairly motionless aware that my pussy is now winking wildly as several pints of white fluid start to slowly leak out.

After a moment I catch my breath and speak up “So... that happened.”

“Eeyup” came from the mouth of the person you would expect it to.

I shift my body so I can look at Evan “Yeah, that was, uh, unique. Let's just say I'm probably never going to forget that experience.”

Evan look up at the treetops and smiles “I was that good huh?”

I roll my eyes “Don't kid yourself pal. I won’t forget it because I'm not exactly used to the sensations and feelings of having someone's cock rammed into my vagina!” I feel myself cringe, I still wasn't used to fully admitting I had a pussy, though that concept was rapidly getting easier to accept. “Gah, I can’t believe I actually volunteered for that.”

Evan leers, “Well, all things said, I'm glad you did. And really now, be honest, how was I?”

I break eye contact, blushing hard. “You were pretty great, I guess.”

Evan laughs lightly “Well, you were amazing. Your pussy, wow. Best two minutes of my entire life, hands down.”

I blushed wildly. I didn’t feel romantically attached to Evan, but still, hearing that he thought I was a great lay... well that did make me feel pretty gosh darn swell about myself.

“So Dash, ask me that question again.”

I rolled my head on the grass to look back over at Evan “Hmm? What question?”

“The one about how I’m enjoying being a pony.”

I laugh and start to repeat the question. “Alright Evan, how are you enjo--”

“It certainly has it’s perks,” says Evan, grinning ear to ear.

~~~~~~

We eventually got back on our hooves and started walking about. Thankfully we hadn't lost that much time to our little romp in the woods. As the following hour or so passed we made some good distance; we only had another five or so miles to go before we reached the town limits. As much as I kinda hoped that the sex thing was behind us, it turns out we didn't have much else to talk about.

“So remember when I managed to bottom out in you? Ah that was amazing. You were so tight back there, and then you came at the same time I did!” Evan was once again reliving the recent memory. Well at least he was happy, I guess I should be grateful for that much

“Mmhmm, I know Evan, I was there, I felt it,” I mumble, still not sure if I enjoyed that entire event. The pleasure was great, that was for sure. I mean, I literally passed out from the sensation at the end, so I really can’t complain about that aspect. And it was just great to experience it, how many millions of guys had wondered what sex felt like for the other gender? Well, now I actually know! So that is cool I guess, but still, now that the heat of the moment is over I’m starting to wonder if it will make things awkward between the two of us. Thankfully, right now we should be fine. As long as Evan and I continue to think of myself as a female pony in heat, everything should be great between us. As long as I stay Rainbow Dash, everything will be fine...

But what if we change back? What if I become Dave again? What if I go back to being a human male? I shiver as I think about how awkward things would be between Evan and I.

“Whatcha thinking about Dash?” Evan looks over at me and smiles, probably thinking of me in a sexual way. Well, at least I wouldn’t have to worry about him calling me Dave anymore. Pretty sure Evan now 100% thought of me as Rainbow Dash, the cute and sensual mare.

I looked up at him “Well...” I paused to think of a lie, as per usual. Wait a second, why do I have to keep lying when people ask what I’m thinking about? Fuck that, I just had sex with this man, I’ll give him the truth. “Well Evan, I was just thinking about the fact that I’m set on being a mare now.”

Evan raises an eyebrow “Meaning...?”

I take a deep breath “I just let a stallion fuck me. Eagerly. And the thought of doing it again is exciting. And so is the fact that I know you're going to be looking at me in a different light now. Being seen, not as 'Dave turned pony', but instead as 'that cute mare'. That thought actually makes me really happy. So, I don’t know if I can go back to being male right now.”

Evan interrupts “Didn’t think we had a choice in this whole thing.”

I tilt my head “Well we don’t, but this is just a mental thing for my own sanity. Like right now if we found ourselves turning back into humans, I would actually prefer to remain female when all was said and done.”

Evan laughs “Wow, I must have been really good in the sack.”

I laugh with him. “Oh shut up. No seriously, I would feel weird going back to being a guy now. It’s not just the sex thing either, I’m sure that was a part of it, but it’s just a feeling I’ve been getting. Being a mare just feels right, this body feels like a tight fitting glove to me. I mean ever since this morning I kind of was thinking that I liked being a pony more than a human, and now I’m pretty sure I like this gender more than my old one too.”

Evan turns and stares at me “Really? That’s kind of creepy isn’t it? I mean, I guess I’m starting to get the hang of this body, but I still think I would prefer to change back once this is all over. You actually want to stay like that huh?”

I smile and get back to walking “Yeah, pretty much. I love my species and gender, I am 100% at home right now. I would do pretty much anything to keep this body.”

Evan inquires “Anything huh? Give me an example?”

I stick out my tongue “I’d let an ugly red earth pony have sex with me if it meant I could keep this body a few more days!”

Evan bites his lip “Damn it Dash, I don't understand your confidence. I mean you were turned into a female pony, then you literally got fucked by one of your oldest friends, and then afterwards you’re just smiling about it and you're cracking jokes. I wish Jack could be as confident in her body as you are in yours...” Evan shakes his head and sighs ”I mean really, how do you adapt so fast?”

I shrug my shoulders ”I don’t know. And yeah, thing's haven't been perfect for me, but I guess I feel at home like this because for so long I loved everything about Rainbow Dash. So actually being her just seems like the next step or something. I don’t know, I just feel like I would be willing to take on any challenge and fight any foe if it meant I could keep this body longer and if it made me more like Dash.”

Evan nods “Hmm, well I guess I shouldn’t complain if you think fucking me will get you your goals. But, uh, question. How far are you gonna take this?”

“What do you mean?”

Evan goes on “Well you said you’ll do anything to keep this body, anything to be more like Dash. But where do you cross the line? How much of yourself are you willing to lose? If you ‘succeed’ and you pursue this and become Rainbow Dash incarnate, well then... what about you? What happens to Dave? Where do you go after you cut yourself out?”

I pause, that was a good question. I didn’t have an answer for Evan.

Evan smiles “No response?”

I look back at Evan “Yeah, I don’t know, that thought never crossed my mind before. Ever since this started I was never concerned about keeping my humanity, I was pushing to be more like Dash every step of the way.”

Evan laughs to himself “Damn, Jack was right, you really do have an unhealthy obsession with that pony.”

I smile back “It's not unhealthy, it's perfectly acceptable. Not my fault I'm so awesome. And besides, I don't think you can make fun of me for liking this body when you're the one who can't stop staring at my flanks as we walk.”

Evan blushes “Oh come on dude, that's not fair at all! You're literally the only female of my species that isn't family! Of course I'm going to be crazy attracted to you, and come on, you’re ridiculously hot in that body.” Evan stops walking and facehoofs as he realizes what he just said. ”Urgh, this whole thing is so wrong though, I should not be this sexually attracted to a freakan blue horse.”

I mumble, “Mmm, not horse. Pegasus.”

Evan looks up, “Hey, you know, I actually meant to ask you about that. What's the deal with those wings? Can you fly?

I stop walking. “I... don't know.”

“Well then Ms.’I-want-to-be-like-Dash’ don’t you think it’s time you tried it?”

“Hmm...” I look around us, we were in an open field close to the edge of the town limits. It was like 9pm or so, pretty dark and the sky was calm. It is good flying weather that’s for sure. The ground here felt pretty soft too. “Well fuck, this seems like a spot as good as any to try flying.”

Evan laughs “Should I put out some pillows for you to land in?”

“Yeah yeah, laugh it up big guy. You’re just jealous you can’t do this yourself.” I open my wings and twist my neck back to look at them. I am sort of used to how to control these wing muscles. I can open and flap then down pretty easily now. And the wings themselves look fine to me...

“Come on scaredy pants, start flapping!” Evan takes a few steps back to give me room and is grinning. “Just see what happens!”

I take a deep breath and flap my wings down as hard as I could. The feeling of the ground under me vanishes and I feel my body get launched upwards into the air. Whoa, I didn’t expect that would actually work! I look down to see how high I am, but instead of the ground below my hooves I see the night sky. Wait a second, shouldn’t the sky be above me? And do I need to flap my wings more than once?

THUMP

My back slams into the ground knocking the wind out of me. “Ow...”

Evan is laughing like a hyena “Oh god, that was fucking priceless. I wish I was filming that.” After a few more seconds of hearing his laughter he manages to get a hold of himself and trots over to me, holding out a hoof and helping me to stand.

I wipe the mud off my shoulder “What the hell happened to me? Did I fly?”

Even laughs a few more times and finally explains things “Well you flapped your wings once and then just sort of froze. So you propelled yourself like three feet into the air, and then just fell straight back down to earth. Oh and you somehow managed to flip over during your descent, ha ha.” Evan moves his fetlock to wipe a tear from his eye as he laughs some more.

I flex the various muscles on my back. That fall was probably going to leave a bruise, oh well. I look over at Evan and smile “So what you’re telling me is that... I flew!”

Evan wipes his eye again “Yeah, sure, sure. You flew about two feet there buddy. You gonna try it again?”

I think about it for a moment. That fall hurt like a bitch, if I was any higher up I would have probably broken something. “Yeah Evan, I’m gonna try this one more time. But I really need to stay upright this time.”

Evan nods “You just gotta balance yourself some more!”

“Yeah, okay, with what? I’ll be in midair, I can’t exactly grab onto a handrail here.”

Evan waves his hoof at my sides “Use your wings! Balance with the wings!”

I roll my eyes “Oh yes, why didn’t I think of that. It’s so easy to balance myself while flapping these appendages that I’m not even entirely sure how to fully move.”

Evan sticks his tongue out at me “Well numbskull, at the very least flap them more than once if you want to actually stay in the air.”

I wave a hoof at him signaling to back up “Yeah, yeah, I know, now give me some more flying space.”

Evan backs up and I spread out my wings. I give them a nice, slow beat downwards and then bring them back up, getting a feel for the rhythm. I close my eyes and keep practicing the pattern a few more times, nice slow beats downwards and gently bringing them back up again. Nice and smooth. Okay, I could do this. Now when I finish this practice, to actually fly I’ll just have to flap them faster, but I gotta keep this same pattern. Just nice and smooth, just gotta keep flapping. I think I’m ready to--

“Nice work kid! Now try landing!” Evan’s voice comes from below me, from very, very far below me.

My eyes shoot open and I see nothing but sky. “Oh holy sweet fuck what the hell, I’m in the air.” I look down and panic fills me, I somehow made it fifty feet in the air and now I was just sort of hovering above Evan. Confused, I look back at my wings, they were still making the “practice pattern” I had started when I was on the ground. I was just slowly flapping up and down, about once a second. I honestly didn’t think that was enough to generate lift, I had just wanted to practice moving them!

“Dash, come on down now!” Evan’s voice is distant and was slightly distorted by the wind.

I look down at Evan and yell “Shut up, I’m trying!” I swallow hard and ponder what to do. Right now my wings are pretty much on autopilot just running though that flap pattern. I mean you know how when you don’t think about it, you breath automatically? Well, that’s what my wings are doing right now. But if I wanted to lower myself down and land I would have to take manual control over them. Damn it, this landing is going to be painful...

“Evan, get out of the way, I’m coming down!” I slowly take control of my wings and tell them to stop flapping for a moment. Unsure of where to hold them, I decide to just keep them vertically pointing straight up at the sky. Hopefully I would lose some altitude? Maybe?

I drop like a fucking stone. “Ah shit, shit, shit, shit” I fall about 15 feet in two seconds, then start flapping again, which immediately stops my descent like a car slamming on the brakes. God damn, flying was strange. I mean, it’s like swimming in deep water and you are treading on the surface, but the second you stop treading, you just sink like an anchor. This was crazy, who’s idea was it to put wings on things?!

I hover in the air doing some more gentle flaps for a few more seconds before I look down. I am closer to the ground now, maybe, I don’t know, 30 feet in the air now?. Well, this method of decent works, I guess. Time to drop a few more feet, I lift my wings vertical again.

Wind whips past my ears and I feel my stomach move up to my throat as I drop another 10 feet in one second and then start flapping again. The sudden lift from my wings abruptly stops my fall and jerks me up suddenly.

Evan, now about 20 feet under me starts laughing “Haha, It’s like a 15 year old learning to drive! Flooring the gas for two seconds and then slamming on the brake! This is priceless!”

“Damnit Evan, shut up, I’m trying to not kill myself here. Gotta do one more altitude drop and I should be able to just hop back down to the ground.”

“Hey Dash, instead of holding your wings vertically to lose altitude, why not hold them horizontally out to the sides? It should let you glide down instead of just falling.”

I hover in place for a few more seconds as I thought about that suggestion. I smile for a moment as I realize I can just effortless hover at will now. I mean, hovering with these slow flaps is very easy to maintain, and it is actually felt pretty comfortable to just sit here in chill in mid air. Damn, I am actually really starting to like this flying thing! Right, back to falling with style idea, let’s try Evan’s suggestion and see if I can glide. I was still like 20 feet off the ground, this should be pretty safe to try. I take a deep breath and stop flapping my wings and instead spread them out to the sides as far as they can go.

I gasp in shock as wind rips past my ears. I was still falling, but instead of just going straight down like before, I was falling down slowly, but falling forward at about 20mph.

“Holy shit~~” Evan yells out from below and I hear his voice fade away as I shot away from him. I was accelerating away from him faster and faster as I was falling is what was apparently some sort of dive. I keep my wings fixed and look in amazement around me, the field below is zipping by under me alarmingly fast. I am both thrilled and horrified to see how fast I am now going, and then I realize my altitude is still dropping and I am on course to hit the ground moving at about 50mph.

I am only about 5 feet off the ground at this point, so I tilt my wings up, hoping to both slow my fall and my forward velocity. It sort of works, but the sudden deceleration starts to lift my hind legs upwards, I am going to flip over in a moment if I kept this up. I am just a foot off the ground now and moving at about 20mph, so I give one final regular flap of my wings in hopes of softening the landing.

I think it worked. Not entirely sure, I blacked out from the impact either way and opened my eyes to see Evan out of breath and standing over me “Holy shit Dash, are you okay?”

I wave a hoof at him “Pfft, I’m fine... never been better... ow...” I wince as I wiggle my legs. I think I bruised my everything.

Evan twists his neck and looks around, measuring how far we are from where we started “I mean, holy shit dude, I’ve never see something accelerate that fast. You went zero to sixty in less than a second. ”

I lean forward into a sitting position and shake my head to clear the ringing noise. “Ha, yeah, what can I say, I’m built for speed. I mean, imagine how fast I could have gone if I started that dive at higher altitude! I only had twenty feet to work with during that dive, imagine if I had a thousand!”

Evan frowns and holds out a hoof to help me back up on my hooves. “Well, then you would have died probably.”

I nod somberly “Mmhmm, pity we don’t live in an actual cartoon. That fall fucking hurt.”

Evan laughs “Well yeah, you slammed into a dirt mound. But hey, at least it wasn’t concrete, gotta be happy about that.”

Something suddenly dawns on me “Happy about that? Oh no, I’m not happy at that fact. You know why I am happy?”

Evan raises an eyebrow “Because you’re still alive?”

“Try again.”

“You’re happy because.... um, you learned something new?”

“BECAUSE I CAN FUCKING FLY!!

Evan chuckles to himself and I let out a scream of jubilation and start galloping across the field screaming “I CAN FLY!!! FLIGHT!!! WOOOHOO!!! HAHA!!! FUCK YEAH!!!”

~~~~~~

Once I calmed down we made it into town. As much as I kind of wanted to try flying again, I really couldn’t do it here, it would attract too much attention. Turns out it’s not normal for two colorful ponies to be walking the streets at night, so we really had to stay as hidden as we could. Thankfully, it was a fairly sparse town with lots of trees and public landscaping to hide behind, plus the fact that it was 10pm and really dark outside meant we could sneak around if we were careful.

Evan and I had just turned a corner and dashed for a large bush half a block away. Our hooves were extremely loud as we galloped over pavement, but what can you do. Once safely under the bush we catch our breath and Evan speaks up “Alright Dash, this is your part of town, where’s Fiona’s apartment?”

I wave a hoof at the large building down the street. “It’s that one. We can push the room buzzer by the front door and see if she answers.”

Evan looks around and slowly nods. Finally he points at something down the road “Okay, right there, 200 meters away. Large shrub on the corner of her apartment building. Let’s move to there.” We both check around us once again, making sure there were no pedestrians around and no voyeurism going on in any of the apartment windows around us. The coast is clear so we both gallop over to the next bush and I smile to myself as I realize I can run much faster than Evan. Eventually we both reach the bush and the apartment is just a few dozen feet away from us now.

“Okay Evan, it’s room 306. The buzzer button for her room is on the far bottom left. Go over there, buzz it, and see if she answers.”

Evan looks at me. “Wait, I’m going alone to ring the bell? Why don’t we both go?”

“Needless risk, there are lots of windows near the front door. Both of us don’t need to go.” I reach up my hoof and flick my bright rainbow mane “I’m colorful and a lot easier to spot than you. You’re a nice subtle red and brown, people won’t even see you in this dark light. Just go and ring the button dude.”

Evan looks around to make sure no one is coming, then takes a deep breath and bolts out from under the bush, galloping across the parking lot towards the front door. He makes it to the door and I see him peer at the buzzer controls on the wall as he looks for Fiona’s name.

I mutter to myself “Come on Evan, bottom left button, hurry up and ring it...” I was getting nervous, he was ridiculously exposed over there.

I see Evan stick out a hoof and press one of the buttons, then he started looking around to make sure no random person was on their way. The seconds tick by agonizingly slow as we wait for Fiona to answer the doorbell.

I start biting my hooves with worry. Come on Fiona, answer the damn buzzer! At least no one was walking over there, coast was still clear...

A good 30 seconds have passed, Evan rings the bell again, then looks over at my shrub and shrugs his shoulders. He yells across the lot “No answer!”

I wave a hoof beckoning him to return to safety “Alright dude, come back!” Evan nods and gallops back over to my bush. I chew my lip for a moment as I realize we need to get off these streets. I mean, it was evening, but not late evening. People could still be walking around, and this spot simply didn't have any real cover to hide behind for a long time.

“We need to lay low for a few hours Evan. Thankfully there's a nearby spot we can use for just that thing.” I look over at Evan and he nods, just as eager to get off these streets as I was.

~~~~~~

Dave's Apartment

We trot up the stairs of my building, trying not to make noise. So far we were lucky. We reach my floor and a moment later reach my door. Evan nods at it, ”I like how you marked your door. Easy to find, hehe.”

I raise my eyebrow “What are you talking about? Marked?”

Evan points at the crescent indent near our eye level “A hoof mark.”

I stare at that for a moment, that wasn’t there before, was it? “Oh, hey, I think I know where this came from. Must be when Jack and I left to go shopping yesterday. We had hooves, Jack probably kicked the door shut.”

Evan nods ”Makes sense. Well, come on dude, open the door. We’re kind of exposed here in this hallway.”

I roll my eyes “You’re the one with the key you big goof.”

Evan gets a confused look on his face. “I what? Oh yeah, the bag! Haha, I completely forgot I was every carrying this thing!”

I facepalm and then Evan shifts his neck and removes the canvas sack. He starts moving the contents around with his muzzle until finally a silver key pops out and lies flat on the carpet. Satisfied, Evan puts his bag back over his neck and steps away from the key.

I give him a strange look, “And...? What, you’re just gonna leave it on the floor?”

Evan smirks, “Your key, your apartment. Have fun with that...”

Unsure of what exactly he means I reach down with a hoof to grab the key. No luck, this thing was way too tiny to pick up with hooves. Finally realizing what Evan meant, I roll my eyes and reach down with my mouth. I start biting the ground as I attempt to pick up the key with my mouth.

Evan starts laughing, “How’s that taste?”

“Like shoes.” I mumble and then I finally feel the cold metal of the key on my tongue. I get it between my teeth and stand back up. “Taa-daa.” I say through my closed teeth.

Evan just smiles and points at the lock. “Also... have fun with that.”

I look over at the small keyhole, damn, this was going to be hard. I move up to the target and try and align the small hole with the key that is clumsily between my teeth.

“The key is sideways.” Evan remarks, deadpan.

I grumble and rotate it in my mouth, only to see Evan smile out of the corner of my eye, “Nice work, Dash, but now it's upside down.” He starts to giggle again, but a few seconds later I flip the key over with my tongue and he nods to confirm that it’s facing the right way.

I keep poking it around. Since my muzzle was covering the lock, my eyes couldn’t see where I was stabbing with the key. It was all just blind trial and error.

Evan leans over, whispering in my ear “Can’t get it in huh?”

“Mmhmm.” I mumble as I try a few more times.

Evan is clearly holding back a smile as he leans forward and whispers again “Just think about how I did it to you.”

Evan pulls away from my side and starts laughing quietly to himself. I roll my eyes, but a half second later I feel the key slide right into the lock.

Upon seeing this Evan’s soft chuckles become into a full bellied laugh. “I TOLD YOU!!”

I feel myself blush. I was going to kill him once we got inside.

Suddenly I hear a door down the hall crack open and a voice yells out “Hey, keep it down over there! Damn kids!” The door then starts to open all the way as the owner of voice clearly wants to see who was making all the racket.

Fuck. I fumble a hoof and manage to turn the key, then grab the doorknob in my mouth and twist as Evan pushes to open the door.

The door swings open and we both collapse inside. Evan rolls off me and I take a deep breath. Phew, close call, we got inside before that person could see us. I look back at the door frame, fuck my tail is still sticking out into the hall. I quickly flick it inside and then kick the door shut. Well, hopefully no one saw it.

Evan stands up and fumbles on the wall looking for a light switch, he finds it and flicks them all on.

I blink and look around the room. “Well, this place looks... different.”

Evan nods “It does, I think it’s because we are lower to ground. But yeah, everything looks a little off being this short.” After a moment’s pause, Evan lowers his head and once again drops the canvas bag. He starts rummaging through it with his hoof until he finds what he was looking for: the battle hardened Nokia with Jack’s phone number programmed in.

I look over “Calling Jack to let him know we arrived? Good idea. Let’s see it’s about 11pm right now, and we left at 4pm. Seven hours? Not a bad trip really. Anyway Jack is probably showering or getting ready for bed.”

Evan nods and presses the speed dial button with the tip of his hoof. He turns on speaker phone and we both just stand there as the phone rings.

On the very last ring the phone is answered. No voices come from it though, and Evan and I lean forward waiting for Jack to say something.

~~~~~~

The Stables

Jack looked down at the phone. The phone had come from the small bag that was on her back. The ringing of it startled her so she shook the bag off of her back and found the black box that was making the noise. Instinctively she hit the green button. She wasn’t entirely sure what to do now though. She looked around her at the other horses, none of them had black rectangles that made noise. She let out a soft neigh, why did she have one of these? Maybe she should just kick it away? She felt the fur on the back of her neck stand up. 'Give in...' Jack nodded. Horses aren’t supposed to have strange devices like this, she wanted nothing to do with this non-horse object.

Something poked at the back of her mind, something felt very wrong about all this. It told her that this wasn’t her life, she shouldn’t be doing this, something strange was making her do things she really shouldn’t do. Jack stopped for a moment, then gave a soft whinny and shifted her weight around. She was confused, why would this something try to manipulate her? 'It doesn't matter, just get rid of the phone...' Jack slowly lifts her leg to kick the strange device away for good.

~~~~~~

Dave's Apartment

“Evan, something is wrong.” I look away from the phone and over at Evan, he seemed just as worried as me. Jack had answered the phone about 30 seconds ago, but said nothing.

I poked Evan again “Dude, say something, I got a really bad feeling about this.”

Evan swallows hard and nods, approaching the phone microphone.

~~~~~~

The Stables

Jack zeros in her aim on the strange device, she was ready to send it flying across the room. She tenses her leg muscle and--

“Jack!” The phone comes alive and voices pour through. “Jack look, I’m sorry for what I said before! I know I already apologized, but I just wanted you to know that I feel terrible about this whole thing. You’re my twin sister, and I won’t give up until you’re my twin brother once again. We’ll get to the bottom of this Jack. You and me... we’ll fix this.”

Jack lowers her leg and steps closer to the phone. That voice! Her brother! Fog lifts off her mind and Jack dives to the ground and grabs the phone “Evan! Evan you’re alright!”

~~~~~~

I breathe a sigh of release to hear Jack’s voice. Evan smiles and laughs into the phone “Of course I’m alright, why wouldn’t I be? I got your best friend here watching my back. But how about you? How you doing on the farm?”

Jack’s voice cracks through the speakers “I’m... um... good? Yeah sure, good here, don’t worry about me. Did you find Fiona yet?”

I step beside Evan and join in the conversation “Not quite, still looking for her. Look, Jack, we’ll call you once we get a hold of Fiona, okay?”

Jack’s voice pours through the phone full of enthusiasm ”Alright! Good luck out there, I’ll have this place cleaned up and ready for the three of you to return!”

We say our farewell and hang up the phone. I turn to Evan “Well, that’s good news. Jack seems alright. I was sort of worried about her ever since we left.”

Evan nods. “Yeah good to know that she is safe. So! Now what do we do?”

I look around and sigh “Well, I guess we go to bed for a few hours. We should set an alarm for 3am or so, we can take another trip to Fiona’s then and find out if she is at home sleeping.”

Evan tilts his head “So... we have some time to kill?”

I nod “Yep, not much else we can do until then.”

Evan grins slowly “Well, I wouldn’t say that.”

I look up at him “Hmm?”

“I can think of something we can do.” Evan’s grin grows wider and he leans over and nibbles on my ear.

Just like that, like flicking a switch, I feel myself start to get wet again. I look up and sigh, “Damnit Evan, I don’t want this to become a thing. We can’t be together, your sister is my best friend...”

Evan smiles and walks around me, stopping behind me to smell the base of my tail, he wasn’t even trying to be subtle anymore ”So? She isn’t here, we gotta enjoy this while we can!”

I tremble in place as I feel Evan lift up my tail and take a deep breath behind me. I start to think about the forest and I just get more wet “Evan, I... Um, I’m not sure if I want this.”

Evan licks the sides of my flanks and then moves back behind me “So, you’re saying you don’t want to feel me inside of you again? Are you sure?”

I bite my lip. Memories of Evan sliding a full two feet of hard flesh into me fill my mind. What to do, what to do? It felt so weird to have sex as a girl. But, well, it also felt pretty fucking incredible...

*wink*

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