As rarity sung, waiters dropped platteres, and people stopped mid-chew. Staring at the beautiful pony, who now looked more beautiful then usual. At the conclousiin to the song, twilight shot out of her chair, eyes wide with horror

"stay away form me..." she said softly, rarity made an attempt to grab twilights wrist, in an effort to calm her down. Despite her attempts to calm her, twilight interpreted them as attacks.

"stay away from me!" she shouted, then she ran.

Everypony else either looked love-struck, or dumbfounded.

rarity got up, and ran, beginning to fear herself. she ran... and ran... and ran... and ran... and -wham- once again she ran into the lazy eyed mailmare, she too was running from something.

"GAH! oh, its just you rarity." she said, sounding out of breath.

"Derpy, why are you running?" she was equally winded.

"well, I was just..." she looked distressed for a moment, then continued, "I was just... uh... o-on my way to the public pool, and you?"

"uuuh, s-same"

they decided to walk together. Rarity had almost completely forgotten her desire to go swimming, but now that she remembered it, she was just as anxious as ever.

as the two walked, they hummed, they both hummed the some tune, neither said a word about it.

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When Rarity and Derpy finally reached the pool, they were itching to dive in to the crystal clear water. Rarity lent Derpy her spare swimsuit (she always took extra closes just in case). and they dived in.

both the lifeguards and the people swimming, stared in awe at the two. They flew trough the water, their speed challenging that of Rainbow Dash.

they swam, at least, 15 laps (in under a minuet) until finally they sat on the ledge of the pool.

somepony screamed.

some stared in fear, others ran for the exit.

The two pones looked down, and they too, screamed at what they saw...

(you think I write bad and then -BOOM- I slap a cliffhanger in your face and -BANG- your hooked!)

(chapter7): a shocking development

(this chapter does not continue from the last one so as to increase the suspense of the cliffhanger, I apologies to no one)

Twilight burst into her room, causing spike to jump, spilling all of his scrolls.

"SPIKE! drop what your doing!"

"I just did." he said, annoyed.

"SPIKE, WE DON'T HAVE TIME FOR YOUR SAD ATTEMPTS AT HUMOR!"

"whats so important?" he groaned.

"I need you to sen princess Celesta a scroll, NOW!"

"alright, alright, don't get your panties in a twist."

"just get a scroll!"

"OK, what do in need to write?"

Twilight sucked in a breath, "dearprincessibeleiveihavefoundwhatwefailedtolocatelastnite,howeverinowseemtohavefoundoneandnowirequestyourpreasencetoaidmeinaprehendingthecreature" she sucked in another breath "y-your faith...faithful student, t-twilight" she gasped, still sucking in air.

"okay... can you repeat that?"

"which part?"

"lets see, uh... all of it."

"alright, how about; 'I found one'?"

"o...n...e. done!"

"good, send it immediately"

with a puff of smoke, it was gone

30 seconds later, they received a reply, three simple words: come at once

(chapter8): a tail of surprise

The two pones looked down, and they too, screamed at what they saw: they had no legs! instead, they saw, they had... tails? there was more: Rarity's horn had disappeared, and Derpy's wings ware also gone, but so was something else... she blinked a few times, and waved her hand in front of her face.

rarity was confused, because Derpy was confused... why was Derpy confused? she watched as she stared at her hand... then she saw it, she was staring at her hand... with both eyes, as if her lazy eye had never existed. they pulled their leg- tails out of the water to inspect them. as they began to dry, they started to glow. first it was Rarity's forehead, then Derpy's back, then their tails, and very faintly, Derpy's eye. Their bodies fully dry, they shifted back to normal.

the two mares stared at each other... what the hell was going on!?!?

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The princess' had ordered that the guards and servants stay away from the makeshift meeting room they had put together in the castles library.

"so, you found one?" Celesta asked?

"yes." Twilight said quietly

"and where there is one, there are sure to be more." Luna added.

"indeed, so twilight, who is it?"

"it's... r...r..."

"well child, speak up."

"its... r-rarity..."

"your seamstress friend?" (a seamstress is basically a female tailor, but with dresses)

"yes..."

"well, i suppose the hunt is on."

i hope...

i hope on hatis means what i think it does, but just in case it dosent, the story is on hold, i am trying to write 3 other stories, so ill get back to this whenever. this chapter will be deleted once (if at all) i continue wrighting this.