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Twilight's Giant Sneeze

by Loganstrang


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Cause of growth

It is a beautiful day in Ponyville, Twilight was in her library, reading her spell books and she see her friends at the door and answers the door. She says "Hi guys, come on in."

"Why thank you, my dear Twilight," said Rarity.

Then, they go in to see Twilight was reading her books before they came in. "Well, howdy Twilight, we were wondering if you want to go with us to see Rainbow Dash do some stunts," asked Applejack. Twilight wondered if she would like to go because they were all going, too.

"Sure, I like to but I'll be there later, okay," replied Twilight. Soon Twilight decides to let her friends stay at her library. Then, the Cutie Mark Crusaders who are Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo arrived and wanted to see if everything was okay. "why don't you guys go ahead and have fun up here while I go in the basement to find some spell books down there," said Twilight. Soon she goes down into the basement and finds a box of her books in the closet. As she heads to the stairs, she accidentally bumps a table with a powder jar saying, "Super Duper Growth Powder." It suddenly falls on her nose, making Twilight feel so sneezing.

She heads upstairs and heads to the sink and wash the powder away. She thought to herself saying, "Next time, you do a potion or make a powder, put it somewhere away from the edge of a table." What Twilight's friends don't know is that she has a growth powder in her nose. Later, her friends leave to go see Rainbow Dash do her stunts. Twilight was wondering if she should go with the powder in her nose or wait a little longer. She hopes she'll be fine with the growth powder in her nose.

So, Twilight goes outside to go see her friends watch Rainbow Dash's stunts. Then she suddenly starts to sneeze, but nothing happened to her. "Hmm must be a prank powder," she thought. So, she goes to see her friends and hopes that she will be fine with the powder in her nose. She then arrives to see her friends watching Rainbow Dash doing flips, spins, loops,and more. After watching Rainbow Dash, she said to her friends "Guys, why don't you all come to my house tonight and have a sleep over with me."

Pinkie Pie said, "Oh I would love to go, You want me to bring a party so we can make a great one. Cause it will be fun and I just love fun time."

"No thanks Pinkie Pie, we're just having a fun, quiet slumber party," replied Twilight.

"Sure thing, Twilight but, I have work to do. I'll come over tonight. See ya'll later," said Applejack.

"I have to work on making dresses for some client but I'll be over tonight, Twilight darling," said Rarity.

Soon Twilight's friend went home to get their work done before heading to Twilight's house for her slumber party. But what Twilight and her friends don't know is that they're heading for a line of big trouble.

Ah-choo!!

That afternoon, Spike told to Twilight, "Well, I'm going to the marketplace to get some food. I'll be back later, okay."

Twilight said, "Okay, see ya soon." Then after Spike left, Twilight sneezed two times and started feeling funny. So, she went to her room and looked into the mirror and saw that she has grown at least 5 feet than her normal size. She is 5 feet tall from shoulder to legs but when standing, she is 8 feet tall. She said in shock, "Whoa, I guess this powder works." She went downstairs to read her books but she kept sneezing. Spike returns home to see Twilight looking so tall with him saying "Twilight, you're huge."

" I know that, Spike," said Twilight

"Well, it can't be any worst," replied Spike. But suddenly, she sneezes hard and she grows some more that her horn can nearly touch low ceilings. Then there was a knock on the door and voices saying, "Twilight, are you home?"

"Uh oh, if my friends see me looking like this, they'll freak," said Twilight quietly. She tells them to come in but tells them to go upstairs and get their things out. So, her friends go inside and they see Twilight was as big as Princess Celestia. Rarity said "Oh my dear Twilight, you are so big."

Then, Applejack said, "I agree with her, you don't look okay." Twilight told them that she accidentally bumped the table with a jar of super growth powder and it fell on her nose. Her friends said about they will get through the party and then find a cure by morning. Soon they start the slumber party but one thing that happened was Twilight's tail accidentally caught on fire when making s'mores with her friends and she bumped into her shelves, knocking books everywhere.

Later that night when everyone was asleep, Twilight kept sneezing in her sleep which kept causing her to grow bigger and bigger. When morning raised, Twilight's friends felt something big and soft and they heard loud snoring. Her friends looked up and saw that Twilight was so huge that her body was touching the ceiling. They know that they have to wake her up and tell her what happened. After doing several attempts to wake her, Twilight still won't wake up. Soon Spike wakes up and finds Twilight is gigantic. Soon, Spike tries to around her giant body but she was crushing walls, making it hard for Spike to get passed her.  

Soon an hour later, Twilight wakes up and asks, "What's happened to me?"

"I don't know, Twilight. It hard to explain, " replied Spike. Then later, her friends wake up and saw her crushing the wall and ceiling with her body.

"Um..Twilight, you have grown....too big," Fluttershy said in a nervous voice.

"I agree with Fluttershy, Twilight darling," said Rarity.

"We all agree, Rarity," said Applebloom

But when Twilight sneezed so hard, she started growing out of the ceiling, causing it to crumble and break. Then, the walls and roof of Twilight's house collapse as she continues to grow. Her friends made an escape through a big hole Twilight made in the wall. Soon after stopped growing, she started running off, feeling worried to not scare any pony. As, she was running, the ground shakes, causing many buildings and trees to be destroyed by her massive stomps.


Struggle for help

Rainbow Dash arrives at Twilight's house and finds only her friends under piles of rubble. She lands down and asked them, "Hi guys and what happened to Twilight's home?"

Applejack said "Well howdy, Rainbow Dash and what happened here is a big mystery but we have to find out what happened."

"There is only one pony who can help," said the Crusaders

"That's right, girls," said Rainbow Dash. "Zecora is the only one that can help."

So, they head off to the Everfree Forest to find Zecora's home to see if Zecora can help find out why Twilight is growing so huge and find a cure to turn Twilight back to normal.

Meanwhile, Twilight started walking across Ponyville, trying to be find somewhere to hide from the ponies so, she can't not scare anypony. "What am I going to do. I don't want to scare anypony," said Twilight. Soon she finds a forest and hides in it by laying her body flat on the ground. Then, she sneezes again and she grows more, causing her horn to peak out of the top of the trees. "Uh oh, not again," said Twilight, "I want to stop growing or I'll be a giant forever." Soon, she started to cry with sadness, thinking that she may never be herself again.

Back in the Everfree Forest, Rainbow Dash and the others walk through the forest and found Zecora's home. They arrived to see Zecora inside, doing some spell using poison joke flowers. "Hello, you pony folk. What brings you here like the smoke?"

"Hi, Zecora, we have a problem with Twilight," said Rarity.

"Yeah, Twilight is growing but we don't know why," said Rainbow Dash.

"Well I hear what to be," said Zecora, "your purple friend has a growth as you can see."

"GROWTH!!!!" shouted the others.

The ponies were surprised but they had convinced Zecora to help them find a cure for Twilight's growth problem.

Really gigantic Twilight

Meanwhile, Twilight was still hiding in the forest near Ponyville, still crying with sadness. Then, she thought that she has to be brave and not worry about scaring everypony. She knows that the citizens of Ponyville will know that it's still her but gigantic. So, she heads back home to Ponyville but, she couldn't see Ponyville because her head was way up in the clouds. "Man, how am I going to find Ponyville with these clouds in the way," said Twilight. As she tries to find Ponyville, her hooves were so big that they created giant deep holes in the ground. She still stayed calm and she heard a voice shouting "TWILIGHT, DOWN HERE!"

Twilight looked down and saw that it was Spike calling her. Spike shouted, "TWILIGHT, YOU'RE 50 FT TALLER THAN YOU WERE BEFORE!!!"

"I know that Spike," said Twilight in a booming voice, "I'm gigantic and I'll keep growing if I keep sneezing."

Twilight lowered her head towards Spike and looked at him with sad eyes, saying "Spike, please help me get better."

"Sure Twilight I'll help you stop sneezing," said Spike.

So, Spike tried one attempt by putting a giant banner over her nose but then Twilight sneezed, causing her to grow again. Then, Spike tried putting anti-sneeze cream on her nose but, she sneezed two times, making her grow more. Spike tried several attempts but, Twilight kept sneezing and growing.

Spike then said, "Sorry, Twilight nothing is working. Every time I tried everything to help you stop sneezing. But, you just keep sneezing and sneezing."

"Well, thanks for trying anyway, Spike," replied Twilight.

Soon as night fell, she went to her destroyed home and laid in the rubble of her home. Spike climbed on her and laid in Twilight's gigantic hair to get some sleep. As Twilight snored and snored, she kept sneezing harder and harder, causing her to keep growing bigger and bigger. Spike hopes that Twilight will be back to her old self again.

The next morning, Twilight wakes up to see that she was standing on top of the world with Spike sleeping in her hair. She sees the sun and decides to touch it. "OUCH!!!" shouted Twilight as she touches the sun. Twilight wondered if see can see her home from the top of the planet. Then, she sneezes again and grows as big as the sun with her eyes looking everywhere for her friends.

Only one cure

Meanwhile back in the Everfree Forest, Twilight's friend tell Zecora if there is a cure for the growth powder that Twilight is sneezing from. "There is only one cure," said Zecora. "That can be will be sure."

"What's the cure, Zecora?," asked Applebloom.

"Your purple one must drink from a shrink," said Zecora, "she will be cured that I think." Soon Zecora mixes up a potion to make a magic drink using natural ingredients. After she finished it, she said "Remember two swallows from the drink."

Soon, Twilight's friend try to look everywhere to look for her but, they couldn't find her.

Applejack said, "We know she's around somewhere in these parts."

" Applejack's right.....we have to find her," said Fluttershy.

Rainbow Dash said, "You guys are right, she must be around here somewhere."

So, they checked high and low, left and right but still couldn't find her anywhere. They hope that she wasn't captured or have grown so big that they can't see her. "Man, Twilight must be around," said Pinkie Pie, "I know she's around here."

Then, Twilight's friends tried asking anypony if they have see Twilight around but nopony has seen her anywhere. So, they try finding clues to look for her but find nowhere. But when they thought that all hop was lost, Applejack and Rarity find giant hoof prints deep in the forest and they found out that Twilight must have grown gigantic when they were at Zecora's place asking her for the cure. Then Pinkie Pie finds a giant banner that has growth powder all over it. Then, they each saw a big mess all over Ponyville and notice that Twilight was there.

Meanwhile back in space, Twilight was still growing from her sneezing. Soon, Spike wakes up and finds Twilight is really, really, gigantic. He shouted "TWILIGHT, YOU MUST BE ABOUT 125 FT TALLER THAN BEFORE!!!"

"I am gigantic than before," replied Twilight, "but I'm 20 feet taller than the planet is." Twilight was hoping that she will be back to normal in no time at all.

  

Back to normal

After waiting for hours, Twilight was upset that she may not be turned back to normal and she was gonna start crying again. But Spike said, "Don't cry, Twilight, I know that help will be here soon."

Twilight stopped crying and replied, "Thanks Spike, that makes me feel much better." But after talking, Twilight blows a really huge sneeze, causing her to grow about 30 ft bigger than the planet she was standing. Her size was so big that it turned almost all of Equestria in rubble, causing panic and destruction. She hoped that she'll be fine till she can get some relief from her growth sneezing. Then, she looks down on her home with one of her gigantic eyes and saw her friends are looking for her. Then, she starts shouting for them that she's up in space.

Meanwhile back in Ponyville, Twilight's friends were still trying to find Twilight everywhere. But, they kept looking harder and harder. But, they still couldn't find her with everypony, panicking from Twilight's giant size.

"Let's face it, we'll never find Twilight," said Rarity. But then, they suddenly hear a voice saying, "Girls, up here." But they thought maybe it was someone playing a joke. Then the voice said, "Girls, look up her."

They gasp to see Twilight's gigantic eye looking down on them from outer space. Soon, Rainbow Dash flies towards space and finds Twilight standing on the planet on her hind legs, trying to stay balance.

"Rainbow Dash, I'm so glad to see you," said Twilight, "Do you have the cure?"

"Yes, Twilight, we have the cure to help you stop growing and sneezing," replied Rainbow Dash. So, Rainbow Dash tells Twilight to lower her nose onto the ground, so that they can give her the cure. Twilight lowers her nose, causing the ground to rumble. But before Twilight sneezed, Rainbow Dash sprays her nose 2 times with the Shrink spray. Soon, Twilight began shrinking smaller and smaller.

Then, Twilight kept shrinking till she was turned back to her normal size. She was glad to be back to her normal size again. "Thank you all for helping me get back to normal," said Twilight.

"No problem, Twilight," replied Rainbow Dash.

"No problem at all, partner," replied Applejack. After Twilight was turned back to normal, she returns home and uses her magic to put her house back together. Twilight then tells Spike to send a letter to the princess. Soon, they head back home to the damaged Ponyville, with Rainbow Dash saying, "Well it's hard to get big in this town," causing them to all laugh.

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