I was at the top of a hill on a sunny wednesday morning. I sniffed in the fresh summer air. Today it smelled like victory.

At the bottom of the hill stood my friend, Brandon. He was going to record me doing an awesome stunt of my bike.

I hopped on my bike and put on my helmet. Safety first, ya know. "Ready?" He called up to me.

"READY!" I shouted at him. I was off down the hill, gaining speed, going to do a backflip off the ramp he set up.

I sped towrds the ramp, knowing that this was gonna be so awesome! I shot off the ramp, unleashing my backflip.

Then my helemet strap came undone. The fuck? I braced my head for a hard landing. I hit the ground and everything went black.

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I suddenly awoke in forest clearing. The heck? How'd i get here? I pulled myself up from the ground. That was a hard landing. My head was throbbing with pain. I looked up. There was a cloud, yet it wasn't moving. I saw a trail, it was leading off into a forest, yet I could see a cottage up along that trail. It looked like the house was on some sort of cliff.

I started walking down the path. I suddenly heard a voice " no mr. manticore, what are you do-" The voice was cut off. It sounded like..... Fluttershy's. It all made sense to me now. The non moving clouds, the cottage. I was in equestria. sure I was happy, but I was never gonna go home.

I started sprinting towards the cottage, my black leather jacket, unzipped. The sprint was worth it. As soon as i got there I saw fluttershy up against her cottage, many cuts, scrapes, and bruises on her. I looked harder. She was crying. Nopony makes fluttershy cry!

My eyes turned red and my hands balled into fists. I felt strength throughout all my body. I was in ragecage mode! The manticore turned around and flew over towards me. He doesn't scare me! I gave him a cold hard stare.

" THIS IS SPARTA!! " I yelled, louder then the royal canterlot voice. I spartan kicked him into a tree. He imediantly got up and started charging towards me. I slipped in between his legs, but then he whipped me into a tree with his tail. I was on the ground, my vision blurred.

I shook my head and vision unblurred. I jumped up and started running towards him. " FALCO, PAWNCH!! " I yelled, even louder than last time. My fist struck him with great force. He flew back against another tree and looked even more dazed than last time. " AAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! MY DAMN HAND!!! " I yelled. Note to self: use foot instead.

In that time, the manti core was able to stand up. He marched over to me and started choking me with his gigantic paws. I couldn't breath. My vision began to go dark. " ENOUGH OF THIS HORSE SHIT! TIME MAKE THINGS UGLY! " I shouted at the top of my lungs. I kicked the manticore, making him lose his grip. I cracked my nuckles. Time to fuck some shit up. We both launched at each other in mid air. I gave him a look like "u mad bro?" I brought my foor up to his face. He flew backwards into a tree and then he was knocked out.

I went out of ragecage mode. My eyes returned to their normal green color. I fell to my knees. I looked around. I saw the mane 6, mouthes agape. I had a sudden pain through my whole body. I fell to the ground. Suddenly the mane 6 rushed over.

I whited out. I could only pick up certain sentences.

" Is he gonna be ok " a voice that sounded like applejack said.

" I dunno. let's just get him to the hospital " A voice that sounded like twilight sparkles said. I was lifted onto a softer surface. Thank celestia I might be alright. I then blacked out.

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