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Equestrian Clockwork Tales: The Magnificent and Ingenious Doctor Adwin

by Kinzaben
Story has been removed from Fimfiction.net
Clockworks, magical cores, airships and autonomous bots, oh my! Welcome to New Equestria
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Um... yeah don't have introductory/summary/back page thing for the story yet and not good at them but here goes nothing (winging it this second):

Clockworks, cogs, steam, magical cores, airships and autonomous bots, oh my! Welcome to the New Equestria! In the years during a great and terrible war, and following it's victory, the utopic land of Equestria has been swept up into an industrial revolution of unimaginable proportions, and what a revolution it has certainly been!

In this extravagant age of ingenuity and creativity, meet: The Magnificent and Ingenious Doctor Adwin! Follow our intrepid and eccentric pony as he, with his faithful zebra engineer assistant Marmalade, sets out to make a name for himself in these roaring times!

But what motivates our dear hero? Is it bits? Mares? Fame? Why, not at all.

Everything he does, he does for deal old mother.

Anyways:

1) My first fanfiction submission

2) Criticism is needed, many thanks!

3) Er... oo thank you for reading? More be featured later, leave comments, it encouraging! Need encouragement... er, nvm.

Oh also, Twilight and Trixie are featured as minor characters, although their background in the story is important (stated since I don't got the whole thing set up.)

And if you're wondering why my grammar is crap in description, it cause I nervous k!

Dubious
Incomplete

7,971 words: Estimated 32 Minutes to read: [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. Prologue [Cache] Feb 17th, 2012
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Published Feb 18th, 2012

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