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Applejack: Devilish when Drunk (an AppleShy story)

by SongCoyote

Chapter 2: A More... Private Party

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In the dark, Fluttershy walked slowly back to her home. Her mane drooped, her head so low that she hardly saw anything more than a couple of feet in front of her. Normally I’d be scared, she thought as she plodded along, but somehow it doesn’t matter tonight.

A sudden noise caused the pegasus to jump fifteen feet straight up and hover there, eyes huge. Looking down she saw a raccoon flip over a log and come up with something tasty, which it promptly ate half of. Breathing a sigh of relief, she flew down and greeted it.

“Oh, hello Pockets,” she said quietly, smiling a bit as the creature chittered back at her. “Would you walk me home, please?”

The raccoon seemed to consider this, then shrugged, popped the last of its tidbit in its mouth, and scampered down the trail toward Fluttershy’s house. With a sigh she followed him, and in spite of how things had gone at the party, she was still dreaming of green eyes and a thick blonde mane.

After Rainbow Dash’s revelation, Applejack left the party and stumbled down the road with one thought on her mind: the only place Fluttershy would have gone was home. The further the inebriated mare trotted, the steadier on her hooves she became; she was so used to pushing her body to its limits that even two quarts of hard cider wouldn’t be enough to overcome her determination and sheer muscle memory.

Eventually she made it to Fluttershy's cabin, a tingling excitement in her as her wobbly thoughts resolved. Fluttershy wanted a kiss? Well ah’ll give her a kiss she'll never forget! She thought as she rapped her hoof on the door repeatedly.

Fluttershy sprayed the water she had been drinking all over the table when the rapping came at the door. She zipped into a cupboard and closed the door behind her, quaking. As the knocking continued, the thought that it could be somepony who needed help made her creak the cupboard door open. As another knock sounded she crept up to a window and peeked outside; a flash of yellow mane caught her eye and she caught her breath.

Is... is that Applejack at my door? She froze on her hooves, her eyes wide, until another knock came. “Just a second,” she called, then frantically looked around the room. She moved a salt shaker one inch to the left, nodded as if that made the room neat, then trotted quickly to the door and opened it just enough to see outside.

With a little shiver she peered out, catching the orange earth pony with her hoof up about to knock again. She couldn’t help smiling a bit as she said, “Oh! Applejack! Um... can I do something for you?”

“Heck yeah ya can!” Applejack said, leaning in through the door and kissing Fluttershy full on the mouth. She walked forward as she did, pushing Fluttershy back into her cottage and across the room. She stopped when Fluttershy was backed into a wall then released her. “Also, y'all can show me to your room. Ah’m gonna rut you harder than a Windego in heat,” she managed in spite of the slur in her words. Her eyes were slightly unfocused, but there was a determined passion in them that would not be dissuaded nor easily quenched.

Fluttershy “eeped!” as the earth pony kissed her, her wings flaring out for balance as she was pushed back into her house. Applejack is kissing me! went one very happy part of her brain, while another, alarmed at the taste of cider on the mare’s breath, cried out Applejack is drunk!

The pegasus hesitated for a long moment, her usual fearfulness driven almost to panic by the fierceness of Applejack’s approach. At the same time, though, her loins responded with heat to the passion in the earth pony’s eyes and at the idea of Applejack having her way with her. But it was so sudden!

“A... Applejack, I...” she stammered, pinned by those green eyes. “You... is this a good idea?”

“Ah know it is,” Applejack said slowly, reaching up and running her hoof tenderly along Fluttershy's cheek and jawline, as though she were a fine, lovely flower to be adored and touched very carefully. She pulled Fluttershy in for another kiss, and then pulled away just before hiccupping, which led her to giggle some.

Taking off her hat, Applejack put it on Fluttershy's head then began to leave a trail of light, sloppy kisses down the pegasus' cheek and neck, across her shoulder, and along her side until her lips were kissing each of the butterflies on her flank.

Applejack lifted her tail up and draped it around Fluttershy's neck like a gentle hug, the braided blonde hairs tickling the pegasus’ chin and sliding over her lips. “Ah'll do ya right here if y'all don't take me to bed soon darlin',” Applejack said playfully, but seriously.

Fluttershy couldn’t tell how much of her shuddering was from nervousness and how much from the touch of Applejack’s lips. The warm tingle her kisses left behind was spreading through her like a pleasant fog. She managed to shed some of her fear as she nuzzled the earth pony’s tail, and her knees wobbled as she inhaled its heady scent, her eyes drooping half-closed.

As her mind finally caught up with her body, Fluttershy froze in place as she realized what Applejack had said. Then the sensation of her butterflies being stroked broke through, and she let a little moan escape her. Trembling, the pegasus opened her eyes and looked back along herself to catch Applejack’s gaze. Seeing the craving for her there – which she had so long dreamed for – made her anxiety ebb even further.

“Yes,” she breathed through the earth pony’s tail. She grinned sheepishly, gently shook off the tail, and then pointed with one hoof toward the stairs at the back of the house. “I mean, um... the bedroom is that way, if you don’t mind?” Noticing the hat on her head she tipped it up as she’d seen Applejack do and smiled at her.

“Ladeh's firs',” Applejack said, gesturing for Fluttershy to lead the way. The room was spinning slightly around her, but the movement of Fluttershy’s flanks as the pegasus turned toward the stairs was a bright point of perfect focus in her soused mind. Applejack lowered her head a bit, a fierce grin on her face as she followed Fluttershy closely; very closely. She dipped her head further down as soon as Fluttershy was in front of her and slid her muzzle underneath the long, graceful pink tail and started to rub it against Fluttershy's marehood.

She took a deep whiff of the pegasus' intoxicating aroma and then gave the slit a long lick from one end to the other. Sticking her tongue out further, she began to lick and lap at the wet folds, enjoying every droplet of flavor she coaxed out, and loving the sounds she heard from Fluttershy.

Fluttershy has just been starting up the stairs when Applejack’s nose dipped under her tail. She froze with her front hooves on the third step, suddenly unable to climb further with her legs shaking so hard. As the earth pony’s tongue explored her more deeply, her front legs gave out and she slumped down, raising her flanks higher as she cried out in pleasure.

“Oh... oh... oh... Applejack! Mmm... yes... “ Fluttershy moaned as her tail lashed back and forth across the earth pony’s head. She pushed back against Applejack’s questing tongue, her wings opening and brushing against the blonde pony’s shoulders and uncovered mane. Unconsciously, her blush visible even in the shadowed stairwell, she slid one of her rear hooves outward, exposing herself further, her slick folds damp from her arousal and her lover’s tongue.

“Please... please don’t stop,” begged Fluttershy, turning her head to look into Applejack’s eyes.

Applejack had been surprised when Fluttershy stopped and had nearly stumbled over her, but managed to remain standing, her muzzle still firmly buried in Fluttershy. She didn't hear the pegasus’ quiet plea not to stop, but it didn't matter because she had no intention of stopping. Fluttershy's flavor was so great and Applejack's lust so thick that even if their best friends and both of their families walked in right now, Applejack wouldn't stop until she heard Fluttershy scream her name in ecstasy.

The idea of rutting Fluttershy in front of their friends actually had an appealing twinge in it, but Applejack knew that was only because she was drunk enough to think that. Once she sobered up she'd laugh at the idea - but right now she was just thinking how she'd take her marefriend.

As Applejack buried her muzzle deeper inside her, Fluttershy’s cries became louder, her hooves scraping against the stairs. Her wings stroked the earth pony’s shoulders and mane, her body shaking as Applejack’s tongue stroked and thrust into her. She could no longer form words; her usual soft voice disappeared into a series of gasping sighs and mewling cries.

Heh, ah've got a marefriend! thought Applejack suddenly, chuckling as she continued licking Fluttershy's marehood.

The knowing undertone of Applejack’s chuckle seemed to strike a new nerve of excitement in the pegasus, and her whole body started to tremble. She thrust her hips against the blonde pony’s face, reveling in the agile tongue that was driving her pleasure to a crest.

As her shuddering almost shook her off the steps, Fluttershy suddenly started taking a long, deep breath, her eyes shut tight. Applejack sensed the moment and wrapped her tongue around Fluttershy’s clit, and was rewarded when the pegasus flooded her mouth with sweetness.

“Ah ah ah APPLEJAAAAAAACK!” Fluttershy screamed as she convulsed, surrendering to the pleasure and grinding her wet slit against the orange pony’s face. Her nether lips pulsed around Applejack’s stroking tongue, pulling it inside and treating it to yet another spurt of hot juices.

Fluttershy’s shout finally wound down and she collapsed, quivering, in front of Applejack, her hooves sliding down to the next step with a soft clop.

Applejack stopped once she felt the sudden extra wetness on her muzzle and heard Fluttershy's cries of pleasure. She gave her friend a few 'cleaning' licks before kissing her on the cutie mark and stepping closer, her chest rubbing against Fluttershy's rear.

“Y'all gonna make me rut ya right here on the stairs?” She asked, chuckling a bit. “Don't think we're done just ‘cause ah made ya cry my name once. We've got aaaall night.”

Fluttershy’s eyes opened, focus returning only gradually. As she got to her hooves, her knees still trembling a bit, she looked back over her shoulder at Applejack, blowing out a breath and smiling.

“I... I’ve been wanting... waiting for that for a long time,” she said, ducking her head to hide one eye behind her mane, though her happy grin was still visible. She stepped forward to start up the stairs, sliding against Applejack on the way. “And while I don’t know if I can keep up with such a... strong and beautiful earth pony,” she continued with a smile and a flick of her tail across Applejack’s nose, “I want to try.”

The pegasus paused to flick her mane back and added with a little giggle, “If... if that’s okay with you”. After a long look back into Applejack’s eyes, she suddenly turned and galloped up the stairs. “Come and get me!”

Applejack watched Fluttershy run up the stairs in a bit of confusion. For half a second, she wondered if she'd scared the pegasus away, but then the “come and get me” made sense and she chuckled, running up after her. Fortunately for Fluttershy she was too drunk to run at full speed and the pegasus made it to the bedroom before AJ caught up.

With a happy laugh, Applejack pounced on Fluttershy and wrestled her onto the bed, wrapping her hooves around her and kissing whichever part of Fluttershy happened to be in front of her, which at the moment they landed was her neck. She buried her face in the pegasus’ nape, lightly nibbling on her coat while kissing and licking.

Fluttershy’s surprised “Oh!” as she was tackled quickly gave way to happy little moans as Applejack marehandled her on the bed. The pegasus surrendered to Applejacak’s strength and insistence, rolling onto her back as they settled and tilting her head to bare her throat to that warm and supple mouth.

Feeling the earth pony’s teeth and tongue on her coat brought deep shivers all over Fluttershy’s body and soft squeaks from her throat. As Applejack’s mouth wandered over the front of her chest she cried out, stroking her lover’s thick blonde mane with her hooves.

Fluttershy brought her rear legs up to stroke along Applejack’s flanks, her head laid back, offering all of herself to the passion they were still building up. She trembled beneath the earth pony as she finally managed to find her voice again.

“I… Oh, Applejack, I... I’m yours,” she breathed out quietly. Almost inaudibly she added, “If... if you want me, of course...”

Applejack blinked and licked her lips slowly at the ideas that came to mind when Fluttershy offered herself to her. Oh my... she thought as her cheeks got rosier. Shaking her head she hiccupped. “Heheh, plenty o’ time for that kind o’ play later, sugarcube” Applejack said, kissing Fluttershy on the lips and holding her in her forelegs. “Mmmm,” she hummed against the pegasus’ soft mouth.

Lost in the liquor-fueled haze of pleasure, she held Fluttershy in the kiss for a long time. How long she couldn't be sure, but after a while she realized it had been rather longer that she had intended. Her loins were aflame with desire and she began to gyrate her hips, wrapping her hind legs around one of Fluttershy's to get some friction between her own legs. “Mmmmmm!” she hummed anew against the pegasus’ lips.

Fluttershy’s mouth opened to Applejack’s , the taste of cider tart against the sweetness of the earth pony’s tongue. She raised her hips to match Applejack’s swirling, breaking their kiss with a sudden gasp as their nether lips slid slickly against each other.

The pegasus almost frantically found Applejack’s mouth again, her kisses open and wet as she clung to her, thrusting their marehoods together. She wiggled in Applejack’s grip, shifting her hips until with another loud gasp she managed to slide her clit alongside her lover’s.

Feeling the earth pony grinding against her in response, Fluttershy cried out wordlessly, her wings popping out from beneath her to spread wide. They quivered at full extension for a few seconds before curling up to stroke along Applejack’s sides, gently urging her closer.

Fluttershy’s rapid gasping finally broke their kiss, and as she shuddered beneath Applejack she leaned her head up to lick the earth pony’s neck and cheek. The thrusting of her hips grew stronger, and as she held on tight she whispered into her ear, “I... Oh, Applejack... I’m coming... coming again...”

The moment Fluttershy wiggled her hips to get her clit to touch Applejack's the farm pony began to grind against her like a machine. “Mmmmmmm HOWDY!” she yelled as she started to move her hips, thrusting herself against Fluttershy hard and fast, her breath coming out hot. The coos and cries of her lover drove her on, energizing her and giving her a drive that she never knew she had.

“That’s it, that’s it...” Applejack groaned, “cum for me, scream my name!” Applejack could feel her own orgasm coming up. It was slow and lumbering, probably from the alcohol in her system dulling her senses, but the slowness made it feel all the better.

Urged on by Applejack in voice and movement, Fluttershy closed her eyes as she reveled in the sensation of the earth pony’s slippery folds sliding against hers. She shook violently, her wings now fluttering against the bed as she raised herself up to smack her marehood wetly against Applejack’s.

All pretense of nervousness gone, Fluttershy responded to Applejack’s demands, her head thrown back on the bed as she cried out with each thrust. She could feel the earth pony trembling along with her and tried to hold back, to wait so they could cum together, but she couldn’t stop herself.

“Yes! I’m coming... for you, Ap... oh... OH... AH! AHHPLEJAAAEEE!” she screamed as she pulsed against Applejack, bursts of wetness flowing over the earth pony’s mound and legs. In between shudders she managed to catch one breath, then suddenly vibrated almost violently as she came again, and then again, her hooves brushing weakly along Applejack’s forelegs as her pleasure soaked into her coat.

Applejack felt the rush of Fluttershy’s pleasure; it certainly felt like she was cumming buckets. She heard her try to scream her name and grinned even as she winced a bit from the volume, but even so it pushed her along her way. She tensed up as her pleasure built and her body started to tremble over Fluttershy. Applejack’s throat rumbled deeply, an almost feral growl rolling through her as she came, driving their hips together. She felt her own love nectar join with Fluttershy’s more copious wetness, and the sensation carried her deeper; her orgasm lasted a long time.

At last Applejack shuddered to a stop, almost collapsing on top of the pegasus. Kissing Fluttershy once she could breathe again, Applejack held the pegasus close, then rolled over so that the yellow mare was atop her. She looked at Fluttershy through half-open eyes and thought that she looked beautiful with her mane mussed up and Applejack's hat somehow still on her head.

“Ya look good like that,” Applejack said, her eyelids drooping as she stifled a yawn.

Fluttershy swam out of the haze of her pleasure, barely aware that she had been rolled on top of the two-pony pile. Her eyes flickered open and she took a deep breath, letting it out slowly as a long soft sigh. As she felt her heart rate start to slow she smiled down at the orange pony.

“Oh, Applejack, I... oh!” she said softly, trailing off with a little giggle. The earth pony was sound asleep, her blonde mane as tousled as Fluttershy’s. Smiling brightly, the pegasus slid down to lay beside Applejack, holding her close with another happy sigh. Feeling a weight on her mane, she reached up, then giggled again and tugged the Stetson more firmly onto her head before snuggling down to sleep.

Author's Notes:

Flutterdash1 and I co-wrote this story over the course of a month or so by sending it back and forth, adding a few lines to a few paragraphs at each pass. Once Fluttershy fell asleep I went back through and tried to smooth out the transitions so it wasn't so obviously "play by post"; hopefully it has come out both readable and enjoyable.

This is not my first fic, nor my first erotic fic, but it is my first pony fic. We tried to make it romantic and a little funny aside from the explicit lesbian pony sex. Constructive criticism gladly accepted.

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

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