Creepyponies
Chapter 15: White With Red
Previous Chapter Next ChapterNot long ago, a stallion went to the Ponyville hotel. He claimed that he was in Ponyville for a couple days on business. He trotted over to the front desk to check in. The mare at the desk gave him his key and told him that on the way to his room, there was a door with no number that was locked and no one was allowed in there. She explained that it was a storeroom, and that it was out of bounds.
She reminded him of this several times before allowing him upstairs. So he followed the instructions of the woman at the front desk, going straight to his room, and going to bed.
The first night, he was unable to sleep, due to a quiet, but repetive breathing sound. He thought himself crazy, but he could have swore it came from the next room. He disreguarded the warnings the mare gave him, and went to check out the room. He went up to the door and tried the handle. Sure enough it was locked. He bent down and looked through the wide keyhole. Cold air passed through it, chilling his eye.
What he saw was a hotel bedroom, like his, and in the corner was a woman whose skin was incredibly pale. She was leaning her head against the wall, facing away from the door. He stared in confusion for a while. Was this a celebrity? The owners daughter?
He almost knocked on the door, out of curiosity, but decided not to. As he was still looking, the woman turned sharply and he jumped back from the door, hoping she would not suspect he had been spying on her. He crept away from the door and trotted back to his room.
The next day, he returned to the door and looked through the wide keyhole. This time, all he saw was redness. He couldn’t make anything out besides a distinct red color, unmoving. Perhaps the inhabitants of the room knew he was spying the night before, and had blocked the keyhole with something red. He felt embarrassed that he had made the woman so uncomfortable, and hoped she had not made a complaint with the woman on the front desk.
At this point he decided to consult the mare at the front desk for more information. After some gentle quizzing and the promise that the explanation would go no further than him she finally said "Well, I might as well tell you the story of what happened in that room. A long time ago, a man murdered his wife in there, we find that even now, people get uncomfortable staying there. But these people were not ordinary. They were white all over. Nopony knew why."
"But after this man killed his wife, he did something unthinkable. He cut out her eyeballs, and left her there with nothing but blood red sockets."
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