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A sequel to Better Living Through Science and Ponies
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THIS STORY IS CURRENTLY BEING REWRITTEN. PLEASE READ:

I've decided to rewrite this entire story. Considering that I began this project with almost no creative writing experience, I was bound to make some pretty bad mistakes. The story flow is not well organized, and there is an unhealthy amount of redundancy and poor pacing, as well as some pretty important things that I should have included. I intend to address these issues to the best of my ability, but it will be a long and arduous task. This story means a lot to me, so I want it to be more than the mere amateur mediocrity that it resembles. So, give it a read if you want, but keep in mind that it will change. I recommend that you put this on your read later list in the meantime.


This is a Portal 2 crossover. If you haven't played Portal 2, please do that first. Then read the prequel if you haven't done that either.


After Chell finally escaped the confines of Aperture Science, a freak portal mishap down below transported her, along with the entire Enrichment Center, to the land of Equestria. Upon entering this world, she was transformed into a pony. In a strange body and in a strange land, Chell was fortunate enough to be accepted by the ponies of Ponyville, and she lived out a new life contently among the ponies.

But that peace was not to last, for GLaDOS took a particular interest in the ponies of Equestria, and after two weeks of preparation, she launched a surprise attack and kidnapped 300 ponies to serve as test subjects, including Chell's friends and the princesses themselves. Once GLaDOS had them, she subjected them psychological torture. To save her friends, Chell made her way into the one place she hoped never to see again. In doing so, she freed the ponies, defeated GLaDOS in battle, and helped bring about the destruction of the facility. Although this made Chell a hero, she paid a terrible price in that brutal fight.

Beaten, battered, and traumatized, Chell spent months recovering from her wounds. After returning home from the hospital, all she wants is to once again live a normal life in Ponyville, but to do that, she must first heal from her wounds, both physical and psychological.

At the same time, GLaDOS herself has survived Aperture's destruction. With nothing left but herself, she vows to get back to testing. Though she faces an uphill climb, she is determined to see her facility rebuilt and the testing resume, and will stop at nothing to achieve this.


Has a TV Tropes page (will need to be updated after rewrite)


The works that this fanfiction is based on are properties of Hasbro and Valve. I would like to thank Pen Stroke for writing the original story and Flyer for his assistance and advice.

Please note, this is an unofficial sequel. I have received permission from Pen Stroke, but it is not canon to the original. I hope you enjoy it, but keep in mind that this is a fan work (of a fan work), and Pen Stroke holds the rights to the original story.

Young Adult
On Hiatus
Adventure

165,778 words: Estimated 11 Hours, 4 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

23 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 01: Still Alive [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 27th, 2014
    3,864
  2. Chapter 02: Recollection [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 27th, 2014
    7,592
  3. Chapter 03: The Practical Purpose of Portals [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2014
    4,650
  4. Chapter 04: Lemons [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    4,880
  5. Chapter 05: Lemonade [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    6,555
  6. Chapter 06: Cryptic Answers [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    7,830
  7. Chapter 07: Fire Storm [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    7,489
  8. Chapter 08: Borderworld [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    4,196
  9. Chapter 09: Foreseen Consequences [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 17th, 2014
    6,225
  10. Chapter 10: Maybe Black Mesa [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    7,065
  11. Chapter 11: A Forgotten Memory [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    4,440
  12. Chapter 12: Moon to Moon [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    6,639
  13. Chapter 13: The Apology [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    6,778
  14. Chapter 14: Duel of the White Alicorns [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 20th, 2014
    11,624
  15. Chapter 15: A Gathering of Friends [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    6,480
  16. Chapter 16: A Mortal Bargain [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    8,115
  17. Chapter 17: Now Little Celly is in Here Too [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    6,299
  18. Chapter 18: A Little Visit [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 27th, 2014
    7,242
  19. Chapter 19: The Way Up [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 30th, 2014
    7,501
  20. Chapter 20: Resonance [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 20th, 2014
    15,930
  21. Chapter 21: A Hole in the Sky [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 20th, 2014
    8,115
  22. Chapter 22: A Myriad of Horrors [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 14th, 2014
    9,171
  23. Chapter 23: Reconfiguring Science [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 22nd, 2014
    7,098
Published Jun 11th, 2013
Last Update Jul 21st, 2014

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