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A party of adventurers are hired to take out a bandit group but not all is as it seems.
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Iveron

   An unlikely party of adventurers consisting of a flightless pegasus, an amnesic griffon, a young dragon who vowed to slay her own kind, and a former wolf bandit get hired to take out a group of bandits, but not all is as it seems...

This takes place in an alternate less peaceful and more diverse Equestria where Griffons are more common and wolves and dogs are also stuck in the mix differently than the diamond dogs.

   I just wanted to say this is my first fan fiction (but not my first story) and it probably isn't going to be the best story ever, but I'm trying to become a better writer so I'm fine with constructive criticism, in fact I want constructive criticism so if there's things I can improve on please tell me.

   So far the story is all OC ponies except for the princesses though I'm thinking about wether or not any of the mane 6 or other ponies should be in my story. I'm not even sure if the mane 6 will be alive since I'm setting this in an alternate Equestria.

   if this is Grimdark to you, tell me and I'll change it to that rather than just dark, other tags I'll add when I need them... So, yeah...

   Also I'm the kind of person who starts projects then never finishes them, so be warned that this might not get finished.

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Dark

841 words: Estimated 4 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. The Bloodstained Grass [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 28th, 2011
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Published Sep 28th, 2011

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