A beginnig of the new rainbowby idreas199
Chapters
An unexpected visit
Editors note:
as you probably (hopefully) read this is my first fanfic and also english isnt my language of origin so there will be some google translate involved(hopefully not to much) oh please R&R and please if you have any ideas i would be grateful and i will give props to the one who came up with the idea. well lets begin this story now shall we?
message to my friend on facebook:
I am a ordinary boy at the age of 17 well ordinary untill when it comes to my hair. You see my hair aint like normal hair (hazel, blonde, black you name it) it was rainbow colored i dyed it like that. (ofc i couldnt tell him that it was my natural color) that was the only difference between me and any other kid down the street. i am also very athletic i liked going fast (guess why i never got my drivers license -_-* ) i like parkour and it has been very handy too. well time to go to school c ya. i sent to my friend on facebook that i have gotten to know in the past 2 months.
It was a seemingly regular day going to school with my friend. when we got to school we were greeted by a strange girl with very colorful hair. we said hello to her as we walked by her. when i accidentally nudged her shoulder she wispered: Beware of things not what they usually be. it was like a riddle but i didnt care about it any anymore when she walked away in a noticably wobbly style. i said to myself: she must be drunk walking like that. As i pulled my keys up out of my pocket a card of some sort came out with it. The card is just as big as a card from an ordinary card deck. The card were glowing in an almost unnoticably light but stoped when i took it off the ground. the card is red, yellow and green. i put it back in my pocket and unlocked the school door. After about 5 minutes after we sat down in class the teacher introduced a new stundent. A girl with ranbow hair. She seemed happy to have come into the room because she lit up.(not like a light source but emotionally) about 5 seconds later she hugged me. me and the rest of the class was chocked especially when she started to cry and asked why i never came back. i just stood there holding her in my arms not knowing what to say or do.
then i remembered i had amnesia from the age of 13 so i didnt remember where or who i were. I ended up at my fosterparent after wandering around and not knowing anything exept that i had a sister who now were hugging me whilst crying tears of joy and sadness.
After 5 minutes of hugging and crying(on her part) everyone including me wondering why she was crying and asking why she asked me why i didnt come back and to where. We were surprised and some passed out when she grew wings out of her back as she told me: you do not belong in this world, now come with me. i recogniced the voice and those sky blue wings from the show i watched once ( 3 episodes) then i blacked out...
when i woke up i realised that i werent in school anymore but under the starry sky so i tried to stand up immediatley falling down again holding my head in pain. after some time past my headache released.i saw hooves instead of hands Then i tried to stand up again but to no avail falling flat on my back then i realised what had happened. she transported me from my school to a opening in the middle of a forest. When i looked up on the stars i couldnt recognise any of the constellations so i tried to look for the north star. when i found it a also saw that there were 3 more. i thought to myself: Well im lost, and hungry. Then i caught the smell of pies not just any pies but applepies just like my "mother" used to make. when i rolled over on my belly and tried to stand again i realised that i was standing perfectly fine on all 4.
after some time when i learned to walk properly i walked towards the smell. as it grew stronger more and more apple trees started to dot the lanscape just like i got out of the forest into an orchard. as i climbed a tree to get some apples ( I was litteraly starving) a horse or horselike walked out of the barn that was right next to me (can you believe i didnt notice the barn?) it looked like she didnt see me but in some strange way i just wanted to hug her like she's been a lost relative but i decided not to move at all when i saw a larger red horse that looked like he could kick me to space if he wanted to. as they walked to the main building i could hear the mare say in a southern voice: ah cant believe rainbow has been gone for a week where is she? she told us she'll be gone for a day or two but ah'm starting to worry 'bout her. then the stallion said just one thing: Eeeyupp. i was baffled that those two spoke but then i knew where i was... sweet apple acres...
i quickly nabbed a few apples and scurried into the forest again not far enough to not be able to see the appletrees but far enough to eat in peace. them apples were jucier than any apple i have ever eaten before. after i ate the apples i tried to climb one of the trees closer to the orchard to get some sleep and well it was actually pretty comfortable. when i was lying there in the tree i was thinking about what had happened during that day then i just drifted away....
the rainbow trail of friends
editors note:
sorry for not being able to write anything in quite some time but it has been a whole lot of school and learning from other fics on how to write so there will be some changes but same as last chapter R&R. enjoy
i woke up as i heard that someone or rather somepony yelling att my direction.
"RAINBOW AH KNEW AH SAW YOU LAST NIGHT WHERE ARE YOU?"
i climbed higher up in the tree trying not to get detected witch was really easy as I felt light as a feather.
as AJ moved over to the tree i thought i was found but she just turned around. i thought i was safe until i saw her lift her back legs knowing what would happen. holding on for dear life the tree was shaking with the force of a cannon i couldnt hold on and fell. no. rather got flinged/flung (srry google translate) out of the tree.
as i hit the ground AJ just looked at me recognizing the rainbow mane but not the coat color.
"black but... rainbow? is... is that you?
I stumbled around trying to regain my balance but when she asked i was wondering about myself and just said
"I...I dont know who I am"
as soon as i said that a rainbow blur tackled me. embracing me.
"i..(sob) I've missed you soooo much.Brother.." said the rainbow maned pegasus
as AJ and i heard that our eyes grew as big as plates by surprise."she... she was my sister?" it was the only thing i could say for the the next minutes.
"wait a second there dash ya never told us ya had a brother and an alicorn no less" Applejack said
"well thats because he's never been in equestria before" Rainbow Dash said
"wait a second if i've never been to equestria before how come that we are related"
"i can tell you but you promise not to tell allright"
the explanation (backstory)
Authors note:
sorry aboute the last chapter being so short but i will try my best making longer chapters. R&R thanks and enjoy the backstory (i may only update like once or twice every week but if i dont that means school is being a beyach) this is told from the perspective of RD then transition over to me by the {~} mark
"allright rainbow ah wont tell anypony" said applejack
"okay then" rainbow said. Taking a deep breath.
it all began 16 years ago when we were just foals but where we came from was not actually cloudsdale, but another world, a world where everything was gray and harsh kinda like stalliongrad but worse, the whole world was like that it was not very fun or anything like here in equestria. We werent even ponys then we were kinda like hairless apes with no tail anddominated the world. And thats where we learned of our powers. Mine being oddly enough dimensional travel and shadow dash (me) is shadow control hence the name. When I accidentaly teleported myself and our parents he was outside the radius of the teleport in his cradle. (she's supposed to be 20 minus 16 yeah you'll figure out the rest) When we got here we were in the castle right in front of Celestia herself. She had an expression of confusion and curiosity seeing 3 pegasi suddenly teleport to her. She started to ask us questions right after we got pinned down by the royal guards. She was asking us how we got there. Stumbling upon the words dad spoke and said: We dont know where we came from or who we were. The only thing we know is that we are a family but we are missing one. a foal. She told us that she could not find the foal in this dimension but in another one. She told us: he will not perish but i can not help him more than giving him luck for a week. Hopefully being discovered by somepony. The only thing we could do was pray and hope. Later the princess offered protection and a home in cloudsdale. Thats where i met fluttershy and the story after that you already know but the only thing i didn't tell you sas that every month the princess sent us a letter telling us how he was doing.
{~}
I cant say so much about the time after you left me because i got amnesia (not the game tho i have it) when i was 13 so i can tell you that the "parents" i thought were my real parents didnt like me very much but they didn't hate me either even though they tried to dye my hair and payed lots of money on products that permanently changes the hair color but nothing of that worked. These rainbow colors always returned seemingly brighter than before. Just because of my hair color i got bullied and called the eqivalent of coltcuddler by that saying i often got beat up because of it. Thats when i re-learned about my powers witch i was taking advantage of the shadows hiding me and silently knocking them out. This was going on for 3 more years then i went to another school i finaly made some friends that thought my hair was 20% cooler than anything they've ever seen. everything after that went smoother than silk. Then one day you showed up hugging me and crying asking why i never came back.
AJ just stood there mouth agape and everything.
"20 bits saying she wont believe us" RD said
"I know she wont believe us, they never do" i said with a sigh