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The Mane Six get teleported to Equestria by a crazy machine to Hero Factory. Ridiculousness and seriousness ensues, with the mares having to help Alpha Team with protecting the galaxy! (Some more than others.)
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Briefing.

Hello. My name is Preston Stormer.

Ever since those three rookies were put onto Alpha Team-1, nothing has been the same.

When Breez, Furno, and Surge came out of the assembly tower, the first two went straight to the Training Sphere.

Surge, on the other hand, went to one of our internal power plants to suck electricity.

With the amount of electricity he consumes, plus the fact that he’s a robot, you would think that Surge would be good with machines.

Well, he’s not. He’s awful. Surge can reduce a well-oiled hovercraft into a scrapheap in one minute flat.

So that’s why we were all very surprised when Surge invented a teleporter somehow and teleported six quadruped organisms who called themselves “ponies” to Makuhero City, one of them being as hyper and energetic as Surge.

Joy.


Surge’s personality isn’t really like that in Hero Factory canon. I just figured, since his voice is kind of high-pitched in the Hero Factory episodes, why not have him be silly and ridiculous? Plus, his character in the episodes kind of lend to that, as Surge is often used for comic relief (at least, in the Rise of the Rookies.

Cover art is (hopefully) temporary. Because I'm a lazy butt on the shelf. :facehoof:

Tags will be added as the story progresses.

This story was cancelled because of the amount of work that I'd have to put into it, and I don't have that kind of time. I might come back to this, but it's highly unlikely.

EDIT (11/2/16): If I ever do come back to this story, it will need a complete overhaul.

Everyone
Cancelled
Adventure
Comedy

3,407 words: Estimated 14 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

3 Chapters:

  1. Rise of the Cookies: Chapter 1 — Accidental New Beginnings Always Start With Stupidity [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 20th, 2013
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  2. Rise of the Cookies: Chapter 2 — Unexpected Visitors. Six, in Fact [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 20th, 2013
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  3. Rise of the Cookies: Chapter 3 — Settling in [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 9th, 2013
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Published May 29th, 2013
Last Update Jun 23rd, 2013

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