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Can subject six rise to the ocassion. First fanfic, really appreciate feedback. See Long Description
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Subject Six is just another earth pony, conditioned for apathy and trained as a slave. But when humanity begins destroying itself the ponies need a leader, one to unify the desolate, the hopeless, the ponies. But can a species designed in a lab, and conditioned for slavery, truely grasp what independance is? And if so, can somepony unite them, and take advantage of humanities weakened state to overthrow their masters, creators, and enslavers?

As this is my first FanFic i'd appreciate any feedback you guys can give, no doubt many of you have written FanFics yourselves, complete ones at that, so you already know more than me :)

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3,829 words: Estimated 16 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

2 Chapters:

  1. Chapter one [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 11th, 2012
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  2. Chapter Two [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 12th, 2012
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Published Feb 10th, 2012
Last Update Feb 11th, 2012

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