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The Pieces Lie Where They Fell

by Evilhumour Author

Chapter 13: Chapter Eleven Omake

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Disclaimer: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro. I make no legal claims to it whatsoever, only to the original characters created for this story.

Author's note: This is a special omake chapter by Anon e Mouse Jr., which is non-canon to the rest of the story and was written just for the fun of it.

Author's note 2: This chapter was originally posted on FIMFiction Dot Net on 2017-05-18.


Omake - Chapter Eleven; by Anon e Mouse Jr.

"But wasn't she the one that trapped a demon into the body of bunny?" Vix-Lei asked with disbelief in her voice.

"You actually believe that story?" Page asked with a giggle in her mouth. "I mean, it is in most of the stories of the Stern Ward-Fluttershy but I can't just believe it and I don't bother to tell it to the foals I read to as it is too ridiculous. I mean, a demon bunny named Angel?" That caused her and everyone to laugh a bit.

"Actually, it's at least partially accurate," a voice said from one side.

The six froze, then turned to see a dark figure leaning up against a wall. In an instant, Night Blade had his sword out (despite his sight not being what it should be), and the others were looking suspicious.

"Who… who are you?" Page stammered.

"Relax," the figure said with a wave of its hands, stepping out into the light. "I'm not your enemy. Nor am I working with Balance, though I am aware of it."

Now that he was in full view, Page gasped as the sight of the being. He was tall, wearing what appeared to be a black and silver armor. His head resembled a skull, with large, smokey black eyes, which Wind Breaker would later tell them were made up of hundreds of tiny facets. He wore a white scarf around his neck, and a white fedora.

"The fact of the matter is," the figure said, "Fluttershy did own a pet named Angel Bunny. He was stubborn, cranky and generally ill-tempered. But he was not a demon in any way, shape or form. Just a normal, badly-behaved white rabbit."

"How do you know?" Xvital asked, still cautious.

"Let's just say I know a great deal about the past." The figure, though they couldn't tell it, was smiling under his helmet. As he waved a hand, the air behind him turned into an almost reflective surface, and he turned toward it.

"Wait!" Page called. "You never told us who you were!"

The figure tilted his head. "To quote one of my brethren... I'm just a passing-through Kamen Rider."

Then he stepped through the reflective surface, and was gone, the air returning to normal behind him.

The six exchanged glances.

"Well," Vix-Lei managed. "That happened."

She stretched her well-muscled arms above her head. "So does this mean we're the new Virtuous Six?"

Wind Breaker's brain skipped a step, and everyone else froze as it hit them.


Author's note: Anon e Mouse Jr. speaking again. The stranger in this chapter is a self-insert character of mine, created for a story that has yet to go beyond the planning stages at the time of this writing, with powers inspired by Sokichi Narumi/Kamen Rider Skull (of the Kamen Rider W series) and a quote from Tsukasa Kadoya/Kamen Rider Decade (from the same media franchise); his ability to travel between worlds is also borrowed from Decade. And again: this omake is non-canon to the rest of the story. (With the exceptions of possible future omakes.)

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