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mlp rise of the wonder bolts

by Lighting wolf knight

Chapter 7: Rookie mistake

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Time for another chapter of rise of the wonder bolts enjoy. Also I don't own mlp Hasbro does and the dialogue will change to suit the story sorry! Enjoy the 500 word beginning to Newbie dash!

"I still don't know about this Spits but I trust your judgement. I just hope Dash is ready to take things more seriously now that's she's a full-fledged wonder bolt I will go handle the recruits and update you when you get back." Stratosphere spoke as Spitfire got ready to take off to tell Rainbow dash in person about her acceptance into the wonder bolts. Several recruits flew overhead before stratosphere turned back to the wonder bolt captain. Before anyone could see she kissed him and then smiled, winked and took off. Stratosphere smiled before scowling at the recruits.

"Rookie you better not be slacking off just because I wasn't watching! Just because the captain is here doesn't mean you get to slack off! Do another 100 laps now!" Spitfire smiled as her Colt friend/lieutenant took care of the academy and the recruits. The academy was in good hoofs while she, Soaring and Fleet foot were gone.

3 hours later.

"Stupid rookies making me hurt my throat to yell at them. You guys couldn't out fly a cloud!" Spitfire smiled While Soaring landed behind her.

"Isn't he being a bit hard on the recruits considering its their first day?" Spitfire frowned and shook her head.

"Soaring you and I know the rookies need to be taught their place or they won't learn. Plus, I didn't promote Stratosphere to lieutenant and put him in charge of the rookies if he couldn't handle things. Now when does Rainbow dash get here she should have been here by now." The Pegasus in question landed as Spitfire turned to face and show her around. Stratosphere turned his head from his clipboard to stare at the duo before rolling his eyes as Soaring laughed before being Bonked on the head by fleet foot before the duo took off. Stratosphere smiled before turning his attention back to the recruits and his clipboard. Spitfire turned her head to the wonder bolt before speaking.

"Stratosphere get over here we need to talk about the show and I need an update on the recruits." Stratosphere flew over to speak before Dash began to cross the runway. Soaring and Fleet foot soared down it before Spitfire spoke up!

"LOOK OUT!" Rainbow dash threw herself off the runway before she crashed through the dirt and a bush and into a trash can. Stratosphere and Spitfire along with the other wonder bolts walked over.

"Are you ok Rainbow dash?" Misty fly decided to speak up.

"More like Rainbow crash!" Despite his better nature Stratosphere couldn't help but snicker as his fellow wonder bolts laughed.

"You guys buzzed me on purpose!" Stratosphere was about to speak up before Spitfire cut him off.

"No you forgot to look both ways before crossing the runway newbie." Rainbow dash decided to speak up as she grinned sheepishly.

"Yeah well I was just testing you guys." Stratosphere snickered a bit more before shaking his head at the new wonder bolt.

Author notes

I do apogize for not making a 7000-word chapter or something like that but I do try to make short chapters so I can handle it better I'm not ready for things like that yet. Any way the second half will be up tomorrow until then lighting wolf out!

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