While out stargazing one night, Twilight Sparkle watches a meteor crash into the Everfree. Once she reaches the crash site, she finds not a rock from space, but a wounded pony. However, this pony is not a pony at all, but a human wizard from another world, and he has unwittingly put all of Equis in danger with his presence.
It's my first real story, so any advice would be appreciated. (and please, no "u stnk, dnt rite enymr" or any other junk like that. It doesn't help.)
it has the gore rating for stylized fantasy violence. Nothing gross though.