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Hypno Ponies

by greendogtheater

Chapter 8: Moon Dancer

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Ch. 8: Moon Dancer

"So, what exactly did you all want to show me?" asked Moon Dancer as she came to Minuette, Lemon Hearts and Twinkleshine in the Canterlot Park.

"Oh, nothing major." said Minuette innocently.

"Just this!" said Lemon Hearts as she used her matgic to hold up a spinning wheel with a red swirl on it.

Moon Dancer was taken aback by the wheel yet at the same time became facinated by it.

It's twirling around made Moon Dancer's mind spin and pretty soon, Moon Dancer was completely zombified, with her eyes being replaced by red spirals.

"You remember the plan, guys?" asked Minuette.

The two other mares nodded.

"Moon Dancer," said Minuette, "You will obey everything we say,"

"I will obey everything you say," said Moon Dancer in a monotone.

"Pick your nose!" shouted Lemon Hearts.

Moon Dancer sticked her hoof into her nose and started picking it, causing the three mares to laugh.

"Now scratch your flank on the ground," said Minuette.

Moon Dancer began using thr ground to scratch her flank by dragging it along via Brian Griffin from Family Guy, causing even more laughter fro mthe three mares.

"Alright," said Twinkleshine who produced a plate full of doughnuts, "Now eat these doughnuts until your stomach is completely full."

The hypnotized Moon Dancer used her magic to eat all of the doughnuts at once and pretty soon, she was on her back with her belly sweleld up like a baloon and the three mares laughed like heck.

"Fall into a deep sleep, Moon Dancer," said Minuette as she and the others began to leave and Moon Dancer shut her eyes tight and snored "We gotta throw the plate away."

Once the mares were gone, the soreness inside Moon Dancer's flabby tummy managed to jolt her out of the hypnosis as her eyes got droopy, she shook her head, and her eye pupils returned to normal.

"Huh?"

Moon Dancer saw doughnut crumbs on her vest along with her bloated tummy.

Moon Dancer soon saw the hypnodisk and gave a look of realization.

"Those troublemakers!" she said while holdign on to her full and aching stomach while groaning.

Suddenly, she got an idea. With a sneaky grin, she used her magic to hide the hypnodisc under her and chuckled mischeviously before seeing the other mares come back.

Moon Dancer quickly pretened to still be in her hypnosis-induced sleep as the mares came back to her.

"Okay, Moon Dancer," said Minuette dramatically, "When I slam my hooves ,you will wake up and have no memory of what happened nor take it into consideration."

Minuette slammed her hooves and Moon Dancer jolted awake.

"Wow, what happened?" said Moon Dancer in 'confusion' as she got up from laying down.

"Nothing to linger on," said Lemon Hearts as Twinkleshine and Minuette nodded in agreement.

"Well," shrugged Moon Dancer, "In that case..."

She suddenly got out the hypno wheel and spinned in front of the Mares's faces and pretty soon, the shocked mares eyes became red swirls themselves as Moon Dancer got a mischievous grin.

Twinkleshine, Lemon Heart, and Minuette groaned as they returned to normal and eventually saw their stomachs, bloated andf flabby, along with some crumbs on their chests.

"Oh, boy," said Twinkleshine, "Looks like Moon Dancer got her revenge."

"Yep," said Minuette.

"We should apologize when the soreness has subsided." said Lemon Hearts as the other mares agreed.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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